Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow ayesha .hope the real lrl continued like this
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ayesha 😛


i too really hope that the actual LRL has somewhat the same story. 😃

that we will come to know very soon...... 😳

well again well written part 😳


continue with the next soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thats soooo swet ayesha.. really nice.. do continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ayesha lovely ff..really I wish when LRL starts again..goes like this...awesome thought 👏.Pls do post the next part soon...I am waiting for that 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ayesha itz awesome plzzzzzzz continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx Yogi, Yojana, Sneha and diya!

PART 3

Suddenly someone snapped his fingers between their faces. Both of them jumped, starteled and turned to look at the person. it was Huda who looked extremely bemused and aalekh was standing a few steps behind him.
Huda- sorry sir. magar hum ne do baar kaha cadtes aalekh and huda reporting magar aap ne nahin suna.
Raj- Its okay cadets, plz have a seat
Huda sat between naina and raj and aalekh sat next to raj. They were silent for about 5 minuites. Then raj broke the silence
Raj- To huda, aalekh tum dono kahan rehe gaye the?
Huda- jaise aap ne kaha mein Dr. Ritu ke paas gaya tha. Magar wahan us pagal aurat ne mujhe zanjeer se band diya. Jab mein ne bahut shor kiys to ek orderly wahan darwaze ko tod kar aaya. Phir unhone kisi bhi tarah chudaya. Then I was running to get here when I found aalekh half asleep. Bahut mushkil se use laaya hoon.
Raj- kyun aalekh? Kya ho gaya?
Aalekh- Pata nahin sir….. peheli baar aisa ho raha hai. Zaroor aapki daaroo mein kuch mila hoga.
Raj- meri daaroo?
Aalekh- wohich daaroo jo aapne apun ko vheja tha.
Raj- mein ne tumhe koi daaroo nahin bheja tha, cadet
They are all very shocked at this but raj and naina know that Ritu was behind this.
Suddenly they here a sound of people marching towards them.
"Cadets Ali Baig, Pooja Ghai and Yadhuvansh Sawhaney reporting sir"
raj- You are early cadets!
Pooja- sorry sir. Who mujhe SMS mila tha ki Rohit mujhse milna chaahata tha. Is liye Ali aur mein uska incoming receive karne gaye the. Magar who to blank call nikla. That's y we r here.
Yudi- And I realized that my heart lies in the army sir, and I wont be able to live any where else. That's why I headed back to the academy, left my stuff there and came here. Raaste mein yeh do mujhe mile.
Raj- very good. Now that all of us are here let me tell you of our mission. You see that hill there? It looks like a small normal hill but is not so. It is extremely dangerous. Wild animals, unexpected pits, quick sand, week bridges over deep lakes, extremely rocky terrain…. You name it, its there. It si a perfect place to keep things requiring tight security. This (points to a small box) is what we will betaking up. Any question? No? good. Come, let go.
They start climbing up. Aalekh and yudi take up the front, pooja-ail behind them, raj naina behind them and huda bringing up the rear looking at raj-naina with suspicion. He still remembered wat he had seen. Suddenly naina tripped but fell right into Raj's arms. And it happened again- the same sensation- blushing, drowning into each others eyes………. Oh God……. What was happening to them? They could hardly breathe…. Completely un aware of their surroundings…. They felt like running away but experienced a complete incapability of moving their legs…..they just could not take their eyes off each other….. naina felt so comfortable in his arms….. Oh God…….

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god yaar u rock. plesase continue.i am dying to read it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ayesha its superb.you have a good way of expressing emotions
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEyyyy jus read all os it.... its amazin... readin ur ff is makin me blush like anytin 😳 !!!! Im soooo glad naina chose raj over ritu, n their misunderstanding cleared out!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.

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