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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 Very nice part dear............waitingt eagerly 4 the next part........anvesha kahan hai bhai.....usse bhi dikhao 😆 ........kya dhachian udayi hai upen n bobby ki.......hahaha😆😆😆......i luvd it😆

luv,
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Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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splendid part budyy m to luving ur stry..post nxt prt sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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B: hey !! stop joking………….kahaan jaa rahe ho.

An: yaar soch rahaa tha ki Banglore ……..ghum lun………..u know it's a beautiful city…….. 😉

B: as in……….. 😕

S: as in………..hum bar jaa rahe hain…….tumne to masti ki……. Ab hum karenge………

B: very good……..per do u wanna go in some sadeli bar
Saare top class bar to 8 baje se pehle nahi khulte 😊

Av: & yes gals bhi raat ko hi aati hain………😉

An: to ab hum kya Karen………. 😕
B: lets go to mall………I hav to buy some stuff…….time bhi pass ho jayegaa & 8 baje….u two…will go to the bar…..I'll tell u which one is the best over here….
S: so done…..lets go……… 😳

They sat into the car & the car zoomed off…….

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Aap sab ki tarah…..me too missing Anvesha……..it'll be nice naa when both Anvesha & sameer come to the same mall…..so this is done too……..actually it was Sunday &
Anvesha's dad Lalit thought…..why not take his daughter to some mall……..so that there may be a change in her monotonous…..& boring routined life……..lets see what happens next…..


Now let me make u aware of what she was wearing….she was wearing a baggy black coloured top & blue jeans….
(remember aamna wearing this while practicing AAO NAA with Rajeev) …..with absolutely no MAKE-UP…
I think gals look best without make up….her hair open
& thank god she wasn't wearing her Idiotic…….U know what……….
Sameer was wearing a green coloured tight fitting tee…..& blue jeans…….& looking absolutely yummy….

In the mall everybody was busy shopping but this SAMEER looking just here & there…….suddenly he saw 2 masked men with Guns……..he looked in the direction of the gun………to his horrors vidya was standing there….😭
Oh god………he was just at a distance 10 steps…he looked at the gun again……..its direction was changed…. 😕
Actually it was pointed at the gal behind Vidya……..& she moved on talking with someone on the mobile in Sameer's direction & was just 3 or 4 steps ahead of sameer……..he suddenly dragged her …..&……..& the gun was fired…….sameer was saved by just an inch…….they hid behind a pillar……..it was broad…….but in doing all this Sameer hurt his wound………oh…….he closed his eyes…….no guesses that girl was his MISS KYUN……. 😭
People in the mall started running hither & thither…….


Suddenly one of the man fired gun in air & announced…

"no one will move unless I'll shoot, where the hell r u Anvesha…come out unless I'll take some innocent lives"

"no……..I'm coming"……..cried Anvesha
sameer looked at her with wide open eyes …..but let her go…..


The man pointed gun at anvesha……..as if ready to shoot her……….but……….


"Drop the gun down……..u……..unless I'll kill ur friend………..drop it now" shouted Sameer with a gun pointed on the head of one of the masked men to the other one👏

"no don't………………shoot him…"said the masked man 😡
"that way u'll end up killing ur friend…….so drop it ……..wait…..throw it to her…"he said pointing at anvesha……… 😳


"fast"………suddenly the criminal guessed that sameer has not got firm hold on the gun……..so he suddenly turned & pushed Sameer……..& pointed his gun in Sameer's stomach…..sameer turned almost pale...but somehow he too managed to point his gun in the criminal's belly……..


"if u'll try to shoot I'll shoot u too"said the criminal to sameer…….. guys jus think...Sameer was there who was saving Anvesha...but now he himself was in control of the masked man...if he cud try to do anything.....the goon may shoot him....but u know.....there is a say inHINDI....

