Maine Dil Tujhko Diya- *NOTE* - Page 7

ok guys! fianlly finally! i am back with the update! hope you enjoy this part!! i am so sooooorrrryy to keep u guys waiting but this part is going to be worth the wait because their are some really cute angad kripa scenes! enjoy
(remember the last scene in the last part, well i changed it a bit and made it the next day.but it is still continued)

PART 5

RECAP: the sharma family enter the khanna mansion and are welcomed very sweetly!

Cont. from last part…

The next day…

As angad and kripa come out of their rooms, they bump into each other. Kripa is about to fall when angad catches her. They stare at each other.

(slow male-female version of kaisa ye pyar hai starts)
B=boy G=girl

B- Tha paas sab mere, par kuch kamisi thi…
Tere bina zindagi suni suni thi…
G- Dhonda tha jisko hamesha, shayad who sapna ho mera…
B- Meri kahani ko pura kiya jisne, shayad tera saath hai…
G- Kaisa ye pyar hai…
B- Kaisa ye pyar hai…
G- Kaise ye pyar hai…
B- Kaisa ye pyar hai…

Angad and kripa kept starring at each other. They didn't even notice that Josh was standing there laughing at them. Then josh knocked off the plastic vase next to him and after hearing the sound of the vase hitting the ground, angad and kripa came out of their trance and angad accidently let kripa go and she fell down on the floor. Angad started laughing. Josh tried to control his laughter but couldn't. kripa was mad…

Kripa: Chup! Mein yaha gir gayee aur tum dono haas rahe ho. Khaas to tum (looking at angad).

Angad: meine kya kiya!?

Kripa: Tumhi ne to mujhe giraaya! Aur upar se pooch rahe ho ke kya kiya. Tumne mera haath kyu chodda.

Angad (teasingly and being flirty): Agar tum chahti ho to mein tumhara haath kabhi nahi chodoonga.

Angad actually realsied what he had said (even though he said it teasingly).
He and a surprised kripa looked at each other but then immediately looked in the other direction. Kripa got up and with an awkward expression and feeling went back to her room to treat her heart back. Josh had realized what was going on as kartik had also told him about the airport incident. Angad and josh looked at each other and an embarrassed angad went straight to breakfast.

Josh was left there alone…

He said to himself: kuch to hai! Lagta hai kuch karna padega!

Kripa, after a while, came to breakfast.

Naina: kripa beta tumhari raat kaise goozri.

Kripa: acchi thi aunty…

She gave a side glance to angad…

Naina: Good, ab ye nashta karlo.

Dilip: Aur phir sab baccho kaam par lag jao. Kartik aur mishti ki shaadi 1 week mein hai. Tum baccho kaam karo aur hum adults baahar ghoom kea ate hai.

Kartik, mishti, prithvi, kripa, josh, aaliya and angad were shocked and mad.

Prithvi: That's not fair, uncle. Hame hi kyu kaam karma pade.

Kripa (who was a bit more understanding): Prithvi, its ok! Hum manage kar lenge. Waise bhi inhe ghoomne jaane ka waqt kaha milta hai.

Angad (who just wanted to contradict kripa): lekin hame iskeliye kyu kaam karma chahiye. Hame bhi ghoomne chalna hai. Sab ko help karni chahiye isiliye yo log kahi nahi jaayenge!

Kripa: Jaayenge!

Angad: Nahi Jaayenge!

Kripa: Jaayenge!

Angad: Nahi Jaayenge!

Kripa: JAAAAYYYEEENNNGGGEEE!!

Angad: NAHI…

Naina: Ok baba! Ok! Bas karoye jhagdaa. Agar tum dono issi tarah jhagadne wale ho to phir behtar yahi hai ke hum bahar na jaaye!

Dilip: Waise bhi mein mazaak hi kar raha tha.

Angad was happy not because the adults were not going out but because he had won-against kripa!

Kripa just gave him a frustrated look. Everyone except her left the table. Just then…

Aaliya: Kya kripa! Tum dono itni chotti si baat ko leke jhagdaa karne lage.

