Silent Love-Prithvis 1st move!- pt16 pg24 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
great part
i hope angad falls for kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
Come on tell me what will happen at the party 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
that was a gr8, fab part
i really loved it
plz continue soon
i cant wait to read what is gonna happen next
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Awesome part.... ohhhh he noticed her soooo sweet!!!! Im sure sumthin will happen b/w angad n mishty at da party, well but i hope sumthin happens b/w angad n kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
great part jas i loved it wiked 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36

Previously

Kripa invited Angad and all her friends

What will happen at the party?

Part 4

Angad walked in. Kripa saw him and walked up to him

K - hi Angad

A - hi Kripa

Angad handed her the flowers

A - congrats

K - thanks

Just then Mishty walked in. Angad noticed her and went up to her leaving Kripa alone.

A - hey Mishty

M - hey Angad Kripa kahan hai. mein usse congratulate karna chahtee hoon

A - yeh vahan h............voh kahan gaye?

M - mujhe pata nahin mein usse dhoondne jaa raheen hoon ok?

A - ok

Mishty went to find Kripa. She found her in a crowd of people congratulating her. Mishty waited until everybody was gone and then she helped her carry all the flowers upstairs.

K - mein yeh saare phool kahan rakhoon?

M - mujhe nahin pata par tujhe extra vala milgaya

Mishty handed Kripa the flowers.

M - congrats

K - thanks

M - soooo................

K - sooooo kya?

M - baat karte hai

K - kis baat

M - mujhe pata nahin......kuch to kaho

K - so tere aur Angad mein beech kya chal raha hai

M - kuch nahin

K - kya matlab kuch nahin.......maine dekha jab tum dono gale lag rahe the

M - ok...............hum saath hai

K - oh my god............i am sooooooooo happy for you

M- thanks

Really Kripa's blood was boiling red HOT but she managed to stay calm. Now she knew that she and Angad could never be together. NEVER. Her heart broke. She was acting happy on the outside but on the inside she was so hurt that i can't even put it into words.

K - so why don't you guys go out?

M - well mein wait kar rahee hoon ke voh mujhe pooche

K - ok..............so tum kuch hints de do is baat ke tum date par jaana chatee hai

M - nahin.........tum kya kartee?

K - mein? mein usse poochtee

M - mein todi si sharmaati hoon

K - phir tum kuch hints de do

M - jaise

K - erm........jaise...........jaise ke

Kripa had a brilliant idea but she didn't tell Mishty. She was only doing this because Mishty was her best friend even though she had betrayed her. The day after the next at college Kripa went up to Angad.

K - hey Angad

A - hey Kripa

K - Angad i'm just gonna come to the point

A - huh

K - Mishty tumhare saath date par jaana chatee hai

A - ok kahan?

K - Seaview Hotel teek aat(8) vaje ok?

A - ok

When it was 7:30 Angad got changed for the date. He got in his car at 7:45 and was driving to Seaview Hotel since it was a 15 minute drive. Meanwhile at the Sharma Mansion Kripa phoned Mishty

K - hello Mishty come to Seview Hotel immedietly

M - ok i'll be right there

K - oh and Mishty wear something nice like a dress

M - w.....

Before Mishty could say anything Kripa hung up. At 8:00 Angad reached Seaview Hotel. At 8:03 Mishty reached the hotel and asked for Kripa Sharma.

R - yes table 3

M - thanks

Mishty ran to the table and was surprised to see Angad there.

M(thinks) - Angad yahan kya kar raha hai? acha main samjhi....Kripa ne jaan bhooj kar mujhe yahan bejha kyunki usne Angad ko kaha ke yeh ek date hai

A - hi Mishty

M - hi Angad (to Angad) oh hi Angad

A - so...sit

M - oh thanks

A - kya khaogi?

M - erm...Chinese

A - cool main order karta hoon

Angad ordered the food, it came soon enough and they began eating, in the middle of the dinner Mishty started laughing, Angad looked at her

A - tum hass kyun rahi ho?

M - tumhara chehra.....

A - kya hua mere chehre ko?

Mishty continues laughing, Angad gets annoyed and holds her hand

A - Mishty! kya hua?

M - one minute

Mishty picks up a napkin and leans forward and wipes some sauce off Angad's chin, Angad realises and gets embarassed

A - oh....thanks

M - its ok

They continue the dinner and talk a lot about each other. After dinner Angad offered to take Mishty home, once he got there..

A - tho kal milte hai college mein

M - yea sure...

A - so erm bye

M - bye

Angad smiles, Mishty is walking to her house, Angad grabs her arm and gives her a kiss on the cheek, he quickly gets in to his car and drives off, Mishty just stands there with her hand on her cheek. The next day Kripa meets Mishty at college

K - tho kal raat kya hua?

What will Mishty say?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
OMG!!!!! I think u hav da rong couple it is supposed to be angad n kripa not angad n mishty... loll 😆 Anyways kool part... i feel soooo sorry for kripa, shes such a gud frend... cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
gr8 part 👏
poor kripa 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
nice...i reallly hope kripa gets angad sooon!!!!! cont. sooon!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
dont make kripa a physco!! and as for mishti.. she already is one so send her to the asylum 😆

continue soon

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