Silent Love-Prithvis 1st move!- pt16 pg24 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
that was an AMAZINg, but SHORT prt!!!!!!! 👏
this is REALLY interesting, i bet Angad is at that party!!! 😆 😉
PLEASE continue ASAP with a LONGER prt, if possible!!!!! 😃


p.s. i LOVE the banner ur sis made for u, thats really sweet!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Previously

Kripa goes upstairs and in half an hour she comes downstairs wearing a blue dress

S - take the car

K - thanks papa your the best.

Kripa gets into the car. 15 minutes later she arrives at the party. She gets out the car and walks outside.

What will happen at the party?

Part 2

At the party she sees Angad looking at her. He gets his drink, finishes it and starts singing Yo (Excuse me miss) by Chris Brown while looking in her direction.

yea....yea

tell me fellas have you seen her

it was about 5 minutes ago

when i seen the hottest chick that in young i never seen before

i say hey

tell the girls i wanna meet her

on second thought that aint the way to go

i gotta give a game proper

spit it so she get it there she is i gotta stop her

or should i talk about her smile

or what about her style

i might as tell

shes out the door

i gotta go for mine

i think ill say

yo i don't know your name but excuse me miss

i saw you from across the room

and i gotta admit that you got ma attention and your makin me wanna say yo

i know your tryin to leave but excuse me miss

i saved the last dance for you

how i'd love to keep you here with me oh baby

now shorty grab hold of my hand

and lets pretend the floor was ours

you say you don't really care

don't worry about

its just one two step

one two step

now if the music is moving too fast

grab my hand a little tighter

don't be afraid to move a little closer

girl theres somethin about you that just makes me wanna say

yo i don't know your name but excuse me miss

i saw you from across the room

and i gotta admit that you got ma attention and your makin me wanna say yo

i know your tryin to leave but excuse me miss

i saved the last dance for you

how i'd love to keep you here with me oh baby

i think i'll say

yo i don't know your name but excuse me miss

i saw you from across the room

and i gotta admit that you got ma attention and your makin me wanna say yo

i know your tryin to leave but excuse me miss

i saved the last dance for you

how i'd love to keep you here with me oh baby

i wanna be where you are

aint nothin wrong with dancing

baby your so romantic

baby......i can be...in your heart

so many things i wanna tell you

i think that i should start by sayin

yo i don't know your name but excuse me miss

i saw you from across the room

i gotta give a game proper

spit so she get it there she is i gotta stop her

oh yea

i know your tryin to leave but excuse me miss

i saved the last dance for you

how i'd love to keep you here with me oh baby

yea everybody just clap your hands

like this like this

just clap your hands like this

oh like this

and if your shorty in the house tonight

just grab her by the hand

homey make her understand

y'all was made to dance like this

like this

y'all was made to bounce like this

oh like this

let her know she was made for you

and you wanna do everything she wants too man

huh woo

Angad walks towards Kripa

K (thinks) – yes! Unse mujhe dheka

Angad gets to Kripa but walks straight past her and hugs this very beautiful girl

A - so tumhara naam kya hai?

??? - Mishti

K(thinks) - oh my god, Mishti meri best friend aisa kaise kar sakti hai, voh jaanti hai ke main us se pyaar karti hoon

A - Mishty....nice name

M - thanks Angad

A - would you care to dance?

M - of course

Mishti and Angad started dancing. Kripa got so furious that her head was about to blow up. She left the party and drove home.

K - that ******* *****

The next day Kripa went to college.

What will happen at college?

Edited by johnrocks96 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
great part
misthi ur so dead playin with kripa's man
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
AWESUM prt!!!! REALLY interesting, PLEASE continue ASAP!!!!!! 😆
i CANNOT to read more!!!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
OMG!! u dont play wit ur bf's boy!! okay!!

i dont know when people will learn this!! 😆

continue soonnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
wow what a jerk of a friend!! continue soon plz i totally love the concept!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
Gr8 part... but it was so short, pls can u make the parts longer nxt time. N i cnt believe mishty stabbin her best friend in the bck, how rude!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
thanx 4 the comments guys 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
that was really gud jas i laughed at the swearing bit 😆 and cont soon i cannot wait 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30

Previously

Mishti and Angad started dancing. Kripa got so furious that her head was about to blow up. She left the party and drove home.

K - that ******* *****

The next day Kripa went to college.

What will happen at college?

Part 3

When Kripa got to college Mishty went up to her.

M - hey Kripa tum kal raat party mein kyun nahin ayee?

Kripa said nothing. She was giving Mishty the silent treatment.

When they got to class Angad came up to Mishty.

A - hey Mishty yeh kaun hai?

M - yeh hai meri bohat achi dost

A - hi i'm Angad

K - Kripa

Everyone took their seats as Professor Sinha came into the class holding a pile of papers.

A - professor voh papers mein kya hai?

P - ye hai tests is hafte ki liye. is mein panj(5) tests hai tho ek(1) test ek din ke liye. hum ek issi waqt karenge hai.

The prof handed out the papers to everybody

P - ........1.......2.......3...... and........G0

Everyone got their heads down and started scribling answers down. all except Angad.

A(whispering to Kripa) - hey

K - bolna band karo tum, hum dono mein bohat musibat aahjayegi

A - can i copy your answers? please?

K - n......fine lekin itna nahin ke Proffesor ko pata lag jaaye

A - yay

Angad started copying Kripa very carefully and kept making sure that the teacher wasn't looking. When the test was finished everyone went outside.

A - thanks Kripa

K - it's ok

Before everyone went home they got their results. Kripa and Angad passed. Remember when Kripa went to college angrily. Well guess what. She came home feeling very happy

K - yes he finally noticed me!!!!

When she got home she was in a very happy mood.

G - hey hey..........tumhe kya hua hai

K - mom aaj mein bohat kush hoon.

G - kyun

K - erm........aaj test tha aur voh Professor Sinha keh rahe the maine bohat acha kaam kiya aur mein PASS HOGAYE

G - sach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suryaban comes

S - arre tum lokh chilaa kyun rahe ho

G - Kripa test mein pass hogayi!!!!!!!!!!

S - sach!!!!!!!!!!!

G - is ki liye tho party rakhnee hai

S - good idea

K - kab?

G - erm.............Saturday!

K - haan tho Saturday party rakhnee hai.

S - tayaariyaan bhi karnee hai

K - fhir chalo

For the next 5 days Kripa kept on doing tests in college while Gayatri and Suyraban were decorating the house. In the end the house looked like this:

On the party night Kripa was wearing this:

Kripa invited Angad and all her friends

Angad was wearing this:

What will happen at the party?

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