Shivi FF: Mission Impossible thread #2 (Part 11, Pg.16) (complete) - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Raavi thinks only SHE can handle Shiva so only she should marry him ..and Shiva flies into a murderous rage at the thought of Raavi marrying someone else?



Sounds about right ☺️


Dil khush kar diya Ananya 🤗... Next chapter mein any chances of a pyara sa encounter with some khit pit and some cute banter ?


Thanks 🤗

Yes there’s a good chance of an encounter. Pyaara sa? Cute banter? Let’s see..


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: barbieflora

Suman Kaki is OP 😆

Mami ne kyaa jaal phenka hai🤣

Shiva toh jal gaya 😂😂😂

Love this!!!😆❤️

Tujhe toh pata hi hai next waale mein apan ko kya chahye🙈🙈🙈


Pata hain. Jo chahiye usse better milega shayad 🙈😂


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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello, long time no see girl.... I love all of your stories but this one happens to be a particular favorite.... Can we please have a saasumaa style plan from Suman mummy? Or a Raavi telling jeslous Shiva she doesn't want to marry Dev scene?

Hope you update soon.....


Thank you!! ♥️

Maybe… let’s see 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Part 8


"Ae Chipkali, baahar nikal!"


Raavi was talking a shower when she heard Shiva shouting loudly. What was he doing in his room, and why was he angry? She had learnt to decipher his emotions from his voice, and he was raging right now.


She hadn’t bought clothes in the bathroom, so she wrapped a bathrobe around herself and went outside. Shiva was about to shout at her, but he stopped as he looked at her. She was wearing a bath robe which barely reached her knees, and she was dropping wet. Her hair was left open and dripping water everywhere. Shiva forgot what he was here to say.

“Ab kya bas ghoorta hi rahega?” Raavi asked. “Chilla kyu raha tha?”


“Woh….woh…” Shiva thought about what he had to say. Raavi standing before him in a bathrobe was too distracting. Maybe she was right about his jumping hormones levels.

“Kya?” Raavi asked one more time.


Shiva remembered about Maami coming to his house. His anger returned and he took a breath to calm himself down. “Maami aayi thi humare ghar tera rishta leke.”


“Humari shaadi ke liye?” Raavi was shocked. She couldn’t believe Maasi would even consider Shiva for her.

“Nahi.” Shiva expression softened. He was surprised to see that her first thought had been him. “Dev ke liye.”


“Kya?” Raavi was surprised. It was her Maasi who asked her to forget about Dev. She never wanted any alliance between them. Now why had she gone with the proposal within asking her?


“Tune aur maine decide kiya tha hum shaadi nahi karenge aur yaha Maami khud tera rishta laati hai woh bhi mere bhai ke liye?” Shiva could feel his irritation returning.


“Par Maasi aisa kyu karegi?” Raavi sat down on her bed to think.

Shiva was getting impatient. He wasn’t interested in Maami’s motives. Right now, he just wanted her answer. She couldn’t betray him after making a pact of not getting married. But everyone knew she loved Dev and there was a very good chance she might jump at the chance of marrying him.


Shiva pulled her up and made him look into his eyes. “Tu Dev se shaadi karne waali hai?”


“Nahi… Main Maasi ko jeetne nahi dungi itne easily. I’m sure unhe laga hoga ki Dev ka naam sunte hi main shaadi ke liye ready ho jaungi.”


Shiva pulled her closer to him by her waist. “Thode time ke liye Maami ko chod. Dhara bhabhi ko bhi bhool ja. Bet ke baare mein bhul jaa. Tu toh bachpan se pyaar karti thi Dev se. Toh kya tu usse shaadi karegi?”

Raavi felt her heart thumping. She was suddenly feeling as if she were burning under his gaze inspite of the fact that she was wet. “Main Dev se pyaar nahi karti. Woh bachpan ki baat thi.”


Shiva felt relief coursing through his veins. He smiled like he’d never smiled before. Without thinking, he wrapped her in his arms. Raavi hugged him back just as tightly.

He let go but he was still holding her. Raavi’s hands lay in his chest and they just stared at each other. She felt this insane attraction to him. They were so close together. She took a step back from his, which brought back Shiva to reality.


“Ab toh khush hai na tu? Main Pandya house nahi aaungi. Tujhe saari zindagi nahi sataungi. Tujhe mujhe bhabhi bhi nahi bulana padega.” Raavi said.

“Haa bohot khush hu. Ab toh pure Somnath mein laddoo batenge.” Shiva said, but his tone didn’t match his words.


