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Posted: 18 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2007

hey guysss... let me try and post a part... i am being really lazy i know... but i'll try and write... but well i am kind of confused and i dont knwo what to write since i lost all my files due to rebooting... anywyass... soo yeah will try...

ohh and i was thinking i could change last part... if you guysss are okk with it... i want to edit last part and change it... cuz i got an idea but i cannot do it with that part... soo yea... anywayss tell mee by tomorrow... i will post teh next part tomorrow if changing the previous part wont be a problem to you guyss... thankyou...

do whtever suits u ur the writer but pls con asap

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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
hey guyss./.. i have deleted last part... i am gonna post the new edited part here... plss continue... adn guyss ia m sorry for teh longggggggggggggggggggggggggggg delay!!!!
plss comment... cuz after writing thsi part... i think i am re-interested in this ff again... lol... this ff is also short...soo it will be over in the next maybe 3-5 parts... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
deleted part in pg10... this is teh edited copy of that part... ummm if you dont rememebr what happened previously read page 8...😳

PART FOUR (second half)


kripa smiled broadly adn put her hands out..." my gift?"

" hmm your gift... look there..." alliyah pointed towards ethcenter of teh room... two black figures werestanding there... slowly teh spot light got to he.. adn kripa dropped her mouth... PRITHVI ADN JOSH!!!! kripa jumped with happiness... THEY MADE IT!!

" it took me three hours to finish all their works... the n pack their clothes and make them on time to eth flight!" alliyah whuispered... kripa gigled...

prithvi and walked upto kripa... and hugged her at teh same time... " sorry kripss..." they both said... but kripa was very happy to be mad at them...

" mera gift?" kripa said...

" arre... hum ayye yahi gift nahi hai kya??" prithvi said...

kripa frowned... " no! and i want four gifts from you and five from josh!" kripa said...

" what?!" they both asked...

" you guyss missed my birthday...BUT i never forget to atleast wish you and send you your gifts!" kripa answered...

" okk tomorrow... we will go and get your 9 gifts..." josh said...

prithvi frowned... " with your money!" he said looign at josh...

" NO... with OUR money!" josh slapped his back...

" waise kripa... iss shaadi ke baad... ek aur shaadi ke liye tayaar ho jao..." josh said...and winked at her...

confused, she looked at alliyah and prithvi blush..." OMG!!!!" kripa jumped and hugged both of them... then they all got engrossed in talking... kripa glanced aroudn eth room.. and found angad just sitting in a corner alone... she frowned seeing him soo lonely... she caught alliyah's arm and dragged her to the side...

" aren't you forgetting something?" kripa asked...

" what?" alliyah asked confused...

" meeting your brother..." kripa said pointing to angad...

alliyah frowned... and then groaned..." do i have to?"

" alliyah!" kripa said in unbelief...

" ok ok fine..." alliyah stomped upto angad...

" hello brother..." alliyah said cheerfully...

angad looked right, left, then back... " talking to me?" he asked...

aliyah rolled hr eyes... " ha ha... very funny..." she said... and looked at him... they looked at eachother for a while before hugging eachother... "i missed you bro..."

" me tooo..." angad said back... and they drew apart... " i am sorry..." he said...

" for?" she asked...

" i know you didn't want ot talk to mee cuz of kripa...issue"he said... adn watched her frown and then smile...

" its okk... she's too good for you anywayss..." she said...

he smiled and wrapped his arms around her... he looked down at her hand and noticed teh little ring... he raised an eyebrow and alliyah blushed... she pointed at prithvi and angad scowled at her as if saying HE-is-your-choice?

alliyah punched him lightly... " atleast he's better than simran or simone or whoever you are dating..." she said...

" okk plss... i dont want you people opening a anti-simone club..." angad siad...

alliyah giggled... " what do you know.... maybe its already opened..." she winked at them..." anyhow... what are you doing here all alone... come join us..." she dragged her brother to teh gang...

" hey angad..." josh and prithvi both slapped hands with him...

" hey guyss..." he said...

they stood uin a corner like old days... chatting... kripa caught josh's eyes wondering around...she looked at where he was staring adn giggled... she leaned and whispered... " she's simone..angad's girlfriend..."

josh looked a kripa... embarrassed while she giggled... joshw alked upto angad... " dude angad... your girlfriends hot..."

angad raised an eyebrow..." yeah i know that..."

" do you mind if i flirt with her?" he asked...

teh three laughed the way he asked angad to flirt with his girlfriend..." with pleasure..." angad answered...

" awesome... thankss dude..." he wlaked upto simone...and all four turned to look at him... they watched as simone blush... then smile... then kiss josh's cheek... adn then laugh... adn flirt... they turned ot echother and burst out laughing...

soon it was time for kripa to cut teh cake... she cut teh cake and fed dadi first... then her parents... then angad's parents... then when prithvi leaned to have... she took teh cake back..and looked around..she saw angad siting at teh end... she excused herself... cut a small piece of cake and went to angad... she brought it to his mouth... surprised he looked at her...

" you still are my best friend..." she said... he smiled..but guilt swamp in his heart... and ate teh cake from her hand... she walked away and fed prithvi who was frowning... then alliyah adn josh... then after that cake was distributed to others...

*****

" angad honey..." simone hugged him from teh back... " where were you teh whole night... i looked for you but couldn't find you..."

