badalte rishte-sk - Page 2

fanx for ur lovely comments yaar...i promise i will write a biggggggg prt next time 😃

hey maira... part bohat hii achcha tha... tho sujal , kashish have met.. well chalo achchi shuruwaat hui.. me very glad.... aur the part was really very nice.. sujal becoming kashish ka savior... very good.... 👏
please do post the next part soon..will be waiting for it.... 😃

fanx for ur comments here is the next prt

part 3
As sujal and kashish entered they saw veena sittin there n havin coffee.
Veena-arye sujal tu agaya (stupied question na well...) 😆 😆 😆 or yeh kun...
Sujal-mama yeh kashish ji hain, turns to kashish 'or kashish yeh meri mama.'
Kashish-namaste aunty.
Veena-namaste beta
After taruf and all that sujal explained his mom that she came here for some work but the person supposed to pick kashish as she doesn't live in Mumbai, couldn't come and she is tryin to call him from ages but he is not pickin up so she might stay here untill 2moro. Veena agrees to that.
Veena-kashish tum chaye ya coffee kuch lo gi. Kashish was really sad so she could only say
Kashish-aunty kuch bhi nahi. Sujal left to change his clothes as sujal left veena felt strange because of kashish's behaviour. She was very uncomfortable so veena asked
Veena –kashish ek baat poochu mind maat karna...tum kafi udaas lag rahi ho. Koi prob hai tum comfortable nahi ho?
Kashish-nahi aunty...aisi koi baat nahi hai...she stops for some tym and finks a while...kia karoon bata doon (to herself) woh aunty main...kia...woh
Veena –mujhe apni maa samajh ke bolo
Kashish gets emotional to hear maa because she is Orphan and lives in a orphanage with his brother so she replies...
Kashish-aunty main yahan kaam se nahi balke delhi chor ke ayi hoon. Sab kuch yahan tak ke apna bhai bhi waise main usko le ati baad main jab sab settle ho jata per ab kya hoga main jispe yakeen karke ayi woh to aya hi nahi...main wahan delhi main ek ladke se chaat karti thi or humye pyar ho gaya. Humara pyar gehra hotye gaya...main yahan settle honye ayi thi or phir apnye bhai ko bhi le ati per ab main kia karoon kia wapis chali jaon...
There was complete silence but than veena speaks up...
Veena-ho sakta hai ke ussye koi kaam agaya ho or woh nahi asaka...ya koi emergency bhi to...ho sakta hai woh kal tak contact karle....
Kashish's face brightens up and she turns her face around and finds sujal there. There was complete silence but speaks veena
Veena-main chaye lati hoon. She left
Sujal was just starin at kashish and than smiles...
Sujal-I think mama is right. Woh zaroor contact karye ga. Acha tum fresh ho jao wahan upper right main ek karma hai tum wahan reh sakti ho...go and get fresh. He walks away. Sujal goes to his room and pick his wife picture (suggest who should I choose for sujal's wife...it will be janta's choice...see how nice im 😆 😉 )
Sujal with wet eyes-aaj kashish ka pyar dekh kar mujhe bohot akela pan mehsus ho raha hai...tumhe gaye hue 5 saal ho gaye per tum aaj bhi yahin basi ho...tum kyun chali gayi...i love u very much...and keeps his head down kashish heard all because she went to thanks sujal for what he done as without him she would have been in big trouble but gets really sad for sujal. Kashish went in to console him.
Kashish-sujal, he turns around, kuch mat kehna maine sab sun liya ...main yehi kahun gi dukhi mat ho tumhe bhi koi zaroor milye ga or tum ro ge to ussye bohot bura lagye ga. She takes him near window, "woh dekhu tara woh wahan se tumhe dekh rahi hai or dukhi ho jaye gi tumhe aese dekh ke so smile" he smiles, "thats like a good boy (he's not a boy) friends" she asked gives him her hand sujal thinks for a while and eccept her friendship. End!!!

kaisa laga prt??? reply was it big or not do comment 😃 😳

great part waitng for the next part

i expected more comment but...still post the next part 😭

part 4
It was the next morning. The sun was shining, birds were singing, wind was blowing. We saw kashish coming out of her room. She was dressed up really nicely because she was going to look for her boyfriend. She was really happy. Sujal was also set to leave for hospital.
Sujal-kashish chalo main tumhe chord ata hoon station tak
Kashish-thanks
They had breakfast and left 4 their work. In da car Sujal said
"mujhe call karke bata dena kia hoa or agar prob ho to pick karne bula lena." Sujal smiles as kashish.
Kashish-i hope ke mujhe woh aaj mil jaye or haan bohot bohot shukria itna kuch kia main kaise yeh ehsaan utaroon gi.
Sujal-doston main ehsaan jaisa kuch nahi hota. Dosti tumne start to ki hia per isye nibhaon ga main. Acha yeh to batao ke uska naam kia hai.
Kashish-uska naam piyush hai (well I asked to choose someone but no one helped so I decided myself).
Sujal-hmmm nice name. Just than sujal put a lovely song
Tanhaiya mehfil bani
tum jo mile manzil mili
aaisa deewana hua hai yeh dil aapke pyaar main

