*Do Anjaane* RA (pt 42/pg 74) updated!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kahish-rox

matlab wahhhhh jeee!!! 😃 loved it like anyfink!!! aweesomeeee!!!! doo continue...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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u started a new fanfic amazing sara 👏 sujal and shiv is so cute 😆 😉 😛 but poor kash 😭 😭 plz cont soon. its really niceee 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru_M

u started a new fanfic amazing sara 👏 sujal and shiv is so cute 😆 😉 😛 but poor kash 😭 😭 plz cont soon. its really niceee 😃

THanksss Paruu!!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 ff sara 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: A family talk was going on between the Garewal family…
Kashish feels suppressed as Savita doesn't love her… becuz she aint her real daughter.

Part 3.

Shiv and Cg were in the office. Sujal doesn't come to office, as he is not used to . Subah jaldi uthega toh ayegaa naa… hehe

Shiv: Dad… May I come in..??
Cg: oh c'mon.. yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai?? Come in. come in..
Shiv: yaaaahh…
Cg: bethoo
Shiv: kya baat hai Dad? Koi khaas baat??
Cg: haan bete…. Bohat hee khaas baat hai…
Shiv: kahiye…
Cg: hmm…(rests his back on the chair) wais eek baat bataoo… kya tumhein koi larki varki pasand hai?
Shiv: (blushes) jee Dad??
Cg: dekho beta… be frank.. agar pasand hai toh bata doo… Main naraaz nahi hoongaa…
Shiv: Daad! Aap toh jaante haina mujhe… main kisi ko kaise pasand ker sakta hoon…
Cg: beta, kisi ko pasand kerna koi paap nahi hai…
Shiv: I know Dad. But believe me… meri zindagi mein koi larki nahi hai…
Cg: chaloo.. yeh toh aur bhi achi baat hai…
Shiv: (smiles) waise aap mujhse aise sawaal kyuun poochrahe hain??
Cg: maine socha hai k ab waqt agaya hai k tumharii shaadi kerwaadii jaye..
Shiv: (stands up at once) yeh aap kya keh rahe hain??
Cg: Kyun? Maine aisa kya kehdiya?? Tumharey bhalley ki hee baat ker raha hoon…. Kharey kyun hogaye… bethoo bethoo..
Shiv sits..
Shiv: par Dad,…. Aapko nahi lagta k yeh bohat jaldi horaha hai?
Cg: bilkul bhi nahi…. Tum 28 saal k hogaye hoo… agar ab shaadi nahi kerogey toh kya burhaapey mein kerooge..?
Shiv: ab mera yeh matlab bhi nahi tha…
Cg: chaloo.. baaaki baatein car mein kerte hain…

Now, they are in the car…shiv is driving while Cg is sitting next to him…
Cg: larki bohat hee seedhi saadhi aur bholi bhaali see haii..
Shiv blushes… and feels shy
Cg: main uske pita shree ko bhi jaanta hoon…. Sundernagar mein rehtey hain wohh log…
Shiv: hmm..
Cg: unki ek choti see library hai…. Ghar mein uske pita, maa aur ek choti behan rehti hai…
Shiv: ohh.
Cg: mere ek dost ne mujhe uske baarey mein bataya…..Larki ne abhi abhi B.COM pass kiya hai…
Shiv: hmm…
Cg: dekho beta, humein apne liye ek sundar aur susheel bahu chahiye…. Aur mere khayaal se toh Muskaan se achi larki aur koi ho hee nahi saktii…
Shiv applies the break to the car… and it stops..
Cg: array kya huaa??
Shiv: Muskaan??????
Cg: haan… Muskaan… us larki ka naam hai…
Shiv: (smiles) hmm…
Cg: ab chalein??
Shiv: yaaah….

Now they reach home.
Cg: mere paas uski ek photo hai… agar tum chaho toh dekh sakte hoo…
Shiv: (glances at him)
Cg : yeh loo… dekh lenaa… aur apna jawaaab mujhe kal tak bata denaa…( he gets out of the car)
Shiv: par Dad,,,, kya Mom ko yeh larkii pasand hai??
Cg: haan… usi ne toh mujhe kaha tha is rishte k liye……(winks him and leaves)
Shiv: ( he had the photo in his hand… he turns it around and sees it.. It was Muskaan's photo. She was looking sweet as usual… he liked it too much)
Shiv: hmm… waise itni buri bhi nahi hai…. Dekhte k kya hota hai….

