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Posted: 18 years ago
lol..cant believe the 2 are so comfortable with each other..im guessing tht will change once angad gets 2 noe who her father is...rather vice vera..lol..this time sparks will fly as the two get ready to strike each other
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol!t was hilarious and sweet!!continue soon rani, plz!!

-Tiya
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

lol..cant believe the 2 are so comfortable with each other..im guessing tht will change once angad gets 2 noe who her father is...rather vice vera..lol..this time sparks will fly as the two get ready to strike each other

well ya things will change once angad finds out who kripas dad is but things between angad and kripa wont change 😉 if you get what i mean

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Originally posted by: *simran*

lol!t was hilarious and sweet!!continue soon rani, plz!!

-Tiya

i will continue when i get the change 😛becuase lately i have been cramped in work🤢, you know the whole last day of school coming up ect...ect... going off to high school ect..ect.. if you ask me i think the whole thing is overrated🤢

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

you left us hanging i hate you jk 😆 hopefully kripa will win because girls are best continue soon i am waiting

aaawww come on i didnt leave you guys hanging all that much😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part!!!
loved it hon..
cont soon.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. i loved it. do continue soon....and if your reading this rani...GET ON AIM!
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i will be posting the next part really soon i just need to type it up 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Prom

"When are you going to tell him?"

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Part 6

"Your on, Mr.Khanna" By saying that Kripa tripped Angad on to the sand and ran for the car in an unfair start. Angad being the man he was stood and ran after Kripa to get her back"

Angad soon caught up to her and grabbed her around the waist making her fall into the sand with him on top of her. Her soft beautiful brown hair came over her eyes and all he did was take his hands ever so softly and remove them from bothering her eyes.

"You know, you look beautiful in the moonlight" Kripa looked past Angad when his said this so he couldn't see her blushing face but it was no use he noticed big time when her entire face turn red.

"You look even better when you blush" He said grinning in enjoyment. "If you don't mind, Kripa, could I kiss you" When Angad said this she was surprised, she couldn't believe an American man could be such a gentlemen. When ever she saw American movies she had always found American men to just go up randomly to women and kiss them, but here Angad was not only a gentlemen he was the perfect man.

"Yes, yes you may" She said blushing like crazy. Angad slowly leaned his head down towards the Kripa underneath him. He lips touched hers softly and awkwardly. At first it was weird but soon changed to comfort when Angad dared to deepen the kiss. Kripa had never been kiss like this before in her life it was so passionate; she never thought a simple kiss could turn from awkward to passionate and loving.

Angad broke the kiss first, both breathless. Kripa had no words to say her whole face was blushing and she could feel her face turn red and hot. Angad breath slowly rubbed off her cheek as he kept his lips close by.

"It is getting quite late, I should take you home" Angad said in his deep manly tone. He stood up helping Kripa up along with him. On their way back to the car Angad held Kripa's soft hands playing round with them the whole walk.

Angad parked the car in front of Kripa's house late at night "When are you going to tell him?" Angad asked again as Kripa started to get out of the car. He stopped her from leaving the car by grabbing her hand.

"I don't know" Kripa said blushing trying to let go of her grip out of Angad's hand but was gone in vain.

Angad and Kripa argued about this issue all the way from the beach back home. "Come on Kripa, you will have to tell your father one day or another that we both are dating" Kripa blushed when Angad said dating. Kripa had always told her father about every thing mostly because she didn't have a mother around to talk to and it was just easier to tell a family member then a stranger, but for some reason she had a feeling that something bad would happen if she talked to her father about Angad.

"I will tell him soon" Kripa said still trying to get her hands out of Angad's strong ones, but Angad wasn't satisfied by Kripa's answer

"When is soon?" he asked but was just unable to get his reply because Kripa some how let loose out of Angad's strong grip and left the car in a hurry before Angad could grab her hand again.

As Kripa entered her house she was surprised to she her father up at 11:00 pm sitting in the living room "Dad, what are you doing up so late?" Kripa asked worried, Kripa knew her father very well, he never stayed up late unless something was bothering him or he was in extreme happiness and at the moment Kripa could tell which it was because of his blank expression.

"Oh, god Kripa, where have you been I was trying your cell for the past hour and I got no answer" That was when Kripa realized her phone was on silent and was left in Angad's car.

"I am so sorry dad, I probably left my cell in my…." Kripa didn't thing it was the best time to tell her dad about Angad so instead she just said "…friend's car, and I had left it on silent, I will just have to get it tomorrow" Kripa said awkwardly.

"Alright, you had me worried for so long. I thought something bad might have happened" Chiron put an arm around his daughter and had her sit beside him on the sofa.

"So, tell me how was your evening?" Chiron asked, Kripa blushed at the thought of the evening remembering the kiss that she had gotten from the most handsome charming man out there.

"It was great," she said blushing more then usual. Chiron noticed this and couldn't help but question

"Why are you blushing so much?" This statement caused Kripa to blush even more. Chiron smiled seeing this. Kripa reminded him so much of his wife.

"Alright if you don't want to tell your father then you don't have to but I want you to go up stairs change and then come back down stairs, I need to talk to you about a few things, ok"

"Alright father" Kripa stood up and ran up to her room to change. Usually her father didn't ask her to sit down and talk so what ever he had to say was probably very important.

When Kripa entered her room she found a surprise of her own seeing Angad in her room sitting on her very mess bed. Kripa was about to scream in shock but caught her self and locked the door to her room.

hope u all like this part i will continue the next part as soon as i get the chance, and remember comment because your comments are very important for me to know what you all like and dislike about my fan fic😊

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