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Posted: 18 years ago
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luks really intersting plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you Kaira and sweet_51_girl, The next part is here as promised. 😃
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The golden moments –Chapter One.

She looked at herself in the mirror, what would she answer her to be husband? That's she's already taken by an un-known stranger. Who she can barely remember? It's only been seven days, if only at that time she would have realized that she no longer had to wait anymore. All her dreams would have been accomplished. It is so wired when you think you want something so badly, you cross any paths to do it. Later on you see the opportunity coming to you and then you regret it why didn't you just wait a little.

What would he think of her, nothing but a selfish cheap striper who goes to sleeping around with UN known strangers?

"This is it, the moment you've been waiting for" cried Aaliya with happiness and excitement written all over her face. "He exactly looks like your prince charming and you're looking prettier than Cinderella. I am telling you he won't be able to resist you tonight" she teased her. She looked at her wedding dress that was maroon with golden embroidery, the dress was a touch of traditional and modern look, and it was simply stunning. "Where did you get this dress from?"

Kripa flashed a smile to her, "you're supposed to be helping me not make me nervous" she said. Only if she could pour her heart to her then she'd realize how hard her situation is.

"You're bound to be nervous" she said putting a duputta on her forehead and looked at her through the mirror. "It's normal, I bet you're more nervous about your wedding night" she teased her.

She rolled her eyes and flashed a grin to her, "I'll remember to make you hell of nervous on your wedding with Prithvi" she said, adding a teasing tone to the name.

She watched, colour run to her cheeks, from the mirror, "Someone's blushing!"

"O.K you got the revenge from me, happy! How do you know it was Prithvi" she asked curiously.

"It's too obvious the way you react when you see him or hear his name"

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She sat down next to her be husband in mandap. In next few minutes she'll no longer be Sharma but Khanna.

The minute she came back, she was greeted by a proposal that she couldn't deny. It was the best for her family's sake and their happiness. She thought, but what about her husband, doesn't he deserve someone better?

It was so wired when a girl sits in mandap she think about her up coming life and how it was going to change as soon she gets married. And here she is thinking about the stranger, she felt disgusted by herself. It was feeling that she can't control. He was everywhere in her mind, like glued permanently. She stood up and did the seven rounds taking unknown promises. She felt him put sindoor on her temple and the necklace.

One year later….

"Kripa!" Soham yelled for her.

Kripa, who was downstairs in the kitchen preparing breakfast, heard the yelling, angrily mumbled stuff to herself. Kiran entered the kitchen and laughed at her. "Why don't you go handle him and I'll handle this"

"Mom, Why did you have to spoil him very much, he acts so immature for his age! I feel like the mother of two kids" she exclaimed while taking the apron off.

Kiran just smiled and watched her mumble to herself angrily walking away.

She rolled her eyes at the sight that was in front of her. Clothes were scattered everywhere around the bed and on the floor. Soham stood with a confusion expression near wardrobe wrapped in a towel around him.

"Kripa, What are you doing standing there? Help your dear husband!" Sahil said, looking at Kripa.

She sighed, putting her hands on her hips, "No not today, I don't understand how did you manage to master in management? Are you sure you didn't bribe him?"

"Kripa, are you making fun of me, your dear husband?" he said advancing towards her.

Now she crosses her arms in front of her chest, stood as if she owns the world. "No I am making fun of 1o year old kid"

He pinned her to the wall and looked at her, she wasn't sacred or shy. She lifted an eye brow at him? "Now are we done showing your powers?" He looked at her, pretending to be hurt?

"Fine! I am sorry. What do you want me to do?"

"Ah, now did you see my powers?"

Kripa stopped in her tracks, "That's not fair, it's called black mailing!"

"Whatever you call it darling" he hugged her from behind, walked with her to the wardrobe waiting for her to do something.

"I am not doing anything, today you'll do it yourself!" she pulled away from his grip and went downstairs.

