AnD iT wAs ThE eNd..Or WaS iT?ak upd pg10

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

great part nisha di.....
awwww that was sad...poor kripa....doesn't remember angad or sahil....
pooor sahil...
continue soon......
and thanxx for keeping the promise..... 😃

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Neha

@miss_neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Gr8 part... luved it... waitin for u to cont

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Abhilasha

@MUNNIBABA2009

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

awww that was sad
yet awesomee....
nisha jaldi continue karo....
me waitinggggg.........

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nisha

@Anjaani_luver

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

only three comments in 3 daysss.... 😭
i was gonna continue on valentines day...but am reallysick... soo couldnt...now i feel much better soo will continue today....but i am really sad ...only threeee comments...???? 😭

Edited by Anjaani_luver - 18 years ago

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shraddha

@guju_girl1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

aww that song was so cute nisha can't wait for the next part 😊

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nisha

@Anjaani_luver

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

after that one meeting with kirpa.....tarun dint have teh courage to go meet her again...he wanted to decide what he wanted to say to her..... the truth?? but he dint want angad back in her life and ruin it again.....then he thought...he shouldn' be talkjig about ruining someone's life...when hehimself ruined nisha's life.....he rung the belll of nisha's house.... a sleepy nisha opened the door rubbing her eyes....

" tarun??? comeon in...." she let him in..... tarun sat on teh couch..... nisha who was just wearing a tank top adn shorts....grabbed her robe and wore it...adn settled herself next to tarun on the couch......" whats the matter??" she asked..... tarun just looked at her.....

" what is right??" tarun simply said....

" what do you mean??" nisha asked confused....

" what should i tell kripa...... should i tell her about angad....or---" he stopped....he knew she understood wahat he meant....

" well if i tell you ...you should tell her about angad...you might think i am taking his side since he's my brother..... and i cant say you should not tell her anything ....cuz i dont thikn thats right..... soo decision is all yours...after all its your life and your sister....." nisha answered simply... soo casually.. it hurt tarun...it hurt real bad.... just then they hear the door of one of teh room creak.... a small girl come out hugging her blanky... nisha quickly got up and waled upto her and picked her up.....

" whats teh matter jaan???" she sais as she rocked teh lil girl....

" i just had a night mare...." she said in a cute voice....

" awww......my bachha..... lets put you to bed....(to tarun.) excuse us tarun..." nisha walks into the room with the lil girl(pari) in her arms.....

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angad stood infront of that apartment.....he was here after threee years..... he took a deep breath... and rung the door bell..... a young girl opened the door..... she smiled seeing anad...angad smiled uncomfortably....." why did you wanna meet mee , nisha?" yes teh girl was nisha....

" come in bro...i'll tell ya" she got him in and they both settled themselves on teh couch......

" soo how did you call mee.... actually why did you call mee...after three years???" angad asked....

nisha frowned..... but she tried to keep herself koool.... " why....cant i even meet my brother....."

" well you had forgotten you even had one three years back...." he answered.....

" angad plssss....we are not here to discuss our lives..... i need to ask you something....."

" what???"

" do you still love her???"

anagd loked at nsha a lil shocked.... " why do you want to know??"

" just answer mee angad.... do you??"

angad lowered his eyes..... and nodded.....

" will you accept her if she wants to come back??" nsha asked again....this timeher voice was chocking......

a lil shocked and amused her asked" she wants to come back.....???"

" angad...stop questioning mee and answer..... will you???"

" ofcourse i will...i never wanted her to leave...i amde a complete fool out of myself doing verything i had done...... i want her back..... plsss tell mee nisha.... do you knwo where she is??? i miss her terribly....and even sahil...he misses his mom...." he pleaded....

nisha took a deep breath..."actually anagd---"

befor she could say another word.... the bell rung again....and nisha opened teh door...n came tarun... tarun and angad shared a disgusting smiel.... both never liked eachother.....

" did you tell him??" tarun asked nisha....

" iw as going to...." nisha answered calmly....

" ok...."

silence.....

" soo nisha what was it that you wanted to tell mee???"

" angad...we know where kriap si right now...." nisha said......angad's face lit up..... " well angad see 6 months back when she left you guyss..........'

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kirpa went straight away to nisha's place...... she ringed teh door belll.... nisha opened the door and found kirpa drenched in teh rain....

" kriap...come in..."

nisha got her in.... and as soon as they were inside kripa hugged her... and cried her eyes out...after all it was just nisha she could aways count on.....

" kirpa are you ok??? why are you crying...and what are these suitcases... kripa answer mee...." nisha said....

kirpa told her teh whole thing and nisha was shocked...she was out of town soo she dint know anythign about the whole divorc thing... nisha was shocked as hell.... she dint know what to do....

