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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
the part was very nice.... too good... liked it very much... going too interesting..... 👏 do try and continue soon...will be waiting for the next part.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
😆 Dat was an awesome part.... see my alekh is multi talented, he is jus awesome n tooooooo good!!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the next part soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
hey jivora 😛

nice part 😊

Thank gos you continued 😃

pl post the next soon waiting for it egarly
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
hey jivora 😊 😊 😊

where are u? 😃 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
khan ho yaar i am waiting for next
i mean all are awsome 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The Great Hall of Ghai Mension, Kapurthala, was full of guests….clad in all kind of fineries. Sangeet was about to begin, and everybody was busy mingling among friends and relatives….Lassi, Jaljeera, Thandai, Kokam, and other cold drinks went around the hall…..

Huda and Yudi had arranged for an orchestra("kuch kar yaar, warna saari parjaaiyaan dholak le ke baith jaayengi!")……but they were still assembling their instruments.

Pooja looked pretty in her pink Lahenga, surrounded by her cousins and giggling friends….teasing and chatting with her….

Ali stood with Pooja's brother, Huda and Aalekh……while Yudi was out in the Varandah, busy on an important call from the academy(??).

Subedar Begh had forcibly dragged the very unwilling Colonial into the function…..showing him off to all his guests. And he stood in his usual charming formals, talking to Subedar Begh, with bubbly Meethi by his side….

The usual Punjabi wedding songs with Dholak were going on….ki bhangda te sajda, jab nache kudi da pra……the elderly women singing and girls dancing….

Aalekh's gaze kept shooting up on the staircase….he had already spotted Rajveer and was anxious for Naina….

It was when Aalekh looked on the staircase, he saw a face which made his heart miss a beat(in a negative sense)…..he wanted to run and stop Naina from coming out of her room….this was too much for her….he felt like throwing something…..Pooja pushed the candle stand near her with a "CLANG"!

Dr.Ritu Singh Shekhawat was standing at the top of the stairs….an now descending with a decieteful smirk on her face….in an exquisite blue saari and a halter blouse….she looked everything beautiful and glamorous….everyone in the hall looked up, surprised at the new arrival…Huda's fist tightened…..Ali looked down helplessly….surprised…..everyone….everyone…..helpless…..exce pt Aalekh….

The appearance of Dr.Ritu made his eyes shoot a look at Rajveer….he had his suspisions…..he saw that Rajveer continued chatting animatedly with Subedar Begh….completely unaffected by her arrival. After a while, he saw Pooja approaching towards then, taking to Meethi's …..Aalekh started walking away.

"Do musibat saathme…..apun nahin jhel sakta….", Aalekh tried to change the mood.

Pooja stopped him.

"Oye ruk Quaidi, Yeh kab se mujhe tum sab se theek se intro karvaane ko keh rahi hai…."

"Main janti thi Poojadi Army se hai….aur mera parivaar bhi…to mujhe laga shayad mujhe kuch naye dost mil jaye….", she looked at Aalekh.

"Sure thing girlie!", said Yudi.

"Yeh hai Yudi….", said Pooja, and Yudi raised his eyebrows… "…oops…Captain Yaduvansh Sahani….yeh KMA main padhate hai….."

"KMA….", Meethi seemed to be recollecting the name…

"Oye saadi Academy….Kanchanjunga Military Academy…"

"AH…", Meethi was about to say something, but Pooja continued…..

"…Aur yeh saada Jat…."

"…Oye Panjaban, apna intro, main kudiyon ko khud detaa hoon…..Main Captain Amardeep Huda….is waqt Gujarat border pe posted hoon…..aur aap mujhe dekh kar bahot khush hui….mujhe pata hai….Huda ko dekh kar kudiyaan aksar baukhlaa si jaati hai….ab..main kya karoon….personality hi kuch aisi hai Huda ki…"

All the others are are suppressing a laugh…but Meethi knew better of him….

"Shuru ho gaya……Nautanki….", Aalekh rolled his eyes, and made a bored face….and started walking away….

Meethi looked annyed seeing him going away….she had never met someone who was so rude like him…but she had never met someone like him too…..

