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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

Awesomeful part!!! I just caught up with the last two parts, and like always they were grreatt!!! man I was laughing through the whole thing, my facial expressions through the whole thing were a comical sight!! 😆 😆

here are my faves through the whole thing::

"It's a special delicacy; the creature that it's made from is rare, dangerous and very hard to catch. I call it boiled head of Angad Khanna!!" Kripa said gritting her teeth.

LMFAO, ewww I wouldn't want that 🤢

How many times did you have days where things go exactly the way you want them too.

NEVER!!! man that reminds me of the essay i had to write today for my state tests, the assignment was to write about a day when everything went right, and I just made a buncha shyt up 😆

Something tugged on the corners of Angad's mind something about not trusting enemies who have sworn minutes ago to avenge you, but he was hungry enough to ignore this protective instinct.

LMFAO HAHAHHA!! man the guy is a genius, he just needs to listen to himself.... protective instinct… man, I can relate to all these… the girl that fights with me daily (verbally :P) offered me a candy bracelet, I was like heck naw u probably poisoned it lol :P 🤣

When the laughter subsided into small giggles Kripa picked out a needle from the chair.

Ouch!!! LOL, I need to try that on someone… 😆

It was then that Kripa realized she looked at her pancake horrified and then at Angad who looked absolutely perfectly alright. And then she remembered his request for syrup. Then before she could say another thing she had to rush to the restroom to throw up the contents in her stomach. While Angad smiled devilishly, he had made her make him breakfast and he had reversed her trick. Wow he was on a roll.

🤣 LMFAO MAN THE GUY IS LIKE SOMETHING BIGGER THAN A GENIUS…lol…. He is just too good… or shall I say, munizaa you are too good with these parts!! Lol, u both are :P…..I wonder what she put in there!!

it was almost surprising that there wasn't smoke coming out of her ears.

ROTFLMAO , its so hilarious because I can, like, picture that in my mind!!! 🤣

continue soon 👏

Well the special delicacy line is also my personal faviorite. But that was only one that intended to be funny. The rest of them were just sort of there, wow i dont have as much of a sense of humor😕.

Umm... ya i hate writing essays too they are just so boring i wish they would tell us to write a story it would be so much better. But that's ok, i do that anyways half my essay is always story. its the other half, the one where you have to connect to the actual question, that sucks😛

Oh it was just a bit of vomiting powder thing that she always keeps with her in case of emergency(AKA REVENGE)😆 thanks, you make me blush😳

ROTFLMAO<---- dont understand what that first few letters mean?

Originally posted by: mansi1219

🤣 .. ur so funny.. here got some emoticon for ya 🤡 🤪 ... i think those are enough lol.. but i loved those parts too.. u get the best COMMENTATOR of the week award.. sike thats me! lol... 😆 ...

as far as munizza u r concerned.. i already posted a comment so... 😛.. lol.. great part.. keep um cming.. its too funny.. they make my day! 😃

Yup i totally agree its like the longest comment i have recieved in like forever!

Thanks Mansi, thats why i write, my brain surprises me sometimes i always think of myself as a super serious person but i guess there is a little kid in there somewhere.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 kripa gets a taste of her own medicine ahem pancake more like lol. keep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

aweosme update! feel bad for kripa but hey everything is fair in love and war! 😆 (this is war but will turn into love! 😉 {hopefully}

Ya exactly same here!! i feel so sorry for the poor thing. She was only really trying to avenge him.😆 But dont worry i am all for women power.😉 Angad Khanna is going down next part!!

Originally posted by: pooja1221

hehe... i just love it how they're out to kill each other. 😆 😆 😆

doesn't everybody😆😆 You guys want them to fight for eternity😆

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
too good... yuou have to continue soon !
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Posted: 18 years ago
Gr8t Fanfic continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
The next part is coming up in a few minutes its longer then usual but dont expect too much from it. Its not as good🤢🤢 atleast i dont think it is but then i am never really satisfied 😕 with any of the part that i write.

But umm its like the start of a really big trick--no more of the little jokes--that will change things for A&K.
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳

Originally posted by: munizaaa

Well the special delicacy line is also my personal faviorite. But that was only one that intended to be funny. The rest of them were just sort of there, wow i dont have as much of a sense of humor😕.

