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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#41

AWESUM!!!! 22222 GUDD!!! nd HILARIOUS!!! 👏

i LOVED this prt:
Angad(looking at Kripa) it can be urs in a way, Now kripa looked at him
Kripa: Eww!! Ur disgusting!!
Angad: tell me something I don't know, babes!!
Kripa: don't u dare call me that!
Angad(giving up) Fine!! God!! Chill!!!

it was HILARIOUS!!! 🤣
ur FF's REALLY interesting, continue soon!!! 😃

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mandy

@mandy07

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#42

awesome update 👏 luved how da guys tried 2 annoy da girls by flirtin with other girls 😳 awwwwwwwwww n when da girls got jealous 😳 😆 hope next time da girls make da guys jealous 😳 update soon 😉

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Sabrina

@sabrinaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#43

Hi guys.... Here's a little information
😉 of how my fanfic WiLl be........

The college days....Jealousy......Sacrifices.......Heatred......andLOvee e!! 😳 😳

I don't want to spil out what's gonna happen..so keep reading!!!!

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mandy

@mandy07

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#44

da ff seems 2 be gettin intriguing afta every update 😛 wonder wat da sacrifices will be n who'll be da 1s dat get jealous lukin 4ward 2 da upcumin parts 😳

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Amina

@am_786

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#45

Awesome very funny continue soon😆👏

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Sabrina

@sabrinaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#46

Here's the next part: part 4!!

Recap:
Angad(looking at Kripa) Well, it can be urs in a way!! Now kripa looked at him
Kripa: Eww!! Ur disgusting!!
Angad: tell me something I don't know, babes!!
Kripa: don't u dare call me that!
Angad(giving up) Fine!! God!! Chill!!!
Kaashish(annoyed) Can we go in now!!
Sujal: yea..let's go!
They enter! The girls adored the house (or u can call it, mansion!!lol)

Today's Update:

The girls meet naina and dilip khanna and they were very nice to the girls. Everyone left to go to their rooms and it was only naina with the girls. Then naina started a conversation.
Naina: So I think you girls should go out and see some sightsof London before your college starts since there's a week left!! What say?
Kaashish: (cheerful) That's a great idea aunty, and I have heard there are many pretty sights to see here.
Kripa: (excited) Yea!! I would love to!!
Anjali: (over joyed) Yea.. plus dad bought us all our own cars so we could drive anywhere!!
Kt: (annoyed) r u guys forgetting something??
The rest of the girls: (confused) What??
Mukthi: (trying to sound obvious) that we don't know 1 single road here!!!
KT: (sad) and we don't have anyone to drive us there!!
Naina: Awww…you guys don't need to worry about that! I have someone for all of you to take you!!
The girls were really happy to hear this!
Naina: My boys can take you!!
Their smile turned into frowns!
Naina called the boys.
They all came with an annoyed and angry face since they were really tired. Whattt!!???
N: you guys have to take 1 girl with you to go sight seeing for the next 3 days!!
Now their angry face turned into grins!!!
Angad: (talking to naina, but looking at kripa) ohhh, you don't need to worry about that.
Prem(looking at mukthi) yea..we're up for that!!
The boys smirked. The girls were all like w/e, it's our bad luck!!
Naina: ok!! Great! Now all of you guys get some sleep because you have to leave tomm, and make sure to wake up because me, Aryan, gayathri, and dilip are having a breakfast with some people, so you will see us at night. OK..Good nite! Saying this she left.
The boys turned back to the girls, who were sitting at the couch.
Kavya: (looking at anjali) soooo now you can't escape!! (switching his gaze back at all of the girls) You have no choice but to come with us!!
Anjali: (with an aditude, but she new he was rite) Ohh shut up!! She was kinda annoyed by kavya. Kavya just smirked after she said that.
Then the girls got up and were about leave into their rooms, but then laksh said something and they turned around.
Laksh: What happened?? To sad that you can't do anything???
KT: (AnoYEd) just shut up!!
Mukthi: yea..and be ready to have all you credit cards blanked out when you take us shopping tomorrow. Along with other places!! She had a brattish smile. Then the girls left.
Sujal: man!! Im soo glad ill spend the whole day with kaashish!!
Angad: I get to spend mine with kripa!!
Laksh: im with kt?!!! Yes!!!!!!
Kavya: And im with anjali!!
Prem: Me and my basanti!!
The boys: (CONfuSed) basanti?!??!????????
Prem: yea…she's just like basanti!! But my basanti!! 😳 😳
They all cracked up and went to their perspective rooms.
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Hey guys!! I noooo this was a veery short part, but the reason is because I have things to do like read other fanfics, and I want to keep my parts together, like the sight seeing part all in one part…the college day in one part…like that!! So enjoy and I will continue veery soooon because tommorrow's fridayyy!!!! Ill write a very big part tomm. Kk??????? Mean while, think of this:

~what will happen tomorrow???~
~what will happen between ak?? Ka??sk??pm??l,kt???~
~will they still act as if they hate eachother???~
~I want ur answers to some of the questions, and ur predictions are also welcomed!!!!!~

Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#47

OMG!!!! the WHOLE prt was AMAZING nd HILARIOUS nd CUTE!!!!
👏
i am LOVING this FF!!!!! 😛

i ESPECIALLY LOVED this prt, it was soooo cute:

Sujal: man!! Im soo glad ill spend the whole day with kaashish!!
Angad: I get to spend mine with kripa!!
Laksh: im with kt?!!! Yes!!!!!!
Kavya: And im with anjali!!
Prem: Me and my basanti!!
The boys: (CONfuSed) basanti?!??!????????
Prem: yea…she's just like basanti!! But my basanti!!

i CANNOT wait to read more, PLEASE continue soon!!! 😃

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prem-mukti#1

@prem-mukti#1

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#48

awesome update! ohh i can't wait for all the boys and girls going to sight seeing anyways i luved what prem said at the end! 😳

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mandy

@mandy07

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#49

awesome update even though it was short it was still really gudddddddd 😛 can't wait 2 c wat happens when da guys take da girls cite cin 😳 luved da part where prem sayz me n my basanti n da guys r confused n hez lik shez jus lik basanti only shez mine awwwwwww n itz soooooooooo true he betta not end up with any1 other than mukti 😳 😆 n da answerz 2 ur questions i think dat
1)what will happen tomorrow???
hope sumthin romantic happens btw da couples
2)what will happen between ak?? Ka??sk??pm??l,kt???
well with AK i'm thinkin hez gonna start flirtin with her n as usual shez gonna get disgusted 😆 with KA don't really no 😆 with PM i'm thinkin dat there gonna get into an argument but da sweet kind where premz gonna try 2 annoy her 😳 😆 don't no bout da other 2 couples 😕
3)will they still act as if they hate eachother???
hope not but if they do it'll be pretty interestin 2 read as 2 wat da guys n girls do 2 1nother