yeh dosti laksh &manthan

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Yeh Dosti

Laksh and Manthan

BY MADIHA SHAH 😊

manthan is ruff but deep down has a heart of gold and is in love with sapna but doesnt get along with nakul

laksh is a caring ,sweet and sensitive guy and is in love with kt and is also best friends with manthan

kt is a sweet girl and is in love with laksh

sapna is a sweet and caring girl and loves manthan

nakul is in love with sapna and tries breaking manthan and sapna apart he hates manthan and cant stand him

PART 1

hey guys im making a ff of manthan and laksha i hope u like it

manthan is walking down da road and laksh is oppisite him and manthan goes to cross the road and sees laksh and gives him a dirty look laksh gives a bright smile to him and manthan says something in his head ( man why is dis lover boy smiling at me ) manthan is walking and suddenly sees a car and is standing in the middle wot da laksh sees and shouts Manthan move !!!!and jumps in the middle and saves manthan ahhhhhhhh umm yaar laksh you saved my life and hugs laksh and soon relised he is huging laksh and lets go and tries to act kool umm yeh thanks for saving my life but it still doesnt mean im ganna be nice to u and if u tell anyone about this about wot dat i gave u a jappi(hug) ur seriously ganna get beats anyways thanks bye and gives laskh a smile and den a dirty look

soon they return home and tulsi enters laksh manthan kitne deer lagayti laksh why are you bleeding manthan looks at laksh umm nothing tulsi dadi i fell down oh okay and manthan why are your clothes dirty umm woh i fell down heheh just like laksh okay go and get changed manthan leaves

laksh goes to meet ba hi ba oh mera kisna wots wrong nothing something must be going on umm ba you no everthing well i dont no its manthan ab kya kiya osne what did he do now ?? nothing laksh tell the whole story to ba and says i dont no when he huged me i felt dat there was another side to him and his not bad i felt like i found my brother but den he just messed everything up later but in some way i no that he wont forget what i did for him aacha you both was hugging are you sure your not in love with him 😆ba !! tum bi na

hi guys tell me if u like it

too be continued 😊

PART 2

this is part 2 of yeh dosti i hope u like it

manthan is in a club with his friends and after 5 minutes laksh enters manthan isnt that your cousion umm whats his name umm loli no lucky wait umm oh laksh yeh thats it i dont no what your talking about i dont no this boy never seen him in my life 😕 soon laksh sees manthan and smiles manthan sees and gives a dirty look laksh comes towards manthan(oh god please tell me his not coming here hi manthan hey yaar i thought you said you didnt know him um um what nonsence laksh says his like my brother were tight man right manthan ?? yeh what ever 😡and thinking in his head man go away his friends start talking to laksh manthan gets bored and starts drinking a lot

manthan here take a orange juice remember what happend last time you drank so much manthan gives a sarcastic smile your not my mum laksh does a sad puppy face okay fine im taking the juice laksh smiles so laksh you must know a lot about manthan yeah i guess you can say that manthan goes to the bathroom so laksh anything embrassing happend with manthan like really funny oh well there was this one time when he was really tried and wasnt botherd to wear any clothes so he was wearing his underwear and didnt relised what he was wearing and walked outside when it was dewali and everybody was outside and lots of guest and everyone started laughing soon he relised he was wearing his underwear and ran and then a sunk came and manthan was stinking puff his friends started laughing ha ha ha dat was funny man yeh now when the aunties see him they call him chadi sab ha ha ha manthan came back whats so funny guys chadi sab what who telled you this 😳 laksh ha ha ha laksh sorry man they wanted to know another one of manthans friend came hey man wow look at that girl yeh shes okay wait ill be back im just going to see her im just getting a drink says laksh okay go right ahead the bar is right down there ----> yeh i know chadi sab shut up now !!!

