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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
hehehe....very cute update!!
plz cont soon! 😃
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#72

Note : sorry i forgot to post , i wright it put , i forgot if i posted it or not ,so now if i didn't post more than 1 week PM me so i can remember and sorry again

DeeWane

they all have tchat anjali always look at kavya angrily and kavya wink at her or give flying kiss he tease her

anju : (thinking) abhi to kuch nahin ke rahi lekin dekhna kuch hi dinon main tum ider se bhag jaho ghe handsome bandar ewww handsome nahin ugly bandar

we see a girl coming we see her foot than up up up and its amrita rao

angad get up in joy

kavya : hu ?? tujhe kiya uwa

amrita angad ko ishara karti hai ki vo kavya ko kuch na kahai

angad: kuch nahin , voh aise hi

bhoo come

bho :heyyyyy(she see amrita )

kavya : abh isko kiya huwa

bhoo : hummm kuch nahin bus aise hi

kavya : tum dono dufer

bhoo and angad : voh kyon

kavya : bas aise hi

amrita come near kavya and screem : haaaaaaaaaa

kavya jerk he return

kavya : priyaaaa

(amrita s name is priya)

amrita : heyyyyyyyyy

they hug

anjali feel strange

than priya hug angad

than she hug bhoo they do they salute step haha

bhoo : kripa anjali kashish roshni meet priya and priya meet anjali kashish roshni and kripa

priya : hi i am kavya s sister

angad : only kavya sssss (puppy face)

priya : hayyy tumari bi

kavya : vaise priya tumain lene kaun gaya

priya : vo ma...

cut by

kripa : shiiiit

roshni : kiya huwa

kripa :i forgot my phone in the car and mujhe abhi urgent call hani thi

roshni : wait i will get it

kripa : okaaa

manthan at the door steps priya ka bag lekar atha hai

manthan : (to himself) yaar is bag main kiya hai 200 kilo

roshni run toward the door

manthan holding a mala

manthan : yeh lo priya apna ma

roshni bumpt into manthan and the mala fall in roshni s neck

manthan : ...la (finish his word)

roshni look into manthan eyes same for manthan then they shook they head

r and m : sorry

r and m : its ok

roshni goes outside and manthan inside

angad : hey manthan dekho kaun aya hai

kavya : priya

manthan : i know

bhoomi : tujhe kaise pata

priya : manthan mujhe lene aya tha is liye

kavya : or mujhe bataya nahin

manthan : hey hero maine nahin priya ne kaha ke na bataon

anjali : (wishper to kripa and kashish) hero yeh hero lagta hai kiya (gigle)

kashish and krip shook they head to say yes

anjali : (whisper) are you kidding bandar lagta hai

kashish and kripa shook they head to say no

bhoo : kripa kashish tum dono aise sar kyon hila rahai ho

kavya : miss bandri ke saath hai to unko shock lag gaya hoga

anjaali : hum to sath rethe phele to nahin i think ke tumain dekh kar yeh dono aise ho gahi

kr and kash : hey i am normal ok

roshni enter

roshni : yeh lo mobile

bhoo : eumm roshuu tumne mala kyon pehena

roshni look at the mala

roshni : voh

priya : yeh mala maine kahin dekha hai

manthan : dufer tumara hi hai yaad nahin hai vo ladka jo tere piche par gaya tha

kavya : (angry) kaun

priya : ek pagal tha manthan ne usko ek aisa kick diya ke (laugh)

bhoo : lekin roshni tumne kider se pehenliya

priya : kahin vo pagal ider to nahin a gaya

roshni : nahin nahin vo isne penaya (pointing toward manthan)

kav and and bhoo : manthannn (shocked)

manthan : hey aise koi baat nahin vo galti se hum takra gahai or yeh mala roshni ke ghale main puhunch gaya

bhoo : kiya filmi scene hai yaar

manth : shut up bhoo

kavya : (whisper) main bi kahon us soneho ka kiya hota

manth : haha very funny

they all are eating

bhoomi ; yaar sujal bahi ko bhi khane ke liya bulao

kavya : nanana voh apne kaam par laga huwa hai don't disturb him

manthan : disturb kiya to samjo gahai he is working hard for his project

bhoo : kaunsa

kavya : voh hi jo kissi ko nahin pata kheta hai time ane par batahai ga

angad : vaise bhi he is not angry

kashish : hard worker hu

a k and m : yeaaaah

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
wow thts a good part now it's turn for kashish & sujal to meet. i loved how roshni & manthan met tht was a great scene i just read ur whole ff and i love the way it started and the way it's going i also like how u update often b/c some ppl don't update very often.! well plz continue asap!!... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
haha great part!! now its sujal and kashish's turn to meet 😉
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Awesome Part Continue Soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