Kripa was back in a kitchen with a smile on her face. She started humming while making the breakfast. Kiran asked the reasons for her happiness than she explained the whole situation to her, they both laughed. "I bet he'll be downstairs undressed!" she said laughingly, "I am going to take a picture now!" she said, smiling evilly.

"Oooh you're evil Kripa!" Kiran teased her.

"Mummy ji, it's for good. He'll eventually learn"

Minute later, they both saw, Soham peeing in to see what's happening. His head can only be seen while the other half was hidden behind the door. Kripa grinned ear to ear, widely. "What's the matter? Come on in"

"Kripa, Can I talk to you ALONE"

Kripa smiled, "You can do that later, you're already getting late to the office?"

Kiran smiled and looked at them tow, "I think I'll leave..."

"No Mom, you stay there, kripa come here!"

Kripa smiled went up to him and pulled him. Seconds later, Kiran and kripa were both laughing endlessly at Soham, who was still wrapped in towel with an embarrassment look yet angry.

"What's the matter, I look good. Girls die for me. Kripa you are lucky to have me and you're laughing at me!"

"Wrong!" Kiran twisted on of his ears, "you're luck to have her!" he made a face while kripa grinned at him.

"Why aren't you dressed?" Kripa asked Soham when Kiran left the kitchen.

Kripa rolled her eyes and walked to the room. Angrily, she took his suit from wardrobe dumped it on the bed. Sahil watched her and smiled.

"Kripa, I got two tickets for Atif Aslam concert tonight. It's completely fine with me if you don't to go as you arte angry. I'll just cancel it.

Kripa quickly stopped and came up to Soham with a pleasant smile on her, innocently asked, "Who's angry? I am not angry with you, I love you Soham" After a moment they both laughed.

"I hate you Soham, you are such a black mailer"

He hugged her and chuckled, "Isn't that a good thing?"

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This is the first part and next will have entry of Angad, your awaited hero!! What do you think? Is it bad?? It may be confusing but you'll get it soon as the story un-folds. Please DO COMMENT and you guys know that I won't continue until I get enough good comments? I don't mind if you complain or say other things about Fan Fiction. At least it should be about the story or so.. Any confusion or so please do not hesitate to ask me.

Sanya

Edited by *Izzy* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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where is ANGAD ..this all i wanna know sanya ........ 😊 😉 😳 thats it ...ok now ur tareef

it is fab , fantabulous , too gud excellent ........no spelling mistake .might i make some in this statement lolz ..so continue soon i lub u 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

where is ANGAD ..this all i wanna know sanya ........ 😊 😉 😳 thats it ...ok now ur tareef

it is fab , fantabulous , too gud excellent ........no spelling mistake .might i make some in this statement lolz ..so continue soon i lub u 😆

Aww Thanks Aamna, Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai 😆, Next part will have Angad. I could simply imagine the first thing u guys will say WHERE IS ANGAD? 😆 😆 😉

OOoo thank you Aamna teacher, from now on u will check my mistakes 😆 and I am glad I didn't made it this time and I never do proof reading, my bad habit! 😆 Love u tooo,

sanya

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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was wonderful part, but i am kinda of confused if its Sahil or Soham, are they different people.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

😆 naughty brat 😉

😆😆😆. Aamna Madame you forgot to outline my other mistakes that AK_KYPH did for me 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_KYPH

That was wonderful part, but i am kinda of confused if its Sahil or Soham, are they different people.

Well spotted, It's my bad that I don't do proof read. Soham and Sahil are same persons, I have corrected Sahil into Soham as I prefer Soham better than Sahil 😳. Imagine Ejaz Khan as Soham! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how u forget sanya i m the biggest dumb head of this world ..... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

oh yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how u forget sanya i m the biggest dumb head of this world ..... 😆

No you are not, Incase you have forgotten we both belong to the same group 😆😆😆 Like Teacher Like Student! 😆😆 😉

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