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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

ok just read the entire thing and wow!! really love your writing! Thanks! and thanks for the long parts! Your most welcome dear... this sounds strange, but it's easier for me to write longer parts... 😛
wow angad is mean! but im quite sure that his plan will backfire on him!
LOL!
can't wait to see how angad and kripa's 'realtionship' will progress.
Yup, everyone is curious... You should see Kripa's side now... its not soo bad.... she used to respect him before, so from her side things will be easier!
looking forward to the next part!

******

you just updated another chapter!! well atleast angad realises that she's working hard! Yes... loved the last line!

can;t wait till tomrow! Hey, I am sooo glad I got a new reader! Yee... Thanks a lot for taking out the time to comment...

Tanu

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

WOWO!! tht was 22222 GUD!! 👏Thank you dear! 👏
i LOVE Josh's character but i HATE Angad's character!!!
Lol...😡
which is usually the opposite!! lol!!! i feel soooo SORRY for Kripa, i mean
only 2 HOURS of sleep!!!!! so sad!!!! her conditions need to get better
soon!!!
They will... 😉Angad shud at least feel sorry for her nd let her sleep, how
CRUEL!!!!
Chalo, read the next part, and hopefully that will make you happy! 😡the last prt was HILARIOUS!!!!! Lol!🤣
why does she have his photo in her cabin, now tht she hates him!!!!
She didn't put it... he has put it there! 😕
anywazzzz, AWESUM prt
Thank you Rutu! nd cant wait till tomorrow!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: mitali_s

hailaaaaaa...its such an amazing ff Thank you! ...i hate angad lol ,god he is sooo damn mean and rude...poor krips ,a pathetic family plus a short tempered mean disgusting boss...lol can it be more worse 😕
and yes fabulously written 222222222...lol from where does this ideas pop up in ur head
lol, i can't take all the credit for the ideas... the ideas may be due to the FF'S, movies or shows i watch! ...i hope i'll borrow it some time lol suree!😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Gr8 part... Thanks dear! . i liked da endin of it loll 😆Please do dont soon... cnt wait to read the second half of it!!!!

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

i luved it!!!! Yeee! no i seriously read the entire thing without skipping a single part which is very commendable for me lol!! I can understand... I do have trouble reading long parts, which explains why my parts are never edited! o do 😆😳but that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!Thanks! i luv the way u write how everything is so simple yet descriptive at the same time. and on teh contrary to every1 else, im rly enjoying angad. i thinkhe's funny – oh my god, same hereeeee!! Its amusing to see everyone go "i hate Angad", and kripa rly cute. she reminds me of cindarella wow, I never thought of that, but you are right! Her conditions are very similar to cindrella's...ahhhh so i got it from there! 😆newayz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!----!!!!!!!!-!

ps-!
Lol!!! I am so glad you did this! You must have an idea how annoying some of the smileys can be... 😉

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

awesome really goodo!!!!!!!!!! Thank you! i loved it!!!! 👏
plz cont soon cantwait to read more
i will as soon as I get time😃
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u can request there if u want
yup, i will definitely! You make realllyyyy beautiful banners!!😳😳
love
griffy
btw i just started reading the dark world! 😃

