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Posted: 18 years ago
hey aakki, just read ur ff n its damn good. I enjoyed evry bit of it. Its so different. i like each character of the story. Ur style of writing is also different n good! Just tooooooo good 👏
Pls update soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey aakkii, i read ur ff n its really good. The characters are so different,just cool !!! 😉
U really write well 👏
continue soon, me waiting eagerly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys .........I am gonna update today itself..... 😃 ........so wait is over 😆

Luv,

Akanksha 😊 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Saying this Anvesha got into her room…….she was tired…..she thought bout herself

…she used to be the most intelligent& studious gal in her class……in college too all

she looked at were books….books once used to be her life…she was so reserved for

herself….but why did she do this…..why she never thought it necessary to hav

friends….becoz……….becoz…..SUCCESS meant to be EVERYTHING for her………but

know this is called the irony of life………..now success was the ONLY thing in her

life…..all she cud do was to sit in her exquisitely big room ……….ALONE…..& hate

herself for what she had done with herself……..cry….cry & cry ….with no one there

actually who cud understand her……..she again thought……what's the need …am I

not enough to understand myself……..but really…….WAS SHE ENOUGH………she

has got everything………very nice dresses………a lot of money……..which she once

dreamed like heaven…….but do they actually please her…….what cud she do of those

dresses when there's actually no one who cud admire her in those …..may be she cud

be a center of attraction in the page3 parties…….the parties that she hates like

hell…..while thinking she came inside the bathroom to change……..



Do DREAM MEN exist…….no…….no….we expect them to be so perfect that they

become a part of dreams….sweet dreams that I had never got the time to see……..&

even if my dream man exists…..wud he really like me……..she looked into the big mirror

in her bathroom…those dark circles…….below her eyes…….the face that has turned

utterly unattractive….& her lean body……..so sapless….who wud love her………she

sat in her bathroom & wept bitterly…….she said to herself……..




"why the hell r u crying Anvesha…….U urself wanted this frm ur life…….no dream man is coming for u even u wish……..I hate u Anvesha…..I hate u…why did that guy save u…..wudnt it be better if u died there only in that mall….."

She came out………..wiping her tears…..running away frm herself…..but u know where there is will there is a way……….she remembered something….something that she once read in a novel………

"U r never given a wish…..without also being given the power to make it true…"

Really is it true……..she was a bit relaxed…..ran to search for that book…..if she remembers it correctly……..she got the book……..opened the first page…….U know what was written over there…….

"TO BRING ANYTHING IN UR LIFE IMAGINE IT'S ALREADY THERE"

written so bold that it caught her glance…….If it's true ….has her dream man already

entered into her life…..may be….or may be he is about to enter…….how cud he be

like……..his eyes for sure will be world's most amazing…..that she cud drown into

it…..deep like an ocean…….or may be deeper…….he for sure must be very good-

looking…..but…..but not more than her so that anybody dare not say the guy to be

better……he wud just make a perfect pair …….& we will be one picture perfect

couple…….her tears dried………& there was a sweet smile on her face…..she slept

….

I think I havnt bored u guys……..now lets move on to see what Sameer & company r doing…..as usual…….MASTI 😆

Actually they were waiting for bhoomi's car to arrive….ab they wont go on foot naa…..finally Bhoomi's driver arrived….ofcourse with the car………they gave chhutti to the driver………sat in the car…..which who else sameer was driving……..the car zoomed off……. 😉

In the car……….

An: man…….kya dimaag hai bandi ke paas……..I never thought in my wildest dreams that she is gonna shoot that security alarm 👏

Avi: yaar……..she is brave too……when that goon asked for her…….I didn't think…..she is gonna turn up.. 👏

B: tumhe kya lagtaa hai….bas guys he daring hote hain…….hum kisi se kam nahi…😡….

S: (smiled…..he too was impressed man!!) well!! She doesn't look that bad without specs… 😉

Angad, avi &bhoomi together: o…….ho….doesn't look that bad.!! 😆

An: to sameer ko kudi pasand hai………so guys lets start….