DeeWane

10:30

they all go to their room

roshni and manthan run to their room they want to talk to their soneho and cutiepie on computer( yaar amne samne baat karo na oops haan abhi to pata hi nahin hai)

the other are in their room

Exept kavya and anjali voh walk toward their room kavya apne door ke samne hota hai and anjali walk toward her door she have to walk next kavya to go

kavya : good night honeyyy and don't be naughty with me in your dream

anjali pass se guzar ke uske per par apna per(foot) rakti hai zor se

kavya :haauuu(he close his mouth in pain)

and walk toward her room and say

anjali : bad dream bandar (usko hath se sign karti hai without looking at him and she enter in her room)

kavya : kiya ladki hai yaar,maaza ahaiga

kripa s room

kripa his looking at a photo

kripa : mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tum yahin kahin ho (smile)

she kiss the photo and say "good night bunty"

flash iin angad room

angad : good night bubli

manthan room and roshni s room

manthan : yaar soneho abh main australia a gaya hoon abh to milo

roshni : mmm kyun u want to see if i am beautyful or not

manthan : don't be silly y know that i love wether u r beautyful or not i love u not for ur phisik but for what u r inside , and from inside u r the most beautyful and carring u r the one who is made for me , i know it , and u know it too

roshni : ...

manthan : roshni are u there

roshni : yes its just that its the same thing that i feel

manthan : see i know u so well and we are similare

roshni : not so similare i am more ordonn than u

manthan : lol

roshni : i don't know why but i feel like u are near me

manthan : ofcourse i am

roshni : WHAT and were are u

manthan : in ur heart

roshni shy

manthan : isn't i

roshni : mmmmm u will know soon

manthan : kiya soneho abh to khedo na

roshni : bachu inteazaar ka phal mitha hota hai

manthan : acha kitna mitha

rohni : u will know anyway i am going

manthan : good night

roshni : have a sweet dream

manthan : think about me and NO ONE ELSE

roshni : o i will dream about someone else

manthan : o yeah and who 'angry)

roshni : akshey

manthan : akshey

roshni ; yes my love

manthan : UR LOVE
roshni : akshey kumar u know the one in HDKG

man than : hoooo

roshni : hahaha i would love to see ur face

manthan : yaar u become naughty day by day

roshni : because i talk to u

next day

sujal ready to go for jogging he go out & 1 minute later kashish enter

kripa : so miss pt usha what the plan for today

kashish : shopping to hum kitne baje chale

kripa : ho ho ho (like warning)

kashish : kiya

kripa : HUM nahin i am going with roshu for a meeting

kashish : ho ok yaar anju ko bi apne office jane hai

kripa : so sleeping beauty ko jagao ghi to uthe ghi na

kashish : haye meri janu nahin uthi

kripa : kashuuu jiiii jiss din anju 10 baje se phele uthe ghi uss din kayamath hoga

kashish : heyyyyy u make joke of my januuu

kripa : noooo how can i

kashish : anyway i am going to wake her up and u jani make quik think for me pleeeaaaseee

kripa : okaaaa

angad come in the kitchen and see kripa preparing brekfirst

angad : good morning mmmm kripa right

kripa : yes kripa and u its angad

angad : yup...if u want i can cook

kripa : no no i love cooking i have a restaurant

angad : hooo u r a chief me too i love to cook

kripa : ho yeah but i don't think u cook better than me

angad : hooo u think so

kripa : no i don't think

angad :o...

kripa : i am sure that i cook better

angad : acha to dekh lenge

kripa : okay

angad : jhab ar jaho ghi to sad na hona

kripa : sawal hi nahin utha

kashish go to wake up anjali

she scream in her ears than anjali run after kashish

same for kavya he run after manthan

they run and suddenly kavya and anjali bumpt into eachother they fall

kashish and manthan : not again

kripa and angad come out of the kitchen to look what is happening

kavya : ho miss australia, yaar i know u love me jab bhi dekho mere upar ghir jati ho

anjali stood up

anjali : shut up is dafa tum takra hai ho

kavya; as u wish anjuu vaise bi abh to pata chal gaya u have a crush on me

anjali : dont call me anju u bandar

kavya : anjuuu

anjali : bandaaaaaar

kashish take anjali by her arm

kashish : janu tayar hoja humain jana hai

anjali : ok aise bi main bandar ke mum nahin lagti

kavya : le...