Muskaan was at her house. She enters her mom's room.
Muskaan: Maa… yeh aap kya ker rahee hai?
Savita: yeh dekh Muskaan… yeh joda… meri shaadi ka hai…. Maine apnii shaadi per yeh joda pehnaa thaa…
Muskaan: ohh…
Savita: main chahti hoon k tuu bhi apni shaadi per yehi joda pehne…
Muskaan: shaadi?? Aur merii??
Savita: haan…. (folds the suit) aur waise bhi aaj kal tere rishtey bohat zyada arahe hain….
Muskaan: (lays on the bed) mujhe nahi kerni abhi shaadi vaadii….
Savita: beta… har larki ki shaadi toh honi hoti haii…. Teri bhi hojayegii…
Muskaan: haan lekin abhi kitna waqt para hai Maa….
Mihir enters…
Mihir: nahi beta…. Waqt hee toh nahi hai humarey paas… teri doli vida ker k humein choti k baarey mein bhi toh sochna hai…
Savita: ( becomes furious) aaap sochiyegaa.. uske baarey mein… main toh sirf apni muskaan k baarey mein hee sochoongii…( she gets up and leaves )
Muskaan: maa….
Mihir: rehne de beta…. Usse samjhaane ki koi zaroorat nahi…
Muskaan: par baba…. Meri shaadi??
Mihir: (puts his arm around her neck) dekho beta…. Tumharey liye ek bohat acha rishta aya hai.. wohh bhi shehar se… barey ache log hain… bas ek baar wohh apni razamandi de dein, toh hum log unhein apne ghar bula leinge…
Muskaan: jee baba.. jaisa aap kahein….

Cut to the Garewals…
Sujal was in the Garden… playing with his cat, tuffy.
Shiv walks upto him
Sujal: (looks at him) kya baat hai barey bhaiiyya?? Kya soch rahe hoo??
Shiv: yeh larkii…(shows the pic to him)
Sujal: larkii?!?!?!?! Kaunsii!?!? ( he jumps on the pic)
Shiv: ahaan… itni jaldi nahi….
Sujal: yeh kya??
Shiv: pehle meri puuri kahani toh sun…
Sujal: (sits beside him) ok… sunaoo…
Shiv: dad aur mom ne mere liye ek larki pasand ki hai, Muskaan..
Sujal: hmm hmm… not bad…
Shiv: aur maine uski photo bhi dekh leee hai… waise dekhne mein toh theek hai parr…
Sujal: par??
Shiv: pata nahi wohh bhi mujhe pasand keregiii yaa nahi??
Sujal: yeh kya baat ker rahe hain?? Array aap toh laakhon mein ek hain… koi bhi larki aapko pasand kerne se inkaar nahi kersaktii…
Shiv: really??
Sujal: aha… jhooot!
Shiv: shut up…
Sujal: hahaha… hey tuffy.. come here…. ( the cat runs to him )
Shiv: tune isse dooodh pilaya ya nahi?
Sujal: haan pila diya.. ab yeh zara khelne k mood mein hai… main zara iske saath khel k ayaa…
Shiv: haan jaa..
Sujal: array lekin.. us larki ki photo toh dikha de mere bhaaai!
Shiv: aaj nahi… kal…! Jal phut yaahan se…
Sujal: huh.. theek hai theek hai.. chori se dekh loonga….
Shiv: abbey jaa naa…
Sujal leaves with the cat.

Cut to Sundernagar.

Kashish was writing her diary.
Kashish: "Pata nahi kyun, Maa mujhe pasand nahi kertiin.. unko khush rakhne k liye itna kuch kertii hoon… lekin har baar nakaamyaab hojaati hoon…. Aakhir kab tak main apni maa k pyaar se mehrooom rahoongi..?? Bauji mujhe itna chahtey hain… aur maa….. paata nahi meri zindagi mein aisa kaun ayega… joh mere is pyar ki kami ko door kerdegaa… kaun hoga wohh…"

Sujal: Main hoon naa ! ! !
Dolly: oh c'mon Sujal… ( hehehe.. dolly is one of the girls who go out with sujal… both are having a convo in the car..lolzz..)
Sujal: kya matlab?
Dolly: yeh teesre baar hai jo main tumharey saath date per ayeee hoon.. lekin har baar tum mujhe bore hee kerte hoo…
Sujal: acha… mujhe ek baat bataoo… main aisa kya keroon jis se tum entertain hosakoo?
Dolly: oh c'mon… yeh bhi mujhe batana hogaa??? U are a guy… tum mujhse behtar jaantey hoo Sujal..
Sujal: definitely not! Kyunk main us type ka larka nahi huun….
Dolly: huh!!! Wht do u mean by tht??!? Do hell with it…. Im going! Bye !! (she gets out of the car)
Sujal: yeaa.. whtever… get lost! Tumharii zaroorat kisi hai?!?!?!?!?

Shiv calls him…
Sujal attends it..
Sujal: helloo..
Shiv: haan kahan hai tu?? Hum tera wait ker rahe hain??
Sujal: haan… aaraha hoon … bye…( he hungs up )
Shiv: ajeeb hee hai yeh…


Do comment... luv yaaa!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sara dear awesome part tooo gooooooooooooooood your fic rocks yaaar continue soooon me waiting 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesom part sara 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
do cont.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Thankss Honni and Janu!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
gud story and ill be waitin eagerly for it! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 ..sorry for commenting late....just caught up with the last twp parts.....very nicely written hehehe.....story bari dilchasppp hai.. 😉 😉 .jaldhi se continue karna... 😳

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