**Dosti Mein Pyaar** Part 50 p.146 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahhaha 😆 tht was soooo gooooood!!!! lol angad so protective over kripa....n neeev!!!! lol hw jealous was hee but hes sooo sweeet aswelll1 n kavya and anju so cuteeee 😳 😳 😳 i love the chemsitry between each of the couples.....plz continue sooon tht was a great part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
mind-blowing part
it was really good
loved the way u described the relationship between the three pairs
neev an angad seem to be really protective of kripa and prachi
cant wait 2 read the next part
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
nice fanfic yaar!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
OMG!!! AWESUM prt!!! 👏
👏 i LOVED it!!!! 😳

Angad & Kripa r sooooo cute.... Angad reminds me of my guy friend... the
way he took Kripa's stuff & all tht, how protective he is.... sooooo cute!!!!
😳 soooo wierd!!! 😕 😆 God... Angad gets jealous easily... i like
it!!!! 😛 mayb coz i LOVE jealous Angad!!! 😳 😆

Neev & Prachi r my fav couple, AFTER AK of course, now!!! God... Neev iss
such a hypocrite... but its kinda cute!!! hehehe!!! the way he stood up for
Prachi was too cute!!! 😛

Kavy & Anjali's story is soooo different... they NEVER fight in the FF's i
have read... they r all lovey dovey... but this... its different.... i LOVE it!!!
😳 i am LOVEING this FF.... PLEASE continue soon!!! 😛


p.s. hope i dont bore u with my LONG comment!!! 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
hey read ur work nd i luvd it...update soon plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 cool awesome dear 👏 👏 👏


yay thanks!!😊

Originally posted by: munizaaa

Wow loved the first part!! Angad is so jealous!! cont. soon


aww thanks muni! 😃

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome...that was good...all of them are protective well for kavya anjali they seem as if they are in love cuz they are attracted and for prachi angad kripa and neev, well the first step to love is friendship,,,awesome part 😊


thank you! yea they are all really protective over each other! 😃

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hahhaha 😆 tht was soooo gooooood!!!! lol angad so protective over kripa....n neeev!!!! lol hw jealous was hee but hes sooo sweeet aswelll1 n kavya and anju so cuteeee 😳 😳 😳 i love the chemsitry between each of the couples.....plz continue sooon tht was a great part 👏


thank you sooo much!!! 😳 i love their overprotective nature, i find it really adorable!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mind-blowing part
it was really good
loved the way u described the relationship between the three pairs
neev an angad seem to be really protective of kripa and prachi
cant wait 2 read the next part
👏


thanks hun! yea angad and neev are really protective where as kavya just loves to torture and annoy!


thanks a bunch! 😳

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!! AWESUM prt!!! 👏
👏 i LOVED it!!!! 😳

Angad & Kripa r sooooo cute.... Angad reminds me of my guy friend... the
way he took Kripa's stuff & all tht, how protective he is.... sooooo cute!!!!
😳 soooo wierd!!! 😕 😆 God... Angad gets jealous easily... i like
it!!!! 😛 mayb coz i LOVE jealous Angad!!! 😳 😆

Neev & Prachi r my fav couple, AFTER AK of course, now!!! God... Neev iss
such a hypocrite... but its kinda cute!!! hehehe!!! the way he stood up for
Prachi was too cute!!! 😛

Kavy & Anjali's story is soooo different... they NEVER fight in the FF's i
have read... they r all lovey dovey... but this... its different.... i LOVE it!!!
😳 i am LOVEING this FF.... PLEASE continue soon!!! 😛


p.s. hope i dont bore u with my LONG comment!!! 😳



THANK YOU! lol are u kidding i lovedddd reading your comment! my policy is the more the better LMAO! lucky i wish i had a guy friend like angad lol! neev totally got her into that big mess and also pulled her out but i think hes too cute! yea i wanted kavya and anjali to be annoying each other lol well someone has to have that role so y not kavyanjali lol

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hey read ur work nd i luvd it...update soon plz


thanks a lot!!😊
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yay u guys commented! im happy u guys actually like it lol ur comments totally made my day! ok so after reading you comments i figured i would update, so ill do that in couple minutes k! and dont forget to comment- good, bad, what u like/disliked etc. you know the drill lol!
Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeaaa cant wait 4 the next part 😃
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Chapter 3

It is the weekend and Surya and Gayatri have been invited to the Khanna House for dinner. Kavya, Kripa, and Prachi are already at the Khanna House because of the brain project. Angad and Kripa finish their project early so they start watching a movie until dinner. They are watching Saw and Kripa is freaking out at all the gore in the movie. She just can't handle it and on top of that the lights are off as they are sitting in Angad's room on the bed. Kripa keeps clawing Angad anytime something grosses her out and Angad, well he got more chances to make fun of her. "Kripa come on man it's a movie, look I don't think I can be best friends with a darpok…" Kripa yells, "WHAT! I am not a darpok okay, this movie is freaking sick, it's not even scary its just gross" Angad rationalizes, "Then why are you amputating me arm!!!" Kripa is totally confused and looks down to see her tightly grabbing his arm leaving her nail markings all over. "Oh CRAP!! Sorry sorry sorry!!" Angad laughs at her while she is freaking out, "Oh my god Kripa calm down, it should be me freaking not you, relax its okay my darpok" Kripa whines, "Angad!!" He laughs and they continue watching only now Kripa is practically sitting on Angad's lap burying her face into his neck and shoulder. She gave up trying to watch the movie a while ago.

