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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

and we see some scene of they masti and how they become bissness man (not really important)

NOW

sujal : shukar hai abh humne familly ko bata diya.

angad : us ladki ki bi shaadi hogi ,

kavya : shaadi ki baath se yaad aya sujal ticket kab ke bane bhoomi ki shaadi ki bhi tayariyen karni hai

sujal : kaal 9:00 AM

kavya : what 9:00 AM

manthan : hooo poor bacha bechare ko suba subah uthna pare gha

angad : bacha shaam ko packing kar lena

kavya make a puppy face

angad sujal manthan : nooo i am not going do pack for you

kavya :pleaseeeee

angad and manthan look at sujal

sujal : okkk main kar leta hoon

kavya : yeaaahhhh

manthan : haye biwi ho to aisi

sujal : shut uppp

angad : vaise kavya teri biwi bechari kider pass jahaigi

manthan : mujhe to lagta hai ki uski biwi hi usko zudare gi

sujal : yah phir vo kavya se bhi tez hogi

kavya : yeah right or tu bunty choop kar

angad : don't call me bunty

manthan : haan tho isko bunty bulane ka sirf bubli ka hak hai

sujal : hu??? yeh bunty bubli ki kiya baath hai

kavya : (explain everything)

sujal ; or tune yeh humse chupaya , maine tho socha tha ke yari main sabh kuch shair karte hai

angad : sorry yaar socha tha jab mili gi tabh batahon ga

manthan : yeah right

angad : sorry na

kavya : aise nahin chale gha

angad : to kaise chale gha

sujal : punishment

angad : ok kiya

kavya : tumain manthan ki daal khani pare ghi

angad : no wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cooking ka berager kar deta hai yeh

manthan : heyyyyyyyyy main cooking bhi thik kar leta hoon

angad : yeah right ek dafa itni achi ki ke kheer main sugar nahin salt daal diya tha

manthan : vo euu ...never mind its a punishmant

angad : yeh yaad rakna jaab tum sabko apni wali milli ghi na tab main bi dekhon gha , agar nahin kaha na tho isse kharoos punishment doon gha

sujal manthan kavya : hooooooooooooo (make jock of him)

sorry for this boring part

ho sakta hai ki kuch waqt ke liye main continue na kar sakon

kyonki internet nahin hoga i have to repaire something (my bro not me lol) so sorry but i think in 4 5 day depend anyway commentssssssssss

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

AUSTRALIA

anjali : hey yaar bhoomi ne kaha tha na ke uske ghar jana hai yaar uski shaadi ho rahi hai

roshni : ho haan yaar chal kaal chale ghe packing kar le

(bhoomi anju krips roshi or kashu se 2 ghante dur rethi hai)

kashish : chal kal shaam ko pohunch jahainge

kripa : i am drivingggg

kashish : ok meri ma

anjali : hey sirf ada raasta baki main

roshni : noooooooooooooooo

anjali : why

roshni : phir kissi na kissi se race lagao ghi , upar bejne ka irada hai kiya

anjali : (puppy face) puhleezzzz

roshni : don't do that with me

anjali (puppy face and baby eyes)

roshni : okkkk

kashish : (thinking) : gahai kaam se , abh mujhe phir se ulti ahaigi iske saath

anjali : nahin ahaigi

kashish : (shocked) : whaaaat

anjali : i read ur mind janu

kashish : haila

next day

it's 7:20

manthan : sabh saman rak diya

sujal : haan

manthan : nashta tayar

angad : haan

sujal : acha jaldi sirf 20 minute re gahai hai ok

angad : acha kavya tayar hai?

sujal : pata nahin manthan kavya tayr hai?

manthan : mujhse kyun puch rahai ho ?angad ne usse jagaya tha

angad : hu ? maine kab jagya sujal ne jagaya tha usko

sujal : hoye hero ko manthan ne jagaya hai mai...

sujal angad and maanthan : hooo shittttt...

they run up stair

they open the door its like they will broke it

sujal angad and manthan : KAVYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

kavya bed se ghir jaata hai

kavya : ouch ... tum sab ko kiya uwa? (sleeping tone)

than look at them

kavya : hooooo shittt

angad : yes

sujal : jaldi tayar ho

manthan : fast fast

they make kavya stand and directio him to the bathroom

kavya : hey mujhe pata hai bathroom kider hai guide karne ki koi zaroorat nahin

come at the bathroom door

kavya : hooooo... abh andar saath ane ka irada hai kiya

angad : hooo baby tumain khood tayar hona nahin atha

kavya : shut up bunty

angad give him a angry look

manthan : chal tayar ho

Australia

kripa : abh chalo bi yaar shoping karke phir shaam ko jana bi hai

anjali : okkkk

roshni : i am ready lets go

kripa : shukar hai 11 baje ready ho chuke ho

kashish enter in the house

kashish : chalo bi maine pura din car main nahin bethna

roshni : ok boss

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
gr8 part 👏
hope al da couples meet sooon in austalia 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
gr8 part!!!! loll every1 forgot 2 wake up kavya loll 😆
Wanted to ask, is there a main cuple in ur ff, or doa ll the characters hav equal importance????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
i read ur ff
its very good!contyinue soon!plzz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

gr8 part!!!! loll every1 forgot 2 wake up kavya loll 😆
Wanted to ask, is there a main cuple in ur ff, or doa ll the characters hav equal importance????

