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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Paru_M

awesome part 👏 and funny too lol😆 cont soon

thanks

luv,

akanksha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
hey , I'll update tomorrow...........sorry for not continuining today


luv,
Akanksha 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

At bout 4'o clock in the morning the doc. let angad inside
Vidya was still waiting outside………

An: hey vidya……….lets go inside.

V: no!! no!! u go……….I'm waiting outside………the doctors don't allow more than1 person at a time

Angad shook his head in ok & went inside…….sameer was sleeping peacefully & a nurse was attending him.
Whom do u think Angad will look at--- Sameer or the nurse……………

If u think he looked at sameer ur absolutely……………
……………………………………………………………………………………WRONG
He looked at the nurse with wide open eyes & sat besides her

An: U know the dresscode of the nurses over here r well…………….I must say….not so impressive or say not upto the mark………well u know u hav got a very nice figure……..

N: (uninterested) so!!!!!!!!!!

An: so what??????????? I'm a very famous dress designer……….Angad…….angad khanna……..U must hav heard my name……..

N: (irritated) & if I say I don't know………. U better keep quiet unless I'll complain the doc. That ur troubling me……..

Saying this the nurse went away….

U think Sameer cud rest in peace when angad……..is all there to disturb.So, Sameer

woke up……actually he was awake…..was just closing his eyes…..


S: (relaxed smile) yahaan teri daal nahi galne waali

An: kaisa hai yaar tu??????????


S: yaad aa gayi meri….waise when I'm gonna discharged.

Just then the doc. Entered……


D: today……..or I can say in the morning itself…ur perfectly alright Mr sameer & we feel no complications in letting u go…..but do hav ur medicines properly & yes get ur bandage changed every second day

An: don't worry doc.


D: I must say u hav got a very nice friend ……..he remained awaken all night for u
Sameer gave a very assuring smile…….& was pleased to hear the doctor say so…….more than angad……..I guess.
Suddenly sameer remembered something & just sat on the bed instantly…….

S: where is Vidya……..how's she(his voice seemed tensed)


An: hey she is waiting outside……….absolutely fine!!!


Then after some general check-ups………sameer was ready to leave the

hospital…..in the car remained absolute silence ….sameer was on the front

seat…….vidya sitting at the back & angad driving…angad was unable to sense what

happened that they aren't talking but wasn't even bothered………he kept on

driving . finally they reached home….where avi was restless…..he knew absolutely

nothing bout the accident that happened last night or …………………I must say

attempt to murder….


Seeing a big bandage wrapped across sameer's right arm………Avi too got restless…….he asked instantly

Av: what happened to u sameer…?????????


Sameer as always did ignore the question as he wasn't in the mood to narrate the whole thing & simplylied on the bed…..


Av: koi mujhe bataayegaa kya huwa hai……..


An: kuchh nahi yaar….bus kal ek badmaash se larai ho gai & sameer ko thodi chot lag gayi….that's it….I am going for jogging……….bina jogging ke I feel restless u know……….

S: (arraam se) I know why u feel restless………….me coming too


An: no ur not going anywhere….u know last night ur lips were all blue……..


Av: what???????????


S: (innocently) how cud I know……..waise bhi how cud I be in bed all day long…………..


An: (very assured) yes yes how cud u be in bed all ALONE


S: ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!


An: I mean u need someone…..guys cant be alone in bed……….(saw sameer staring at him like…..like even God is not going to save him frm sameer) …..ok!! ok!! I am sorry………..tu pichhle janam mein zarur meri biwi hogaa………tabhi…….tabhi main tere liye itnaa pareshaan ho jaata hun aur tu…tu mujhe nakhre dikhaataa hai……….


Av: (as if for the first time got a very appropriate answer for the first time in his life ) itni jaldi bhool gayaa………ki……..ki pichhle janam mein tu to wo tha

Sameer gestured as if it was the perfect answer ever………& got up to put on his shoes……..


An: to tu nahi maanega……..achha chal


Av: yaar main bhi to ghar mein bore hota rehtaa hun …….mujhe bhi le chalo….
So all three of them went in the nearby park where most of the people of the colony came for morning walk… ........... & yes not to forget ........TOMMY


Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
so this is the next part..........in a way monotonous & nothing so imp happening........next part will be better


Luv,
akanksha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
aakii very good work.. me liking it very much... the way angad was flirting with the nurse... them the fun element between avi , angad and sameer is just too damn cooll.. me enjoying it way too much... 😆
😆
please do post the next part soon..will be waiting for it eagerly.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
hey very nice part..................update soon...............ye sameer abhi theek hua hai, nd rest karne ki jagah park me ghoom raha hai 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
hiiiii just finished reading ur story yar i must say its tooooooooooooooo gud...infact its so diff...i to luvd reading it..nw yr plzzzz post the next parts sooon m eager to read it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

So lets see what happens in the park……..all the old aunties rushed to sameer to ask what happened...actually he became their CHAHETAA in just 15 days….in the meantime Angad saw a very sexy gal……..what else do u expect frm SS……..he went to her…….. 😉

An: I must say ur very sexy……absolutely……..32-26-32,
I'm a very big dress designer…& it will be a pleasure for me to design some of the most outstanding clothes for u………what say????????? 😉 😉 😉

The gal was impressed……..ufff Angad is sexy……….If I hadn't seen Rajeev before…….I wud hav certainly fell for him………but u know I am very loyal to Rajeev………….oh I started my own bak-bak …….lets see whats next……..sameer saw all this….he went to angad……. 😆 😆

An: main to tumhare liye aise kapde design karunga….aise kapde design karunga……..