Umm... ya i hate writing essays too they are just so boring i wish they would tell us to write a story it would be so much better. But that's ok, i do that anyways half my essay is always story. its the other half, the one where you have to connect to the actual question, that sucks😛

Oh it was just a bit of vomiting powder thing that she always keeps with her in case of emergency(AKA REVENGE)😆 thanks, you make me blush😳

ROTFLMAO<---- dont understand what that first few letters mean?

lol, they were prety funny and entertaining i loved them .. (if i am the olny one lmao at them it might also be because i had too much chocolate and was hyper😆)

i agree, i hate connecting to the question, but i wouldnt have been able to finish a story in 45 minutes, because i haev too many details😆... vomiting powder LOL.. and ure welcome, u deserve it😳

ohh and about the ROTFLMAO:

Rolling On The Floor Laughing My A** Off

cant wait till next part

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Posted: 18 years ago

Wow it's a miracle I actually posted in a few minutes just as I had promised. You might not like angad too much in this part. He is sooo mean. But then Kripa is not an angel herself. Well tell me who you guys think is worse, after reading this part.

Part 15

"Hey you" Kripa called out to a handsome hunk. It really could have meant for anyone in a room full of people, but the one that she really wanted turned around. She remembered that he had told her his name, something starting with and 'S', but she couldn't recall exactly what it had been. He approached closer and Kripa plastered a smile to her face.

"Umm…Hey, you were calling out to me right?" He said raising his eyebrows slightly.

"Of course. Hi my name is Kripa." She held out her hand, he took it kissing it delicately.

"Ya I heard when you were talking with your husband the other day, but now that we are into formal introductions, I am Sahil." Hearing his name tugged something in Kripa's memory, but she smiled none the less.

"I have something to give you." Kripa said with half a smile that made Sahil's mouth water. Oh how he wished to kiss her full lips. Oh how he would if she wasn't already married.

"Yeah?" He said wondering what that something could be.

"Yup but not here, come with me." She took his hand leading him out of the restaurant, since it was lunch time most of the people were in the restaurant and the few that were outside seemed to be minding their own business. So it wasn't too hard to find a secluded corner. His back was against the wall, and she was barley an inch away from him. Sahil didn't understand what was going on, and he couldn't wait any longer. He just wanted her to say what she wanted and be done with it. He didn't think that her husband would appreciate it much if he saw them like this.

"Mrs. Kripa, I don't understand…"

"Shhh…" She said putting a finger to his lips, now her body was against his, her one hand on his waist and the other around his neck. She looked deeply into his eyes, before pressing her lips to his, and kissing him so passionately that he had no choice but to kiss her back. This was no big deal for Kripa who had done this countless other times, he was just another guy. But then why did this kiss seem so familiar, almost as if it was something she had been longing for and resisting at the same time. She pulled away from him slightly surprised finding exactly the same expression on his face. It was then that it occurred to her that he was probably waiting for an explanation, for the kiss.

"Umm…do I know you?" Kripa said wanting the answer to her question first.

"Maybe…I am quite a famous personality. I appear on the front page of newspapers all the time." Sahil said repeating exactly what she had said to him last time, Kripa looked annoyed, so he changed his track, "Just kidding, well I hope you do, I hope you don't go around kissing random guys."

Kripa laughed at this, that was exactly what she did, maybe not random but she didn't really mind who she kissed as soon as he was good looking. But he really didn't need to know that, "Well that was just my way of saying sorry for that day at the pool, I was rude."

"I knew it, you were secretly digging on me right?" Did god ever make a guy without an ego problem? It took all of her restraint to not roll her eyes. Instead she brought out the standard Kripa smile. "So that guy wasn't really you husband? I thought he looked shocked when you went up to hug him." He looked so cheerful almost as if he was a five year old kid getting presents.

Kripa looked to the floor, "Well actually he was, but I hate him." She added quickly, "I was pretty much forced into marrying him."

"Ouch" Sahil said wincing slightly it was such a waste. Why did all the pretty girls have to get married?

"Ya, and that's not even the worse, you should see when he gets drunk," She transformed her face into looking somber. Sahil looked at her shocked getting the idea that she was hinting.

