-Mere Pass Pass-/-The End p 22 Finaly - Page 16

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
loved it.
Angad is a A class idiot letting go of Kripa for some stupid family happiness...don't he care about Krips happiness. 😡
Hope Laksh have a good plan to reunit the lovers.
plz cont. soon.

😆Thanksa lot

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome dear 👏

thanks alot😊

Lakshya was in his room thinking of how to talk to Rishis Dad. To tell the truth we could see he was scared but he had to for Angads happiness. He tought a lot then finaly after long time he got an idea. He went downstair to Kripa room. He knocked then opened the door and saw Kripa reading a book.

K:hey

L:hey Kripa, actully i'm her to ask you if you know where i could fine Khazeer Dad?

K: he is at his place

L:where?

K: wait i'll give you the adress

Kripa closed her book and put it on the bed then stood up and went to her desk. She then took a papers and wrote the adress then gave it to Lakshya. He took it quickly then quickly smile to her and left running. Kripa was confused, she wondered what he could do with Rishi Dad adress but then went back to her bed and start reading again. Meanwhile, Lakshya was in his car, driving very fast and after a very long drive he reached a very big manor. Lakshya get out of the car and run inside. He rang at the door and waited for someone to open the door. Soon a servant opened the door and made Lakshya get in. Lakshya looked everywhere and then saw a vman sitting on the sofa reading the newspaper with a cigrette in his left hand. He had glasses and was wearing a black suit. The old man looked at Lakshya and smiled.

The man: hey Lakshya, wahan kyun khare ho come here

Lakshya smiled and joined him. He sat on the sofa and looked at the man.

M:pata hai bura ho gaya houn na(laugh)

L:nahi nahi uncle aap to pehle se bhi zyada young lag rahe hain

M:arey yeh to hamari pehchan hai, mere bete ko hi dekhlo phati houyi jeans aur t-shirt pehene ajata hai mere samne

L:kaun Khazeer(gigle)

The man was non other than Khazeer Dad.

KD: haan aur kaun pata nahi kiya zamana a gaya hai

L:correct, aaj kal ke nojawan

KD: oye chup kar houd ke kapre dekhe hain

Lakshya looked at his cloths, he was himself wearing a t-shit Levis and a latest jeans.

L: par yeh to fashion hai

KD: fashion zara khare hona

L(stood up) kyun?

KD(hit him on his asses)yeh dekh

L:ouch, itni zor se kyun mara

KD: tumhari bhi phati hoiyi jean hai, piche se dekhna

L:oh god uncle, don't start again please

KD(smile): acha chal thike. anywes tum aur itni subha yahan? kheriyat to thi?

L:woh uncle aapse kuch baat karni thi

KD: haan kaho

L: uncle, mein aapko pehle batana chata tha lekin nahi bataya paya iss liye aab bata ra houn... Kripa, Angad se pyar karti hai

KD(surprised)what? meri bahoo kissi aur se pyar karti hai(angry now) what the hell does she think of herself jaannikal dounga usski

L: Uncle relax, usski koyi galti nahi

KD: kyun nahi galti? galti usski hai, woh shaadi ke baad mere bete se aab pyar kaisse karegi, mere bete ko kaisse kush rakh payegi(angry and almost shouting)

l:yeh sawal mein bhi to aapse pooch sakta houn

KD: kiya matlab?

L:Khazeer, Kripa se pyar nahi karta, woh to Shazmin se pyar karta hai. Woh bhi shaadi ke baad Kripa ko nahi apna sake ga, woh bhi ussey woh pyar nahi de sake ga jaunsa woh ussey nahi de payegi. Woh bhi ussey kush nahi rakh payega jaissey Kripa ussey kush nahi rakh payegi

KD(shocked)....

L:uncle, mein janta houn ke aap Shazmin se nafrat karte hain, kyunke aapko lagta hai woh Khazeer se nahi balke usske paisson se pyar karti hai lekin usko ek mauka to dijiye. agar aapne Kripa aur Khazeer ki shaadi hone di to 4 zindagiyan barbad ho jayengi. Angad ki, Kripa ki, Shazmin ki, aur sabse zyada important apke apne bete ki.

KD(surprised and speechless).....

L: Unlc,e mein nahi janta ke mein apse yeh sab kyun keh raha houn, shayad iss liye kyunke mein apne bhai jaissey dost Angad ko toota houa nahi dekh sakta ya phir shayed issliye ke pehli baar mein apke iss faisle se kush nahi kyunke apko pata tha ke Khazeer Shazmin se pyar karta hai, agar usski shaadi Kripa se ho jati to Kripa ki zindagi barbad ho jati.... mujhe to kehna tha keh diya, i'm sorry agar aapko bura laga lekin abb in 4 zindagiyon ka faisla aapke haat mein hai...

He looked at Khazeer Dad for the last time, with his eyes full of confidence and left. Khazeer Dad, start thinking about what Lakshya said, its true that he knew that Khazeer after his marriage with Kripa he wouldn't be able to kepe her happy and give her the love she deserve. On the other hand, we see Anagd at the rerhersels, he was alone sitting on a chair with a guitar in his hand. He had his eyes closed and was singing.

