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Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwww so sad promo...but awsome prt

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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

ahhhh...wht..no this cant happen..angad nd kripa belong 2gether...u better get rid of khazeer...nd fast

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Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

nice continue soon....

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Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

heyyy
i finally found ur ff laiba(i hope u dont mind me calling u from ur name 😉)... i was like where did the ff go and also i forgot the title of ur ff, and finally after 2 weeks or so i found it.... 😆 reallly nice parts, really happy that ak confessed their love and i am really mad at josh 😡
anyways cont soooon
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Thanks a lot😊 and i don't mind you calling me by my name😆 and don't hate Josh he is sucha an angel😆

Originally posted by: love&life

nice part continue soon 👏

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Angad was at the rehersals, he was very upset so he couldn't concentrate. He kept on doing the wrong steps because of having yestreday night flashbacks so he just stoped dancing. His patner Piya was surprised by his behaviour.

P:Angad, is everything ok?

A:yeah Piya i'm sorry but i'm not feeling well today

P:its ok angad, we will pratise tomorow you go home and rest

A:thanks

Piya smiled at Angad who left without insisting. It was rainning outside, and he was walking alone in the rain in the empty street. He was having flashbacks of all the happy moments he spent with Kripa. He then stoped at a moment and fell on his knees and started crying badly.

A: i don't want to loose you Kripa (cry more) i dont'.....

He kept on crying and soon he fainted, a car was passing by and saw him on the floor. The girl came out of the car and went to him. She touched his forhead.

G:oh my god he has fever

The girl didn't know what to do because he was very strong but she somehow managed to take him to her car and made him sat then drove to her place. When she reached their she called a guy and told him to come outside. Now we see the door opening and a guy wearing blue jeans and white shirt coming out. He had two earings and was looking damn hot it was non other than Pritwi. He went toward the car and the girl came out, she was wearing a short white skirt and a pink turtle neck top. she had long black hairs and white long earings. We see first her eyes then her lips it was non other than Shaz(Shazmin). Pritwi kissed Shaz lips to say hi to her.

P:hey jaan why did you call me outside?

S:actully i don't know who he is i found him on the street he has lots of fever could you help me get him in

P:sure jaan anything for you

Pritwi took Angad inside and made him lie on the sofa, Shaz followed hm and sat next to Angad.

S:got he has lots of fever

P:yeah but you don't worry just let him sleep when he'll wake up then we'll talk to him

S:yeah

Shaz got up and went upstair in a purple and white room there was lots of pics of her everywhere so we could guess it was her room. She was about to took off her top that Pritwi came from behind her and hugged her, Shaz got scared.

S:god you scared me

P:sorry (kissed her cheek)

S:its ok

Pritwi start kissing her neck, Shaz let him do but soon some tears start falling from her eyes, Pritwi felt it and looked at Shaz. He made her face her and look at her.

P:you still love him?

S:.....

Pritwi was hurtbut didnt show it he just approchiate his lips to her tears and drunk them then slowly kissed her lips and then let her go.

P: i love you Shaz....i love you

He then left leaving a crying Shaz alone, she lyed on the bed and start crying badly. Downstair we see Angad sitting on the sofa looking at where he was when Pritwi came to him.

P:hey

A:who are you?

P: actully you fainted on the street and you had lots of fever. My fiance was passing by the street and saw you then took you here.

Just then Shaz came downstair Angad looked at her.

P:this is Shaz

S(smile)hi

A:hi

Shaz joined them.

A:thanks

S:its ok

A:i'm sorry but i'll have to go right now everyone is waiting for me

S:sure bythe way whats your name?

A:i'm Angad and thanks a lot for everything

Shaz smiled and watched Angad leaving. Once he left Pritwi got up and was about to leave that Shaz caught his arm.