laksh gets a drink and by accident spills it on manthans friend what the hell do you think your doing umm sorry you better be soon laksh sees that manthans friend is being offfensive and abusive to a girl the girl goes to laksh save me please and manthans friend is just about to slap the girl when laksh comes look man leave her alone no not you again i have to teach you a lesson now manthans friend starts hitting laksh den laksh kicks him and manthan friend hit laksh really hard oy manthan look your cousion is getting beated up yes !! i mean yeh soo what should i do go and help him soon manthan cant take it and sees laksh in pain move out of my way and beats up his friend and saves laksh sorry he says to his friend but well you better well just stay away from my brother if you even touch him ill break your hands come laksh thanks manthan its okay come lets go okay are you okay look your bleeding a lot let me see if theres a hospital down here somewhere no its okay no its not okay look your in pain and i cant see you in pain why ??? because i care for you thats way laksh is suprised 😲 manthan thinks what the hell did i say awww aww man i love you hey man im not like tha laksh laughs i was just jokin sure you whats wrong cant we be nice to eachothers yeah but i enjoyed making fun of you jokin look we both are like brothers so we should be good to eachothers now give me a japppi what hug man 🤗 they both hug and soon the whole parivaar comes and sees oh my god are you seeing what im seeing yes laksh and manthan stop hugging um we was just no need to explain its good to see you both like this nukul says i cant bealive your friends with this this idot hey dont talk about my brother like that what im your brother not him you both are and if you say anything bad about manthan not ones ganna be worser then me manthan looks at laksh and smiles 😊 ba says laksh are you still sure your not in love with him everyone starts laughing laksh says i do love him beacuse his my brother well just like my brother

hope you liked it

love madiha

Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey babygirl dats reli gud do continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3


Manthan and laksh begin to be great friends and brother
but nukul didnt like this and wanted to break them apart and tried to make a plan
nukul - hi laksh how are you bro
laskh - yeh im fine k bye im going to meet manthan
nukul - wait up its about manthan laksh stopped and nukul carried on umm well how well do you know manthan he might be planning something i mean his been rude to you all his life and now his being nice i mean do you trust that animal
laksh laughed bro dont worry i no manthan very well dont forget ive been living with him all my life to and his a great person i mean i thought he was rude and had no feelings but his actually pretty kool so nukul think before you say something why dont you come along u might get to know manthan and maybe you will
start liking him
nukul - yeah sure ill come he said sarcasticly but this was one of his evil paln laskh was suprised okay come but first you need to get ready i mean that outfit you got to be kidding a pink shirt and green pants oh my god you will be a laughing stock you need to be kool lookinh like me and manthan by the way where going to that hot new club in town manthan came inside laksh room
manthan - what is this yaar come where getting late
laksh - wait nukul is coming to
manthan laughed nukul in a club hahhha laksh start laughing to nukul was filled with anger at least tell himn to change his clothes i mean i no i told him to they began to laugh manthan said dont worry nukul ill donate to you hahaha

to be continue plz reply
Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 gr8 job!!! 😃
i saw the title and started laught..manthan laksh..yeh dosti?? 😆 so i had to read ur ff..and i love it!
plz cont soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4


manthan and laksh waited for nukul as he was getting ready manthan wot is dis yaar nukul man his taking his time i know but he need the time i mean remember what he was wearing manthan and laskh start laughing but after a minute stopped nukul came out wearing some rideiculous nerdy clothes
as soon as nukul walked in manthan and laksh brusted out laughing omg you have to be kidding ha ha ha
nukul - whats so funny this is the latest look
manthan - yeah 200 years ago welcome to the 21st centery nukul was brusting with anger but didnt show it
manthan - dont worry man you can borrow my clothes but dont give it back i dont want to catch your desase ha ha ha
nukul - very funny 😡
after 15 minutes they all reached the club manthan and laksh said to nukul look plz try to act kool coz we have a reputation so like you no they all went inside
yo dis is a sick club
nukul - its okay its a bit crowded and lots of smoke
manthan and laksh laughed da thats wot its all about look around you theres fine girls all around
nukul - oh
yeh now you get it
nukul - yeah but laksh wot about kt
laksh - wot about her she wont mind if im having fun or dancing with gals just take a chill pill and i asked her permisson she said its okay
manthan - man this boy needs to relax lets dance come
laksh and manthan started dancing and nukul was standing in one place and didnt like the atmosphere
nukul - laksh can we go home
laksh manthan - wot we only just got here manthan saw one of his friend that was a girl and told her to dance with nukul
soon nukul and the girl called anita was dancing he felt soo nervous because he couldnt bealive he was dancing with such a beautiful girl
anita - you want a drink he said sure she handed over the drink to him he holded it and spilled it on anita
anita - wot da hell you spoiled my dress you no how expensive this dress woz !!! 😡
manthan - just kool down anita and you nukul cant you see where your going you fool
laskh - yeah wots wrong with you man we shouldnt of even brang you to this club they both left
manthan - your just a loser
laksh - actually wait nukul we shouldnt of have been so hard on u all you did was spill the drink on her right
manthan - wot okay fine lets go your such a party popper



