SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 23

No matter how beautiful a fanfiction is, this part always get me so down. Because somewhere we all know, whenever it's about taking "revenge", people choose the women as their target in real life as well. From the very beginning of the history, its women who have to suffer cruelty, that woman through whom the human race exist.

Superb update💗

It was so heartbreaking💔...har kisi ka alag reaction hai for Siya's kidnapping....SiRa abhi se hi lifeless feel kar rahe hai ek dusre ke bina..

Ram ki iss condition mein Bharat is taking lead to handle everything especially Ram n girls....

And voh Suvarna...kaise bol rahi hai Suvarna ko....acha jawab dena hai Siya ko isse...and if she feels ki Siya will feel weak...then Siya will surely prove her wrong and iske uss nalayak anna ko bhi...

Good Lankeshwars are only hopes actually that Siya won't be ill-treated...

Officers ne kuch alag plan socha hai to rescue Siya....dekhi kya plan hota hai

Ram ko ab khud ko handle karna hoga to be strong and to start rescuing his Siya...

Song was so beautiful 💗

Continue soon☺️

Originally posted by: Apukar

No matter how beautiful a fanfiction is, this part always get me so down. Because somewhere we all know, whenever it's about taking "revenge", people choose the women as their target in real life as well. From the very beginning of the history, its women who have to suffer cruelty, that woman through whom the human race exist.

So true, I agree with this, absolutely.! It's always a woman who has to suffer with everything, whether it is a war between two men or else between two countries or anything, a woman is the one who has to sacrifice and who has to suffer and moreover she is the one who has to bear the result of the war. Here too, Siya is the one who is going to bear the aftermath.!

Originally posted by: Sonali00

Superb update💗

It was so heartbreaking💔...har kisi ka alag reaction hai for Siya's kidnapping....SiRa abhi se hi lifeless feel kar rahe hai ek dusre ke bina..

Ram ki iss condition mein Bharat is taking lead to handle everything especially Ram n girls....

And voh Suvarna...kaise bol rahi hai Suvarna ko....acha jawab dena hai Siya ko isse...and if she feels ki Siya will feel weak...then Siya will surely prove her wrong and iske uss nalayak anna ko bhi...

Good Lankeshwars are only hopes actually that Siya won't be ill-treated...

Officers ne kuch alag plan socha hai to rescue Siya....dekhi kya plan hota hai

Ram ko ab khud ko handle karna hoga to be strong and to start rescuing his Siya...

Song was so beautiful 💗

Continue soon☺️

Currently both Ram and Siya are in that state of mind where they are not understanding anything except the separation. Ram will need time, but then he is the one who has to stay strong to bring Siya back. And Siya too, she is a strong lady and she will not sit and cry for her situation, she will fight back and save her self respect.

Indeed the toughest situation for the Raghuvanshis, but then they have to overcome this with their peace of mind. And they will 💪🏻

Somuuu... Sooooo sorryyyyy for such a late comment and also for not commenting on previous episode, well reason you know.... But finally today I guess after a break of 5-6 days I am back and I seriously missed your update. You know what before reading both the episode I mentally made a note that yes the update will surely be gonna heart-wrenching and painful, but after reading it I can't control myself. I am still crying while laying down and though I am trying my best to stop my tears but can't. Even my mother who came to check on me few moments back asked me the reason for crying worrying if I am still not well , and I got a good lecture from her... Anyways , after reading such emotional episodes back to back , I have so much to say but can't find words, the feeling which I am having when just trying to keep myself in place of Siya or any family member and think from that pov is making me feel more helpless, ..

But before talking about anyother person or character of the story, I want to talk about Manda today, the pure innocent soul who is unwantedly bearing the punishment of the crime she never did, feeling ashamed of herself for sins she never committed,once full of self-respect and Pride today hiding her eyes from the world for the reason even unknown to her, the way she was blaming herself today was something more painful for me to see... So writting something for her..

Apne hi ghar mein kaid ,

Mein woh panchi hoon,

Jo bharna to chahti thi udaan,

Par ab chalne mein bhi darti hoon,

Kabhi jo karti thi apne aadarsho par guroor,

Aaj apne hi astitva se darti hoon,

Kehne ko to aankhon mein bas halki si nami hai

Par dil aasuon ka samandar behta hai,

Iss kadar sabke beech bhi akela hai mann mera,

Ki ab to apni parchhai se bhi uski pehchan pooch bethti hoon,

Doosre ki khushi sambhalane chali,

Khud bikhar vapas aa jati hoon

Jo kabhi mene kiya hi nhi

Un sabhi gunaho ka boojh mein uthati hoon

Kabhi sapne mein bhi kisi ke dard ka karan na banu, yahi koshish krti hoon

Par jab cheeti ki tarah kuchli jaati hoon,to tadapti rehti hoon

Cheekhna chahti hoon, par awaaz nhi aati,

Ghut ghut ke dam todti, aankhein sookhti jaati,

Bhaag jana chahti hoon, inn pathar se bhi kathoor logo ki duniya se door

Par aisi chot khayi h ki nazar na uthane ko ho jati hoon majboor

Tukda tukda tootati hui

Dheere dheere, katra katra ghulti hui

Zindagi jeena bhoolti hui,

Ek zinda laash ho gyi hoon...

Ok so I don't know what I have written, so sorry for the bakwaas but tried my best, now no energy left to re check and think more,

And about others can't say anything no words to say,

And hats off to You Somu... No words left for you...

