Dil Kya Kare(AK) Part 43@ Pg-119 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome! wonder wat Angad's gonna do to revenge now 😉 ??? 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Great ff....just read it.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap- angad have an argument with his frnz on love. at sharma's farm house kripa pour a bucket full of colored water on angad. angad is angry but by the time kanan calls kripa and she goes
Angad thinking-so she is kripa


Part-5
k-hi di 😊 🤗
kan-tu to ek hafte baad ane wali thi to phir...
k- how boring 😕ab tak nahi samjhi ke maine suprise diya hai
n-kitni khoobsurat ho gayi hai
di- tu to hum sab ko bhool hi gayi thi
dadi-kaisi hai tu
kripa goes to dadi and bends to touch her feet but dadi hugs and kiss her on forehead
dadi- teri jagah is dil mein hai,kadmon mein nahi.par main dilip ki bat se agree karti hoon.
angad was all jealous that his dadi was greeting her with so affection and remembers what he said to her yesterday about kripa.his heart was aching he feels dadi's love for him is being shared ang lessened.
k-i m sorry but study is important
n-itni bhi kya important ki apni behan ki marrige bhi attend nahi ki
k-aap hote kaun hai mujhse ye poochne wale(remember kripa has not met nishant and she did not recognise him)
n-aapki bahen ka pati
k- oh no! to phir woh kaun hai?(says pointing towards angad who is trying to figure out what is happening)
all turn to angad and by seeing his condition can't resist laughing
all including family and frnz- 😆
angad is standing there like stupids.he is full of anger 😡 and wants to kill everybody who is standing there and laughing.
n-omg kripa tmne woh kar jo aaj tak koi nahi kar paya
a- 😡 😡
aaliya comes and hugs kripa. she introduced angad and kripa.angad says hai controlling his temper and kripa by resisting her laugh .j,k,l,m,kt,an,aa are enjoying the scene where as elders has gone inside gigling and making sure everythig is fine. before they can futher talk angad sneezes.kripa knew water was cold and becos of that angad has caught cold.she fees guilty
k- im sorry woh ye sab maine jiju ke liye plan kiya tha but aap...
everbody was afraid what angad will do.josh was praying that everything should go okay

a-(like a perfect gentleman and an assuring smile on his face)aap nahi tun afterall we r of same age (pointing towards his condition)its okay ho jata hai kabhi kabhi.aap ne intentionly mera ye haal karne ka koi irada nahi tha

by saying this angad leaves.everybody is left shocked and confused.they knew very well something was fishy.angad went so quietly,they were not able to digest the fact.kripa was confused that why all are confused.there was completesilent.kripa finally broke that
k- ahem ahem aaliya introduce me ya vo bhi mujhe hi karna padega
aaliya introduced every member of her group to kripa . kripa told everyone that she has taken admission in thier collage.angad hears this while going to a room upstairs and grins 😈.it took no time for kripa to b one of them.holi went all good.angad was all calm that suprised everyone.josh and nishant noticied something was fishy and there is something really dangereous going on in angad's mind.it was like the immense peace before every thunder


AT NIGHT IN ANGAD'S ROOM
a-(fuul of anger)samajhti kya hai voh kripa apne aap ko .(mimicks)i m sorry....(angry)sorry my foot.aaj to main papa ki wajah se chup tha warna bata deta ki angad khanna kya cheez hai .use to maim kal collage main dekh loonga afterall she is a fresher...




i now this is kind of boring but promise next part will be better.keep guessing what angad will do.and plz plz plz plz reply there were so less replies i think u don't like it 😭 😭

shall i continue 😭 😭 😭


AS EVER 😉
amneet89 😳
Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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a-(angry)kripa tumhe bas ye special drink peena hai 😡
k- tumhaare jaisi dual personality maine apni poori zindagi kabhi nahin dekhi angad 😡 😡

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
nice ff i read it today and it was awsum lukin frwd for nxt part specially angads revenge on her and how he vil tak her ragging.great wrk and continue soon i mean when u get time 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeya123

nice ff i read it today and it was awsum lukin frwd for nxt part specially angads revenge on her and how he vil tak her ragging.great wrk and continue soon i mean when u get time 👏

thanx i will b posting soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap- kripa gives everybody a suprise.aaliya introduced kripa to her group they all become good frnz.angad was quiet and clam on kripa's deed which suprised everyone.in his bedroomangad sayshe will see kripa in collage
a-(full of anger)samajhti kya hai voh kripa apne aap ko .(mimicks)i m sorry....(angry)sorry my foot.aaj to main papa ki wajah se chup tha warna bata deta ki angad khanna kya cheez hai .use to maim kal collage main dekh loonga afterall she is a fresher...


