Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 31

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

HEY
great parts...cont soon

thanks..., ill update soon...

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

once again...a lovely part.... 👏 ..cont soon... 😊

yes... dear, i'l try n update soon..

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

awsome part ruku.. 👏 well ab to saima sab kuch bhulana chahti hai n dats good.. n rayan's just d perfect hubby n son ha.. 😆 loved the scene btw rayan n saima... 😳 😳
n dear the video too was awsome... 👏 👏 👏 me loved it..!!
update soon..

thank u so much dii.... its always a pleasure to read ur comments... yeah rayan's just d perfect one u see... n wid saima around he's bound to be perfect 😉 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

gr8 parts awesome FF👏 the relationship btwn rayan & saima is cute hope they both realize their luv 4 each other soon try to cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
cute part 👏 finally saima mein kuch akal aayi 😆 👏 👏 she wants to move on....that's a gr8 start 👏 👏 nd rayan is sooo loving he bought the shares 4 tripe amt just 4 saima👏 they look so sute together 👏 cont soon can't wait to know wht's this rishab is gonna do now 😡 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ruksaar i just read the last part. it was simply awesome yaar 👏 . very nice 😉 .good to see that rayan and saima are happy in their small world 😳 . i wish unn dono ki zindagi aise hi rahe ⭐️ aur koi problem na hi specially for the paper she signed as she doesn't know ki woh rayan ki majburi thi otherwise he is not like that 😭 . great part 👍🏼 .contineu soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
heyi ruku dear, continue soon... cant wait more nw..!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

gr8 parts awesome FF👏 the relationship btwn rayan & saima is cute hope they both realize their luv 4 each other soon try to cont soon

thank u so much..!! im glad u liked d ff.... 😳 n yes they both are yet to realise dat sweet lil feeling......

Originally posted by: Paru_M

cute part 👏 finally saima mein kuch akal aayi 😆 👏 👏 she wants to move on....that's a gr8 start 👏 👏 nd rayan is sooo loving he bought the shares 4 tripe amt just 4 saima👏 they look so sute together 👏 cont soon can't wait to know wht's this rishab is gonna do now 😡 😛

yes..., saima has made up her mind now, but lets see wat destiny has in store for them all...

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey ruksaar i just read the last part. it was simply awesome yaar 👏 . very nice 😉 .good to see that rayan and saima are happy in their small world 😳 . i wish unn dono ki zindagi aise hi rahe ⭐️ aur koi problem na hi specially for the paper she signed as she doesn't know ki woh rayan ki majburi thi otherwise he is not like that 😭 . great part 👍🏼 .contineu soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

awwww... im glad u liked d story.... thnks a ton..!! there'll be more twists n turns happening in their lives.... 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

heyi ruku dear, continue soon... cant wait more nw..!!

yes dii.., i'll be updating soon.. was busy wid my studies... but i'll try n update as soon as i cn..

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-24

Recap-
Koi nayi company Kanaka companies ka takeover karna chahti thi jisse Dadima kaafi pareshan hote hai per Rayan saari situation handle karta hai... Saima Rayan ko sab kuch batane ka faisla karti hai per usse kuch keh nahi paati.... Dadima hospital se ghar aate hai per Saima iss baat se bilkul bekhabar hoti hai.........

