:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101) - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
lovely fanfic pari !! loved it continue it soon hunn!! 😳
love,aliya
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
that was great pari please coutinue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

it's great!!can't wait for the next part!!👏

plzzz continue soon!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
nice!! 👏 please cont.......soon, when u have time; i'll be waitin!!!! thanks for the awesome updates!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
hey is ur story finished or r u going to continue it plz let us now we r waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
It was great 👏 👏 Plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx a lot for lovely comments guys..,....
here is the next part

part 14

Recap:
(Laksh was sleeping in kt's lap…and kept ker hand running throught his hair…)
L: kt ye log karvachuath ka vrat kyu rakhte hai…?
Kt: apne pati saath saat janam tak pane ke liye…
L: sirf saat janam kyu (holds her hand) muje to tumhara saath har janam mai chaiye…
Kt: (smiles…) ab tum sooo jao…bahot raat ho gayi hay…
(laksh hugs her while sleeping in her lap..just like shahid hugs amrita at this moment)

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It was morning……..the sun rose outside throwing its light into a room where two people slept, holding each other close to their hearts..(laksh not anymore in kt's lap) as the light hit kt's face, she slowely opened her eyes to the new day…………..at first, she was startled to see someone's arms around her, holding her sooo tight, as though fearing she would leave him in the middle of the night……… she turned herface ans she smiled.laksh was sleeping with a serene smile on his face…….. she tried to wriggle outts his grip on her, without waking him up, bt he was holding on to her tooo tight…..she had no choice but to wake him up………
And suddenly the alarm goes trin trin …………trin trin…….
She turns it off……….

KT: laksh…… …..
L: hummm
Kt: laksh…..
L: hummmmmmm'
Kt: laksh…utho 6:00 baj rahe hai…. Wake up….
L: sone do na….
KT: ye alaram tum apne liye laga te the lekin uthna muje padta tha aur yaha bhi ye alaram……..
L: aaaahhhhhaaa…. Yeh alaram tumhare liye hai….mera alaram to tumhara dil hai……..jo dhadak/…..dhadak……ke bolta hai….utho…utho.....(he was sleeping on her right and his head on his shouder while he was saying this he meant to point the heart on his right side….)
KT: waise dil right me nahi…..left me hita hai…..
L: dusro ke liye……… lekin mere liye to tumara dil roaming hai…. Kyuki tumahara rooom rooom tumahara dil hai………..

Kt: (playfully laughs)

L: funny......?hummm.....
Kt: acha….baba….ab mai bhi keh rahi hu…aur mera dil bhi keh raha hai… UTTHOOOOOO…..
Come on laksh 6:00am baj rahe hai uthooooo…..
L: Okay mai khud hi sun leta hu………ke kya keh raha hai tumhara dil/…….(he tries to get on top of her and trying to put his head on her chest to hear her heart…..)
KT: no……..nahi…….nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiii…………………
L: mai bhi to sunu kya keh raha hai tumahara dil…….
Kt: no laksh……laaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh……………

That's it for now but I'll countinue to this scene…….
Do comment
Love
pari

Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
awww....so kute...!!! 😛
continue sooon...

Edited by rani712 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
very cute n dam romantic plzzzzz continue 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
that was great plz coutinue soon

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