could it be love fanfic part 1
hey guys dis iz my 1st fanfic so it wont be dat could plz reply i would really like it im sorry if its bad
its a love story about manthan and priya i fink its his turn too fall in love
manthan
priya
priya is going shopping and is walking with 3 bags in her hand
priya- ahh these bags are soo heavy
manthan come and bumps into her
priya -ahh u stupid bandir look waht u did
manthan- excuse me it was ur fault u should be the one looking where ur going
priya - what
manthan- yes anywayz i dont want to waste my time talking to you so im going
priya - wait a second who is going to pay fo this all my vegatables are dirty and its your fault
manthan- fine here you go its prob about 15 ruppai but ill give you 500 reppai maybe you can by some propper clothes
priya - what did you say these clothes are very exspensive fine just go i dont want your stupid money andlook at your self !!!!
manthan - bye miss angery tum bout gousa karte ho
priya leaves and manthan has a smile on his face bhoomi calls priya on her phone where are come to my house i thought you was coming
priya- yeah in coming i went to get vegatables for my dad but some stupid boy came and messed everthing up and wsted my time
bhoomi- oh well are you coming
priya- yeah im coming in a bit okay bye
priya enters shanti niketan wow what a big house
manthan is playing football in the house and by accident hit priya on the head she falls on the floor
priya - ouch
manthan brust out laughing priya sees him
priya - you what are you doing here!!!!!!!!!
manthan- i should be asking you dat question anyways this is my house
priya - wait ill come and sort you out how dare you hit me with dat ball
manthan- it was a accident but im glad it happend
priya runs after him and bhoomi and tanya come
tanya - what are you doing
priya- look aunty he hit me on the head with his ball and bhoomi thats the same boy who bumped in to me
bhoomi- oh thats my brother im sorry for what he done
priya what his your brother i feel sorry for you
tanya- manthan come here why was you playing football in the house and why did you hit her now go and say sorry to priya
manthan - me say sorry to her no way and mum it was a accident
priya - aunty no his lieing
manthan - wot would i ever lie to you mum
tanya leaves and smiles at priya dont worry ill make him say sorry to you one day
bhoomi- come priya
priya - wait i got to do something frist
manthan turns his back and leaves
priya gets the ball and hit manthan in his head
priya - hahahhaha now dats pay back
manthan- oh my god bhoomi did you see that ahahha
bhoomi starts to laugh
manthan - wait im not ganna leave you
bhoomi geta a phone call and leaves them both together manthan goes one step closer to priya
manthan - you better run
priya - why what are you going to do :s
manthan- run !!!
priya - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
manthan start chasing after priya everyone sees and starts laughing
tanya- oy what are you doing leave her alone now what did she do
manthan- she hit me with da ball to get revenge see mum i told you
tanya- is this true priya
priya- yes but
manthan- see
priya goes upstairs
kt- dont worry i know how he is its not your fault
laksh- priya soo wot happend
priya tells laksh and kt the whole story
laksh - what he done that ahh watch
priya - no laksh dont do anything
laksh- no i have to teach him a lesson
priya- hmmm maybe we could do something but not to much
laksh and priya and kt start thinking of a plan
priya- yes i got it come guys lets start
kt - manthan
manthan - what is it you gawar
kt- your mums calling you in da kitchen
manthan - fine im going
laksh and priya get a bucket of water and attached it to da door
manthan opened the door and the water fell on manthan start screaming lasksh leaves priya brust out laughing and manthan hears her
manthan- priya !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know its you
priya - comes in the kitchen and starts laughing hehehgheehhe
manthan- hehehhehheeh you done this didnt you
priya - maybe
manthan get a angery face and grabs priya and holds her against da wall
priya- what are you doing let go off me
manthan - pulls her hair look i have no time for stuid girls like you
priya - ouch
manthan starts shouting at her priya starts crying
manthan- ahh man now dont start crying
priya - im not crying and let go off me
manthan - no this is your punishment
priya - please look fine coz if someone comes here its ganna be your fault
manthan is just about to let go when laksh enters
laksh- priya woh manthan what are you doing priya runs to laksh ehat did yu do to her ehy are you crying
manthan- ill leave you 2 alone
laksh - i said wot did u do
priya - leave it he didnt do nothing
manthan - see manthan leave the kitchen and smiles at priya
laksh - what did he do
priya- nothing it was my fault for doing that and he was only shouting at me
laksh - come lets go
priya goes home laksh goes to manthan room
laskh- manthan
manthan - what
laksh - seriously what happend she wont tell me
manthan- whatever happend its none of ur bussiness
laksh- look it wasnt her fault it was me i done it and she took da blame
manthan- what oh well i dont care she was laughing at me i wont leave her now get out of my room laksh leaves and sees bhoomi
bhoomi - laskh what happend laskh tells her bhoomi goes to manthans room
manthan- oh hi sis
bhoomi - manthan what happend between you and priya look shes my friend and i dont want to lose her as a friend beacause of you
manthan - ahh fine dont worry sis ill do something
bhoomi- promise
manthan - yeh i guess ill say sorry but only 4 you
bhoomi - yes and ill tell her to say sorry and u 2 can be friends
manthan- wow wow dont get excited now im just saying sorry i dont want dis dosti dosti but if it makes you happy ill try
manthan call priya while shes sleeping
priya - hello
manthan- hi dis is manthan wait dont hang up i need to talk to you
priya- at this time !!!