Originally posted by: pooja1221

WOW! UR AMAZING!!!! Thank you Pooja!! 👏

Originally posted by: goldi2

OMG lmao lol hahahaahaha she dropeped tea on him WOW!! Lol!!!! Hey, man, its sooo worth it to write a part to get your comment... ouch that must've burned in the begenning u know when tea fell on kripas thumb.. i thought that u know whtats where everything was gonna start .. lol!! lol hehehehe maybe angad would feel "bad" woooh.... ehehehhe, oh my god, any time you expect something & i do something totally opposite.. ehhehehe remember you told me you thought it was like chal mere bhai, but in turn it became completely opposite!!! lmao lol hahahahahahha but lmao lol toatoally oppist happend gosh that was soo funny and u know wat was even more funny the whole lover to brother conversion lmao!! seriously i couldnt stop lauhgin at to how fast he changed hie emotions hehehehehe! lol i mean seriosuly there is a HUGE difference in the way a lover loves compered to a bother loves lol :P:P:P Actually, that is thanks to my best friend... why do you think i go around giving my fake name? Lol... you know what she did.... she had a HUGE CRUSH on this guy... lmao... And, she did the stupidest thing ever on Raksha Bandhan she tied him Rakhi! I was like what the hell were you thinking? She is like I have no idea... i made the stupidest mistake ever.. ehehhehee...
OK now.. this kripa girl i smessed i mean seriosuly
lol!!! lol "Since, his sight made her blood boil, and thinking about his touch, made her shy & nervous," what kind of a feeling is that lol?? Heheheheh... chalo ji read second half hopefully it will explain things... actually, tell you what.. i will say it here.. do you remember she admires him? She always has... but, then she meets him on the signal, and he is a very disgusting person, so she hates him for that behavior! Now, she is between admire & hate... she says its admire, but its a crush... either ur happy or not. lol i mean if hse hates him soo much why on earth would hsi touch make her shy lol?? She has a crush on him... well i cant blame the girl for beeing messed i mean seriously u have no clue how messed i am lol!! LMAO! Now, this last statement was just hilarioussssssssssssssssssss................ heheheheheheh... Hina, I have no idea what i will do if i don't receive your comments... seriously man please write a FF!!!
u know that whole listen form 1 ear and though it out from the other lol my dad tells me the exact same thing when my moms yellin at me
LOL!!!! hahaha lol but ofcourse she doesnt know that LOL! lol othervise me and my dad r both dead:P:P:P
omg lol kripa keeps a picture of Angad in her cabin?? lol this is soo remindin me of jaisi jasi koi nahi lol :P:P
no, she doesn't.. he has his picture there! You will find out in the future why....
o gosh man ur parts r soo hillarouse!!!
No no no your comments r hilarioussssssssssss! Hehehehehe!
:P:P
continue soon!!!
Lol! Chalo ji comment soon the next part is uppp! I am waiting for your comment.... o & wait, tell me do you find Angad okay or not? You don't hate him na?

Hina

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hey! Heyyyy!

i have been lazy.. so late on commenting
i can understand... how about you just click on thank you button if you r lazy?.. read it as soon as u posted it thou.. lol!😆.. ok.. umm the part was AMAZING thank you!.. the josh part made me laugh really bad.. he said if i cant be a lvoer then a brother it is!.. lol.. thats so wierd.. a friend ok.. but brothre?? (lollllll... he can't be friendd... coz it will never stay at friendship lmao) lol. o btw.. i do read all the comments u post on others comments.. its soo much fun! Ohhhh nooo... these ppl force me to spill out everythingggg.... neway back to part.. ouch.. the tea must have hurt! i spilled tea on myself once.. man.. it hurt.. it was all over me.. my parents started putting toothpaste on me.. lol!!!!!! lol.. it kinda felt good thou.. lol! Really? neway... gettin off track.. urghh.. angad is a meany in a cutesy way.. yeee, i m soo happy you think that!! the last part was hilarious. i lvoe the smirks.. i may just go and comment on kaa forum.. not sure DON'T READ IT AGAIN! Pleaseeee nooo hehehe that's when you start noticing flawss..... will c.. does kripa have a bad past? Her chachijiii is reallyyy bad! cuz thats wat it sounded like.. hope not.. well i love the long parts every otehr day thing.. and 2 birthdays comming up right after each otehr.. so WATCH out! u already kno thou.. so sucks for u.. lol.. 30th and 31st.. 😛.. huh???? Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! I m going to cryyy now w/ this birthday thing for sure...

luv mansi .. 😃

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

great part Thanks! just catch it 👏👏👏

Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk you everyone who sent in comments!! 👏

ummm... I am getting more comments in KAA, so I posted the second half there earlier... However, here I have ppl w/ longer comments 😃 so it was only a few minutes late! If you want the part here earlier, then more comments ppl! 😊

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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To the birthday girl... Happy Birthday!! I hope all your wishes & dreams come true. Have a Blast! 😃

Part 4 (second half)

Two days later

Singing and skipping around she made her way to the office early. She quickly made coffee for her stupid boss, and placed it on his desk, then took out the morning paper and placed all the sections on his desk.

Then, she brought all the necessary files in her cabin, and placed them on the side. She would need those.

There were still a few minutes before the office hours would officially start, so she walked out to catch anyone familiar, but she found no one, disappointed she returned to her cabin only to find Josh sitting on the side table smirking at her.