they left and went into shanti niketan

to be continued plz reply
madz

Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 5

Nukul as soo angery and hated manthan for laughing at him even dat laksh was laughing to he didnt care becasue he thought manthan as putting posion into his brain
tripi - oh nukul
nukul - oh hi mum he soon relised his mom was wearing a diomound necklace umm mum who got you that necklace looks expensive
tripti - um manthan got it for me his such a sweet boy unlike you i said soo much to him and he got me this beautiful necklace and he even apolgized to me i guess its a good thing him and laksh patched up

tripti - oh hi laskh how are you my lovely beta
laskh was suprised his mom said that to him and was loving him umm wot did you say
tripti - oh i said how are you my sweet bacha she squeezed laskh cheeks 😳
oh mom cut this crap out your only loving him because him and manthan are friends !! and he got you dat necklace
tripti - shut up nukul wot are you saying im proud of my son for taking such a big step and making are family now big happy family and manthan well becasue of laskh now i no that i was wrong about manthan and his very nice boy
laksh - wow mum your so understanding nukul is just mad becasue manthan called him a party popper
tripti - wot he done poo in the party chi how disgusting
laskh - no mum wot he meant is that his not very comfortable going to clubs or parties and nukul why are you being like this manthan is a gr8 guy and its by time you thought so to so plz can you stop saying all these horrible things to my brother
nukul; - your brother wot am i to you then okay fine ill give manthan a chance but he was just pretending to be manthans friend
laskh - great thats like it
tripti - yes !! i mean ill make you garam chai for my lovely sweetheart okay beta laksh ill be right back
laskh - okay mama wow this is all becasue of manthan moms giving me soo much love im ganna thanks him
nukul - wot i mean yeh umm go to your so called brother

laskh - okay he went into manthans room hi manthan
manthan - oh hi laskh wats up
laskh - whats up is you i love you man
manthan - what he jumped from the bed sorry but im not that i like girls not
laskh - no i didnt mean it like that i meant thanks i mean for wot you did for tripti mum beacuse of you i got that mums love i was looking for
manthan - no problem but i dont think its becasue of me so dont thank me she probely gave u all that love becasue of the person you are i mean it your a great nice guy and im glad that where soo close and your like my brother they both huged
archita came inside manthans room omg not again how many times are you both ganna hug i mean you both belong together they all started laughing
laskh - wot cant a boy hug his won brother once in a while
ehehhe yeh he can


Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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PART 6


Soon nakul was soo mad and wanted to get some fresh air so he walked around till he went to this road it was dark and it started to rain and suddenly a beautiful girl came out of a car she was the beautifulist girl he had ever seen he couldnt take his eyes off her she was waering a white tight chodidar (chalwar chamise and tight chalwar ) she was wearing big earings and a white necklace and high heels and had long stright hair and dimples she had such a beautiful smile

she walked and walked and opened her purse and gave out choclate to these little children and soon went inside her car nukul just relised she was gone and tried running after the car but it went to fast he soon returned home and couldnt go to sleep at all he could see is pictures of the girl he just saw running through his head he ddint know wot was happening to him he never felt this way about anyone the girl who he didnt even know how could he just fall in love like that he was thinking could this be love at first sight

soon manthan went out to meet his friends and lost his way he was driving soo fast he didnt even relise soon a girl came walking on the road with a plate of parsad she just came out from the mandir and was walking manthan didnt see where he was going and screamed to the girl move !!! she didnt hear and carried on walking he couldnt control his car and banged into the girl she fell on the floor and hurt her head it started bleeding he came out of the car and holded the girl in his arm are you okay
girl - excuse me can you let go of me you stupid boy didnt you look where you was going look what you do if you dont no how to drive a car why are you driving a car stupid