Na jee sakein yahan, na mar sakein yahan

Hasne ki baat chhoro, na ro sakein yahan

To jaaye hum kahan, to jaaye hum kahan

To jaaye hum kahan

Yeh dard ki aahein juda huwi raahein

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe

Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe

Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon

Bedard is berehem ko hawa mein uchhaal ke phaink doon

Dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya dil ne mere haaye yeh kya kiya

Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon

Lamhon se haare bujhe nazarein

Ab to saheinge yeh gham dheere dheere

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke

Waado ki rasmon ko chaahat ki kasmon ko tum gaye tod ke

Ghariyan sitamgar katti nahi, ulfat ke manzer se hatti nahi

Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke

Jahan bhi jaoon tumhe hi paoon

Rukeinge humaare kadam dheere dheere

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe

Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe

Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere

Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere

Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

He had lots of tears in his eyes and was thinking of Kripa, he knew he wouldn't be able to get her back agin, he had lost her. Pia who was there looking at him from far hidding herself for not to let Angad see her, was surprised to see Angad crying and singing such a sad song. She tought for a second then went to him and put her hand on his shoulder. Angad slowly opened his eyes full of tears and turned around to see her standing looking at him with lots of questions in her mind. Angad didn't let her ask anything he just hugged her tightly and continued crying, Pia hugged him back and start consolling him.

A: i lost her

P:no you didn't, please stop crying

Angad didn't stop, Pia understood what happened but she knew that Angad love was true and nobody could separe him and Kripa. Meanwhile, we see Shazmin in a shopping mall. She was looking at some dresses and took two dresses then went to Pritwi who was standing outside talking to someone on he phone.

S: Pritwi, which one is the best? the red one or blue one?

P: Jaan i'm sorry but i'm quite busy i'll come later

S:but

P: jaan its an important call

S:more important than me?

P:yes

Shazmin was shocked and upset too. Pritwi left and Shazmin got tears in her eyes.

S:agar aaj Khazeer mere saat hota to kabhi aissa na kehta

She closed her eyes and remembered Khazeer face then wiped her tears and turned around to leave but someone put his hand on her shoulder. Shazmin quickly opened her eyes and turned around to find Khazeer standing there. Shazmin was surprised and happy too but didn't show it.

K: itna yaad karti ho mujhe?

S:kiya faraq parta hai, yaad unko kiya jata hai jinhe hum pyar karte hain lekin tumne to pyar ke badle mujhe sirf dard diya hai

K(hurt):but(interupted)

S: i don't want to know anything Khazeer, meine tumse itna pyar kiya hai aur karti rahoungi ke mein tumhari har ek galti ko maaf kar sakti houn lekin aab hamare raste alag hai. Mein Pritwi ke saath bohot kush houn tum bhi apne nayi zindagi shoroun karlo

K:nahi, tum kush nahi ho

S(surprised):....

K:agar kush hoti, to aaj iss tarhan Pritwi tumse yeh na kehta ke usska phone call tumse zyada important hai, aaj tum mujhe yaad karke tumhari ankhoun se ansoun na nikalte

Shazmin closed her tears and more tears fell. Khazeer got tears too and he went closer to her then put his hand around her neck and put his head against hers.

K: i loved you, i love you and will always love you no matter what happen. Meine hamesha tumhi se pyar kiya hai aur duniya ki koyi bhi larki tumhari jaga nahi le sakti.

Khazeer kissed her on the lips lightly and was about to leave but Shazmin caught his arm and make him turn.

S:agar itna pyar karte ho to jooth kyun kaha ke tumne mere saat sirf time pass kiya tha

K:because i was forced to..

Shazmin understood that it was because of his dad, Khazeer turned to leave but Shazmin hugged him from behind. Khazeer tryed hard to free himself but he couldn't so he just turned around and hugged her tightly.

Laiba😊

awsome part 😊
awwww poor angad 😭

great part.. loved how laksh spoke to khazeer's dad.. and khazeer - shaz "reunion-like meeting" soo cute


continue soooonn

LAIBA!!!i just catched up it was so awesome untill i saw that stupid monkey looking khazeer come in he can get lost im fine with prithvi LAIBA!!!!! not fair i hate that stupid gadar khazeer anyways apart from that the parts were awesome my angus soooooooooooooo cute and nice siggies 😛

shaz

im at unums house so im logged in to her name anyways cont soon now and make khazeer fall off a cliff

i just got caught up with this fanfic!!!!! i love how Lakhaya alwayz solves AK's problem!!!!! i think prithvi is just attracted to shaz and hopefully AK will be together soon 😳 continue soon i liked the siggy of your fanfic 👏

aww, shaz and khazeer are sooo cutee.. can u gimme a pic of khazzeer too? he seems cute, lolz 😉 i really liked the shaz and khazeer part in this part.. they were fabulous. and can u plz use less hindi? 😕 i have problem reading it 😭

ohkiee..i hope the little prp talk lakshya had wid khazeer's dad helped coz i cant bear to see kripss nd angad apart..plz get them together again..

Originally posted by: sameira-90

awsome part 😊
awwww poor angad 😭

Thanks alot😊