manthan - plz
priya - fine go one talk
manthan - meet me outside my house
priya- fine priya come outside the house
manthan - hi
priya- yeh hi so what did you want to say
manthan-well umm im sorry
priya - what did yo say can you say it again
manthan- im sorry for what i did i shouldnt of done that so will you forgive me
priya- ill think about it
manthan-đĄ cant u fink now
priya- fine i forgive you
manthan brings his hand forward and they both shake hands
priya - bye i guesss
manthan -bye
bhoomi comes out when priya leaves
manthan- happy i dont it
bhoomi - thanks bro
plz tell me if u like it coz im making part 2 dis is just der little fights and dey just made up but soon love will happen
plz do reply and tell me if u like it or not its my frist time so it wont be that good im sorry if it was boring
if u like it ill make part 2
love madz aka madiha đ
could it be love
fanfic part 2
hey guys
you all said dat u liked part 1 and u wanted me to continue soo dis is part 2 i hope u guyz like it
love story between manthan and priya
priya manthan
she cant stop dreaming bout manthan jokin đ
the next day priya and her dad come to shanti niketan
priya and her dad - hello everyone
tulsi - hi im soo gald too see both of you
priya- umm ill just go and say hi to everyone tulsi says go ahead priya goes to bhoomi room
priya - hi bhoomi
bhoomi - hi wow you look nice today
priya- thanks so do you so wheres umm
bhoomi - who manthan ???
priya - yeh
bhoomi- his sleeping
priya- at this time
bhoomi - yeh he would prob wake up in about 2 hours why dont you go and suprise him and wake him up tanya mum was trying to wake him up but you no
priya - okay
priya enters manthan room manthan wake up
manthan - ZzzZzZzZzZZZ
priya goes on top of manthan but manthan grabs her and she gets stuck in his arms
priya - manthan
manthan keeps holding her and and finds himself on top of her he keeps on sleeping and moving around and falls down the bed when he wakes up he finds himself on top of priya
manthan - priya umm
priya - ahhh manthan get off me
manthan - na i fink ill go asleep for a bit longer
priya - fine bt atleast get off me
manthan - ohh anyways what was you doing in my room and why was you under me huh huh
priya - umm woh bye
manthan smiles and holds her hand
manthan - you still didnt answer my question
priya - umm well i just came to wake you up and then you was out off control and grabed me
manthan - what like this (manthan grabs her wastte)
bhoomi enters
bhoomi - ahh um đ
manthan lets go
priya - bhoomi woh
bhoomi smiles at manthan
bhoomi - no need to explain your dads calling you downstairs to go i didnt even get anytime with you spent it all waking up manthan anyways bye (bhoomi and priya hug )
manthan - bye priya
priya waves at manthan and leaves
bhoomi - umm so manthan i guess this means you both are friends
manthan - i guess you can say that
manthan cant stop thinking about priya soon manthan gets a phone call
manthan - hello
amar - hi you want to met me and the guys are going out
manthan - kya yaar why did you have to pick dis time when i was just dreaming about
amar - dreaming bout who đ
manthan - no one yeh im coming let me just get ready
amar - okey yaar
manthan and his friends go out and are just on there way of going back home manthan is sitting at the back
manthan - wait stop the car priya tum
priya - oh hi manthan
manthan you need a lift
priya - no its okey manthan ill manage
amar and the guys - oh come in we got a lot of room and those bags look heavy look you can sit next to manthan at the back
priya - umm
manthan - come on yaar if you dont come ill think that you havent still forgiven me
priya - okey
manthan- YES!!!đ
everyone looks ant manthan
manthan - what i said yes and start the car
manthan and priya sit together at the back soon all the friends leave leaving manthan and priya alone but someone driving amar is driving the car fast and priya falls on manthan
manthan - are you okay
priya - yeah
manthan - oy stupid drive the car slow
amar - cant too much traffic but ill try
later priya keep on banging into manthan
priya - sorry this traffic oouch
manthan - what happend
priya - this amar keeps on banging into cars and it hurts me
manthan puts his arm around priya
manthan- dont worry we just have to be really close
priya - umm okay i guess oh theres my house bye manthan byt amar
manthan gets out of the car priya umm you forgot your bag anyways whats in it priya - vegatables and bindi and goshed and ...