"What's up? Madam is in a really good mood? Anything special?" he asked still smirking, as he shifted his position

Blushing, she shook her head negatively, "Noooooo, Josh nothing special" but, who was she kidding, her tone itself made it obvious.

He was smiling now, "Oh Come on Kripa, something is up. Why are you so happy?"

"Nothing. I swear I just had a nice sleep!" she said holding her throat, and smiled again. God, she could not even lie properly.

"The way you are blushing, and smiling – it really makes me wonder whether someone proposed to you" he said fooling around.

She turned a shade of red, as she said, "Josh" at the same time punching him lightly on his shoulder.

"Oh so that is the case" he said laughing out loud, while she continued to hit him with a smile, "who is the guy" he questioned

"Josh, that is not the case" standing on her toes she said, "No one proposed to me. I swear" she replied truthfully now, while she removed some dirt from his hair.

"What are you doing?" he said hitting her hand lightly and walked backwards away from her, as he touched his hair

"Josh" she said walking in front, "your hair is standing up, so I am trying to make it sit down"

"Aree Kripa" he said throwing his head back and laughing, "This is the gelled look"

"What?" she asked, completely confused now.

"Gelled look" he replied, as he continued to look at her with amused expressions.

"No wonder. I felt something sticky. Josh, don't put jels pels on your hair, it will really damage your hair. Instead of gel why don't you apply oil?" she said pretending to look angry with her hands resting on her waist.

"Okay little sister." He said holding her hands, "Next time oil it is."

She looked really emotional now, at the mention of the words "little sister". Her mother was pregnant with the second child, who was a boy, when she had been part of that deadly explosion, which resulted in the loss of both.

"heyyyy" said Josh pulling her closer, and trying to wipe the tears falling on her rosy cheeks, "why are you crying?"

"Nothing" she said with a smile, as she wiped her tears away, and turned to face away.

He turned her around and brought her chin forward, "Why do you always say nothing? Does anyone cry for nothing?" he said smiling.

She smiled back though the tears were still prominent in her eyes.

He quickly said, "Kripa, you look ugh.... really bad while crying," she raised her eyes now looking furious, he continued playing, "your nose becomes all red. It looks all weird. You look like a joker"

"Huh?" Kripa said looking furious, "what did you say Josh?" she questioned walking in front looking angry.

"Nothing" he answered walking backwards to the door.

Once she had gotten hold of him she started to hit him on his shoulders, as he jumped around saying, "what are you doing Kripa? You will land me up in the hospital. You should join WWE" that got him another punch on the shoulder.

In the middle of their hitting session they failed to hear the door open and only when they noticed someone come in front and stop at the door did they look up.

It was Angad Khanna looking far from pleased at the sight that met his eyes. On the other hand, Kripa blushed at his sight, and quickly walked out of the cabin on the pretense of getting coffee.

****

Two hours later

Kripa was nicely sitting in her cabin engrossed in her report when she heard the noise of a door shutting. She looked to the side through the doorway to notice her boss was missing from his cabin. Perhaps, he had just left.

Getting up from her chair she stretched her arms only to see his picture pasted on the wall in front of her. He had placed a picture of his in this cabin for unknown reasons, and there was another picture in his cabin as well. Every time she sat ideally she got the feeling he watched her.

There he was standing with both his hands in his pocket wearing a pair of black pants a red shirt on top with a black coat overlapping the red shirt.

"Why are you staring at me?" she said looking at him angrily, as she crossed her arms.

"Hey mister," pointing her finger "stop staring at me," she said again fooling around.

Walking in front, she went and stood near the picture, then examined it... He had this unshaven look giving him a small subtle making him look all the way more appealing.

Hitting her head lightly, "Stop it Kripa. As it is its bad that you dream about him every night. Now, at least keep your dreams different from the reality."

Walking to the mirror, "On one hand you claim to hate him, yet on the other hand you can't help, but drool over him in those stupid dreams... The result is next day you are all nervous around him because you may give the wrong impression (ie drool again), which made him give you the title of "Miss Clumsy"." She said out loud looking at her reflection in the mirror.

These dreams better stop. But, how will they? If only she had never admired his personality, then perhaps she would have continued to hate him by his first impression.

But, then again if she had her way then she would ensure that the first meeting didn't take place.

