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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part... n awesome ff.... OMGGG kashish n sujal know but glad 2 know dat they believe him... i wonder wat kripa is gunna say
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ONLY 2 COMMENTS???
NOT FAIR GUYS...
I WILL NOT POST THE NEXT PART NOR I WILL LET ADI DO IT UNLESS V GET 10 COMMENTS... SORRY BUT I THINK NO1 IS LIKING THIS FIC SO ITS BETTER V STOP WRITING... I WILL WAIT TILL SUNDAY 2 DECIDE WHAT 2 DO???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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noooo pls dont stop this ff, i absolutely love it, pls do cont 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
hey it was awsome dont stop it pls
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
cotninue soon! yay im soo happy that kashish believes him cuz seriously angad dont need to do all that to get a girl, he just snaps and they follow lol (atleast i would LMAO)continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! i wonder how kripas gonna react n*e wayz awesome part! continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera*

seriously angad dont need to do all that to get a girl, he just snaps and they follow lol (atleast i would LMAO)continue soon!


99% OF THE GIRLS WOULD
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera*

seriously angad dont need to do all that to get a girl, he just snaps and they follow lol (atleast i would LMAO)continue soon!

true.. i will b 1 of them
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera*

seriously angad dont need to do all that to get a girl, he just snaps and they follow lol (atleast i would LMAO)continue soon!

include me 2....
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Posted: 18 years ago
After about an hour Kashish opens Kripa's cabin after explaining her all the situation. In the mean while the guys & the girls have returned. Angad & Sujal r holding them outside while the guys r ok with it the girls especially Naina is giving Angad killer looks. Angad goes 2wards Kashish who gives him its-ok kind of a look while Kripa has no expressions on her face. She signals every1 inside. Once every1 is seated she starts her questions.
K: 1st of all Angad r u some kind of a nut??? (Angad gives a dumb expression) 1 day u tell me that u r in love with some girl & on the same night u r seen with another woman… just tell me what were u thinking…
Huda & Alek r shocked 2 hear this. They have never seen Kripa in so much anger. Angad looks at Kashish who signals him 2 give his justification.
A: Kashish might have told u that… I was… a kind of… actually completely drunk.
S: he gets blank out… when he drinks more that 5 pegs of a drink…
A: I was actually not in my senses… it was not my fault…
K: v will see about it after knowing what Huda & Alek have got…
H: according 2 Mr. Ray… his wife is the best wife a guy can get. She was in my words Sati-savarti types… but then 2 he doesn't know what his wife was doing in that hotel with Angad (emphasizing word ANGAD)
Angad gives him meet-me-outside-I-will-show-u kind of a look.
S: & what do u have Alek???
AL: people believe that this guy is mad & will never head anything against his wife as he loves her a lot…
KA: so what does that imply???
AL: according 2 the people I talked that woman was nothing more than a call woman…
All of them r looking at him shocked.
K: mind ur language Alek….
AL: sorry but that is the truth… she used 2 bed with any1 available as her dear sweet hubby was always away…
N: any proofs???
AL: nothing concrete… she had a good access 2 her hubby's money… he never questioned her about it. She used 2 spend on her various lovers justifying that it was some form of charity.
AD: any clue regarding who might have murdered her???
AL: probably 2 reasons… #1 her husband found out about her. #2 she was having an affair with some Mafia Don. He wanted her 2 leave her hubby & b with him but she just said no.
K: so???
AL: he was pretty much enraged... some of his men heard him say that he would kill her if she didn't come 2 him.
A: who was that guy???
AL: Guy named Simon…. He has a record of doing what he says…
S: so our suspect no1 is Simon…
N: no its Angad sir…
No1 knows what 2 say 2 Naina as she looks determined 2 punish Angad.
K: no need 4 it Naina. I checked his records he has a blackout prob & he was surely pretty much drunk that time I asked the owner 2 show me the recordings they r correct Angad's statement.
A: thank u…
KA: not so fast Mr.
S: now what???
KA: remember everything correctly Angad… if u r 4getting something????
A: the location of the body was changed…
S: WHAT????????
A: yes. IN the morning when I got up it was in the outer room but when v got there it was in the bed room where I was asleep.
AD: which means that some1 had come in that room after u left…
H: or may b present at that time… probably hiding…
N: could b…
A: 1 more thing… there were 2 coffee mugs there at that time. 1 had lipstick stains on it…
S: that means Mrs. Ray knew the killer…
KA: that's y she had a coffee with him/her.
K: let's search the room again.
ALL: ok.
K: & 1 more thing… NO1 WILL TELL THAT ANGAD WAS WITH MRS. RAY THAT NIGHT… NOT EVEN THE COMANDER.
N: mam but what about the reports??
KA: say that it was some1… create a new id. Its not new 4 us…
AD: as u say mam.
S: (whispers) & Angad, don't pocket any clues again.
They search the room again but come up with nothing. Angad questions the waiter along with Adi (Naina has send her as she still thinks that he is the killer.). The waiter says that when he went 2 give coffee 2 that room he saw Mrs. Ray there alone but some1 was in the washroom at that time.
AD: now what???
A: I have 2 find that washroom fellow 2 prove my innocence.
AD: better b fast becoz Naina is determined 2 prove u the killer…
At that time Sujal comes with a big smile on his face.
A: stop grinning & tell me if u have some good news….
S: that I have…
A: b fats b4 it kills me…
S: ok but let the others also come… (at that moment every1 comes) the hotel video shoots the people coming in & out of the hotel. I checked with records… Mrs. Ray had booked this room along with a guy & here is that recording.
Sujal puts on the video & every1 watches Mrs. Ray booking a room with a guy. Sujal then fast forwards the CD.
KA: y r u running away with it????
S: becoz I have something imp 2 show u.
He halts the CD at 1 point.
KA: what's imp about this??
S: look at the person at the background over here.(he points at 1 extreme corner.)
AD: that's… that's
N: Mr. Ray.
S: he has been lying through his tooth. He knew about his wife… that's y he was here…
H: so he is our man…
S: I am not quiet sure about it… (Sujal stopped the Cd at one point.) look at that man…
KA: what about him?
S: look at his hands… they r blood stained…
A: so even he can b our man…
K: this case is getting complicated b the min…
S: Huda & Naina u go 2 Mr. Ray & question him…. See what he has 2 say about his appearance in this video…
A: I will go hunting 4 this guy…
K: I will accompany u…
KA: Alek see where was this Simon guy at that time.
AL: ok.
AD: & I will get the info as 2 who had come 2 meet this woman in the past whole week…
S: its going 2 b a long list… I will look at hotel records….
KA: I will meet the people here.
S: EVERY1 V WILL MEET AT THE HEAD QUARTERS AT 6PM SHARP… WITH/ WITHOUT INFO…
ALL: ok.