***


Prafulla rang Hardik’s doorbell. He opened the door and was surprised to see Prafulla standing there. He invited her inside and offered her some tea. Prafulla started out with small talk about hhis business and then she proceeded to how she had asked for Dev’s hand for Raavi.

“Ab yeh paarivarik dushmani bohot ho gayi.” Prafulla sighed. “Meri beti ki khushi ke saamne main haar gayi.”


“Yeh toh bohot achhi baat hai Maami. Raavi aur Dev ki khushiyan sabse pehle. Baaki sab baad mein.” Hardik agreed. “Waise bhi purani baaton ko dus saal ho chuke hai. Ab hum sab ko aage bar jana chahiye.”


Prafulla was pleased to hear him say that. If he was ready to move on, why not move on with Anita? She started crying as per her plan.

“Meri betiyan khush rahe aur main kya chahungi?” Prafulla said. “Ab tujhse kya chupana Hardik? Meri tabiyat aajkal thodi kharab rehti hai. Isiliye main jald se jald apni betiyon ki shaadi karwa deni chahti hu. Unn dono ko khushi khushi apna sansaar chalate dekhungi toh shanti se marr paungi.”


“Aap aisi baatein mat kijiye Maami. Ek achhe se doctor se ilaaj karwaiye. Mere kaafi saare doctors se jaan pehchan hai. Aap kahe toh main-“


Prafulla cut him midway. He was going in a different direction altogether. “Doctor ko toh main dikha rahi hu. Medicines bhi le rahi hu. Par kya hai na, jab tak Raavi aur Anita ki zindagi na sawar jaye main chain se nahi reh sakti. Ab Raavi ka toh thik hai. Uski Dev se shaadi ho jaye toh uski life set hai. Par meri Anita ka kya hoga? Kaun thaamega Anita ka haath?” Maami started crying even louder.

“Maami, Anita bohot independent aur samajhdar ladki hai.”


Prafulla rolled her eyes once again. He was going in a different track once again. “Par main toh uski Maa jaisi hu. Apne beti ki shaadi dekhne ki ichha toh meri bhi hain. Koi aisa hota jo uska khyaal rakhta, usse pyaar karta mere jaane ke baad. Par sab meri galti hai. Bhogilal mere galti ki saza meri Anita ko de rahe hai.” Prafulla wiped away her tears. “Par main kuch nahi kar sakti. Faltu tumhara time waste kiya. Tum bhi kya hi kar sakte ho? Par kam se kam tumse baat karke mera mann halka hua. Ab mujhe chalna chahiye.”


Prafulla looked at Hardik who was lost in thought. She knew her plan had worked. Hardik smiled and escorted her till outside. She was about to leave when Hardik stopped her.

“Maami, aap fikr mat karo. Anita bohot achhi ladki hai. Sab thik ho jayega.” Hardik said.


Prafulla nodded. She had planted the seed in Hardik’s mind. Now she just had to wait for the result.




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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Yeh hardik 😵. Isko bhi Raavi waali Dobi beemari lag gayi.

Shiva is jealouuuussssss!

Raavi ka first thought is always Shiva. Haaayyyyee

Love this Ana!!!

Edited by barbieflora - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Wonderful update

Glad Raavi cleared the MU it doesn't stretched as show

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Shivi's mu got cleared😊

Shiva was jealous😉

Raavi's first thought was Shiva❤️

Maami also played her move on Hardik

Edited by Shivi_forever - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

2-4 update aur dedo🤣 hiding somewhere to dodge the flying chappal coming my way🤣


this was super awesome and loved it

ye shiva and raavi are fireballs and goofballs too....simple scene just standing close but it seems so intimate and fiery


mami is still on her plan 🤣she thinks everything is going on smoothly....hardik to pighal jayega m sure but raavi ka to shiva he hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely update! Glad to read this after so long❤️

So Raavi has moved on from Dev finally, and Maami's plan is in full swing 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 9


Suman had called Raavi to meet her. Raavi came almost immediately and went to Suman’s room. She sat down beside her bed. Her palms were sweaty and she was nervous. Why had Suman kaki called her? Kaki always made her feel intimidated. Raavi cleared her throat and spoke.

“Aapne bulaya tha kaki?” Raavi asked.


“Haa.” Suman said. “Woh kagri aayi thi tere aur Dev ka rishta leke.”