It was her dream to meet him. But, if she knew the first meeting would go so horribly wrong, then she would have never ever met him. She would be happy and content with whatever she thought of him.

Now because of that first meeting she was all confused. Whether it was hatred or just plain admiration she had no idea.

Turning around she looked at the picture for one last time before screaming out, "How many times do I have to tell you don't look at me?"

Removing her dupatta she flung it on the top... covering the picture partially, feeling satisfied she went back to her desk and resumed work. Now, he definitely couldn't watch her through the picture (she is fooling around so don't take this seriously!)

****

Later, that night Kripa walked into Angad's cabin, and handed him the report. She had just finished it, and barely turned around, when she heard him yell, "what is this Kripa?"

"What sir?" she questioned standing near his chair

Banging his fist on the table, and throwing the file on her face he said, "Damn it, is this the way you work? What did you do all day today?" as he dug his hands in his hair, as he went and stood near the window in frustration.

"I do.... n't understand Sir. I did everything as per your instructions" she replied sounding close to tears now.

"You didn't even format it properly. Forget the format, all the pages are in the wrong order, and on top the entire report is not written properly. Do I pay you to fool around?" he screamed angrily, then coming closer, and holding her shoulders roughly he shook her as he said, "What do I pay you for Miss Sharma?"

She started crying right then. She really could not bear all this. He made her work like a dog all day, in the night she would have to go home and do all the chores.

How much could she handle?

"Stop crying now!" he said yelling at her, "I don't want all this drama."

"Just fire me okay?" she said screaming, as she lifted the file, "I told you already I am not fit for the position of a PA"

"Hey you...." he said running behind her, but she had already entered her cabin, and shut the door on his face.

****

She sat on the floor, and cried for a very long time. Somewhere behind the moon was rising behind her spreading its light everywhere.

She cried her heart out. This man was not worth her dreams or her life. He was worth nothing.

She was unaware that outside another man walked around with a girl in his arm, as he swallowed some bitter liquid from a bottle. This was the man that would change her life forever.

She cried till no more tears came, and till her eyes hurt really badly to the point she could not even bear to keep them open, nor close them.

Angad was her inspiration. He was her everything. In times of her misery she shared all her sorrows with him, but now he was being the reason for her misery.

His real life picture was a lot different than the picture painted by the media. Thinking of the picture she was reminded me of his photo in the cabin.

She quickly went to it, and pulled her dupatta away, "You deserve hatred Angad Khanna. That's what you deserve." kicking it she yelled, "You don't deserve someone's respect... you are a monster in the form of a man. I hate you for what you did to that girl. I hate you for your arrogance, for your talk, and for the way you speak to me like I am some kind of dirt or piece of garbage." Saying all that made her cry even more, and she fell on the floor crying

(you do realize she doesn't reveal all these feelings to him out in the open rather all her frustration or happiness is taken by the photo... This is sort of taken thanks to Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hain!)

****

New life... New day...

The sound of the train passing, birds happily chirping, children screaming wildly, adults jogging, and the distant fog in the air brought a smile on Kripa's face after a long time. She loved walking out early in the morning with very few people around; it was something that relaxed her. To see the little kids beg their parents that they were really "sick" always reminded her of her childhood.

She had seen very little of her parents. They had walked out of the house on the night of 1993 to never return back. She had been five years old then, and despite people comforting her that her parents would return, somewhere her instinct had warned her that she would never ever seen them. Since, then she had considered her chachiji, as her dad, and looked for her mom in her chachiji. Niyati filled the place of a little sister that Kripa never had.

She had never ever felt the loss of her parents. In fact, she had gained a younger sister, which she never had. Chachiji was a very nice kind hearted person, while Chachiji was strict – she ensured that Kripa learnt the house work, since one day or the other Kripa had to get married, while Niyati was the stubborn little sister.

She heard someone whistle.

Looking around she noticed the neighborhood bully Prithvi, who was apparently drunk. It was not unusual to see Prithvi drunk. The guy was completely spoilt, who would go chasing every other girl in the area, once he was done going out with one of the girls – she would be dumped, and he would go back to chasing some other girl.

He was a total bully – a complete "maavali & goonda", so very rarely one would ever dare to cross his path.