Tanhaiya mehfil bani
tum jo mile manzil mili
aaisa deewana hua hai yeh dil aapke pyaar main


Mohabbat hi mohabbat hai
Mere rubru
tamanna main, nigahon main
hai bas tu hi tu
becahainee main aahe bhare
rab se tujhhe manga kare
aaisa deewana hua hai yeh dil aapke pyaar main
Na subaho ki khabar hai sanam
na sham ka pata
khayalo main hai chaya hua
tumhara nasha
Oh deewangi Hai iss Kadar
Mujhko nahi apni khabar
aaisa deewana hua hai yeh dil aapke pyaar main
Tanhaiya mehfil bani
tum jo mile manzil mili
aaisa deewana hua hai yeh dil aapke pyaar main
Sujal-Lo station bhi agaya. Bye kashish!
Kashish stepped out ov car n started to walk but turned back n smiled sweetly to sujal n said bye. Sujal was feeling bad because he doesn't want kashish to leave, he doesn't know himself why was he feeling that way. While thinking all that he reached hospital. He went to his cabin where he found rishi
Rishi-yaar tu itni der se aya hai. How come? Sujal tells him everything happened yesterday.
Rishi-tu usye apne ghar le gaya. Tu pagal tu nahi hai?
Sujal- or main kia karta. Well she's nice gal.
Rishi-hmmm shuru shuru mian yesa hi hota hai and than...
Sujal-rishi tu pagal hai. Its nofin like that....
Rishi-ya ya...acha sun aaj ek patient aya hai...well uska kal accident ho gaya hai and woh coma main chala gaya hai. Uske family or uska kuch nahi pata chala hai.
Sujal- yaar log kyun carefully gari nahi chalatye. Ab koi agar family main hoga to kitna pareshan hoga. Kaise contact kare. Koi driving licence nahi mila...
Rishi-i think woh motor cycle main tha n wahan se kuch nnahi mila...well main police se baat karke malum karta hoon.
Sujal-main bhi us patient ko check kar leta hoon...
Rishi-ok...acha sun mujhe aaj jaldi jana hai
Sujal phir se?
rishi- haan woh charu ne cinema ki ticket book karwa li hai...(charu is his fianc)
Sujal-whatever...ok chalye jana...
Rishi_thank you
Sujal-hmmm. Both leave. After half an hour rishi enters in sujal cabin.
Rishi-yaar woh police waloon ne bike ke number se us insaan ka naam address wagera pata laga liya hai...
Sujal-hmmm
Rishi-tu khush nahi hai
Sujal-kia kaha tu ne
Rishi-sujal what are u upto....tu khuya wa hai....whats the matter?
Sujal-pata nahi subha se kuch kaam karne ka maan anhi hai bas dil kar raha hai betha rahoon kuch na karoon...
Rishi-or jabse tunye kashish ke chura hai tab se hu raha ahi
Sujal-shayad haan...what ji nahi aesa kuch bhi nahi hai...woh to aese hi.
Rishi-hum love guru hain hum se koi baat chupti nahi. u r in love beta...
Sujal-ya as if...well tujse argue karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. Main ja ke us patient ko phir se karloon
Rishi-ok than. Sujal was really unhappy that kashish will not come back now.
Sujal-yeh mujhe kia ho raha hai...kashish hi bar bar kyun dikh rahi hai...just then he saw kashish standing there. Sujal walks towards kashish. He was really happy...
Sujal-kashish tum yahan ....kaise i mean kyun? Oh god
'sir sir sir!!! Yeh kashish kon hai main to nurse hoon (hahaha) 😆 😆 😆
Sujal backs off...I 'm sorry...nurse leaves
Sujal-im gone mad...all day sujal was thinking about kashish n rishi was teasing him...rishi left before 4 n it was time for sujal to leave he was thinking whether to check for kashish in train station? He decides that he will. By time he gets in the train station it was already 7.00 and it was dark. So sujal looked for kashish but she was not there
Sujal-i think uska boyfriend agaya or woh chalye gaye...good...well yh. Sujal was about to leave when he heard 'bachao bachao' it was kashish voice. He runs where the voice was coming from... he saw some boys were around a gal. He walks forward and saw that it was kashish. He runs and pushed the boys. It was boy who tried to misbehave wiv kashish that day.
Sujal-kahshish u ok...he walks towards those boys and bashed them. It was a big fight than those boys escaped....kashish was cyrin like hell
Sujal-kashish don't worry chalo...sujal wraps his coat around kashish n takes her to his car...the end!
it was really big na...ab zyada comments do!!!!!!!!!

