Maine Dil Tujhko Diya- *NOTE* - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ice _girl

gr8 part but A is a rokstar so did K not see his photograph anywhere dat she did not recognize him 😕 😕

kripa kind of knows what he looks like but she doesn't like his music so deosn't even pay attention to him

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome 👏 👏 Do Continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you guyz for all your comments and those of you who read but don't leave comments, well thanks to u to but please comment cuz it encourages me! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will cont. soon maybe tomorrow! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was a great part...plz plz plz continue soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ill cont. on tuesday. i am sorry for the delay guyz!! but i was busy. i know i haven't updated for a long time but believe me i have been working on part 4. i would have updated tomorrow but i am going to on a trip so i won't be able to. so if you guys can just wait till tuesday then it'll be great!

love,
Saloni 😳
Edited by spring92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys! i am back after a long long long long time i know but i had a family emergency so i couldn't but i am here with part 4 today and i hope you like it. ENJOY!

PART 4:

cont...from last time....

RECAP: Angad and Kripa meet each other.

Angad: omg! ye to wahi ladki hai.

Kripa: omg! ye to wahi ladka hai.

Suryaban, gayatri, mishti and kripa walk towards the khannas. while suryaban, gayatri, and mishti exchange hugs with the khannas, kripa and angad just stare at each other in a shocked way. then...

Kartik: Kripa!!!

and waves towards her. kripa gets out of her trance.

Kripa: Kartik!! hi!

she runs towards him and gives him a big hug.

Kripa: Kaise ho kartik! long time no see.

Kartik: i know kripa. tum to kabhi yaha hame visit karne aati hi nahi ho. tum itni busy jo ho.

Kripa: nahi kartik aisi koi baat nahi hai. mein yaha pe kabse aana chahti thi lekin mummy papa ne kaha ke tumhari aur mishti ke shaadi ke waqt he aayenge.

Angad was looking at all this and was surprised to see that his family and kripa were so close and that kripa was actually nice to them.

Kartik: anyways, kripa yeh hai mera bhai Angad jo america se kal hi aaya. remember him. tum dono jab chote the tab kitna khelte the aur ek doosre ko pareshaan bhi kitna karte the.

Kripa and Angad look at each other. they did remember each other.

Angad hesitantly and bit arrogantly said: Hi.

Kripa also hesitantly said: Hi

Kartik noticed that they weren't too happy to meet each other but he let it go. kripa then went to meet dilip and naina.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >

Then outside in the parking lot of the airport....

Naina: aisa kerte hai ki hum char iss gaadi mein chale jaate hai aur Angad aur Kripa uss gaadi mein.

Angad: par mom...

Kripa: par Aunty...

Naina: par war kuch nahi. mujhe gayatri aur surya se dher saari bate karni hai. chalo ab jao.

Angad and Kripa look at each other angrily and then walk towards the car...

Angad drives really fast so kripa gets irritated and scared...

Kripa: tum gaadi dheere nahi chalaa sakte.

Angad (Angrily): mein gaadi aise hi chalata hoon aur mein tumhare liye meri aadat nahi badloonga.

Kripa: uggghhhh...

Kripa just makes a mad face at him and turns her head away. Angad giggles at this. he found it funny but tried to control his laughter. Kripa heard his giggle..

Kripa: tum has rahe ho?!?!

Angad(controlling his laughter): nahi me kaha hasa..

Kripa: uggghhh!!

Angad(quietly): haha!

He thought: teasing kripa is fun!

The rest of the way angad and kripa didn't talk to each other but they kept looking at each other from the corner of their eyes.

(did they feel something for each other?)

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soon both the cars reached home...

Angad and Kripa get out of the car and go to the trunk of the car. both of them bend down to get the same bag and their hands touch. they felt a spark in their heart. what was it? they thought. angad and kripa kept staring at each other until kartik came and took the bage himself. he giggled which ended angad and kripa's staring session. they felt awkward and just walked towards the door.

As soon as the sharmas walked in ,confetti fell from the sealong and josh and aaliya were standing their with a banner that sai "WELCOME!"

Kripa, prithvi, mishti, suryaban and gayatri were very happy.

Kripa ran towards Aaliya and hugged her.

Kripa: Aaliya!!! meine tujhe kitna miss kiya. ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi.

Aaliya: Kripa! tu meri best friend hai aur tumhari family meri family jaisi hai to mein itna to kar hi sakti hoo na.

Gayatri and suryaban: thanks beta

Aaliya: no problem

Kripa turns towards Josh and hugs him too.

Kripa: thanks to you too josh! you are a sweetheart.

Josh: no probs kripa! tum meri dost ho so no thanks and no sorry. remember! aur ha sweetheart to mein hoo hi.

Everyone started laughing. Angad kinda laughed. He saw the closeness between his siblings and kripa and how well they got along. then why didn't kripa and him get along?" maybe she just wasn't his type" he thought.

kartik saw the puzzled angad staring at kripa in an awkward way.

Kartik(to Angad): kya hua angad! mein airport se dekh raha hoo ki tum kripa se milke itna khush nahi hoo.

Angad: ab kya batau. mein tumhe bataaya tha na uss ladki ke baare mein jo mujhse airport par takrayee thi aur humne jhagdaa kiya tha..

Kartik: haan haan ! woh "stupid" ladki..

Angad: woh aur koi nahi par kripa thi.

Kartik: kya?? are you serious. matlab milke hi jhagda shooru kardiya. tum dono bhi na. bachpan mein jaise the waise hi raho ge.

Angad: you know mujhe ye kripa acchi nahi lagti lekin usme kuch baat hai.

Kartik: kripa is a very sweet girl.

Angad: ya ya watever! jo koi dekho kripa ki tareek karta hai. hum bhi dekhenge ye kripa hai kya cheese.

just then...

Naina: ok! ab aap log fresh hojaye aur hum bhi fresh ho jaate hai phir hum sab dinner kar lete hai.

Everyone goes to their rooms. Aaliya shows kripa her room which is right next to angad's. as kripa and angad are coming out of their rooms they bump into each otehr and kripa is about to fall when Angad catches her.

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Ok guys this is it for now! i hope this part was worth the wait. you can see know that kripa and angad are getting to know each other better. not that well yet but soon the will.

Preview: Kartik and Mishti"S wedding. Angad and Kripa get closer😳

Edited by spring92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
KOOL PART!!!! hope they will not h8 each other
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. that scene where kripa falls and angad cathces her is a classic. its so cute. can't wait 4 angad n kripa 2 get closer. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. that scene where kripa falls and angad cathces her is a classic. its so cute. can't wait 4 angad n kripa 2 get closer. cont soon. 😃



well... great part.. and the reason i quoted wat u said.. the classic thing.. did it happen in the KYPH? i wanna c lol.. it is a classic thou.. lol

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