angad and manthan uske mum par hath rakte hai

manthan : ok hero abhi panga math le

kashish and anjali go for their shopping in india airia (i mean u know in australia france...ther is a india airia)

in the house

sujal : kavya jaldi karna

kavya : i am ready chale

sujal : shukar hai

they go

sometimes later

anjali and kashish side

anjali : kashu tu ider rukh yeh gift pakar main abhi ahi

kashish : ok

kashish stood there waiting for anju

sujal car drive kar raha hota hai when he as a flash he look from where it come and he see a simple beautyful girl in salwar kameez

he couldn't take his eyes off of her he look at her dreamly than sudenly his car hit another car ( who was park and the other car hit a man and the man bumpt into his

icecream stand and the stand fall

anjali see it anjali run toward her car

kashsish : hooo shit

anjali : meri ghari

than she look angrily at sujal (usko nazar nahin atha ki dusri taraf kavya hai) sujal car se utharta hai

anjali : andhe ho kiya nazar nahin atha

sujal : sorry vo maine dekha nahin

anju : sorry se meri car ki light or us bechare ki icecream vapas a jahai ghi kiya

sujal : vo i am really so...

anju : ghari chalani nahin athi to na chalao

kashish : anju thik hai na

sujal look at kashish

anjali : hoe mister

kavya : hey miss ghalti kar di maafi bhi mangi hai

anjali : tummm

kavya : ho anjuuuu

anjali : shut up

anjali : (pointing toward sujal) abh

kavya : hey thik hai na hey tu icecream wala kitne paise tumare

iceream : 400

kavya : yeh lo , or tumara miss akru

anjali ; angry 400

kavya : yeh lo 800

anjali :800 kis liya

kavya : batata hoon

kavya broke cars second light

anjali ; u monkey

kavya : shut up paise diya hai

anjali : ek minute yeh lo

she gave him 5000

kavya : yeh kyun

njali : ek minute

niche se Phatar utha ti hai first she point toward sujal and kavya (kashish litle shocked)

sujal ans kavya : heyy( piche hathe hai)

than she break sujal and kavyas sheesha i mean unke car ki

kavya : heyyyyy

anjali : paise diya hai (she laugh) byeee

kavya : iski to main

but sujal hold him

LATER IN THE CAR

sujal : vaise kavya tum us ladki ko kaise janta hai

kavya : hu?? kaise janta hoon?yaar she is bhoo s friends

sujal : friendSS that mean both

kavya: yeah 4 friend hai

sujal : ho ok

kavya (thinking) : 4 friends main se ek to gahi kam se

sujal : ok we will leave the car at the garage and rent a car

kavya : why rent , buy

sujal roll his eyes

kashish and anjali s side

kashish : yaar anju tumain uska sheesha nahin torna tha

anju : u right

kashish : what ???(kashish is shocked because its the first time anju say that she couldnt have done something)

anju : mujhe us patar ke saath sirf uska sheesha nahin uska beja or puri car torni chayiai thi

kashish : (thinking) main bhi kahon anju apni mistake par guilty kaise feel kar sakti hai

anju : it wasn't mistake usne shuru kiya

kashish : haila janu tu mujhe bohut darati ho how can u read my mind

anju : sweety i am the best i can do anything

kashish : yeah right

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Promo

we see kashish she is in a rediocenter

kashish : hey yeh ta aj ka pyar main twist salam namaste kaal milenge same time same show with same me

recoder go of

girl : hey kashish tum yeh saab itni asani se kaise solve kar deti ho kiya tumain bi ishq uwa hai

kashish : ishq , (smile) abhi tak to nahin uwa , abhi tak voh mister right nahin aya lekin mujhe pata hai ki ek na ek din woh zarur ahaiga

Girl : lekin tumain pata kaise chalegha ki voh hi hai tumara humsafar

Kashish role her eyes and smile : Voh tum uspar chor do (pointing toward the sky ) vaise voh chote chote ishare bejhta hai , vohi sari jodiyan banatha hai

Girl : hor aghar vo nahin mila

Kashish : iska sawal hi nahin utha , voh mile gha , ahaiga mujhe lene or apni kwabon ki dunyan main mujhe basa legha , bus todha sa waqt letha hai

Than kashish look up and say

Kashish : ziada waqt na lagana , abh usko ke do ki raj kumar apni shezadi ko lejahai doli main bitake

She close her eyes and smile

We see a man coming toward her and stop in front of her

The man smile

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
awesome part n promo
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
i just read ur fanfic and its amazing
i love kavya-anjali fanfics
and manthan fanfics
all the parts are amazing
hope 2 see roshni and manthan meet sooooon!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
awesome 2 parts and promo thanks a lot for update 👏

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