S: ki kapde dikhenge hi nahi…….. 😆 😆 😆
G: what rubbish……… 😡

The gal ran away……..angad was irritated..
S: kya huwa…..(making fun of angad's facial expression)

An: kya problem hai teri………meri uske saath date bhi fix ho jati…….sab teri wajah se.

Just then Sameer saw bhoomi……..actually she was coming to them only……..avi was nowhere in the vicinity

B: hey Angad……..saamne se tu aur bhi hot lagtaa hai…
An: oh!! Thank u…..thank u….I'm pleased……..
S: bas ab tu rehne de……..arre !! bhoomi aaj subah subah……..yahaan jogging karne……….!!!!!!!!

B: Actually I hav shifted in this colony only………..U know I was awake for the whole night………….& waise bhi today is Sunday……..so I thought why don't meet u guys……..

Suddenly she saw the bandage……..
B: sameeerrrrr!!!!!!!!! Ye kya huwa hai…….
S: mujhe kuchh ho saktaa hai !!!!!
An: haan!! Haan!! Jyadaa kuchh nahi bas kal purii raat ventilator pe tha…………..
B: what???????????
Angad started telling the whole thing to bhoomi……..tabhi Sameer saw vidya sitting on one of the desks…..he went to her…….for 5 min. there was complete silence……..finally vidya spoke up………

V: how's ur pain……..

S: much less than urs………(he became silent)………chhod kyun nahi deti use…….U r urself a doc. & earn enough to grow up ur kid as a nice human being………don't u think the way ansh beats u has very bad impact on Deepu……..

Both remained silent…….
V: lekin kaise…..I'm very afraid…….wo….wo kuchh bhi kar sakta hai……..
S: hamaare hote hue u don't need to be afraid of anybody………hum tumhaare liye ghar khojenge.. 👏

Just then Bhoomi & angad came……..& yes avi on his wheelchair with Deepu………
B: yaar hum sab tumhaare sath hain……….arre main to bataana hi bhool gai aaj hum sab movie dekhne jaa rahe hain……….maine tickets already book karaa di hain…

S: movie ka koi naam to hogaa……….

B: yeah!! SHAAKA LAAKA BOOM BOOM
An: kaunsi……. 😕
B: oh!! ………(excited)………pata hai usme mera favorite hai………UPEN PATEL…..
Av: kaun wo NANGU…… 😆 …
All of them besides Bhoomi began laughing…….
B: (angrily) don't u dare speak bout him……..meri to koi kadar hi nahi hai yahan..
An: yaar hum zarur challenge dekhne……..wo…teri …..kaunsi waali…….jo bhi ho..u don't worry……. 😆 😆
S: so done…..
V: kabse hai show……..
B: 2:30 pm………so program fixed…….

In the afternoon ……..we see all 5 of them seeing movie in the hall………lets see what r they doing……..
S: ufffffffffffffff………kahaan fas gayaa……..
An: yaar wo kaun hai………(pointing at bobby deol)
S: Tomato……..don't u see the red jacket…….oh.
Bhagwaan bachaao mujhe……I'm just unable to get what is the relation between movie……..& its title….& iska hair style….jun (lice) ke chalne ke liye raastaa banaa rakha hai……..
😆
After sometimes………
An: (happily)…dekh dekh………heroine ke pyaar mein bechaara tomato ………Sauce bantaa jaa rahaa hai…. 😆
S:……….ufffffffffffff……….Ye sauce bhi kabhi tomato tha…….bas ab aur nahi…….. 😡

Saying this sameer stood up……..so did angad……..log halla machhane lage…………….RESULT………both were thrown out of the hall…….. 😆 😆 😆
S: sach me what a nice escape………ye bhoomi bhi naa hame kaahaan fasaa deti hai………ab kya Karen….. 😕

An: idea……….bar chalte hain!!!!!!!!!!
S: pehle inhe aane to do……..pareshaan ho jaayenge…

After bout 1 hr. Bhoomi & all came out………
An: hum jaa rahe hain………..

B: but where!!!!!!!!!!!
Angad & sameer looked at each other & gave a biggie smile& then……….
An& S: (started singing together) Wahin jahaan koi aata jaata nahin…………. 😆 😉 😉 😉

hey guys dont mind....iss part ka story se koi khaas lenaa denaa nahi hai....actually...ye mere dil ki aawaaj hai....I hated SHAKA LAKA BOOM BOOM...so I did this😭


Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
so here's the next part.........hope U like it.........& my serious sorry to Upen patel & bobby deol fans 😆

Luv,

akanksha 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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see, awesum as usual ( see ist to comment). vaise upen patel.i don't like his dimpled chin but i liked his dancin in 36 china town. nyways aur kya kehna. 😉 gr8 part. cont soon. (sweet 16 😳 )sameer, intelligent man. 😉

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