manthan - okay i get it
priya- yeh i have to go and make food for my dad and me you should go but one day you will have to taste my gajar ka halwa
manthan- gajar ka halwa thats my favourite wow cant wait 4 dat day anyways see you
amar - presses his horn yaar kitne deer lagow ge jalde karo
priya - you better go bye
manthan - bye and come init down my yard
priya - yeh i will im coming tommorow
manthan - kool well c ya
amar - ahh kitne bhati karogi yaar kitne minute hogiye hai tum douno bhat kariho
the next day priya goes shanti niketan and enters the house
bhoomi - hi priya
priya - hi
bhoomi - whats that in your hand its gajar ka halwa ooh for me you shouldnt have
priya - umm sorry but its not for you its for manthan
bhoomi - oh
tanya and tulsi and karan come
tanya , tulsi , karan - hi beti how r u
priya - im fine umm manthan kider hai
tanya - upstairs (priya goes upstairs)
karan - she wants to meet manthan manthan wasnt they fighing about 3 days ago
bhoomi - well now there friends priya made something speacial for manthan like gajar ka halwa
everyone smiles and says manthans fave
karan- huh i like gajar ka halwa
bhoomi - sorry dad but she made it speacial only 4 manthan hheheheh
priya knocks on the door
manthan - come in priya wow how nice to see you
priya - hi look what i got for you gajar ka halwa
manthan - no way yum lets go into the kitchen come
manthan sits and is munching on the food priya laughs
priya - so do you like it
manthan - yeh its da best gajar ka halwa i ever tasted
tanya - accha tou mera gajar ka halwa ka kabhi ni tarif kiya
manthan - umm
tanya - heheheh just jokin kalow she made with love for you
manthan -
priya - ah hum with love ah hum i just made it coz he likes it
tanya - okay i get it
manthan finnish his food and he and priya go upstairs
priya - wait i just need to go to the bathroom okay
manthan okay
priya goes into the bathroom and sees the biggest spider ever
priya - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh mujhe bachalo
manthan - runs to the bathroom kya hai
priya ------ ahhhh and jumps on manthan save me ahhh its coming closer pick me up (manthan picks her up)
manthan -where is it omg your scared of that tiny spider ha hah hahah
priya - let me go
manthan - fine and drops her on the floor
priya - ahh pick me up look its coming closer
manthan - ahh yeh ladki (and picks her up again ) and takes her to bhoomis room
bhoomi - umm bro why r you picking her up
manthan- please take her ahahahhahahahaahahah
bhoomi - whats soo funny
manthan - she got scared of a tiny spider and jumped on me
bhoomi brust out laughing hehhehheheh
priya - manthan tum kya sab ko baato gi
manthan drops her and says yes manthan tells everyone priya goes downstairs and everyonre starts laughing at her
priya - manthan meh tumhara gala doubadogi fine im not talking to anyone in this house
manthan - okay sorry baba and bends down and pulls his ears ab math karoge
priya - nay teack hai maf kardiya
manthan - fine im going sleep now i feel really tried
priya - its only 7
manthan - yeh but its better then to listen to you talking omg your soo boring
priya - what
when manthan is asleep priya goes into his room and puts lipstick on him and paints on his face manthan hears her laughing and wakes up
priya - look in the mirror
mantan - what (priya gives him the mirror and runs)
manthan- ahhhhhhhhhh
manthan s running after priya and everyone is laughing at manthans state priya is running too fast and suddenly falls and hurts her leg and blood is pouring
priya - ocouch manthan
manthan - r you okay see thats what you get for making me look like a girl even that i look quite dashing
priya - manthan !!! (manthan picks priya up and takes in inside and lays her on the sofa)
manthan- gosh man how much do you weigh (priya chucks a pillow at manthans face) everyone rushes to priya
tulsi - yeh kya howa you got hurt really bad
laksh - sits on the sofa and comforts priya and says are you okay and give her a hug manthan gets soo jelous
tulsi - laksh beta get up 4 a second take her to manthans room
manthan- my room
tulsi - your staying here today ill inform your dad and call a doctor
priya - doctor no no ba its okay my legs fine ( she gets upp ) owww
tulsi - r you sure okay bhoomi take her too manthans room
bhoomi tries to put the medicine on her leg
priya - oww dont worry ill be fine ill do it my self (bhoomi leaves and manthan comes inside
priya - oouch
manthan - come let me do it
priya hids her leg no its okay manthan
manthan- look dont worry i wont look
priya - okay
manthan puts the medcine on her leg is that better
priya - hey you opened your eyes
manthan - opps anyways umm tulsi ba said you should move into the guest room so i can have my room back
to be continued .....
sorry its not really gud i didnt really have much time 2 make it but anyways i hope u like it
love madz aka madiha
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