Story further...........
Next morning........
{it was early morning....... Rayan freshens up but Saima was still sleeping... He comes closer to her....., looks at her and smiles
gently}
Rayan: {to himself} kaash mere har din ki shuruwat aisi hi ho..... {smiles} pata nahi kyun per kahi na kahi, tumhare liye kuch mehsoos karne laga hu....., tumhari ek muskurahat ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.... har pal bas tumhare saath,
tumhare kareeb rehne ko ji chahta hai..... Ab to tumse dur hone ke ehsaas tak se darr lagta hai..... kahi main..... kahi main tumse pyar to nahi karne laga hu...... {laughs}
{just than Saima turns the other way}
Rayan: hmm..., lagta hai aaj madam ka uthne ka dil nahi hai.....
{saima rayan ki awaaz sunte hi aankhein kholti hai...... palatti hai to rayan ko apne kareeb paati hai..., per aaj wo usse dur nahi jaati per use dekhkar muskuraati hai}
Rayan: good morning
Saima: good morning..... {smiles}
Rayan: aaj ka kya plan hai?
Saima: kuch bhi to nahi...., bas wo......
Rayan: kuch kehna hai?
Saima: nahi..... aap kahiye
Rayan: to thik hai, soch raha tha aaj Dadima se mil aaye.....
{saima gets up quickly}
Saima: hum aapse yehi kehne wale the
Rayan: shayad tumhari aankhein padhna bhi seekh gaya hu....
{she smiles blushingly}
Saima: acha...., to aur kya kya kehti hai hamari aankhein?
Rayan: {looks straight into her eyes} har wo baat jo tumhare dil mein hai
Saima: hume nahi pata tha ki aap logo ki aankhein itni khubi se padh lete hai
Rayan: logo ki nahi, sirf....... Khair.....
Saima: hum zara fresh hokar aate hai....
{aur saima sharmakar waha se chali jaati hai}

