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hi guys i wanna start and fanfic for sujal and kashish...most ov u dont know me as i used to write a fanfic roughly one n a half yr ago but i do feel that some old members know me...so here it goes...but keep that in mind that its not my story i stole it from somewhere (not gonna tell u from where) 😆 😆 😆

Veena Garewal-a widow who has only one son called Sujal.

Sujal Garewal-a doctor age about 30, lives in Mumbai wiv his mother veena. He was married but her wife is dead(its not kashish).

Kashish Sinha-she lives in delhi and works in a big company. She only has a brother and they are settled in delhi. She is 27 old.

Part 1

We saw a girl dressed in dark blue patiala salwar kameez, borders were embroided in red. She was lightly made up and had chocolate brown, curled hair. She was wearin big earins to go wiv her clothes and she had a small suitcase which she was carrin. As she gets out ov the train in mumbai station we saw the station crowded wiv all types ov people. Some of them were there to see off people, some were excited to go on a holiday but she looked much tensed. It looked as if she was waitin for someone but when she found no one there and her hopes gets low she started to walk out ov station. On the other hand we saw a boy standing in hospital's corridor with his friend. He was wearing a collar black t-shirt followed by Armani jeans he had a coat on top and has gelled his hair.

Rishi (his friend)-yaar sujal tu shaadi kyun nahi kar leta...tu kab tak bhabhi ke yaadon ke saharye jiye ga.

Sujal-rishi tum jab dekhu yeh baat leke beth jatye ho...abhi to no shaadi.

kya woh larki hi sujal ki zindagi main aye gi jisye hum shuru main miye...keep on readin to find out how their destinies get togeva to make this beautiful bond

aaj ke liye itna hi...i will cont if i get nice replies...so lookin forward for ur sweet comments

hey marium....it's so good that you have started a new fanfic.... and the first part of the fic was very interesting..very nice.. i liked it... keep up the good work going.... 👏
please do post the next part soon..will be waiting for it... 😃

great beginning pls cont soon. will b waiting for a big part.

sun and gulu fanx for ur lovely comments...and i might continue the other fanfic when i'll finish wiv this... 😃

[Quote=sun_423]hey marium....it's so good that you have started a new fanfic.... and the first part of the fic was very interesting..very nice.. i liked it... keep up the good work going.... &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;
please do post the next part soon..will be waiting for it... & nbsp; & nbsp;



yaar itne sarye emoticons...main to emotional hi ho gayi 😆 😆 😆

only two ppl replied 😭...kk i will write the second part and if i get a lot nice comments i will cont n if not than i wont bover 😭

marium if i'am not wrong ur maria right ??? and yaar please call me surya....not sun... will be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

yes yaar im maira...mujhe tumhara naam nahi yaad tha but tum to great ho...u remembered my name...so the gift for u is...

After his work finished Sujal gets in his car and drives towards his home. Let see what is that girl upto. She walked out ov the station finkin 'how could he do that...woh aesa nahi kar sakta uspe maine bharosa kiya or woh...', while thinkin all this she didn't realise how far she walked. She came to very lonely place where she found some badmash guys there...the first one said,
'kia kamal ki cheez hai' 😡 (as she looked pretty)
The second one-excuse me madam app ko lift chaye?
The Girl-no thank i'll manage. She sarted to walk fast but the boys followed her. She was very scared. The badmash boys stand front ov her and they started to touch her. They were forcing as the girl shout for help. A car went by stopped on the corner. The man walked towards that girl to help (its none other than sujal)...those boys left her and walked away. Sujal came to the gal and asked her if she's alright.
Sujal-aap theek hain', she kept on cryin, 'dekhein app chup ho jaye...chalye main appko ghar chord deta hoon. App ka naam kia hai.
'kashish' she replied.
'Ok kashish aap kahan rehti hain...i'll drop u home' sujal said. Kashish was clueless as how to answer him.
Kashish-main delhi main rehti hoon or kisi kam se yahan ayi hoon per jisye mujhe milna tha woh to aya hi nahi.
Sujal-oho ho sakta hai woh late ho gaye ho so would like to wait for him?
Kashish-woh late nahi ho sakta. Hamye subha milna tha or ab sham ho gayi hai so...
Sujal-i see. Ok kashish app mere saath chalye hum unko dhundh ley gain and don't worry main akele nahi apni mama ke saath rehta hoon so u could stay wiv us for some time. Kashish was confussed as what should she do? Will be good to trust a stranger but there was no other way left so she sat in the car and sujal drove towards his house. End!!!

i'll cont later or s baar mujhe bohot sarye comments chaye... 😊

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Good and interestting start Maira... do post the next one soon.. and make it much more longer rather than the short ones.. tcz and best of luck! 😊 😊

fanx for ur lovely comments yaar...i promise i will write a biggggggg prt next time 😃