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Kavya and Anjali are busy cutting and pasting things for the assignment. They begin painting the brain. Anjali feels kind of hot so she put her hand on her forehead and chin. Kavya breaks off in laughter and he is not able to calm down. He is now on the floor panting for air, Anjali is getting really annoyed and finally when Kavya calms down he takes her over to the dresser and shows her, her own reflection. Apparently Anjali gotten paint all over her face and seeing Kavya trying to suppress his laughter she too starts laughing as well. Then Anju grabs Kavya's face and gets paint all over him. They start to play fight with paint and basically all the paint ends up on each other's clothes rather than their project. Well eventually they finish their project and decide to get cleaned up before their parents ask them weird questions. This happened to be the first time that Anjali and Kavya spent time together and didn't end up killing each other in the process. A very big improvement.

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Neev and Prachi do their project with clay so they sit there molding pieces and putting them all together. Neev goes to get more clay from his car and on his way back inside he trips on the carpet in his room and lands right on top of Prachi on his bed. Prachi's necklace has tangled with Neev's shirt button. The necklace doesn't seem to be the problem. Prachi and Neev feel some weird attraction towards one another. Their breathing is at an off beat pace. They both feel this electrifying current pass through their bodies and shudder. They feel something completely unexplainable, something strange, and alien; they just didn't know what it was. They seemed to be having a staring contest now and they just can't help, but look so deeply in the other eyes that it is impossible not to get lost. Eventually the roaring laughter coming from Angad's room seems to snap them back to reality. Totally embarrassed Neev tries getting up, but alas the necklace remain tangled with his shirt. Prachi unbuttons Neev's shirt partially, which only makes it more uncomfortable than before. They avoid each others eyes and leave to check on what the noise is about.

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When Neev and Prachi go to Angad's room, they see two clowns, A.K.A. Kavya and Anjali. It is obvious that they are having a little too much fun with painting. Kavya has come to borrow clothes and well he didn't want to go alone so dragged Anjali with him. Oh the embarrassment. Neev and Prachi start laughing as well. All Kavya could think now was "I just wanted some clothes and these hyena's wont stop laughing" Kavya pushes Angad out the way and goes towards his closet and grabs some clothes, while Angad falls on the bed still laughing holding his stomach. Kavya and Anjali make a run for it and eventually change their clothes for dinner.

Suryaban and Gayatri came to the Khanna House, which was actually right next door. The kids got up and Angad, Neev, and Anju took Suryaban and Gayatri's blessings. They all sit down for dinner with Dilip-Naina, Surya-Gayatri, Angad-Kripa, Kavya-Anjali, Neev-Prachi all across each other. Kripa keeps playing footsie with Angad's foot every time he tries eating something and Angad gets really annoyed so he kicks her really hard and she lets out a cry, "OWWW" Everyone looks at Kripa while she just glares at Angad. Gayatri asks, "Kripa kya hua?" Kripa replies quickly, "Woh umm zubaan chabali" Angad sniggers at Kripa's lame excuse and everyone else laughs at Kripa's stupidity, whereas Kripa is giving Angad cold stares. Naina asks Angad to tell the cook to bring the desert. Kripa quickly slips something under Angad's seat using her feet. When Angad returns, he sits down and a loud farting sound is heard, it is practically deafening. All conversations end right there and now Angad is the center of attention. Dilip clears his throat, "Uhh khana kitna acha hai… HAHAHAHAA." Everyone bursts out laughing. Kripa is looking really proud of her self and Angad knows immediately who the culprit is. He gets out of his chair in an instant and yells, "Oh Kripa… YOUR DEAD!!!" Kripa leaps off her chair and runs upstairs yelling all the way "AHHHH!!" while everyone admires their friendship and their silly behaviors, which happens to be quite entertaining.

ok guys here was the next part! next part is gonna be more towards the romantic side lol! i want comments from you guys!! i'll defintely post the next part tomorrow, but that doesnt mean you dont gotta comment LMAO!

Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Part very cute and funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol kavya anjali not killing each other 😆 😆 😆 n kripa so scared of saw lol n angad making fun of her 😆 😆 😆 n oooo neev n prachi 😳 😳 😳 lol fab part, cant wait 4 the romantic part 2 come 😳 😳 😳 plz continue soooon 👏

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