" an you know what teh worst part of this all is nisha??... i am pregnant...." kripa said between sobs and hiccups.... nisha hugged her again to calm her down....

finally after three hours of continous crying...kripa finally relaxed..... nosha claled tarun and he also came to know about everything.....

" tarun can i have your bike keys.....??"

" why??"

" i want to take a ride... and then i want to go somewhere.... plssssssss" she begged.......

tarun with heavy heart gave teh key...he knew somethign bad was coming up....

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" dr.nisha theres an emergency...... can you come to hospital today??actually rght now.???"

" ok...i'll be tehre....." she hung up.... and looked at tarun..."tarun there si an emergency at teh hospital...i gotta go...there is food in the fridge you can havewarm i and have it.... adn also give some to kripa as soon as she comes back.... and plsss if pari wakes up....can you look after her for sometime???" she asked.....

" sure...."

" thanxx...."

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END OF FLASHBACK

"..... and when i reached teh hospital...it was kriap who had that accident adn it was teh emergency...."

anagd was dumbfounded...." you mean....kripa.. is...was... pregnant...."

nisha nodded...." she is pregnant...."

" but...you said.... she was.... she cant... we cant... but...you...." he satmmered......" where si she now....."

" angad.... there is somethign else you need to know...." nsha added....

" what now??"

" kirpa has lost half her memory...."

" huh?"

" she doesn't remember she was ever married to you...or how she got pregnant..... sahil doesn't even exist for her..... and now since she is pregnant she is insisting us to tell her whose child is it..... " she said and sighed....

angad leaned back..... soo much happened and he cme to knwo about this NOW?...why?...he looked at nisha...adn he listened to everythig she said carefully...... tarun just rolled his eyes..... he couldn' stand angad.....

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kirpa was flipping through her magazines furiously.... noone...NOONE had talked to her for the past twelve hours...adn she was gettign really boreed adn mad..... plus her stomach was hurting a lil.... she was very uncomfortable.... just then the door opened slowly and she looked at teh door to yell at the first person who enters..... as she was ready to yell....she found herself staring at the most gorgeos eyes she had ever seen.... he walked towards her.... adn sat down next to her.....

" kripa......" he said slowly..almost whispering.... kirpa's heart skipped a beat.... but she ignoreed.... she just stared at him... and then finally managed to sopeak...

" who are you...and what are you doing here????" she asked furiously....

anagd had gone hrough before...soo he just smiled.....

" i am anagd...anagd khanna.... your husband....." he said casually......

kripa just stared at him in utter shock.....

preview: kripa's reaction...... kripa meets sahil..... tarun adn nisha's fight.....

noww plssssss comment guyss.....i mean only 3 comments through whole three dayss... that was not fair...at allll..... soo plssss comment....i wont make a condition like i want this many comment and the i wll continue..... i will continue anyhow....but you guyss discourage meee when you dont comment ... i feel like there is something wrong...and soooo plsssssssss comment.......... now next part will hopefully be on monday...adn you guys know...when i say i'll write on this day...i will write noo matter what....... soo since i always keep with my promise...you guss need to tooooo.....

Edited by Anjaani_luver - 18 years ago

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

AWESUM prt, it was REALLY interesting!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
continue soon!!!! 😃

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

its not that.. its just my laptop is a bit screwed so i cant comment everyone and yesterdy i had this BIG project so i didnt have time to comment ur last part..

continue sooon and dont feel discouraged.. i wil try to comment every part iff i have time.

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nisha

@Anjaani_luver

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: brainychild92
its not that.. its just my laptop is a bit screwed so i cant comment everyone and yesterdy i had this BIG project so i didnt have time to comment ur last part..

continue sooon and dont feel discouraged.. i wil try to comment every part iff i have time.

aww thanxxx.....
noo i dont mean you guyss need to comment like regularly cuz i understand...
hehe i read almost every ff....but you never see me comment.....
well thats cuz i am a lazy bum and my comp is screwed up...
soo i can barely log in to IF..... noo actualluy i can barely visit IF....
it takes ages to open one page......😡😡😡

and well i understand....
yea i just wanted to say that when lil people comment....
then i feel discouraged and look for mistakes i have made...
so that i can make it ebtter....
and in that process the story changes completely and turns out to be something else....
and that is pretty depressing that i thought of somethign and it turned out to be somethign else....
ok i am talking too much now.....bye bye
i am off to bed....
hehe sometimes i go to bed at around 1 and sometime i go to bed at around 8...
i am really tired....specially because i have been sick for a while...i fel really weak...sooo byeeeee

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mansi

@mansi1219

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#30

hey..

great ff... just read it.. ur really goood.. its really interesting so far.. hmm lets c.. y did they divorce? who is pari's dad? how did tarun mess up nisha's life? and offcourse whats gonna happen now.. lol i kno lots of questions.. well its a mystery soo far.. but its good..

aww dont get discouraged.. people will comment..

luv
mansi

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