The Baby The end Pt40 Pg70 - Page 40

gr8 i just read it and the laksh's entry was awsome......just keep writing and i think the new entry might be a girl for laksh, may be kt....or someone else........

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Pari

Aww, YAY!! Great Entry.
😃 😃 Thankoo for using my Vid Avi .. 😆 😆
Please Continue Soon .. Can't Wait !! .. 👏

This is my first time commenting in your FanFiction's. And, they are AMAZING. WOW!!

You're like my fave writer now. i LOVE your ff's .. <3 .. ❤️ .. :)

Please continue soon, i cant wait !! .. :)

Hey this is my first time commenting on your ff and Lakshya's entry was awesome as others said!!Hope the another entry will be Kt's !!👏

Can't wait for the next part!!Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳

Originally posted by: Zinu29

Aww, YAY!! Great Entry.
😃 😃 Thankoo for using my Vid Avi .. 😆 😆
Please Continue Soon .. Can't Wait !! .. 👏

This is my first time commenting in your FanFiction's. And, they are AMAZING. WOW!!

You're like my fave writer now. i LOVE your ff's .. <3 .. ❤️ .. :)

Please continue soon, i cant wait !! .. :)

Great Part oooh another new entry who is it Kt lol bad joke.. but continue soon

xxAnuxx

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

what vid avi? 😕 sorry im confused

Anyways thanx to all the comments and the new readers, I'm always welcome 2 them😃 will try n continue today....

You know, when L's face is shown, and he turns?? that one, hehe..😆😆

thanx 4 the comments everyone....next part will b up 2moro since im soo tired right now... 😛

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

thanx 4 the comments everyone....next part will b up 2moro since im soo tired right now... 😛

v will b waiting..

o my gosh! lol i jus could NOT hlp maslf 4rm readin dis part, it sed "Lakshya's Entry" so... i jus couldnt hlp maslf! 😆 di, as u no, i dnt read dis ff.. but im sooooo glad i atleast read dis part, cos as evry othr part of any othr ff i had read of urs, its absolutly outstandin n i loved evry part 2 it. sure, sum of it i dint completly undrstnd - lyk d ganga stuf.. about how Jaspreet their daughtr n stuf, but oviusly i havent xakly read d whole ff lol ya get me..
BUT woman!!! I LOVE LAKSHYA! LOL u make him sound xtra HOT in dis part u'v written i mean quite a change 4rm wen i last pictured him as d cute, naughty Lakshya in "Runaway" but i can alredy tel dat bein again an only young, child.. hes probly jus as naughty, jus as cheeky, n ooooh--soooo-cuuuuuute! but, he's gona bcum a bad guy if ur sayin hes got plans 2 make Jaspreets lyf hell poor guy, n Jaspreet.. 😆
nyway, dis woz definately 1 kick-ass part!! LOVED it! Awesome writin di..! U rock!!
xx!MWAH!xx
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awwwww sazzy lol we all know how much u love lakshya 😆 😆 😆 lol its funny how i got more readers since lakshya entered but hey all the more is better 😛 sorry 4 not continuing yday....had my lil nephews 2nd bday party 2 attend to...neways i promise the part will b up 2day n ill make it long 😃