Kripa: Jhagdaa Angad ne chaloo kiya meine nahi!

Aaliya: Ok! Ok! Chill out.

Naine came by…

Naina: Aisa kerte hai ki aaj hum koi kaam nahi karenge aur phir kal kaam shuroo karenge. Now come on! Tum dono mere aur gayatri ke saath shopping karne aarahe ho!

Aaliya and kripa's faces lighted up…

Aaliya and Kripa: YAY!!!!

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While shopping…

Gayatri: Dekho kripa ye dress acchi hai.

Kripa: Nahi mama. Mujhe uska color pasand nahi aaya.

Gayatri: To phir ye waali.

Kripa: Ye waali bhi nahi pasand.

Gayatri: Offo! Koi to dress tumhe pasand hogi.

Aaliya and naina were standing next to them, picking out dresses and getting entertained by watching the mother-daughter argument over dresses.

Just then….Angad and Prithvi walk into the store..

Gayatri: Angad! Prithvi!

Kripa, aaliya and naina look up to see angad and prithvi.

Naina: Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho? Tum dono ko to shopping bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti.

Prithvi: Aunty, uncle ne hame yaha zabardasti bheja hai.

Naina: kyu?

Angad: kyunki hame aaj surprise call aaya aur pata hai kiska? ANITHA ka!!! Aur usne kaha ke who kal hamare ghar aa rahi hai!!!

Aaliya and Naina (shocked out of their wits): KYA?!?!?!?

Naina: Oh no! who kyu aarahi hai! Ugggghhhhh…

Aaliya: Wow mom! Never seen you like this.

Naina: Agar koi bhi insaan Anitha ko jhel sake to woh insaan duniya mein kuch bhi kar sakta hai!

Aaliya, angad and naina giggled. Kripa, gayatri and prithvi giggled too but they were a little lost. Aalya saw this…

Aaliya (to K, G, P): Ye Anitha meri mausi ki beti hai. She is such a pain! Hamesha hamare ghar hoti hai.

Naina: Mujhe ye nahi kehna chahiye lekin seriously! Who tumhara deemag pakaa degi!

Angad: Aur dad ne hame maharani ji ke liye kuch gift kharidne ke liye yaha bheja hai so that hamari maharani saahiba aate hi complain na karne lage.

Gayatri: Tum dono boys akele kaise gift pick karoge. Aisa karo kripa ko bhi saath le jao. Who tumhe bhi help kardegi aur khud bhi apne liye kuch le legi kunki clearly usse who kuch bhi pasand nahi ko mein pick out karti hoon.

Angad (looking at kripa): I hate fussy people.

Kripa made a face at him. Angad giggled. He loved teasing kripa.

Kripa: Aaliya rum bhi mere saath chalo kyunki I don't think mein inn do bandaro ko akele handle kar sakti hoon.

Prithvi: Bandar!

Angad: Bandar!!

Prithvi: Bandar kise kaha!

Kripa: tum dono ko hi!! Hahahahaha…

Aaliya started laughing too…

Aaliya: good one kripa!

Angad: Bandar ki bacchi! Hum abhi tum dono ko bataate hai ki hum Bandar hai ya phir sher(lion)!

And angad and prithvi start chasing kripa and aaliya. All four run around the store like kids. Finally, Angad gets hold of kripa.

Kripa, scared, put her hands on her face. Agnad was about to hit kripa with his hand (of course not seriously) but stopped. She looked so innocent and beautiful, he couldn't do it. kripa peeked in between her fingers and saw that angad was not going to hit her. She removed her hands from her face and yet another short starring session.

Then…

Kripa: Tum ruk kyu gaye? Himmat hahi to maro.

Angad: Theek Hai!

Kripa: Kya! Tum ek ladki pe haath uthao ge! Fine! Just do it besharam!

And she closed her eyes. Angad just couldn't stop looking at her. She was so pretty. Then he said…

Angad: Rehne do! Rehne do! Mein apne haath gande nahi karma chahta!