" i was aorund..." he answered... simone cicled him to teh front...and stood infront of him... angad looked down at her... he could see the lust in her eyes... he could see desire and hunger... there was no love... he closed his eyes looked straight outside teh window... " did youw ant something?"

" yes..." she answered... she opened the firs button of his shirt and kissed his exposed skin... then he unbuttoned another... she kissed his jaw line... teh corner of his mouth... her hand under his shirt... too shocked to realize what was happening... angad didn't do anything... but after he realized... he pushed simone away... he saw his shirt was on the floor... and he was bare chested...

simone looked at him with question in her eyes... " whats teh matter sweetheart...a re you ok?" she asked...

" NO I AM NOT!" he said and banged his fist on the wall... " i am NOT ok..." he rested his head on his fist thatw as on teh wall...

" angad..." simone said putting a hand on his shoulder... but he shrugged it away... he turned around adn faced her...

" we need to tak simone..." he said... he took her by her shoulder... " we dont love eachother... we lust eachother... adn i figured it out today!" he said... " i dont love you simone... and you dont love me either..."

" and what exactly do you wanna talk about?" simone asked... he saw teh tears brimming in her eyes... he closed his eyes...

" we're through simone..." he siad... " its over..." he said...

simone smiled... " i knew it..." angad looked at simone confused... " i knew that bi*** would snatch you away form me... you're leaving mee for her aren't you? you're leavingme for kripa aren't you?" she asked... as teh tears fell from her eyes...

" simone..." angad said... alitle amd now...

" i will kill that bi***... I WILL KILL HER..." she grabbed his collar... " its never over untilll SIMONE says ots over..." she said... " I SEE YOU WITH HER AGAIN...AND SHE'S DEAD..." she siad... then wiped her tears and plastered a sweet smile on her face... " REMEMBER IT...SWEETHEART..." she said... and peckd his lips..and walked from teh room...

*****

" angad..." simone came in teh next day..." i am sorry about yesterday..." she said with her head lowered... " i am relaly really sorry..." she said... and sniffed as a tear trickled down her cheek... " i...i... was not in my senses yesterda...as soon as i reached my room... i fell asleep and then today after i woke u[ i realized what i had said...." she wiped her tear..." i am really really sorry angad..."

angad wiped her tears and cupped her face... " you're a great friend..and a very attractive woman simone...(sigh) but... i have loved only one person...and that is only and only kripa..."

" i know angad... i an see it in your eyes..." she wiped her tears and cupped his hands in her cheeks..." tell you what... i will go tell her that i am a too good for you and she can have you..." she smiled..

angad chuckled... " yea ad she'll kill you... she's very violent..." he said...

" ok seriously... i will tell her when i meet her... that i like josh now...and the realation i had with you was just an infactuation... adn that i dumped you..." she said... " then she'll come to console you... and well... you guyss can get back together..."

" but..." angad said...

" trust me on this angad..." simone said... and caressed his cheek... then she giggled... " anywayss... josh is much better than you are..." she laughed when he frowned and walked out of teh room...

*****

angad walked to meet kripa... he didn't know simone had gone to talk to her today... whe he reached her door and opened it... he saw kripa give a TIGHT slap to simone...

shocked he barged in.. " WHAT THE HECK... whats wrong with you kripa...?" he said and stood by simone... he toched her cheeks abd realized theywe re wet... he looked at kripa with anger... " WHY DID YOU HIT HER?"

" you dont know what she said..." kripa said... becoming teary eyed... she had never had anyone yell at her before... noone had talked to her with soo much anger... she bit her lip seeing eth fury in his eyes...

" yes i knwo what she siad... and..." he looked at simone who shook her head... " and she justs aid it cuz she was trying to help mee..." he siad... " i could've told you everything... but she just wanted to help mee soo she said it for em..." he siad... and looked at kripa...

who looked at him in shock... she started breathing heavily... " ev-ery-th-i-ng... s-he...sai-d...i-is... tr-ue... sh-e... was...hel-pi-ng yo-u..." she stammered...as tears continued to flow through her eyes... she was breathing very heavily...

josh, who was just outside kripa's room... ran inside and kriap collapsed into his arms... he gave angad a you're-going-to-die look and left teh rooom... with kripa in his arms... while anagd stood there too shocked to react... with simone sobbing in his arms...

*****

plss comemnt...if you guyssa re still interested in this ff then i will post this ff a little regularly... if not then..forget about this ff... i will start a enw one... or i will starta new one after finishing this ff...
Edited by MUNNIBABA2007 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
wohoo me the first one to comment great part lol aww poor simone angads an idiot hes exactly like ur arun y an i not shocked u rote about that idiot lol😉 now continue soon
Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
wat might hv simone told K n i think she is acting all goody goody . hope josh n p n aaliya help A-K get 2gether n yeah continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
simone said sumthing..not the rite thing!! lol...hope a-k get bck together..
continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
simone is a little ^%$^$, i dont kno wat she said but kripa and angad have got demselves a misunderstanding...ugh!

no more simone! me want a-k!!!!

im interested in dis ff, cont soon...

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
gr8 part
simone said something else to kripa ufff and now a misuderstanding beween ak 😡


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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey u finally updated..........that was a rly good part and i rly wanna no wuts gonna happen
so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. awesome part.
cant wait 2 c wat happens next.
cont soon.

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