**Dosti Mein Pyaar** Part 50 p.146 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
amazing!! every1 is soo good and like how u portrayed their friend ship is realli good cnt wait 4 next part
keep the gd work up u r doing a fab job !!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Excellent part... it was soooo cute n funny... i jus love all 3 couples n i absolutely luved da endin of da last part it was soooo funny n sweet 😆


haha thanks! i hope ur going to love the continuation from the last part too! 😊

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

that was really good 😊
it looks as if anjali and kavya are getting closer loved the idea of a paint fight.
angad and kripa are too good love the way they annoy each other shows how much there care 4 each other.
neev and prachi hope they realise soon that they are more than friends
love the way you described the relationship between the three pairs
its mind blowing
cant wait 2 read the next part
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thanks thanks!! im happy your liking it so far! 😊

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

AWESUM prt!!! 👏
👏 i am NOT liking the FF so far.... i am loving
it so far!!! 😆

awww.... Kripa's soooo cute.... scared of Saw movies??? r they really tht
scary??? i never watched them sooo!!! 😳 sitting on Angad's lap???
haiiiyyy... i wis I cud sit in his lap!!! 😳 😆 jk... their fights r tooo cute
too!!! i LOVE it!!! 😛

Kavy & Anjali... coloring each other... sooo cuteee!!!! 😳 although... i
prefer not getting painted on... 😆 KA r strting to get through a
conversation without biting each other's head off!!! niiiccceee!!! 😆
hope they strt to 'like' each other soon too... nd then fall in loooove!!! 😳

Neev & Prachi r soooo adorable.... falling on top of each other.... classic....
hehehe.... not tht i didnt like it... i LOVED it... God... why did they have to
get interuppted by the crazy laughter??? ruin a perfect moment... ughhh...
hehehe... hope they too realize their looove soon... sooo then there can b
lovey dovey moments... which i TOTALLY adore btw.... 😉 😛

YAYAY!!!! the next prt will b romantic.... CANNOT wait to read it.... soooo
PLEASE continue soon!!!! 😛


p.s. sorry for being late!!! 😳



HAHAHA!!! lol well apparently the Saw movies are scary lol every time the movie comes up in discussion ppl always cringe talking about it! lol i wish i could sit on his lap too no jk... alrite its a joke lol hehe well of course Kavya and Anjali are gonna fall in love or you guys would probably murder me! yup yup next parts romantic! lets c how i do with that!

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

awesum update yaar,,,all 3 of them are the perfectcouples...lolzZz..wonder when they'll realize they luv each oder.. 😳 😃


thanks!! i love their couples too, i think they look soo amazing together. lol im wondering the same thing...jk!

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thanks for the comments guys! u guys are the best! arite so im posting in the next few minutes! dont forget to leave comments (even you silent readers)!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Chapter 4

Kripa runs all the way upstairs into Angad's room and is about to lock the door but accidentally ends up locking it with Angad inside. Kripa is shocked, "OH CRAP!" She tries unlocking the door, but Angad is much faster and he pins her to the wall. Oh boy she knows she is in trouble now. She looks to the side unable to look at him, who knows what he would do. After a while, curiosity creeps in her and she dares to look into his eyes only to see him smirking at her with a huge grin on his face. She doesn't like where this is going. Angad leans in really close and whispers passionately in her ear "That was a nice little prank down there." All Kripa could think was OMG what is he doing??? His warm breath seems to be traveling up her neck arousing feelings in her she didn't know existed. Kripa is completely taken back by her own thoughts. She doesn't know what is going on with him. He is being so…so romantic. Kripa knows he is of course, how else would he have had all those girlfriends, but she has never felt this way with anyone before. She is slowly melting under his gaze and wants to disappear. For a second though, she wants to believe that this is reality that he isn't just getting back at her for the prank.