awesome story.......continue soon.......can't wait for more 😆

hey maira i was visiting FF section after so many days just saw ur name so thought to check it ur story sound too cool keep it up whenever i will visit ff i will check ur story 👏 tc luv u

yaar sur i will uptade the next prt for u n le_me_star for u 2....but not now 😆 😆 😆....tomorow i promise

They reach home and knock on the door...veena opens the door and shocked to see kashish like that
Veena-yeh sabki....before veena could finish kashish runs towards her room (wah kia haq hai...) 'sujal isye kiya hua...
Sujal- mama woh...suajl tells her everything...
Veena-oh god...woh bechari subha se uska wait kar r ahi thi...veena walks towards kashish room. Veena knocked on the door. Kashish opened the door. She was cryin like hell...
Veena- beta yeh ansoon us ke liye jis ne tumhe takleef ke ilawa kuch nahi diya...i think usye bhula ke tumhe apni zindagi main agaye badna chaye
Kashish-per aunty usko itni asani kaise bhula doon....usney mujhe sapne dikhaye....mujhse wadye kiye or ab...
Veena-haan to vadye kiye to nibhaye to nahi na...y don't u understand that he cheated on u...well main tumhe samjha hi sakti hoon or main kar bhi kiya sakti hoon....veena turns around to leave but finds sujal standing there. Veena and sujal walks out ov the room togeva...
Sujal- mama app ne kashish se yesa kyun kaha ke woh cheater hai ...iskye ilawa yeh bhi to keh sakti thi ke woh kisi musibat main hoga...
Veena-jo sach tha maine keh dia beside to bhi yehi sunna chata tha....tu pyar karta hai na usye
Sujal-what???? Ji nahi...
Veena-jab tu mujhe abhi kashish ke saath jo hua bata raha tha to mujhe teri ankhoon main uske liye dard dikha jo ke pyar karne waloon ke ankhoon mian hota hai...or waise bhi rishi ne mujhe sab bata diya hai...
Sujal-yeh rishi bhi na!!!!!!!!dekhein mama chorye!!!he leaves...
It was Sunday next morning sujal went to kashish room. She was standin next to window. She was absolutely lost. Sujal walks towards kashish and put his hand on her shoulder.
Sujal-kashish main yeh nahi kehne aya hoon ke usnye dhoka diya ya yesa kuch balke mian yeh kehne aya hoon ke tum yahin reh kar apne per pe khari ho or phir jab kuch ho jaye to apnye bhai ke yahan bula lo.
Kashish-yehi kaam to main delhi man reh kar bhi kar sakti hoon
Sujal-woh isliye kyunke wahan per koi tumhe help nahi kar sakta or phir wahan per sab yaadein jori hain yeh baat practical to nahi per kuch kuch sense banati hai. Meri baat mano to yahin reh jao ya chaho to apne bhai ko bnhi yahin reh jao...
Kashish-nahi main or boj nahi bana chahti ...tum sahi keh rahe ho mian yahan hi rehoon gi or jab kuch bana loon gi to apne bhai ko yahan bula loon gi...
Sujal- jaisa tum chaho,...acha ek baat kehni thi mere dost ki aaj ek party pe jana hai tum chalo gi...plz no maat kehna ...ao gi to acha lagye ga...
Kashish-theek main ayo gi...kashish smiles, sujal smiles back and leaves.
It was evening everyone was set to leave when kashish came out of her room totally dressed up...sujal dekhta reh gaya...she was lookin very nice...sujal thinks
MERE HOOTON PE TARE NAGME SACHTYE HAIN
AAJ JANA KE SAPNE KAISE SAACH HOTYE HAIN
TUM MAIN AESI KASHISH HAI JO MUJHE KHICH LAYE
BAN KE SAYA HAMARI ZINDAGI MAIN TUM AYE
MAIN BHI AB MAIN NA RAHO
TUM BHI AB TUM NA RAHO
MAIN DIA TU HAI BATI
THORDA SA PYAR HUA
THORDA HAI BAKI...the end!!!!

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