PART-6

NEXT MORNING
Angad's bedroom- angad is sleeping like a baby 😳.he is some where on bed and his blanket is some where else.the cushions are on floor except one which he is hugging.there is a cute smile on his face 😊as if he is dreaming somethinfg really good.suddenly there is a splash of icy cold water on his face .angad wakes up suddenly 😕.as he take hold of himself sees nishant,kannan and aaliya laughing at top of their lungs.
a(half in sleep)-kya hua😡aur ye bhi koi tareeka hai kisi ko uthaane ka
n,k,aa- 😆 😆 😆
dadi enters
dadi-achaa ab mere chote aur sabse pyaare pote ko koi nahi satayega
a- 😊
angad is very happy.he feels his share of love is still his and is not shared he is happy to see his family still plyaing jokes with him otherwise kripa has...dadi snaps in front of angad's face to bring him back.
aa-(to angad)bhai aaj main aapko aaisi news doongi ke aap khushi se pagal ho jayange(looks at kannan)
kannan smiles and is blushing nishant is happy than ever.dadi is also smiling.angad is still in sleep and is trying to figure out the reason for eveybody's expression.
a(sleepy)-koi is suspense ko khatam karega plz
dilip and naina enters
d-bhaut jald is ghar mein ek nanha sa mehmaan ane wala hai
suddenly angad gets up from is bed and goes to naina
a-mom subah subah aap log mere saath kbc3 kyun khel rahe ho.vaise hi dimaag ka dahi hua pada hai.
all give angad a ur hopeless look
aa-main bua aur aap chacha banne wale hain
a-(casually)to is koun si badi baat hai...
suddenlly he realises what aaliya said and jumps .
a-main chacha...main chacha banne wala hoon (to kannan hoding her and nishant tight)oooooh bhabhi u r great ab main is ghar ko toy house mainbadal dooga.this is really great can't have words to explain(to nishaant)aaj se bhabi ki double care karni padegi. [:D/]

everybody knows how much angad loves kids.angad was on cloud nine.he thot how perfect way his day has started.
AT BREAKFAST
ANGAD was much more excited till he hears dadi talking about kripa with naina and kannan .aaliya has gone by now.she left early becos she had basketball. angad thot kripa i see u in collage.and gives a mean smile which ofcourse nobody else sees

AT COLLAGE
unlike other days angad was on time.everybody has got the news and was congratulating him josh told angad that today they have planned a suprise party for nishant bhaiya and kannan bhabhi.angad agrees with them and confirmed that he will help them after finishing an important work.he goes to canteen and says something in the ears of owner.angad knew kripa was going to be late as he heard dadi in morning that kripa is notr attengding first 2 lectures as she is busy in unpacking and setteling down
a(thinking)- settle to tumhe main karooga kripa

AFTER TWO LECTURES
all sitting in canteen except angadkripa comes and says hai to everyone.aaliya goes and hugs kripa
aa-(giggling) hai would be massi.how r u
k-(in same tune)awsome would be bua
m- welcome to our collage
sudeenly a deep and husky voice interrupts
voice-no not yet
all r suprised and turn around.this is angad.all r confused and looking at angad, trying to figure out what he is upto
a- 😎 😈 no u r not at all welcome.after all u e a fresher and as per the rule u have to do what the old students says u to do(looking at josh lakshya.kaavya and josh)what say guys
ka- yeah u r right
l-yaar hum ye kaise bhool gaye
j-angad tunm aisa kuch nahi karoge
kripa is standing confused.she is wondering what is this all going on.angad noticies that
a-kripa confuse mat ho
kaavya interrupts
ka-(wondering)lekin hum kripa se karvange kya
l-i m sure angad ne kuch na kuch to soch ke rakha hoga
angad goes to kripa.they are in front of eachother.all are beside them.angad sees in those beautiful eyes who are looking at him confused.he just wanted to be in those eyes forever.he keeops on staring at her.all looking forward to see what angad will do next but angad does not care,he has seen many girls but have never come across to agirl who has such innocent eyes.he was lost in them.her confised face made him to think twice what he was about to do.but all of sudeen he remembers holi incident and he is back to reality
a-tumne bas ek special drink peena hoga
k-kaisa drink 😕
by the time the waiter comes there with a glass of thick yellow color liquid in it.josh figures out and is about to say something when angad stops himby noddong his head left to right.his eyes are full of anger
a-(full of attitude)angad khanna ko bhigane ki ye choti si punishment hai 😡
all are confused.kripa is shocked by angad's dual personality
a- (turning towards kripa in full attitude)haan to kripa iss mein maine kache eggs tode hai. khass tumhare liye(gives her a dirty look)by world's worst chef(smiles evily) angad khanna pe color wala water dala.how dare u dadi jo mujhse ziyaada pyaar kisi se nahi karti kal tumhaare aate hi mujhr bhool gayi.meri dadi...meri dadi
there is alot of pain and anger on his face kripa understood everthing but she has never thot that angad will do this.though there first meeting was short kripa thot angad was agood person but now she knew that she was wrong.suddenly a hate grew for angad in her mind and heart.now she had a determinedlook on her face.
a-piyoo isse(raising his his voice in anger and commanding)
k-(very determined and controlling her anger)i will not drink this
by saying this kripa was about to leave when angad hold her hand.now angad is at back of kripa holding her hand.her turns her hand and bring her close he is frowning
a-u have to drink this
k-angad mera haath chodo.and let me make one thing very clear that tumhare jaisi dual aur ghatiya personality wale log mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hain.aur jo log mujhe pasand nahi hote nain unki koi baat nahi maanti.
angad is frowning. whole canteen is is shock .no body have ever dared to speak like this to angad.kripa manges to realse herself from angad's grip.she goes and picks the glass from they tray and brought it in front of angad's face
k-😡 aur rahe baat is drink ki toh...
she leaves the glass.the glass hit he floor and breaks.the echo of sound of braking glass is going around whole canteen.kripa gives angad and awinninglook and leaves. there stand angad full of shock and anger...




i kow it was a complete crap.i really disappointed u guys 😭 😭 .i m sorry.but plz plz plz do reply


ASEVER
AMNEET

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fab part.
Awwwww Angad is jealous of Kripa...god he such a kid phir chacha ban na wala hai kya hoga iska. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
Awwwww Angad is jealous of Kripa...god he such a kid phir chacha ban na wala hai kya hoga iska. 😆

thanx🤗aur angad ka jo hoga woh ya to bhagwaan jaanta hai ya main and if u want to know keep reading😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 really nice part plz cont 😳 😳 😳

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