At the dinning table............
Raina: Rayan i hope ki aaj tum free ho
Rayan: ji mama....
{tabhi Sahil waha aata hai}
Sahil: ex-cuse me! Sorry to disturb u all...
Rayan: are Sahil.., aao na
Raina: aur yeh? Sorry kisliye ha? Waise aaj to sunday hai? kahi tum dono ne office ghar mien hi kholne ka irada nahi kiya hai na?
Sahil: nahi Mam, aisa kuch nahi hai... Wo to bas kuch zaroori papers pe sir ke signatures chahiye the, to ek hi file laaya hu..
Saima: acha..., to abse bas tumhe Sir hi dikhayi dete hai ha?
Sahil: dekha sir, in sabne milkar aaj meri khichayi karne ka irada kiya hai...
Sidharth: per beta main tumhare saath hu....
Sahil: {turns around} thank you so much sir..., dekha aap logo, {laughs}
{sahil rayan ko bahar aane ka ishara karta hai, tabhi Saima Adi ke peeche dudh ka glass leke jaati hai aur Adi ko pakadne mein sahil ke haatho se wo file gir jaati hai.... Saima wo file dekhti hai, uspe Kanaka Groups likha hua hota hai..
Sahil jhat se wo file uthata hai}
Saima: sahil, yeh to Kanaka ki file hai na?
Sahil: ji bhabhi wo.....
{tabhi rayan waha aata hai}
Rayan: ha Sahil, kaho, kaunse papers hai?
Sahil: sir wo........ emmm.....
Saima: baat kya hai Sahil? Kal bhi tum kuch pareshan se the... tum kuch chupa to nahi rahe na?
Sahil: nahi bhabhi, aisi koi baat nahi hai.....
Rayan: ha Saima, aisa kuch nahi hai..... bas kuch papers hai. Tum ready ho jao tab tak main yeh kaam khatm kar leta hu....
{rayan aur sahil bahar chale jaate hai.... Saima kuch samajh nahi paati ki sab ho kya raha hai}
Sahil: bhabhi ko kuch nahi pata hai?
Rayan: nahi, kal mauka hi nahi mila....
Sahil: aur dadima ke baare mien?
Rayan: nahi, aaj unse milne jaa rahe hai... Per Dadima nahi chahte ki Saima ko kuch bhi pata chale
Sahil: ha, mujhse bhi wo yehi keh rahe the.... Acha, aaj wo Mr.Malhotra ka phone aaya tha.., Wo aapse milna chahte hai...
Rayan: aaj?
Sahil: ji ha.., sir mujhe to wo insaan kuch gadbad lagta hai.... Aur pata nahi kyun use aapki personal life mien itna interest kyun hai? Uss din bhi aapki aur bhabhi ki photo dekhkar baar baar sawaal kar raha tha....
Rayan: kya keh raha tha?
Sahil: bhabhi ke baare mein puch raha tha, ki yeh kaun hai, aur aapki shaadi kab hui.....
Rayan: hmmm..., thik hai main dekhta hu
{saima aur adi ready hote hai.., wo bahar aa hi rahi hoti hai ki use kisi ka call ata hai, jiske baad wo bilkul shocked rehti hai.... Wo jhat se bahar aati hai jaha Rayan aur Sahil khade hote hai...}
Saima: rayannnn....... wo
Rayan: kya baat hai Saima, tum itni pareshan kyun ho?
Saima: dadima ki tabiyat kharaab ho gayi hai..... unhe saans lene mein takleef ho rahi hai
Rayan: what? lets leave now....
Saima; per Adi
Rayan: use yehi rehne do......
{three of them immediately rushes to dadima's house..... As soon as they reach there, saima just runs towards dadima's room....}
Saima: dadima......, kya hua aapko?
{dadima was not able to breathe...., she couldnt speak a word...,just than the doctor comes...... he was just checking her......, Saima holded her hand tightly, but after a minute dadima stopped breathing completely... and than slowly closed her eyes...}
Saima: dadima..... dadima.., aankhien kholiyee......
doctor: i'm sorry, per she's no more.......
{saima, rayan and sahil were shocked..... They all were completely shattered..... They just didnt knew what to do......
For saima, it was the end of her world..... She just sat there, beside dadima...looking continously at her with absolute no expression....}
Rayan: aap phirse check kijiye doctor.., chahe to hum inhe abhi hospital le chalte hai....
Doctor: ab uski zaroorat nahi hai...., inki saasein tham chuki hai....
Sahil: per doctor yeh to......
Doctor: i understand young man..., per ab kuch nahi kiya jaa sakta.....
{saying this the doctor leaves..... Rayan ki aankhein gili thi.., aur Sahil bhi apne aapko rok nahi paa raha tha.... Per Saima ab tak usi shock mein thi.... Usi yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki dadima ab nahi rahe.... Rayan Saima ke paas jaata hai aur uske sar pe haath rakhta hai}
Rayan: Saimaa......
{saima palatkar rayan ki taraf dekhti hai..... }
Saima: kya hua.. hai? Aap ro kyun rahe hai....??? kuch nahi hua hai dadima ko... kuch nahi hua hai...yeh abhi aankhein kholenge..... yeh dekhiye,
{she goes towards dadima and shakes her, trying to wake her up}
Saima: uthiye na Dadima, yeh dikhyena Rayan khamakha ro rahe hai..., uthiye na..., inse kahiye ki aap thik hai, aapko kuch nahi hua hai...... uthiye na..... Dadimaaa...... please..
{rayan comes closer to her and huggs her, trying to console her}
Rayan: wo nahi uthenge Saima...., nahi uthenge ab.....
{and they both hug each other and cry bitterly..... Rayan tries his best to console Saima, but he himself coudnt stop his tears....
After a while he tells Sahil to inform everyone at home about Dadima...., Sahil calls up home and informs Mr & Mrs. Garewal about it...
Rayan just didnt knew how to handle this whole situation..., he could do anything but looking at Saima, her tears...... it made him feel helpless... he just couldnt understand how to handle everything, but he knew he was the only one now to look after Saima....
Saima was sitting there, crying continuosly..... Rayan looks at her and goes and sits besides her.... holds her hand}
Rayan: jaanta hu tumper iss waqt kya beet rahi hogi.... Per Saima tum akeli nahi ho...., main tumhare saath hu... abhi aur zindagi ke har kadam pe main tumhare saath hu... Kabhi apne aapko akeli mehsoos mat karna.... Dadima ko to wapas nahi laa sakta per unse kiya hua wada zaroor nibhaunga....
{saima hugs him, her tears just couldnt stop}
Rayan: bas Saima... sambhalo apne aapko....
{tabhi Mr and Mrs. Garewal waha ate hai... Raina ko dekhte hi Saima usnke paas jaati hai aur unse gale lagkar roti hai..
Sidhanth Rayan ko samjhate hai....}
Rayan: papa, dadi kaha hai?
Sidhanth: wo aur Adi ghar pe hai... Adi ko yaha laana thik nahi hoga, isiliye maa ne kaha ki wo Adi ke saath wahi rahenge
Rayan: hmmm.... hume Dadima ke antim sanskar ki tayyariya karni hogi...
{aur phir kuch der baad wo Dadima ke antim sanskar kar dete hai....}

