Manthan n Neha ff part 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2

Neha hugs everyone and realizes Manthans' missing

N: kaha hai Manthan?

Bhoomi: He's in his room, jao jaakar dekho usse

neha goes to manthan's room, there she sees Mnthan facing backwards, so she sees his back. she hugs him from behind

N: manthan, right? guess who i am?

manthan turns around and says: tum?

N: tum? what are you doing here? OMG, are you Manthan

Manthan: what else do you think?

N: no need to be rude! god you still haven't changed.

Manthan: who are you, and what's your name again

Neha: huh

neha walks off. Manthan laughs and says: Neha. He laughs again

Bhoomi enters: kya hua, kyu hass rahe ho?

Manthan: aaj bhi usse chirdana mujhe passand hai.

Bhoomi: sab ko chirdana tumhe passand hai. She leaves

Next day. Neha passes by Karan and Tanya's room and hears Tanya making sarcastic comments about Nandini and Karan's relation. Neha also stops bhoomi and says she wants to talk to her privately

neha: bhoomi, i hope you dont mind but, i noticed that nothing is right between Karan chachu and Tanya chachi. I really think we need to bring them close.

Bhoomi: i hav been trying but its not possible, that Nandini keeps comming in between!

Neha, i've got a plan.

Neha whispers in Bhoomi's ear and both giggle and go to manthan's room. Both have screwdrivers in their handa and do something to the baathrom door. Bhoomi sniggers

Bhoomi: aab, bathroom ka door jab band hoga, tum sirf usse bahar se khol sakte ho.

Neha: thats right! now the door can only be opened from the out side and not the inside.

Bhoomi and Neha go to Karan

Bhoomi:

Bhoomi: Neha, tumhe koi badbhu aarahi hai?

Neha: umm haan, mujhe lata hai ke Karan chachu, you should have a baath.

Karan: what? i aldready had one at 6 o'clock

Neha: 6 o'clock! which means 3 hours ago! you should have another one

Bhoomi and Neha push Karan into the baathroom and go in search for tanya so they can send her in too.

Bhoomi: mamma, tulsi daadi wants something from the baathroom, go and get it

Tanya goes in the baathroom and comes out. Karan had avoided Bhoomi and Neha and somehow went downstairs. Tanya also cam downstairs

Neha and Bhoomi see this and frown, they think, Why did the door not work?

Neha goes into the bathroom. Just then Manthan comes in and not knowing that Neha is in there and the door is not proper, he shuts it

Neha come out of the bloom and says: nooooo, what did you do that for?

manthan: what do you mean? and what are you doing in here?

Neha starts shouting at Manthan: its all your fault that we are locked in this baathroom. Neha explains what her an bhoomi planned out and then again says: why did you shut the door, oh no, now i am locked in this bathroom with you!

Manthan gets angry: what rubbish are you saying, first at the mall and now here, why are you shouting at me, i swear if you were not a girl, i would have punched the hell out of you by now.

Neha: OK MR MACHO, so you would punch me, go on then punch me

Neha pushes manthan and he falls into the tub of water, but he drags neha in the tub as well

neha is now in the tub, soaking weat and on top of Manthan. Both stop talking and stare at each other. Manthan pushes Neha's hair back. Just then Bhoomi enters the bathroom

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part can't wait for the next one
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waouuuuu kiya part hai
dil mange moreeee
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wow.. 👏 👏
plz continue soon 👏
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wow that was gr8...cant wait 4 the rest 👏
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wow ur a bril writer
cnt wait 4 u to continue!
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thanks, its great to hear tyou all liked it! 😳 😆

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