"jaako raakhe saainyaa...maar sake naa koi"

tabtak...the other idiotic criminal...had thrown the gun towards ANVESHA....instantly as she got the gun
……..anvesha shot the security alarm …..& it began screeching sound….the criminal looked away to see what happened………Sameer, intelligent guy….snatched the criminal's gun too & then………👏

"it'll be fun killing u with these two"………sameer pointed both the guns in his stomach..
"there's no need……..we r here to look after them" 😳
said the mall's security head…..
after sometimes…everything was ok……..sameer was going out ……..ki tabhi…….
Anv: thanks…. 😳
S: so u know to say thanks too…………..waise what's ur name 😉
Anv : (smiled) anvesha…….oh its bleeding(she saw his arm) 😭
S: it will be alright. 😛


Tabhi a gal & a guy were coming……

.
Gal: see…….boyfriend ho to aisa……. 😆


Anvesha heard this….she was irritated…….. 😡


Anv : hey listen …..he is not my boyfrend……see 😡


Gal: (instantly) then go ahead & make him ur boyfriend…..I don't think there will be a better choice for u…. 😆


Anvesha was awestruck……..she turned towards Sameer……..he was smiling…..


Anv: why the hell r u smiling…….. 😡


S: see……..maam I don't think I need ur permission for smiling……..isn't it…😆


Then we see lalit coming with Sameer's friends…….


L: It'll be a pleasure …..if u guys come to hav a coffee at my place…..


Anvesha didn't say anything ……..but…sameer & company raazi ho gae….bhoomi send her car through Vidya as she didn't want to come……..& they all came in Anvesha's car which she herself was driving……..

In the car……..

S: (to anvesha) so u know how to shoot..??????????? 👏
Anv: who me…….ya for self protection…..& yes if u can…….why cant I 😡

S: (instantly) I cant……… 😆
Anv: what????????????????????? 😕

S: yeah!! I mean ......I don't know how to shoot 😆
Anv: then what the hell were u doing with that LICENSED GUN………😡
S: It wasn't a licensed gun………just a toy…….. 😆😆😆

All of them besides Anvesha started laughing loudly

S: (still laughing) U thought I'm a criminal or something…. 😆

L: I really thought so……..whats ur name…….. 😛


S: sameer malhotra…….I came for the interview in ur company…….😳
L: oh…..so ur sameer…..its so nice to meet u……….but I think I hav seen U somewhere……..anyways ur so popular in U.S…..I think I saw u there only……..

They reached Anvesha's bungalow ………then came anvesha's family doc. …..to change sameer's bandage….after sometimes it was done………then begun the chatting with coffee…….& ya Anvesha wasn't involved……… 😆

S: who wants to kill u?????????
Anv: that's none of ur business…….. 😡
L: U cud hav said it politely too…….say sorry…….
Anv: (shouted) sorry….. 😡
Angad: listen……..aap kisi ko sorry bol rahi hain ……uske sar pe joota nahi maar rahin……..thode pyaar se…😆
Anv: sorry……… 😡

Sameer was enjoying every bit of it…….but it was 8:30 ..
So angad hit sameer slowly on his back & showed the time………

S: oh uncle…….we hav a very imp. work to do……..if u don't mind may we leave now……..(really imp) 😆😆😆

So they left…….anvesha was on the staircase….just moving towards her room…….

L: this guy is really intelligent……..how much u gave him in the interview……. 😕

Anv: 0 out of 10……….huh!! that oversmart crook….😡

Lalit was shocked………

"but he is really an amazing guy"mumbled anvesha 😆😆

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
hope u like it..... 😛

luv,
akanksha


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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

👏 awesome part dear........i was really missing anvesha 😆

luv,

vandu😉

Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
gr8 part 👏 now i think she'll give him the job 😉 😛 cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
hai.i am sullu.today i read this first pg n really found this story very interesting amazing.and i love the jodi of rajeev aamna so much.this story on them goes perfectly mind blowing.good a very interesting character of sameer(rajeev) and other characters r too good that enjoyed reading all the parts.gr88 going.pl continue waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
hey aaki..that was completely awesome...great going.. me liking your writing very damn much...keep up the good work going.. 👏 please do post the next part soon..will be waiting.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
lovely parts.. 👏 ..jus doing gr8.. 😃 ..sameer n angad r jus 2 good... 😉 ....do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aaaki where r u?i am waiting 4r the next part v eagerly and did u get my pm?reply soon.cant wait dear.pl continue soon.
luv sullu.

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