Kripa, surprised, opened her eyes…
Angad turned around and started walking towards where aaliya and prithvi were…

Kripa: Huuuuuhh! You…

Angad kept walking…

Kripa: you idiot! You scum! Monkey! Donkey!......ugggghhhh.

Angad a bit arrogantly yet sweetly giggled and just went to were Prithvi and Aaliya were.
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Ok guys! This is it. I hope you enjoyed it! again I am sorry for the wait.

Preview:
• More fun scenes between Angad-Kripa.
• Hatred getting less between them and a question rising "Kya yehi pyar hai?"
• Anitha (negative) enters!

OMG. hey was dat one scene 4m mohabattein? the xact same scene was in dat movie. luved dat part. cont soon. 😃

aww...thanks so much for such a sweet update.. 😳
plz post the next one soon...

Awesome part.... let me guess anithhaaaaaaa will h8 kripa n wont let A-K cum together!!! 😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part.... let me guess anithhaaaaaaa will h8 kripa n wont let A-K cum together!!! 😆

u'll see...this story just might take a twist...anyways thanks for everybody for all the nice comments😊

i will prob. post the next part this weekend. just to let you guys know! 😊

awsome part i love the way they fight 😆 its really cute

thanks everyone for your comments i am almost done writing part 6 so it should be posted in couple days 😃

Hi guys! thank you for all your kind comments. i really apriciate it. i am back with part 6 today. i hope you like this part. so ENJOY!!! and oh! HAPPY HOLI!!!!

PART 6:


The next morning...

Angad is sleeping peacefully. He is dreaming about something. A girl perhaps. Yes, a girl in a salwar kameez sitting a rock, throwing small pebbels in the blue river. angad can't see her face but he can tell that she is pretty. He walkes upto her and is about to touch her when he is suddenly woken up by a sound coming from the mandir downstairs. It is a girl singing.
He hears a beautiful voice...
(hope you guys know this prayer.)
Girl: Om Jai Jagdish swahare...
Swaami Jai Jagdish Swahare...

Angad: oh god! ab ye subhe subhe kaun aarti(prayer) gaane laga.

To find out, Angad went downstairs to the mandir. He saw a girl singing aarti in a cute cream colored salwaar kameez. she was singing sweetly. Angad went up to her and stood behind her.

Girl: Bhakta jano sankat..
Shanme door kare...
Om Jai Jagdish swahare.

After the girl finished, she turned around and it was kripa! when she turned, she got shocked to see Angad right behind her.

Angad was surprised too! because one that she was a good signer and secong...that..that..she was kripa!

Angad: to tum ye bhajan wajan gaa rahi thi?

Kripa: tameez se baat karo angad. tum bhagwan ki baat kar rahe ho, samjhe.

Angad: lekin tumhare issi bhagwan ne aur khaas kar tumne mujhe jaldi ootha diya. Aaj tak hamare ghar me itni jaldi kabhi bhi aarti puja nahi hui. Mom bhi aarti late hi karti hai so next time itni subhe me mujhe aarti ki awaaz sunayee di to mein..to mein...kuch karunga.

Kripa: ha ha ha! tum kuch nahi kar sakte. mein to roz issi waqt puja karoongi. I don't care if you it or not.

Just then naina walked by...

Naina: Arree kripa beta... tum itni subhe mandir mein puja kar rahi thi?

Kripa: ji aunty. mein apne ghar roz subhe ooth kar puja karti hoon. aadat si jo gayi hai. i hope you don't mind, aunty.

Naina: oh! not at all. Infact mujhe lagta hai ke ye bohot accha idea hai. Kal se hum sab ghar ki aurate (ladies) issi waqt puja karenge!

Kripa: Sure aunty!

Kripa then happily looked at angad. she sees angad with a KYA??? expression on his face. Kripa loved it.

Angad: Par mom...aap late bhi to puja kar sakte ho.

Naina: nahi Angad! I like kripa's idea.

Angad looks at kripa with a frustrated and disgusted look on his face. Naina, then, goes from there leaving Angad and Kripa alone.

Angad (to himself): Kya ek kaafi nahi thi ke ab saari aurate saath puja karenge. Meri neend to gai.

