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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
continue soon i love itttttttt

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i was wondering wheather u can write more abput there married and romantic life storys
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ITTT IS SOOOO GGGGGOOODD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIII LOVEE UUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (AS A FIENS)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U ROCK! U R THE BEST WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZ CONTINBUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND KEEP THE ROMANCE IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U R THR BBBBBBBBESSST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVR U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN"T CONTROL MYSELF!!!!!!!! ITZ SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks a lot u guys thank u all soooo much......

here is the next part

Part 13
Recap:
KT: laksh…….?
L: kya hai baba…..
Kt: chodo muje….
L: par kyu…?
Kt: muje Jana hai aur tum jao jake fresh hojao, change karlo tab tak mai khana lagati hu…. Chalo…(Lodz his wrist and push him out of the kitchen)
L: arre….
Kt: (goes back to her work….)
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(guys I wanted to change something in the last part….. I am gonna continue from here again cause I wanna it to be more romantic….ok….
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Kt: theek hai baba… tum bethke karo intzaar muje chodo….
L: par kyu…?
Kt: muje sari tayariya karni hai…
L: kis baat ki…?
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Kt: laksh…. Agar mai galat nahi hu to maine abhi abhi kaha ki kal mera pehla karvachauth hai…(smiles)
L: to mai kya karu…? (goes back his nuzzling)
Kt: laksh….?
L: (laughs…)
Kt: chodo muje…aur haso mat….varna….
L: (goes close to her again) varna…. Varna… kya karlogi? Aur vaise bhi mai to ladka hu kuch bhi kar sakta hu par tum to ladki ho …. Tum kya kar sakti ho….
Kt: achhaa to ye baat hai…. Ab to tumhe dikhana hi padega ki mai bhi akhir ek ladki hu..(she started tickling him in his tummy…)
L: owwwwwwwww……… owwwwwwwwwww….(holds his tummy…and keep on laughing…) kt… kt…. Plzzz.z…. plzz…. Nahi…(and somehow manages to hold her hands and coners her by the wall once again…..
L:abb.. ab.. kya karogi…
Kt: (looks down)
L: (again tries to flirt with her..)
Kt: laksh…
L: humm..
Kt: acchhaa tum ye batao ke tumne apna kaam khatam kiya..?
L: kaamm…? What kaam..?
Kt: tumhara office ka kam… or kya..
L: tum topic mat change karo haa plzz.. mai abhi romantic mood mai hu… aur tum…..
Kt: ok baba ab chilao (shout) mat…..
L: mai kaha chilla raha hu….?
Kt: aur nahi to kya kar rahe ho?
L: really…?
Kt: acchhaa abhi bate mat banao, chalo tum fresh ho ke table pe ajao tab tak mai khana lagati hu… theek hai…
L: okk…. Baabaa…(he goes to change and freshen up…)
Kt: (prepare the dinner on the table..)
L: (comes back on the table and he sees that everything is so simple but he wanted it to be more roamantic like candle light dinner…)(he lights up some candles while kt was not watching and quickly turns off the lights… )
Kt: (turns around and sees the candles on the table and feel some grabbing her by her waist…)
Kt: laksh ye….
L: (cobers her mouth) shhhh…… tumhe accha laga….
Kt: hmph….
L: ohh sorry….(removes his hand….) acchaa laga tumhe..?
Kt: (nods as a yes and tears started rolling down her cheek….)
L: (turn her to face him) ye kya…?(ans kisses her tears away..)
Kt: (hugs him tightly…he hugs her back)
L: abb khana khale bahot bhook lagi kai…(shall we eat..?)
Kt: haammm….(and they both enjoys their special dinner..)
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It was time to go to sleep kt went changing while laksh was preraring for their sleeping bags because the bed was broken……

Kt came back and she wear some thing like this


and laksh wear something like this


Kt: laksh…
L: (comes up to her….) hammm….
Kt: woo tum neeche? Need to ayegina..?
L: kyu…?
KT: nahi wo tumhe aadaat nahi hai na…
L: tum ho na…..ajayegi…?
Kt: (smiles cutely…)
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(Laksh was sleeping in kt's lap…and kept ker hand running throught his hair…)
L: kt ye log karvachuath ka vrat kyu rakhte hai…?
Kt: apne pati saath saat janam tak pane ke liye…
L: sirf saat janam kyu (holds her hand) muje to tumhara saath har janam mai chaiye…
Kt: (smiles…) ab tum sooo jao…bahot raat ho gayi hay…
(laksh hugs her while sleeping in her lap..just like shahid hugs amrita at this moment)



That 's it for this one, next one is going to include karvachuath…..
Hope u are enjoying it…
Thanks u allll sooooooo much for liking it so far……
Love
pari
Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
awww... so kute..... 😳 😳 great job....continue soon dear!1 👏

RANI
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
awww..awesome job pari..its gr8..continue soon:)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
it's awesome pari 👏 👏 👏 ......continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute just like vivah i love that movieee. plz continueeeee can't wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i am soooo addicted to ur stories lolz but seriously u r toooooooooooo good 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg it was sooooooooo cute n very romantic plzzzzzzzzz continue soon i just love u r stories it is gr8 😳 😳 😳
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