AnD iT wAs ThE eNd..Or WaS iT?ak upd pg10 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
Hey,
I just read your fanfic andImust say it's very good! Continue soon as I lose track of what goes on real fast :) Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
awesome part!! ooooooo.... now things are getting clear... nisha was married to nischey.. or "is" married////wonder why they split up, or arent living together.... lol, kripa not beliving angad and angad calling her jannu, lmao 😆 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
luved this part.. jaanu my foot.. 😆

im really interested in kripas past and

tarun-nischey-nisha triangle.. cant waitt to find everying out!

continue when u can


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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
heyy, that was a really fantastic part
fabulous and well written
plz continue soon
i cant wait to read the next part
i really hope that kripa regains her memory soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey everyone...
sorry ..
i know i told you i would continue on wednesday or friday...
but have this stupid project to finish....
and my stupid sister deleted my story(ff) from the desktop...
cuz she found it crazy.... 😡 😡 😡
i wanted to smack her...
but what can i do... she is elder...
adn soo i have to write teh whole thing....
but i dont have any time to...
i can hardly visit IF...
well i might continue tomorrow tho....or ttuesday...
i cant promise...cuz the projest might take mee a long time to do....
i am not into reading books adn i need to writ 5page book report on some stupid book.. and also many thing....
ok soo i g2g now...
if my mom sees mee doing this...she'll kick my a**..
ok byeeee
soo hope i'll continue tomorrow... 😊

oh and yea...was thinking of starting another ff tooo...
dont worry will continue both on teh same day..adn long parts.... i am a fast typer...😳... can write really long thing...have already typed a book....one part is nothing for mee... well yea i need to think...but i can do it... ok sooo... shall i start a new ff....???? even if you say no...i willl..😉 ok sooo thats all i wanna say..... i'll visit later today.. and might right the prelougue of my new ff.....

ok then byeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
Edited by Anjaani_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
U DEFINITELY should start a new ff, please do, and update when u can.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
KooL!!!!! Dont worry cont wen u hav time, n u shuld start a new ff, i know itll be gr8 like this 1!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
KooL!!!!! Dont worry cont wen u hav time, n u shuld start a new ff, i know itll be gr8 like this 1!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
" i am not going to your house with you...." she said gritting each adn every word....

" well sweety.. its OUR house... adn oh yes you are going.... just think about sahil before you take any decision....." angad said and finally got a confortable posture..." goodnight jaanu...."

" jaanu my fooot...." she mumbled and went to sleep....

***********
it was around 11 in the morning.... nisha was waiting for tarun in the star bucks cafe... after waiting for a while... tarun finally showed up.... he quietly sat down across from her... they hadn't looked at eachother at alll... tarun's hair was messy and eyes were kind of swollon.... it was clear that he hadn't had any sleep ast night.... they sat in silence for a while... wehn nisha broke the silence..." i am sorry.." she said slowly...

tarun raised his head and looked at her..." for what??"

" for my behavior yesterday....i had just met nishchey...adn he was...(pause) i am sorry...." she just said that and a tear trickled down her cheeks..... tarun plaed his hand on her face and wiped her tears....

" you dont have to cry for mee.... i dont deserve it...." he said.... nisha shook her head.... tarun's hand was resting on her cheeks... he took his other hand and cupped her face...." whats wrong nish??"

" nishchey....lo-ve... pa-ri.... cust-o-dy.... wa-nts(sniff) tak-e her fr-om ....m-e... hat-e him...." she says almost not understandable.... tarun puts them all together and gets it.....

" nischey wants pari's custody???" he asks to be sure.... nsha merely nods.... and breaks down....

" yes-ter-day.. i... sorry... i was ... ju-st... sa-d... frust-rated... and..an-gry.... i too-k it ou-t on you.... (sniff...)i am...(sob) really sorry..." she said....

" noo i understand... i am sorry toooo... " he pulled her into his arms... and nisha cried her eyes out mumbling things like 'i am sorry','i hate nishchey','i love pari', 'he'll take her away from mee','help mee' etc...

***************

" good morning mamma!!!!" sahil jumped onto kripa's lap and gives her a big hug..... kripa smiles and hug him back.... " yayyy you'll go back home with us right???" he says as he pulls away.... kripa just nods... she still dint know how did she usually talk to him.... or how to talk to him... this was complicated.... she thought...." lets goo.... papa is already in the car... he took all your stuff from here... hes waiting.... he asked mee to bring you when you wake up..."

" ok... i'll change...wait here......." she slowly climbed out of the bed... went into the bathroom... changed into something comfy... and went downstairs with sahil... runnng and jumping all over teh hospital.... kriap remembered herself.... she remembered her mom... remembering her mom...she felt like crying... but brushed teh thought off and followed sahil to their car....

preview: a small union.... a new entry.... kripa back in teh hospital...!!!!

sorry for the reallly short update... but thats all i can write right now.... willl continue both my ff tomorrow.... actually i have threee ... two ff in this section... and one on KZK.... tomorrow will continue alll threeee..... and will write long arts for alll... now if my sister deletes my story(ff) again.. i am gonna kill her!!!!!! lol... i know i get too mad.. but really i will do somethign to her... anywayss... woww i am one heck of a writer.. cant stop myself... ok soo enjoy...welll try and enjoy this part.. i know it was boring and also reallyyyy short.... but really will write a long and interesting part tomorrow...
Edited by Anjaani_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
ur right it is a small part- but still GREAT.
CONTINUE FASTER please....

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