Kripa refused to answer him, and kept on walking, except he kept coming behind her with his bike, "kya baat hain Kripa?/ what's up Kripa? Kaha jaa rahi ho?/ where are you going?" she heard him say.

She still kept on walking until she felt him pull her tiffin. She turned around trying to pull it from the other end, which caused the tiffin to fall on the floor – And, there went her lunch.

"Prithvi, humhe akela chod do... kyun humhara peecha kar rahe hain aap/ Prithvi, please leave me alone... why are you following me?"

"uff, do I even need to answer that question Kripa?" trying to sound nice. He was blocking her path now.

"hum sab jante hain aap ke baare main... please humhe kaam pe jaana hain humhe daer ho rahi hain/ I know everything about you... please I have to go to work... I am getting late"

"Never!"

"What?" Kripa replied, not sure whether she heard the word 'never' or something else.

"On one condition, dinner with me tonight at 8-00 pm!" he said

"What?" asked a shocked Kripa, "No Prithvi, humhe chachaji se puchna padega/ I will have to ask permission from chachaji"

"I will talk to your chachaji, if he gives his permission, then we are going" he said

She looked at him for a few seconds before walking out of the gate in a very bad mood. Early in the morning only a black cat crossed her path.

****

Khanna Industries

"Rosy, where is Kripa?" questioned Angad, as he sat in his cabin speaking through the speaker

"Sir, I don't know. She has not come yet" Rosy truthfully answered

"What do you mean she has not come yet?" he barked angrily, taking out his frustration on the poor lady.

"Sir, she is usually here 30 minutes prior to work, but today she is more than two hours late"

"Okay" he said rubbing his head, "If she enters the premises let me know"

"Yes sir"

Switching it off, Angad interlocked his fingers, as he decided that he would have to pay a visit to Kripa Sharma's place today.

****

That night

It had been a long and tiring day for Kripa, as she walked around looking for a job. No one was ready to hire her, especially when she said that she was fired from Khanna Industries.

They would all raise an eyebrow. Barely a week in Khanna Industries, and she was fired, which meant she was pathetic.

At one point she had been so frustrated she had revealed that she had personal problems with Angad Khanna, the look she had received had been so horrible that she had been forced to run out of the office taking whatever left over respect she had with her.

"Bhaiya," she said, "what is the price for tomato today?" she questioned, as she played around with it.

"20 Rs/ kilo didi" he replied

"What?" she yelled, "but, yesterday only Anita bought it for 10 Rs/Kilo, then what are you saying in a day you increased the price by 10 Rs"

"Aree didi, didn't you hear that they are having shortages of tomatoes. All of them are destroyed due to the rain"

She raised an eyebrow, "Bhaiya, hum bhi subhe paper padte hain. Humme ulu banana ki koshish kar rahe ho kya?/ Bhaiya, even I read the newspaper in the morning. Are you trying to fool me?"

She continued arguing with the guy unaware that someone behind was watching her.


Angad Khanna had just entered the locality. Everywhere he looked he noticed garbage and dirt.

He had been looking around for Kripa's place when he noticed a girl wearing a simple blue suit standing in front with her hair left open arguing with the shopkeeper. Smiling he made his way to her.

"Bhaiya, agli bar se hum apki dukaan se kuch sabji nahin lenge. Aap humhe ulu banate hain humesha/ Bhaiya, next time I won't buy anything from your shop. You always fool me" said Kripa folding her hands looking furious now.

"aree nahin didi....." replied the man trying to explain only to be interrupted by another voice.

"Bhaiya, yeh kitne ko hain?/ Bhaiya, how much is this for?" said someone playing with the tomato the exact way Kripa had been doing it earlier.

The voice made her stop walking, and she turned around only to see the jerk Angad Khanna, in her locality.

"What are you doing here?" she yelled at him

"And, why can't I come here?" he asked bending in front, and smiling.

"didi" said the shopkeeper, "if you are insisting then I will sell you the tomatoes for less" now that he had spotted that rich man, he could easily fool him, and get away.

"Give me 2kgs" she yelled out, "And, how much is this cauliflower for?" she asked

The shopkeeper looked a bit hesitant, since he didn't want to say a low price, as he wanted to trick the rich man, and if he said a higher price, then Kripa betiyaan would never step into his shop. But, still the rich man would be worth losing Kripa, as a customer.