S:i'm sorry

P(not looking ta her)its ok

Shaz got up and hugged him, Pritwi had no other choice to hug her back. He caressed her hair and Shaz closed her eyes. On the other hand, we see Kripa in Angad garden waiting for him to come when her eyes fell on him coming she run to him and hugged him tightly. Angad first didn't hug her but then he hugged her too.

K:where were you? i was waiting for you

A:i'm sorry

K:i love you i don't want to marry him

A:i love you too but you'll have to marry him for your family happiness

Kripa hugged him even more tightly and they both got tears in their eyes. When they both apart, they had a very ong eys contact.

K: Angad i can't do this it'll be unfair to Khazeer

A: but you don't have any other choice

K: i do i can live my whole life with you and thats what i want

A: but i don't want you to hur tyour family for me. If they get to know that you love me they'll get hurt please Kripa listen to me marry him

K:no Angad(cry)

A:please for my sake

K:(cry more)no i can't

Angad took her head in his hand and made her look in his eyes

A:Kripa i promise i'll always be there for you, mein hamesha tumhare saat rahounga door reh kar bhi pass rahounga please Kripa

Kripa looked in his eyes for very long and finaly agreed to sacrifice her love. She accepted what Angad requested her. She then turned around to leave and slowly start walking toward the house and Angad watched her leave. Kripa soon reached the door of her house she turned around to see Angad last time and then went in. Angad closed his eyes tightly and let more tears come out. Kripa went in her room and start crying when Khazeer came in her room she quickly wiped her tears.

Kh:umm hi Kripa sorry to disturb you

K:hi..its ok

Kh:actuly i saw you crying so i tought to ask you if you were ok i mean....

K:i'm fine(smile)thanks

Kh:Kripa i can see that you are not ok. Please tell me maybe i can help you

K:i don't love you i love Angad i'm sorry( tear in her eyes)

Kh: neither i love you, i love someone else too (a tear fell from his eyes)

K(shocked)then why are you marrying me

Kh:because of my father

K:but.....

Kh: i know that i'm being unfair to you because i'll ruin your and angad life but i can't help.. my father doesn't want me to marry the girl i love

K:(shocked)why?

Kh:because he thinks that Shaz is playing with me she just want my money nothing else

Justthen Lakshya enter.

L:but i promise you Khazeer that at any cost you wont marry Kripa. You'll get Shaz and you'll marry her i'll be the one who'll support you and talk to your father and Kripa you, you already know what i want and what will happen.

Kh:(surprised)but how??

L:well you know since chilhood i'm your father "ladla beta"(gigle) i know how to convience him and for Kripa well i don't know yet.

Kh:that will be great but...

L:but what?

Kh:Shaz is with Pritwi right now

K:who is Pritwi?

Kh:he fiance

L&K:what?

Kh:actuly when my dad refused to accept Shaz i didn't know who to tell her but i knew if i would tell her that i couldn't marry her she would lost everything and spoil her life so i told her that i played with her and all she start hating me and got engage to Pritwi who loves her a lot....

Kripa put her hand on his shoulder, Khazeer looked at her and wiped his tears.

K:don't worry, everything will be fine

Kh:i hope so

L:don't worry Khazeer aap tum dono ki taqdeer mere haaton mein hai

He winked at then who both smiled at him.

Laiba😊

Awesome Part Laiba

I hope Shaz and Khazeer meet and that Prithvi gets lost

Awesome part.... i hope laksh cums up wid like a mindblowin plan or sumthin!!!!

Awesome part.... i hope laksh cums up wid like a mindblowin plan or sumthin!!!!

awesum update...too bad angad wasnt there..im sure he wld hav helped nw tht he noes prithvi...well i luv ur work so continue soon plz

finaly found this fanfic.. i had to read everything again.. lolz..

great part. i wish kripa told her family, but she never had time now did she...

laksh i know u can do it.. convince shaz and khazeer's daddy.. i no i can count on u..

continue sooooonn

awosome part continnue soon hope lakshya convices k dad 😛