manthan - excuse me what did you say miss miss umm miss deaf
girl - wot did you say miss deaf wot about you monkey
manthan - excuse me do i look like a monkey to you im very handsome by the way not a donkey like you and didnt you hear i was shouting move soo loud so its not my fault
girl - it so is your fault and im not a donkey so shut up oouchhh

manthan - dont tell me to shut up and come inside my car your bleeding a lot come ill take you to the hospital
girl - what im not going anywhere with you ouchh ouchh okay fine lets go 😕
he picked her up and put her into the car i cant bealive i even let you touch me ehh just shut up and get into the car you sohuld be happy that i touched you girls dream of me touching them and dont try to hide your feeling i no you fink im hot burning hot

girl - eh no way have you ever looked in the mirror im not those stupid girls who follow you around stupid
manthan gave her a dirty look

to be continued

Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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PART 7


Manthan and the girl was inside the car manthan put some music soo loud he was listening to smack that he kept on singing "smack that all on the floor laalalalla lalal " the girl switched off the music
manthan - hey why did you do that for this is my car not your soo just keep your hands away from my car understand
girl - sorry i just wanted you to shut up with your singing you just spoiled all the song when you started singing
manthan - excuse me im a very good singer i won many awards in talent competitions
girl - ahahahha you got to be joking
manthan - 😡 manthan turn on his radio back on the song had finnished omg see because of your yap yap the songs finnished after that the song rafta rafta came on wait leave this song i love this song
manthan turned it off
girl - why did you do that for wot you dont let me listen to my song so i should let you listen to your song no way chup chap bati raho the girl went quite all of a sudden
girl - can i ask you a question plz
manthan no i mean okay fine what
girl - why are you soo rude i mean you get soo angery over little things are you sure you dont have some mental issues
manthan - excue me wot !!! do i look mad to you
girl - yess and please stop screaming i might get deaf
manthan - thank god where here theres the hospital go in there and bye
girl - wait cant you go inside with me why okay fine ill come with you
he waited and waited for her to come out she screamed he could hear her scream and he wasnt even in the same room as her he ran into the room and said wot is it

nurse - look sir your wife isnt taking the injection
manthan - hah ahha shes not my .. anyways take the injection your not some kind of baby take it he snatched the injection of the nurse and sat next to the girl and he said look just be brave okay he put the injection in her skin tears was dripping through her eyes but suddenly he didnt like this he couldnt see her in pain
manthan - its done now are you okay
girl - yeah im fine thanks and im sorry for shouting at you not hahahaha
manthan got soo angery shut up i wish i could just leave you in this hospital but no i cant come lets go he soon dropped her to her house she went out the car and asked him by the way whats your name oh its manthan
girl - oh my name is ..
manthan - dont want to no he ran off in his car she felt soo angery and wanted to punch him on the face

to be continued ...
Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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PART 8

Manthan returned home his mum was worried where he had been he went inside his room and started laughing because he kept on rembering the girl he had just met tanya was suprised he was laughing she had not seen manthan laugh for soo long she came and sit near him
tanya - manthan whats dis your laughing ?
manthan - nothing mum i just met this stupid girl
tanya - hmm so how did you meet this girl
manthan - oh well this accident
tnaya - accident !!! she paniced are you okay tumhe cohrt ne lagi
manthan - no mum actually umm i kind of hit her when i was driving and took her to the hospital wow my ears hurt a lot do you no how much she talks shes like a parrot she goes on and on never stops
tanya - so do you like this girl ?
manthan - are you mad shes soo annyoing i was only laughing because she did something funny dats all doesnt mean i like her i hate her ahh shes got the biggest mouth ever next time i see her im ganna run over her again or worse
tanya - manthan your not going to do anything like that i think this girls really sweet the way your describing her she must be .. anyways i want you to apolgize to her
manthan - what mum tanya gave him that look
okay fine mum ill go tomomrow but i forgot where she lives now i cant go
tanya - Manthan jao i mena not now first have some sleep later you go
Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome story..plz continue soon 😉

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