At was nite time now..., Saima ab tak wahi dadima ke kamre mein baithi thi... bilkul gumsum si... Rayan waha aata hai... Saima ne apna bura haal bana liya tha... Rayan uske paas baithta hai...
Rayan: tum chaho to kuch din ruk jao....
{saima bas uski taraf dekhti hai, per kuch kehti nahi}
Rayan: yeh ghar bhi tumhara hai...
{tabhi kanaka ke manager mr.chopra waha daude daude aate hai...wo kaafi ghabraye hote hai}
Mr.Chopra: Sahiba bete..... wo..... kanaka mein.....
Rayan: kya baat hai Mr.Chopra?
Mr.Chopra: sir koi Mr.Malhotra ke lawyer aaye hai, aur wo keh rahe hai ki yeh company unhone takeover kar li hai
{saima yeh sunkar shock hoti hai}
Rayan: what? but how is that possible? aap chaliye main dekhta hu...
Saima: hum bhi saath chalte hai...
{and they both rush to Kanaka..... but on their way saima gets a call from some unknown person... who tells her that Rayan is cheating her, he has taken over Kanaka group of companies and he is responsible for Dadima's death.... Bofore saima could say anything call was disconnected... Saima just looks at Rayan, she couldnt understand what to do..... she believed rayan, but still....
After a while they reach kanaka.... Rayan just rushes in qucikly, while saima follows him.... Rayan calls up sahil and asks him to
get some files immediately.... after about 15 minutes sahil reaches there with some files.... Rayan was talking to the lawyer, Mr. Ahluwalia}
Rayan: yes Mr.Ahluwalia
Mr.Ahluwalia: Mr.Garewal, this company now belongs to RM industries...
Rayan: but how is that possible? Kanaka ko to maine takeover kiya hai....
{yeh sunte hi saima hairaan hoti hai.... use uss aadmi ki baatein yaad aati hai....}
Sahil: ji ha, aur yeh rahe saare papers..., Kanaka is now a part of Garewal Empire...
{the lawyer goes through the papers, just than he gets a call...}
Mr.Ahluwalia: well, mr.garewal, i'm sorry..... Kanaka garewals ka hi part hai... shayad mujhe kuch wrong information mili thi....
Rayan: its ok...
{mr.ahluwalia waha se bahar aate hai aur phir kisi ko phone karte hai}
Mr.Ahluwalia: yes sir, kaam ho gaya..... kuch naa hote hua bhi sab kuch ho gaya....
{and he leaves from there...
yaha ander saima ko kahi na kahi rayan pe shak hone laga tha.... use lagta hai ki dadima ki stress ki wajah
rayan ka kanaka ko takeover karna hi hai....}


..........End of part-24..........


Comments awaited..!!!


luv,
ruksaar


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Posted: 18 years ago
wow ruksaar dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood abbh yeh naya twist jo saima ko rayan keh khilaf badkah raha ....i hope saima ka trust na tooteh...great part contineu soooon 👏 👏 👏

happy friendships day... 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
grt part dear 👏
i hpe saima doesnt misunderstand rayan... n trusts him..
update soon...

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