"100 Rs" he answered

"WHAT?" screamed Kripa throwing the cauliflower in the air, while Angad ran and caught it.

"Kripa, you are damaging his property" said Angad teasing for which he was given an annoyed look.

"Bhaiya, aap pagal toh nahin ho gayee.... 100 Rs aur cauliflower ke?/ Bhaiya, are you mad or something.... 100 Rs that too for cauliflower" she started yelling at him.

She noticed a two 100 Rs note being forwarded to the shopkeeper, she turned to look Angad saying, "for two cauliflower's"

The shopkeeper looked highly pleased with his deal. He immediately packed it, and claimed that the bags were extremely special, and managed to protect foods were nicely for which he was forwarded another 50 Rs note.

****

Angad stood outside Kripa's house. Well, who was he kidding it wasn't even a house?

There was a roof, which was just a huge metal piece covering the two slabs on the side, a small window in the front, and the door was not really a door, anyone could easily break in. But, then who in their right mind would break in?

He knocked on the so called door, and stood waiting until a fat plump lady stood in front of him. Her mouth dropped open, as she took in his appearance.

"I am here to meet Kripa Sharma," he said clearing his throat

The lady looked highly annoyed at the mention of Kripa's name he noticed.

"Come in.... Come in" she said giving a fake smile.

He entered the house, and sat on a small cot, which was not at all comfortable to sit on, since it was too shaky and weak. He thought he was going to break it, so he didn't exactly sit.

"Niyati Niyati betii" called out the chachi, she gave him a fake smile when he looked at her, "Niyati, aree kahan mar gayi/ Niyati, where did you die?"

Her last words did not impress him at all. God, Kripa lived with these people. It was so hard to believe.

At the mention of the name Niyati, a short girl, who was also fat, which explained Kripa's state. Her hair was tied in a ponytail at the back, and outfit, which looked worth 10 Rs... she came and hid behind the pillar smiling shyly at him.

He really wanted to clear his throat and say that he was not here for match making, but to talk about Kripa Sharma, except everything died when a man looking pleasant stepped in saying, "Aree Niyati ki maa kaun hain/ Niyati's mother who is here?"

At the sight of Angad he just stood in his steps, and said, "aap?"

Angad immediately got up, and said, "Angad Khanna... Kripa ka boss" he answered shaking hands with the man.

"ji humhare garib khane main kya kaam tha?/ yes, what was your work in our poor house?" the man replied trying to get the point.

Before Angad could say anything, the lady looking like a buffalo screamed out, "Kripa, make tea please, we have a guest" he threw her a disgusted look. He didn't like the lady one bit, she looked like the type, who would sit around doing nothing, and he disliked people, who did nothing, but just boss around.

"I am here because I need Kripa for a important deal, which is taking place in Mexico." Said Angad truthfully

"What did he say?" said the chachi with her mouth open

"chup karo/ shut up" replied her husband

The man looked like he was in deep thoughts, then a few minutes later he answered, "I give you permission to take my daughter ----"

"oho ji what are you saying?" said the chachi looking furious

"tum chup karo/ you just shut up.." he said throwing her angry look, "so what was I saying? Uhhh ya, you can take my daughter with you... but please do take care of her. She has been my responsibility since her parents have passed away" looking sad the man got up and added, "the poor girl has always been brought up in my shadow. I am scared of sending her, since she can very easily get lost. I have full trust in her that she won't do anything wrong, but I am worried that she shouldn't get lost in the crowd"

"Don't worry Mr. Sharma." Replied Angad catching his hand, "Kripa will be my responsibility, and I will make sure that nothing will go wrong. I assure you this"

That's when Kripa walked in the room with a tea in her hand. She had dark circles visible under her eyes, her hair was tied in two plaits, and she looked really vulnerable standing there in front of him – like, she would fall down any second. She looked really weak and pale. He wondered how he had never noticed this.

"chachaji, what is he doing here?" she said turning her gaze away, as she placed the tea on the ugly desk in the side.

"Beta, he is here to ask permission to take you away for a important deal" replied her chachaji as he smiled. He was happy to send Kripa away, as it is his wife tortured the poor soul a lot, maybe if Kripa went away for a day or two she would have a change in surrounding, and feel better.

"But, chachaji ---" she said turning around frowning.