Kripa: kuch kaha tum ne! ( teasing)

Angad: ugghhh..nahi and just shut up!

Angad starts to walk away but...

Kripa: ek minute angad...tum prasad nahi loge. ye lo prasad. tumhe zaraa akal degi aur waise bhi tumhe prasad lene ki to aadat daal leni hogi kyunki har subhe tum aarti se jaag jao ge aur phir neeche aao ge.. prasad lene!

Angad gave her a " not so funny" look and stormed off with a defeated look. Kripa laughed innocently.
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Later, that day at around 1:00 in the afternoon,

Everyone in the house was doing something or the other. Kripa was in the kitchen, cooking.

Mishti comes...

Mishti: Hey kripa! tum yaha ho. sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai.

Kripa: Kyu?

Mishti: oho! tum bhool gayee. hume shaadi ke hall par jaana hai, decorations or preperations karne. tumhari behen, meri shaadi hai! itna to yaad rakho! ha!

Kripa: Sorry, woh actually kya hai na ki main ghar ke kaam mein busy ho gai...mein 1 minute mein tayyaar ho ke aati hoon.

mishti: Ok! come fast.

Kripa doesn't take a minute. she actually takes like an hour to get ready. When finally she comes out of the house, she sees no one.

Kripa: Oh no! lagta hai sab mere bina hi chale gaye.

Just then she hears a throat clearing sound from behind her and she turns around. She sees Angad! with his back leaning towards the car.

Kripa: tum yaha! mujhe laga sab chale gaye.

Angad: sab chale hi gaye hai. sirf mein yaha hoon. tumhe le jaane ke liye.

Kripa: tum mere liye yaha ruke! thanks

Angad: yeah yeah sure. Ab chalo warna hamare jaane se pehle woh log wapas aajayenge.

the whole way to the hall kripa was thinking "how sweet of Angad ke woh mere liye ruka. lekin kyu? woh kyu mere liye ruka? jo bhi ho at least usne mera wait kiya."
Kripa was a bit confused. Angad also thought "Kyu meine iskeliye wait kiya? aisa kya hai kripa mein jisne mujhe uskeliye wait karne par majboor kar diya?"
Angad was also confused.

They reached the wedding hall soon. When angad and kripa entered, everyone was already working. then aaliya came up to them.

Aaliya: Chalo chalo kripa! tum mujhe aur mishti ko mishti ki dress pick karne mein help karo na!

And she dragged kripa away from Angad where the dress guy was at. Kripa,when aaliya was taking her, looked back at angad who was looking at her too. both had a " i don't feel like leaving you" expression on their face for some reason. They didn't understand why. Angad went on to decorate the hall with the otehr guys.

As kripa was helping Aaliya and mishti, she kept looking at angad. Angad alsokept looking at kripa as he was settingup the mandap.
Simultaneously, we see a mercedez pull up in front of the wedding hall and a girl steps out. She is waering high heels, a jean mini skirt and a pink spaghetti strap shirt. We can't see her face. she starts to walk towards the hall enterance. Everbody inside is busy in their own work but are interrupted by a voice.

Girl: Hi Everybody!!!

Everyone turns to see the person and its non other than ANITHA!!

Everybody's faces, especially Dilip, naina, kartik, josh, angad, and aaliya's, are shocked and horrified (in a funny way)

Angad: oh no!

KRipa, being the nice person she is, walks up to her.

Kripa: hi! i am kripa.

Anitha: Excuse me! mein servants se baat nahi karti.

And she walks off to naina who is shocked as is everyone else. KRipa looks as if she is about to cry. Angad gives a sorry and sypathetic look at kripa.
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Preview: Anitha being mean
Angad-kripa falling in love.

Ok guys ! this is it. i hope you like this. and once again HAPPY HOLI!! and have fun.
( sorry i couldn't put anitha's pic cuz the computre wouldn't let me for some reason)
Love,
Saloni 😳

Excellent part!!!! I dont like this anithaa already... like the things between A-K tho!!!! They r fallin in luv... sooooo sweet!!!!! 😳