"What? He doesn't beat you does he?" She looked at him pleadingly with teary eyes, which he took as a yes.

"Why that b******!!" He said enraged. How could someone dare hurt a goddess so beautiful, so innocent, it was like a crime against nature itself.

Kripa touched his arm calming him instantly, "I really liked you, you know, when you first started talking to me, I have never gotten so much as a complement from him, forget calling me beautiful. You are everything that he could never be. It was like love on first sight for me. " Ya right love on first sight, like such a thing even existed, Kripa thought.

"Exactly my feelings." Well obviously for him it did

"And then after what he did today… I just decided that I should live my life the way I want."

"What did he do?" Sahil said narrowing his eyes

"He tried to poison me," She choked on her words and started crying at this. Sahil took her into his arms holding her to his chest. While Kripa smiled, wanting to pat herself on the back for her excellent acting, "I want to get rid of him, so I can be with one that I love and the one that loves me."

"I am with you in whatever you need to do. I'll be there with you always." He said taking her hand. Kripa gave him a soft kiss on the lips.

"Thanks." She said with a slight smile. Angad Khanna was so dead now, she had a weapon now and she wasn't afraid to use it, and there was nothing Angad would be able to do this time to reverse or escape this mess.

Angad looked over the blue ocean longing, he was happy that they would be arriving at Hawaii soon, at least there he could stop running into Kripa so much. She was such a pain at times. He didn't understand her problem, why couldn't she just be happy to be the wife of the most handsome person alive. Any other girl would be willing to trade almost anything for that. But then Kripa Khanna wasn't just any other girl. And worst of all she never let him come near her, always ran away. He had to admit it hurt his ego; it was almost as if he wasn't good enough for her. As if he needed to be.

"Hola, waiting for someone?" said a sweet voice from behind him. Her speech had a sort of sexy Spanish accent that made Angad turn around to look at her. She herself was just as sexy as her voice if not more. Her dark skin had a glow, almost as if the skin itself was emitting the light. Her hair dark like the night was curled to perfection. Her eyes were green, big, almost round, and perfect just like the rest of her flawless face. Her flowery skirt was just short enough, and showed just enough of her leg to tempt any man.

"I was but not anymore." He replied. She smiled sweetly at his comment.

"Well let me tell you, you just stole my secret hideout." Angad looked around at the deck; to be honest, he himself was surprised to see someone here. Not many people knew of this well hidden place.

"We can always share." He said smiling warmly. See it wasn't that hard, why the hell couldn't Kripa be more like her.

"I suppose we can," she said, leaning over the deck just as Angad had been doing a few minutes ago, "My name is Sia." She held out her hand for him to shake he took it.

"Angad Khanna here." He had a strong grip and Sia liked that; in fact a lot. It showed that he was a real man. They were both silent for a moment, "So what is the beautiful Sia doing, out here alone." Angad finally said emphasizing the word beautiful.

"Running away." Sia said leaving her answer at that, "And pray I ask what is the handsome Angad doing out here alone." She said giggling.

"Thinking away" They both smiled at the parallel in the conversation, "If you would not mind, I would like it if you joined me for lunch; its very lonely having to eat alone." He started walking down a few steps, holding out his hand to help her down.

"Con Mia? (With me?)" she took his hand thinking he was such a gentleman. "My pleasure." She said with a small smile.

As Angad and Sia walked towards the restaurant, Sia giggled slightly, she tugged at Angad's arms pointing somewhere. Angad followed her gaze to a couple intertwined with each other, "aren't they a sweet couple?" Angad suddenly felt sick to the stomach recognizing one of them as Kripa Khanna, His Dear Wife. He knew it!! She was slut! What else could she be seeing as how she acted? He took Sia by her waist, "lets go." He said gritting his teeth.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!! ohhh, now they both are hooking up with other people!! woww, nice twist!!! eek, i wonder how kripa knows sahil and i cant belive seh just kissed him like that, atleast angad is just going to lunch with teh girl, he isnt like kissing her or anything, he could take advantage of her but he isnt!! i agree, kripa was doing a slutty thing 🤢 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohhhh dam* lol this isnt gonna be pretty!! lol krips is hilarious though honestly how can u run frm angad like that lol maybe shes secretly blind lol!! this will be a funny scene lol continue soon!

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