AT 6PM: HEADQUARTERS:
Every1 is seated on their places.
S: I will start… no1 has officially signed in 2 meet Mrs. Ray.
KA: some pass- byes have seen 1 drunk man- Angad (Angad gets embarrassed), going in that room + a person fitting the description of Mr. Ray outside the room, + 1 goon like looking man- our Mr. bloody hands & a woman with no make up going in.
S: what about Mr. Ray?? What he has 2 say Naina???
N: he came 2 know about his wife's deeds & 2 confirm all this he was spying on her. He saw her enter a hotel room with another man- not Angad sir… was heart broken & went 2 his ex-Gf 4 support…
KA: did she confirm that fact???
H: yep… talked 2 her personally. She said he was there the whole night & was drunk like hell… didn't wake up till the call from the police station…
AD: that leaves Mr. Ray out of this mess… that woman seems really popular with men as in the past whole week only she has male members with her leaving a few kitty parties & charity function… What did u get Alek???
AL: our dear Mr. Simon is out of town with other woman healing his heart wounds…. He is out of question.
K: v have just made an arrest…
ALL: what??? U got the killer…
K: NO… our Mr. Bloody hands…
KA: what's his story???
K: he was hired by a woman… he doesn't know who she is… 2 keep an eye on Mrs. Ray…
AD: how did he gets his hands in this dirt???
A: becoz he was supposed 2 bring that woman 2 Mrs. Ray… Mrs. Ray found out about him & was paying him double 2 meet this woman… he was waiting 4 Mrs. Ray's signal till late. When he got none as she was dead. He went in 2 meet her but found her dead & ran away from the whole situation…
AD: but y did u arrest him???
K: he was not opening his mouth & Angad got pretty rough with him…
A: he presently has 2 broken teeth… + a smashed left profile… let them heal…
S: always hot headed… Angad, next time think b4 u take some drastic step like this…
KA: no need Angad, if needed take help from me…
S: UUUUU…
At this moment Kashish's receives a msg.
KA: good news guys v have the image of our lady with no make-up…
She shows it 2 every1…
S: lets find her… hopefully she will lead us some where…
H: take her address from me….
KA: excuse me… what did u just say??
H: she is Mr. Ray's GF…Miss Saira…
Evry1 is stunned. They rush 2 Saira's house 2 find her locking her house. Angad grabs her hand & makes her stop.
A: going some where sweet heart…
SA: leave me.. what the hell is all this???
KA: well v r just arresting u 4 Mrs. Ray's murder.
They drag her 2 the headquarters. After some hard examination by Angad & Kashish she finally confesses her crime.
SA: I was in love with Vikram. He also loved me… v wanted 2 get married but then Sonia had 2 come in between us… she took Vikram away from me… I couldn't take it. I knew that she was a male eater… I hired a person 2 know more about her. He made a deal 2 met her at that hotel where she was with Rahul.
A: u told Mr. Ray that Sonia was there with Rahul there…
SA: yes. He was heart broken & came back 2 me. He got drunk & passed out. I took profit of the situation & came 2 meet Sonia. She was there with u in the bed room (pointing 2wards Angad.)
N: what did u say 2 her that make her so polite 2wards u that she ordered coffee?
SA: I told her that I had proposition 4 her… I told her that wanted Vikram & she could keep all his money.
K: if she was happy about it then y did u kill her??
SA: becoz she was cheating again… I was in the washroom when Rahul came back. He had heard the deal. He told her that now they could get married but she said that she will never divorce Vikram or she will loose everything according 2 pre-nuptial…
S: so as soon as Rahul left… u killed her.
SA: yes… I was about 2 push the body in the bed room but u got up. I rushed outside & came back after u left. I had kept ur ring in there 2 create evidence…
A: thank u so much 4 making me feel guilty 4 something that I have not done…
Saying this all of them leave. Naina rushes 2wards Angad.
N: Angad sir, sorry 4 not trusting u…
A: don't b… I wasn't sure of myself at 1 time…
N: so u 4give me…
A: u never were the guilty 1.
Angad gives Naina a hug. Huda is getting jealous seeing this. He cant bear this & goes out. Angad laughs seeing this & goes out with Sujal. Kripa & Kashish r outside their car.
S: what happened 2 u???
KA: our car has broken down & v r calling Kavaya 2 pick us up.
S: no need v will drop u.
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