Raavi flustered. Could she directly say no to Suman kaki? Or would that be rude? But if she didn’t, Shiva would murder her. “Suman kaki, woh actually, Maasi ne mujhe bataya nahi tha ki woh rishta leke jaa rahi hai. Dev ke liye waise waale feelings mere bachpan mein the. Abhi nahi hai.” Raavi said. “Aap please bura mat maanna.”


Suman was elated. Raavi wasn’t in love with Dev. That just made her plan so much easier. It was probably going to work faster than she’d expected. Suman had already decided her role in this stint. She was going to play the role of the villain. Raavi didn’t know that Suman knew, and Suman was going to take advantage of that fact.

“Chalo achha hai. Uss kagri ke parivaar se koi connection hi nahi rakhna hai.” Suman said. “Tu achhi ladki hai Raavi, par humare parivaar ke beech jo hua uske baad hum tujhe apna nahi sakte. Yeh toh achha hua tu khud hi peeche hat gayi.”


Raavi was hurt by Suman’s words. She didn’t want to marry Dev, but she had no idea they had already decided to reject her. She held back the tears which threatened to spill out. Being rejected by the Pandya family really hurt.

“Tu khud jaake uss kagri ko mana kar de ki tu iss ghar ki bahu nahi ban sakti.” Suman said. “Chal ab mujhe bahar leke chal. Ladki wale aaye hai.”


“Ladki waale?” Raavi asked.

“Haa. Meri saheli ki beti hai. Main aur Dhara uske paas Shiva ka rishta leke gaye the. Bohot achhi ladki hai. Pandya parivaar ki bahu banne layak. Bohot sundar hain.”


Raavi had no choice but to take Suman. She was already feelings this myriad of feelings. Listening to Suman kaki describe this girl made her even more upset. Even she was worthy of being a Pandya family bahu, and she was beautiful too. How could they not see? She would become the best bahu of their family, because she knew Pandya family inside out. There was no better fit than her.

There was also a curiosity to see the girl. The girl was sitting with Dhara and talking to her, while Gautam was speaking to her mother. She stood up as she saw Suman and hugged her childhood friend. Raavi stood there as they all talked. She felt like an outsider.


Raavi wasn’t normally one to get jealous. But her emotions weren’t in check at this moment. This girl already had the whole family fawning over her. What if she won over Shiva too? She could not bear losing Shiva. Raavi imagined Shiva engrossed in talking to her, completely ignoring Raavi. From there her mind moved to an image of them getting married. She realised she was already crying.

“Raavi, tu thik hain?” Gaumbi asked. “Kya hua Raavi?”


Raavi wiped away her tears and ran away from there. Gaumbi kept on looking at her shocked.

“Maa, aapne kuch zyada hi rula diya meri bachhi ko.” Dhara whispered to Suman.

“Jhatka dena zaroori tha. Ab dekh kaisi iski batti jalegi.”


“Raavi ko kya hua Dhara?” Gaumbi asked.

“Pata nahi Gaumbi.” Dhara feigned surprise.


Suman went to her friend and her daughter who had come to meet them after almost eight years. This was just a reunion. She had cleverly decided to flip the story for Raavi. Dhara’s talk of finding a girl was useless. Suman made it happen, and gave Raavi a glimpse of it. Now that she had planted a seed, she just had to wait for it to grow.

***


Raavi ran to Shiva. He was working in the store when Raavi just came out of nowhere and hugged him tightly. With the customers giving him a weird look, and Raavi crying, Shiva asked Kaka to take over and took Raavi to the back room.

She kept sobbing into his chest. Shiva asked her what the matter was several times, but she couldn’t formulate any words. He peeled her away from him and wiped off her tears. “Kya hua bolegi? Kisi ne kuch kaha tujhse?”


Raavi realised she was going to come off as an extremely jealous person when she would share her feelings. What would she say? That she wanted Shiva and his family to herself? She couldn’t bear to see him get married to any other girl. Just the thought of him with another girl made her sick. She realised she wouldn’t be able to live if that happened.

“Raavi, kya hua?” Shiva cupped her cheeks with both his hands.


She couldn’t lose him. Raavi leaned in and kissed him on the lips. It lasted only a second, but both of them were horrified at what just happened. Raavi’s heart was thudding and she tried to come up with an excuse for what she had done. Shiva was going to murder her. She couldn’t control her jealousy and look what happened.

It finally dawned on her. She gasped loudly. She had been in love with him all this time and she never knew! How come she never knew? How could she have been so dumb? She ran back home, leaving an extremely confused Shiva behind.




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