All three together……… 😆

Kya mujhe pyaar hai….hai ya..
Kaisa khumaar hai….hai ya…
Ho.o..o…o..ho..o..o..o..o..o.o

They started singing…..sameer …….what cud u expect…was irritated….lets see what he says…..

S: oh!!….ye sahi hai ki I am impressed….but aisa kuchh nahi hai….. 😡

B: to kaisa hai sameer(teasingly) 😆

S: well…..well well ………I don't think tumhaare idiotic questions ka mere paas koi answer hai…..guys ye real life hai koi movie nahi…..ki pehli baar dekha & CLEAN BOWLED………kisi ko pyaar karne ke lie I think understanding is nessesary….. 👏

An: per yaar main to ladki dekh kar clean bowled ho jata hun…… 😆

S: don't worry beta……..aisaa tujh jaison ke saath hi hota hai……😆.

All of them laughed……..
S: ab kuchh matlab ki baat Karen….. 😡

An: haan!! Matlab ki baat……..se yaad aayaa….yaar tumlog mere FASHION INSTITUTE ke bare mein kuchh to socho…. 😭

B: fashion insti……..cooooooooooollllllll idea….. 👏

Avi: tu uncle ki madad kyun nahi leta….. 😕

An: dad ki……..unko pataa chal gayaa to meraa ye dream…..DREAM hi reh jaayegaa….wo mujhe ek footi kauri bhi nahi dene waale……… 😆

S: sabse pehle to tu ye bataa…….kya uncle ko pataa hai..ki tu yahaan….humaare saath hai….India mein. 😆😆😆

An: haan……….matlab ki NAHI………. 😆😆😆

All three: AAAANNNGGGGAAAAADDDDDDDD!!!!!!! 😡

An: kya angad…..unko bataataa main…..mujhe tommy ne kaata tha….mera saaraa plan meri aankhon ke saamne chaknaachur ho jataa…. 😆

B: ye nahi samjhenge…….but Angad I can sympathise with u…..yahaan India mein pataa nahi parents ki kya problem hai……..All they think bout there kids is engineering, medical & MBA…..to hell with this mentality….u know I wanted to be a journalist….but my mom……..mujhe jabardasti MBA karaa dia….aur pataa hai what they say…….
"beta all we need is a secured future for u…."….jaise ki If I were a journalist……..I wud hav been starved till death……..

An: aur kya……..ab main entrepreneur nahi ban na chaahtaa to nahi ban na chaahtaa…….. 😳

S: haan!! Haan!!…….tu to bas swim suit aur bikini design karnaa chaahtaa hai……😆…

All three: SSSSAAAAMMMEEERRRRR 😡

An: aisa nahi hai….maine underwear bhi design kie hain……aur U know…….I hav designed gowns for the Hollywood actresses……..haan wo alag baat hai ki aajtak koi bhi select nahi hua hai…….but…..(gets excited)…but…kabhi na kabhi mere design kie clothes zarur select honge……..ye angad khanna ka tum sabse waadaa hai…. 😆

S: Thandh rakh!!!!!! 😆

B:shut up sameer !!😡 haan to Angad tu kya keh raahaa tha…
An: main……………..(makes a face)………BHOOL GAYAA!!! 😆

All three burst into laughter…….ufffffffff ye bhi naa ….kitnaa haste hain 😡


Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

so here's the next part....I know u guys will feel bad for anvesha...........but dont worry her dream man has already entered into her life & yes please dont think she is some sort of jassi & all ........she is pretty but not confident bout herself 😛.........please do comment.......waiting eagerly........ 😛

Luv,

Akanksha😛

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
Daebak thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 luvd the part yaar.............poor anvesha,im feeling bad 4 her though........

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
good very good
👏
very soon u will get the video mix of ur story.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks.....a lot yaar.........jyoti , anu & vandu....Luv u guys 😛
Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Omg omg.tooooo good and amazing.though feeling bad 4r anvisha but i know u ll bring them together so i am relieved.yaar its too interesting, pl continue.waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hiiiii really a gud one yar..luvd it..plz do update sooooon 👏 👏

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