"…aur yeh….?", she called out to Pooja.

"….aur yeh hain….Ma-", Pooja started…

"MAJOR AALEKH SHARMA!", said a voice from the top of the staircase….


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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Excellent part... im sooooo happy that u continued 😃 I have to tell u that i absolutely adore this ff, coz there arent many ffs on LRL which makes this 1 even more special... n i think it must be naina at the top of da stairs or maybe a new entry... dats my prediction... cnt wait for u to cont!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Meethi and all the others looked up….

…..and they weren't the only ones….mesmerised……..all the guests had their gazes at the top of the staircase….

………the hall went silent within seconds………as all of them looked up at the perfect reflection of 'beauty'…………

……..there stood Miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia…..looking like a goddess…..beautiful…….in her peacock green lahenga…….with perfect earings dangling-sparkling from her silky hair –tied in a bun…….and a perfectly done up face……if not properly introduced, people would not recognize this woman as their angry, fiery Naina Singh!

………two men in the hall looked down….they dint like it when Naina dressed up…..so magnificiently……

…. The audience froze in their positions as she slowly descended from the satirs, deciededly looking at her friends….although aware of a pair of eyes………set on her……

………..and she felt it again…..she hated herself for feeling it….enjoying it….liking it………she felt it again…………the same……passion……..the same mischief……….the same intensity…………all over again…….she failed to ignore it……she felt herself complete…..and at the same time a part of him……….she felt special……she felt beautiful……….she felt conscious……….she felt him……….

………. ………face of the nation……….after a number of assignments in Milan, Paris, London, Tokyo, and NewYork……..confident endorser………..flattering actress……stylish on ramp………and glamorous on camera……. the supermodel Naina Singh Ahluwalia………blushed………..fely conscious……..

She waled upto her friends………determined to ignore the existence of the man, who meant courage….faith…..trust…….truth………friendship……….love………to her……

Meeti gasped at the look of such a pretty woman……………but her mind struggled with something else .……………and others faces broke into wide grins…..

Meethi soon recovered….. "Major………?

"Haan Major….Major Aalekh Sharma…..sada Qu…Aalekh…..sabse vadda afsar ban gaya….."

"Aur sabse pyaara dost bhi…….", said Naina, putting her hand on Aalekh's shoulder.

"…..aur yeh hai meri Phoolan…", said Huda patting Naina affectionaltely.

"Phoolan……?"

"Oye haan………Yeh had saadi Naina…..Naina Singh Ahluwalia….[Meethi's expression varied a little by the mention of the name>….hamare saath KMA main thi…..ab vaddi model ban gayee hai…..aur bahot soni bhi….par mere liye to ab bhi 'phoolan' hi hai……….[taking Naina's perfectly manicured hand>…….vaise ab isme who 'phoolan' waali baat rahi nahin…[Huda tried to kiss her hand…..with an absolute mischievious and flirtatious expression….but Naina was too quick for him….who Huda ka haath zor se marodti hai>….OUCH!!!!…….Oye…….hai yaar…..is kudi ne to saalon ki saari takat jamaa kar ke rakhi hai……..", yelled Huda, massaging his hand….

"Huda, bina takat ka dil aur haath ki zindagee main koi zaroorat nahin hoti….", Naina unconsciously chanted Raj's words.

"Arre…..", Maya jumped, "…..yeh to bhai kehtain hain…….", she said innocently.

"B-Bhai….?", Naina's eyes sharpened, and her heart sank…..

"Are apne bare main to maine aapko kuch bhi bataya hi nahin….Main Meethi….ah – nahin…..Maya…..Maya Singh Shekhawat (hearing this…..Naina closed her eyes….she knew what was coming)….par mujhe koi Maya kehta hi nahi…..Aur mere Bhai (she said with extremem pride…her face glowed with it)….Colonel Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!", she smiled, her face full of pride.

Naina stood there…not daring to open her eyes…..shocked…..and so did all the others…..as they stood staring at her….

….after a few tensed moments…..

"Maya…….", called a voice, and Meethi's expression altered!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Well, friends, I am gonna get a bit serious now....in the story......as I want a burst of emotions.....any clues how should I do it?

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