thanks

all caratere equal

maybe sometime i give kavya more inportance lol 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

DeeWane

in the car

phone ring

anjali : its mine

anjali : hello

anjali : haan veer

anjali : kab

anjali : lekin main to 15 din ke liye ...(a place in australia) ja rahin hoon

anjali : hey good

anjali : ok ek afte main

anjali : ok by

kashish : kiya uwa

anjali : a meeting agle afte

kripa : what?? lekin hum to bhoomi ke shaadi par ja rahai hai yaar

anjali : don't worry janu udar hi metting hai

roshni : kiya itefaq hai

anjali : yeah

kashish : ha gahai

In the mall

kashish : yaar mera maan kar raha hai india jane ka

anjal : mere dil ki baat ke di

roshni : yaar itne saal ho gahai india nahin gahai

kripa : to chalte haina yaar

kashu : sach main?

kripa : haan to vaise bi australia re kar bore ho chuke hai

roshni : haan to or vaise hamara kaam india main bi ho sakta hai jaise tumari company anjali india main chalti hai

anjali : haan ,yaar we should really think about that

kashish : tho bhoo ke shaadi ke baad hum is bare main soche ghe

anju : ok boss

india airport

manthan : bording 25 minute baad hai

kavya : whattt or tum saab ne mujhe aise hi suba suba doraya hai

sujal : bacha ji HUMAIN TORI PATA THA KI FLIGHT LATE HOGI

kavya : ho thik hai na isme chilane ki kiya baath hai, anyway i am hungry kuch khane ke liye kharid ne ja raha hoon tum log ko kuch chayen

manthan sujal angad : no

kavya ja raha hota hai

manthan : hey ek chocolate lana

kavya : ok

kavya phir jane ladta hai

angad : mere liye bhi chocolate

kavya : ok mera bacha

angad : hey main tere se bara hoon

15 min later

angad : yeh kavya abhi tak nahin aya

manthan : bording ke lie sirf 10 minute re gahai hai

sujal : chal dundte hai yeh na ho ke behosh ho gaya itne jaldi jagne se

manthan and angad laugh

manthan : u r too much

they go find kavya

5 minute later

manthan : haila kider gaya yaar yeh humain plane miss kara degha i am sure

angad : mil gaya

sujal : kider

angad pointing toward kavya and we see that he is flirting with a girl

sujal : bas koi aur kaam nahin hai iska

angad : she is hot

manthan : chup bunty ya phir bubli ko kahon ga

they go and take kavya by his arm

kavya : heyyy

sujal manthan angad rukh te nahin aur usko lekar jate hai

kavya : ok by honey

angad : number liya hai na

sujal and manthan: angadddd

angad : kiya yaar aise puch raha tha

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
aaaawwwwww di ..its very nice...plz do continue..its an awesum fanfic..i luv it 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

DeeWane

angad kavya manthan and sujal australia pouhunch jate hai

aireport main

saab ne bhag le liya hota hai

manthan : agar airhostest ke saath flirt karna khatam ho gaya to chale

kavya : haan to khab se wait kar raha hoon

angad : hey see bhoomiii

manthan : kahan kahan

sujal ; andhe vahan

manthan : hey bhooo

bhoomi run to them and hug them

bhoomi : so brothers how are you

S A M K : finee

manthan and bhoo parents come

played by karan and nandini

k : kaise ho tum sab

m : fine dad

they all take ashirwad

bhoomi : abh chalo bhi shaam ko meri friends bhi a rahi hai

Kavya : mmmm friendsss

bhoo : yes friendsss (gigle)

sujal : friends ko choro tumare hone wale vo kaise hai

bhoo have a sad expression

but nobody remark it because karan cut in to say that him and nandini will take one car and M B A K S take another car because he know that they want to talk

but kavya see bhoomi sad expression

kavya : (thinking) yeh bhoomi ko kiya uwa , kuch to garbar hai baad main punchon ga

in the car

angad : bhoo is your friend hot

bhoo : yes they are

kavya : are matlab ek se ziada

manthan : how kavya kitne akalmand ho gahai ho

kavya : yes jock tha

manthan : nahin jonck ta

sujal : my line

kavya : acha come back to your friendssss bhoo ,were will they stay

bhoo : hamare ghar main

kavya : ho we will have some fun

bhoo : i think ke they will have more fun they are really trick type u know

manthan : cooll

after some fun they arrived at their home

Edited by aisha1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Excellent parts jus read both of them... i found them really sweet!!!

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