All the thoughts crossing her mind are contradictory to her, his, their reality—they are best friends, not lovers, but suddenly it didn't seem like a bad idea at the moment. When others would suggest Angad and Kripa as a couple, they would both cringe at the thought, but at this very moment looking into his eyes, Kripa is somehow not able to contain herself. She goes forward and locks Angad's lips taking him by complete surprise. At first Angad doesn't respond and Kripa begins to doubt whether it was a good idea to act on her instinct. She is just about to pull back when Angad kisses her greedily, almost as if he has wanted this for a long time. Angad slams Kripa against the wall again and kisses her more passionately. Kripa doesn't want to think about the future and what this kiss will mean, she just knew that this is what she wanted and probably for a long time, but was afraid thinking it would ruin their perfect friendship. Angad's lips are devouring Kripa's and she is caving at his gentle touch. Angad's hands run up Kripa's body from her waist to her back, and Kripa's hands go around his neck pulling him closer, which then travel to his back. They are acting so unlike themselves towards each other, but they just can't seem to stop themselves- it was like an unquenchable thirst. Kripa hears her name being called from downstairs and unwillingly tears herself apart from Angad and says breathlessly, "I gotta go" and leaves before letting Angad respond.

With a heavy heart Angad goes downstairs, but he really wants to feel Kripa's tender lips against his again. It was an exhilarating kiss. Angad is amazed at his own thinking. Before leaving for downstairs Angad checked himself in the mirror to make sure no lipstick is on him and blushed. That is a first- Angad and blushing, now he knows for sure that this was different from his past relationships. His previous girlfriends had all been inferior to Angad. They all craved for Angad's attention and obsessed over themselves way too much. But Kripa never needs to fuss because she knows she is hot. Not only that but she is also his equal in every way. As soon as he gets down stairs he takes his seat at the dinning table for desert, when Dilip says, " you know all you kids should start thinking about marriage" and EVERYONE OF THE KIDS start choking roughly on their desert. All at once they say, "WHAT?" Surya says, "Well you guys are going to be graduating soon so we thought we would tell you to start thinking about marriage already." All retort saying, "But we are too young to die!! I mean get married! What ever same thing!" Naina and Gayatri speak up, "Look we just said to start thinking about it, its not like we fixed your marriages already so calm down" They all agree thinking they can probably put this off for a couple years.

Angad and Kripa feel really uncomfortable around each other with everyone there, it like everyone was suspecting them- even though they were totally oblivious to Angad and Kripa's strange behavior. They both make an excuse to finish the project in Angad's room so they can talk about this uhhh whatever this is. Kripa leads the way to Angad's room and with a smirking Angad tailing behind closely and he shuts the door as they enter. He pulls Kripa back and pins her like last time.

Kripa is just really confused because she doesn't want to be just one of those girls he dates and dumps. Before Angad comes any closer Kripa says, "We need to talk". Angad backs up and Kripa goes to sit on the bed. Angad comes and sits beside her and says, "So…" Kripa asks, "Well that kiss… umm look I don't want it to be awkward between us so… I mean can we like forget it" Angad finally is back in his senses and realizes that this is KRIPA, his best friend and he doesn't want to ruin their friendship. He replies calmly, "Yeah I think your right, we should forget what happened, and uhh sorry bout what I just did…" He laughs, "I think I got a little carried away, but you know you're a damn good kisser" Kripa blushes and smacked his arm, "Angad!!" They both share a laugh letting the awkwardness seep out of their relationship. Kripa asks, "So we're like okay rite?" Angad replies, "Of course my best friend forever, now if you don't mind lets go downstairs and forget bout what happened k..." Kripa nods and figures to leave this matter alone, seeing as how it will only cause more awkwardness between them.

Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!!! tht was an AMAZINGLY RIDICULOUSLY GUD prt!!!! 👏 👏
👏 running out of
adjectives!!! 😆 i LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!! 😳 OMFG!!!! they FINALLY
kissed.... i like passed out... hehehe.... not really!!! 😆 but tht was
sooo... idk the word... but AMAZING!!! i had a goofy smile on my face
when i reading this prt... 😳 it was ssoooo cuteeee!!!! thnk God they r
not going to break their friendship over a kiss!!! coz tht'd b too sad!!!
i mean... i am sad tht they still havent realized their feelings for each
other... but its better than not being friends at all!!! YAY... i am sooo
happy after reading this prt... but idk why... hehehe.... i need to calm
down nd stop babling... God... i am sooooo hyper!!!! hehehe!!!! 😆 i
CANNOT wait to read more.... so continue soon!!!! 😛
Edited by berkeleygirl818 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
wow!! they kissed!! amazing!! brilliant!! wow!! i loved it!![/
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please do continue soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
omg. ur such a good writer. that last part was sooooooooooooooooo romantic and it was soooooo cute. cont soon. cant wait 4 ak 2 get closer.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
awesome part!! fab kisss 😉 😳 😆 ....really romantic!! continuee soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
😆 CAN'T breath!!! Wow numera, can't believe never read any of your FF's before, you are an awesome writer. 👏 Loved the last too parts. Cont. Soon PLZZZZZZZZ.... 😃
Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Awesome part... it was quite unexpected for both of them i am sure about dat!!!!!! Glad that it didnt effect their friendship, but i wonder when they r gunna realise their feelings!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!!!! tht was an AMAZINGLY RIDICULOUSLY GUD prt!!!! 👏 👏
👏 running out of
adjectives!!! 😆 i LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!! 😳 OMFG!!!! they FINALLY
kissed.... i like passed out... hehehe.... not really!!! 😆 but tht was
sooo... idk the word... but AMAZING!!! i had a goofy smile on my face
when i reading this prt... 😳 it was ssoooo cuteeee!!!! thnk God they r
not going to break their friendship over a kiss!!! coz tht'd b too sad!!!
i mean... i am sad tht they still havent realized their feelings for each
other... but its better than not being friends at all!!! YAY... i am sooo
happy after reading this prt... but idk why... hehehe.... i need to calm
down nd stop babling... God... i am sooooo hyper!!!! hehehe!!!! 😆 i
CANNOT wait to read more.... so continue soon!!!! 😛




lol thanks a LOT!! loved ur comments lol funny girl! their friendship is too important to both of them! lol glad i had that effect on u lol! 😳

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

wow!! they kissed!! amazing!! brilliant!! wow!! i loved it!![/
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please do continue soon!

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lol thanks sooo much!!😊

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

omg. ur such a good writer. that last part was sooooooooooooooooo romantic and it was soooooo cute. cont soon. cant wait 4 ak 2 get closer.


aww soo sweet! lol gotta love the romance lol! i cant wait for them to get close myself lol jk!


Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!! fab kisss 😉 😳 😆 ....really romantic!! continuee soon 👏


thanks a bunch! 😳

Originally posted by: munizaaa

😆 CAN'T breath!!! Wow numera, can't believe never read any of your FF's before, you are an awesome writer. 👏 Loved the last too parts. Cont. Soon PLZZZZZZZZ.... 😃


muni ur soo sweet for saying that lol but seriously your too good yourself!! hands down ur one of my favorite writers!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... it was quite unexpected for both of them i am sure about dat!!!!!! Glad that it didnt effect their friendship, but i wonder when they r gunna realise their feelings!!!!!


yup it was quite unexpected! thanks! 😊
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lol thanks for the comments lol actually when i was writing the parta couple weeks ago i ended up having them confess at the end and next day i was like WHOA, getting ahead there arent we lol but i do know around when they will confess, lol wont be sudden like the 4th part, you'll just have to keep reading...i know its torture lol! anyways im gonna post in a couple minutes so i want comments!! if i dont get more comments i will just have to update less often or...not at all (yup its a THREAT lol)!! COMMENTS PLEASE!

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