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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee sisssss Me ceriously waiting for the next part pleaseeeeeeeeee post next part soon. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritu_the_gr8



ok...
i wanted to write a ff...
but my brother doesn't let mee....
he says these stories are just crap adn etc....
and soo he discourages mee.....
soo id ont think i'll write anything anytime sooon.....

hmm, I guess that is a problem, but no problem, when you grow a little older maybe he'll let you?

dont worry toots! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: aman123

Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee sisssss Me ceriously waiting for the next part pleaseeeeeeeeee post next part soon. 👏

ill be posting sooooon, im writing it right now 😃

thank you jaaaanuuuuuu sweeeetuuuuu!! 🤗

Edited by bollywoodfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

ill be posting sooooon, im writing it right now 😃

thank you jaaaanuuuuuu sweeeetuuuuu!! 🤗

Thnaks sissss I feel special.. BTW don't for get to have some Agni/Shorya chat today.. And teh whole Anu thing was awsomeeeeeeee.👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh yes me egerly waiting again. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continuing...

setting: a set of footsteps head straight to the last room at the end of the corridor, producing no sound. A while later, sharp knocks are heard...

But Niyati doesnt hear the quick series of raps on the wooden door behind. Her pale green eyes are glued on a small statue of a ballerina.

Her arms are outstretched in an oval over her thick head of black hair tied up in a bun. Her stunning pink tutu costume contrasts her pale skin. She stands on the very tips of her toes, but her face shows no trace of hardship, only a graceful and dignified smile and averted eyes.

Suddenly the knocking gets louder.

Niyati suddenly gets up from the bed in a quick fashion, hurrying towards the door.

She opens the door...

Anu: "Niyati? is everything okay?" asks a freshly risen Anu.

Niyati: "sorry yaar, I didnt even hear you knock..."

Anu walks into the room and sets the plate of breakfast she brought for Niyati on her desk.

Anu: "acha, why, what is occupying your thoughts more than me yaar?" asks Anu playfully.

But before Niyati can fathom a reply, Anu's deep black eyes fall on the ballerina standing on the dresser in front of the bed.

Anu: "Oh Niyati..."

Anu turns to Niyati, a look of extreme concern imbedded in her eyes.

Niyati: "im okay anu..." Niyati trailes off

Anu walks briskly to Niyati and huggs her deeply, rubbing her back as thought soothing her to sleep.

Anu: "Papa and ma ji..."

Niyati detaches herself from Anu and faces her back towards her.

Niyati: "I know..."

Anu takes Niyati by the shoulder and turns her to face her slowly.

Anu: "I know that theyre watching over you right now with such pride, love"

Niyati forces a smile

Niyati: "I know anu...now what did you bring for me?" she asks in a strained voice.

Anu can see that Niyati wants to let the subject go, so she obliges.

Anu: "an omelette and juice and trust me I did not make them, so you can eat them"

Niyati laughs and playfully hits Anu.

Niyati: "Dadi sa made them?"

Anu: "Yeah, she wants you to eat well this whole last day before you have to do your dancer's diet and what not"

Niyati and Anu look at each other and burst into a fit of laughter thinking about how concerned Dadi sa always got when it came to the controlled diets Niyati had to have in order to keep the dance training going.

Anu: "vaise, are you excited to start your dance training in college now? I am getting so excited and all I get to do is biology labs all day long."

Anu winks at Niyati.

Niyati smiles, but does not answer. She watches as Anu keeps on talking about how great it would be if she could dance well like Niyati, but she hears nothing but the flutters of her stomach.

She had thought about this all last night wondering if she would be able to stand up to the high standards of her new dance academy. She had never been in a group training scenario. She had had one guru who had taught her everything, but she had recently passed away and Niyati had been forced to search for a new guru.

Anu had told her about Mumbai Dance Academy. Niyati had been reluctant; she didnt want to start new, she was scared of what Mumbai might prove to be more than the thought of starting the dance training in the Academy.

But Dadi sa and Anu had told it was for her benefit and they wanted to see her be the world's best dancer. It was then that Niyati had realized no matter what, as long as Dadi sa and Anu were with her, Mumbai and the Academy could be overcome.

Anu suddenly snaps her fingers in front of Niyati's face.

Niyati: "oh!"

Anu: "kya yaar, you didnt hear any of that?"

Niyati slowly shakes her head.

Anu: "fine, but now you owe me a soda"

Anu sticks her tongue out at Niyati and runs out the door as Niyati starts after her. Both girls run through the vast corridor, their laughter overwhelming the echoes of their rapid footsteps.

Edited by bollywoodfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aman123

Thnaks sissss I feel special.. BTW don't for get to have some Agni/Shorya chat today.. And teh whole Anu thing was awsomeeeeeeee.👏

agni and shourya will come when college starts dont worry 😛

you make me feel special! 😳

thank you jaaaaanuuuuu 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aman123

Oh yes me egerly waiting again. 😆

updated! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part dia di.....
eagerly waiting for teh next part.....
continue soooooon
yea i hope my bro lets mee after i grow a lil...
anywaysss...
i g2g now...my daddy' home...
i wann spend as much time as possible with him....
sooo byeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila..........

that was soo great yaar.. that was too good..

and that anu bhi nah!! she kinda reminds me of you me!! hehee.. hmm.. what are you trying to say meri jaan.. hehe

ok.. can't wait to see what happens next..

hmmm... okay entering my dream world NOW!!

JOIN ME DIA!!!!!!!!

luv pri

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