Only to hear Angad interrupt her as he replied, "Ah Miss. Sharma, I would like to talk to you for a second outside."

She shrugged her shoulders, and stepped out into the night air, while behind her she heard Angad say, "acha chachi, i will take my leave now"

"Beta, you haven't even taken tea" said chachiji lifting his tea.

"Some other day chachaji. I am in a rush right now" Angad replied, then the two men hugged, and Kripa heard footsteps.

"Beautiful night Eh?" said Angad standing behind her.

She looked at the millions of stars in the sky staring back at them, "why are you here?" she asked sounding annoyed

"Kripa, again, I am being forced to remind you to speak to me properly. I am your boss remember?" he said out loud patiently

"But, I got fired" she yelled back, "so, I can speak to you however as I please"

"Um sweetheart, sorry to disappoint you, but unfortunately I am still your boss, since you are not fired" he teased

"What?" she asked frowning, "But why?"

"Are you telling me Kripa? You did all that on purpose to ensure that you would be fired?" he was now looking really furious.

She didn't know what to answer to that, so she just let matters slide down. After a few minutes he said, "I am coming to pick you tomorrow at 4-00 am. Be ready"

"For what?"

"We are heading to Mexico. Why do you think I came to your place?"

"I am not coming with you"

"too bad you are. Now, you have no excuse that your chachaji won't agree because I just took his permission" he replied walking to his car.

"Why does everything have to be the way you want it to be?" she asked sounding angry now.

"Because I am the boss. And, if I say you are coming, then you are coming" he replied

"Fine, have it your way you stubborn ass!" she yelled out loud, and walked back inside.

(Credit goes to SHA* for this sentence!)

****

The next part should be up on Friday... If anyone is annoyed by my description, then please forgive me... I think I was a bit too harsh by using the word 'fat', if anyone is offended, then please do PM me & I will change it. This is strictly a FF, so please don't get offended... 😊😊

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
😆 GOD THEY BOTH FIGHT LIKE KIDS 😆 LOE THIS PART PLS CONTI SOON 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
omg the last parts were just soooooo awesome 👏
i like your fanfic sooo much, that i even skipped doing my home work, just so i could read it 😆
anyways cant wait to read the next part 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
oo.. i see how it is.. so ur now gonna post 1/2 a part or sumthing?? like u know how u osted 1/2 of it before and 1/2 of it now... why do u do that?? why dont u just make it 2 different parts?? 😕 lol just asking...:P

but great part this is really reminding me of Jaisi Jasia Koi nahi.. have u seen the show??
Angad reminds me of Arman .. but im not really understanding why hes dooing this.. i mean i know he wants reveng.. OO i know.. is this like his plan or sumthin.. i remember reading Angad saying he was gonna marry her..
and why was kripa sooo happy??
lol okk.. am i just the confused 1 or is this appost to be a mystery?? lol:P



Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
it was amazing! n i'm loving the long parts... n plz don't have angad do something horrible to her n i don't get why he's being so nice n friendly with her! i mean he's not being harsh after wat he'd sworn to do! oo n i hav a feelin dat chahiji will arrange Kripa's wedding with Prithvi 🤢 eww.. n i stongly dislike chahiji!!!
and yaa gr8 job! 👏 o n ya i love their fights 😆 😆 ! they're adorable! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
perfect way of cheering me up afetr revsion 🤢 🤢 🤢

i loved the dialogue by jripa's chachi ' kahan mar gaye' 😆 😆 havent heard in a loooon time!

mexico?? im thinking something bad is going to happen.. maybe the first part of the plan will be executed?? 😕

waiting for friday now!

and i love kripa and angad's banter!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
fantastic.. cant wait for firday..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
awww it was amazing!!! yo kripa rly gota messed up house 😆 no offense. but kinda reminds me of vivah only its much better. i still think anagd is cool, and i luved the ending line. great now i have another reason to desperately await for friday
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
amazing part 👏
I actually reall liked it 😊 😛
I think angad can be really mean sometimes 😡
but then Again I get where your going with his character. 😉

I thought that when angad came to kripas house
Prithvi would come and then angad would get
All jelous because I think he will slowly like kripa 😳 Looking at the fact that he noticed how tired and Rude her family (hate them 😭 )actually is 😉 😊

Just a thought 😉


kanwer
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