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ixi-shaj thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
they start *ahem* kissing, and her pappy walks in! I hope please... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum!!i think kripss dad wants to tlk to her abt marriage..lol..God i still cant wait for the day her bf and her father come face to face...that will be one hell of a day!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

awesum!!i think kripss dad wants to tlk to her abt marriage..lol..God i still cant wait for the day her bf and her father come face to face...that will be one hell of a day!!

well you are some where on the right track of kripas dad wanting to talk to her about her marrage but as for the meeting of father and son-in-law....it will be a blow out alright😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok i will be posting the next part really soon i just have to type it up 😛
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Part 7

When Kripa entered her room she found a surprise of her own seeing Angad in her room sitting on her very mess bed. Kripa was about to scream in shock but caught her self and locked the door to her room.

"So, how are you doing Kripa, it has been such a long time since we last talked" Angad said sarcastically.

Kripa with her hands gave Angad a sign to keep his voice down because her dad was still awake. Unfortunately Angad didn't get the message.

"What?" Angad asked at Kripa's weird hand motions.

Kripa had no choice but to respond with words on a count of Angad being so stupid even after graduating from Harvard. "Dad's down stairs, and he is waiting for me to come down stairs to talk to me about something" She said whispering, hoping not to alert her dad.

"Oh" Angad replied with a low whisper, which was kind of a no user because his voice was so deep that even if he whispered it sounded like he was talking normal.

"Angad, you need to leave" Kripa start to push Angad out of the room but was unable to by is heavy weight. "Do I have to go? I will wait for you up here" Angad said now wanting to leave.

"Fine" Kripa said giving up "Stay if you want but got fall asleep in my room if you get tired of waiting, ok"

"Ok, princess" Angad said giving her a nickname of his own.

Kripa went in to her closet changing her clothes to her light blue nightdress, which got Angad to stare at her like hell but before he could say a word she left down stairs blushing.

Down stairs Kripa entered her fathers room with her face red from blushing. Her father had noticed her red blushing face and was surprised to see his daughter in such a way. He remembered his wife blushing just like his daughter when he had purposed to her for the first time and it felt as if Kripa had grown with the same personality as her mother.

"Kripa come here," Chiron said with a fatherly gesture. Kripa saw her father lying on his bed with his back resting on the backboard of the bed. Kripa lied beside her father resting her back also on the backboard of the bed.

"You wanted to talk to be about something" She said in a soft innocent voice.

Chiron smiled wishing he could always hold on to his little girl like this forever. "Yes, in fact I do want to talk to you about something really important" Chiron said in his fatherly tone. Kripa knew what this meant, he was going to talk about something really, really important, or just give her a long lecture about life and growing up.

"Kripa, you are growing up really fast…" She should have known, it was the growing up speech. Kripa always hated the growing up speech, mostly because in the end it always ended up being all awkward.

"…God, this is so hard to say. Well, you are twenty-two years old now and I think it is time that you got married" Kripa felt like she had just been hit by lighting. This was not the growing up talk she was expecting.

"Now, I do not want your life to end up like your mother and mines, where we married against our parents wishes. I want you to live your life with the person you love and I want to know, if you love some one already" Kripa didn't know what to say, but she knew this was the perfect time to tell her dad about Angad. She just knew it right away that Angad was the perfect man for her, his house was next door to hers, and if she ever did get married to him she could walk back and forward to her and Angad's house.

"Dad, there is one person I was meaning to talk to you about" Chiron gave a smile realizing why Kripa had been blushing like a mad women when walking into the house this evening.

"I knew something was up when you had come inside the house with that blushing red face" Kripa buried her face inside her fathers chest blushing again unable to believe her father was so understanding of her.

"Dad…Stop embarrassing me" Kripa said in that British tone. Chiron took Kripa's face in his hands forcing her to look at him. "Tell me who is the man that has made my daughter so crazy in love" Kripa was not even more embarrassed when hearing her father say this.

"Dad…"By say that Kripa ran out of Chiron's room blushing like hell, running all the way up to her room and closing the door, locking it forgetting of the fact that Angad was still in her room waiting for her.

As soon as Kripa turned around from the door after locking it Angad grabbed Kripa around the waist and pushed her to the wall real fast "Got you" He said in his handsome charming smile.

"So, tell me Kripa, what did your dad want to talk to you about?" Angad asked in great wonder after seeing Kripa blushing red. Kripa noticed the little space between her and Angad and just thought to tease Angad a little.

"Dad was talking about my marriage" Kripa felt Angad's hands stiffen around her waist. " And what did you say?" Angad asked. Kripa saw she was getting into Angad's head bad. "I just told daddy, I was ready for marriage to any one he wanted me to marry."

Angad gave a serious frown "Just watch I wouldn't let your future husband through your door with out a bloody nose."

Kripa just laughed at Angad's anger and frustration. "I was just joking, Angad" Angad was relived that he wouldn't have to break any ones nose.

"God, don't scare my like that" Angad said pulling Kripa closer towards him, now leaving no space between them.

Kripa was able to smell Angad, he smelled like any handsome guy would, hot. "Angad,"

What?"

"You smell nice" Angad laughed at Kripa's stupid and random comment. This was the first time he had dated a women that said he smelled nice instead of completing his charm or good looks.

"Thank you princess" Kripa didn't like any one calling her princess because it made her seem like a little girl but then Angad said it, it sounded her perfect. She was his princess and no one could take that away from her.

"Angad, it is getting late you should go home. You need your rest and so do I" Kripa said in her loving innocent voice. Angad loved the voice Kripa used for the innocent thing, when every Kripa used this voice he couldn't help but follow her command no matter how much he didn't want to follow the voices command.

"Ok, good night" Angad kissed Kripa's forehead and then a light kiss on the lips, saving his passion for another day, leaving Kripa in the air of love.

Please comment on this part, I know this part wasnt all that breath taking but I kind of wrote this part in a zone out way because I mind is on something completly diffrent, sorry. Next part will be better becuase Angad will meet his soon to be father in law.

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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful. i loved it. i can just imagine her blushing.

hmmm...that would be odd having your father talk about your marriage. yikes.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ishu124

wonderful. i loved it. i can just imagine her blushing.

hmmm...that would be odd having your father talk about your marriage. yikes.

well, she doesnt have a mother to talk to her about it so daddy is hor only choise 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
awww that was a fab part


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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kripa blushes a lot!
lol can't wait until angad meets kripa's dad...thas gonna be sooooooo funnyyy 😆

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