Love you

Hey somu... Meri bi sorry accept kardo...late comment ke liyae 💔...I am so sorry.....and last update.....Mera most awaited update tha😌...I was Soo much waiting for it... And you did the best of it...❤️... ramayan ka ye Jo part hai jab ram ko patha chaltha hai ki siya ka haran ho gaya.... emotional part best hotha hai....aur last update bi best tha...I mean....first part...that was Soo heartbreaking 💔....ram siya ko find Raha that aur pukaar bi Raha that💔💔...I felt like crying 💔💔💔...jab urmi nae Sab usko bathaya toh...he was totally shaken and out of sense💔..and raghavan part😡😡😡😡...I felt so humiliated...jab isnae siya ko floor par raknae kae liae kaha ....,😡😡😡😡...and fuel to the fire....vo suvarna....🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬..chi....I feel so angry...but I also feel pity for the good lankeswars...they were crying 😔....but what can be done?...and abb siya ki room Mae bi bandh kar Diya 💔💔💔...I was like.... crying 😭😭😭😭...jab vo ram ram bula Rahi thi😭😭😭😭😭😭😭....and the 3 Rd part.... commissioner nae acha idea Diya...ki illegally hi us raghavan ko confront kar sakthae hai.... but ram seemed so lifeless💔💔😭😭💔💔💔💔...siya kae Bina ram kuch nahi ....kuch bi nahi💔💔💔💔...and last part😭😭😭💔💔💔💔...yaar sira are soooo much suffering 💔💔💔...ram 💔....he is lifeless 💔 and emotionally drained 😭😭💔💔💔...but last mae raghavan ki downfaal ka aaramb ho gaya ram sae..... raghavan!!!!....I am waiting for the next update somu... jaldi update karna somu..love you...so much my oxygen giver... Jai siya ram ♥️

Originally posted by: Khyati55

Somuuu... Sooooo sorryyyyy for such a late comment and also for not commenting on previous episode, well reason you know.... But finally today I guess after a break of 5-6 days I am back and I seriously missed your update. You know what before reading both the episode I mentally made a note that yes the update will surely be gonna heart-wrenching and painful, but after reading it I can't control myself. I am still crying while laying down and though I am trying my best to stop my tears but can't. Even my mother who came to check on me few moments back asked me the reason for crying worrying if I am still not well , and I got a good lecture from her... Anyways , after reading such emotional episodes back to back , I have so much to say but can't find words, the feeling which I am having when just trying to keep myself in place of Siya or any family member and think from that pov is making me feel more helpless, ..

But before talking about anyother person or character of the story, I want to talk about Manda today, the pure innocent soul who is unwantedly bearing the punishment of the crime she never did, feeling ashamed of herself for sins she never committed,once full of self-respect and Pride today hiding her eyes from the world for the reason even unknown to her, the way she was blaming herself today was something more painful for me to see... So writting something for her..

Apne hi ghar mein kaid ,

Mein woh panchi hoon,

Jo bharna to chahti thi udaan,

Par ab chalne mein bhi darti hoon,

Kabhi jo karti thi apne aadarsho par guroor,

Aaj apne hi astitva se darti hoon,

Kehne ko to aankhon mein bas halki si nami hai

Par dil aasuon ka samandar behta hai,

Iss kadar sabke beech bhi akela hai mann mera,

Ki ab to apni parchhai se bhi uski pehchan pooch bethti hoon,

Doosre ki khushi sambhalane chali,

Khud bikhar vapas aa jati hoon

Jo kabhi mene kiya hi nhi

Un sabhi gunaho ka boojh mein uthati hoon

Kabhi sapne mein bhi kisi ke dard ka karan na banu, yahi koshish krti hoon

Par jab cheeti ki tarah kuchli jaati hoon,to tadapti rehti hoon

Cheekhna chahti hoon, par awaaz nhi aati,

Ghut ghut ke dam todti, aankhein sookhti jaati,

Bhaag jana chahti hoon, inn pathar se bhi kathoor logo ki duniya se door

Par aisi chot khayi h ki nazar na uthane ko ho jati hoon majboor

Tukda tukda tootati hui

Dheere dheere, katra katra ghulti hui

Zindagi jeena bhoolti hui,

Ek zinda laash ho gyi hoon...

Ok so I don't know what I have written, so sorry for the bakwaas but tried my best, now no energy left to re check and think more,

And about others can't say anything no words to say,

And hats off to You Somu... No words left for you...

Love you

First of all tell me how is your health now.? Glad that being in that condition you managed to read the saddest and emotional parts.

I know it was something really very heart breaking, I too gain that strength while writing the upcoming updates. Genuinely I don't have that words to write down, I am not understanding how I am going to writer the further parts, it is making me emotional and weak 💔🥺 I have taken the story really very serious or what.?

Anyway, the poem you wrote for Manda, beautiful ❤️ her true feelings and pain could be witnessed totally through your poem. Hatts off to you for this.!

Talking about the next update, then yes I am updating today. Will require some time, but will do it today itself... Take care 😘

Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Hey somu... Meri bi sorry accept kardo...late comment ke liyae 💔...I am so sorry.....and last update.....Mera most awaited update tha😌...I was Soo much waiting for it... And you did the best of it...❤️... ramayan ka ye Jo part hai jab ram ko patha chaltha hai ki siya ka haran ho gaya.... emotional part best hotha hai....aur last update bi best tha...I mean....first part...that was Soo heartbreaking 💔....ram siya ko find Raha that aur pukaar bi Raha that💔💔...I felt like crying 💔💔💔...jab urmi nae Sab usko bathaya toh...he was totally shaken and out of sense💔..and raghavan part😡😡😡😡...I felt so humiliated...jab isnae siya ko floor par raknae kae liae kaha ....,😡😡😡😡...and fuel to the fire....vo suvarna....🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬..chi....I feel so angry...but I also feel pity for the good lankeswars...they were crying 😔....but what can be done?...and abb siya ki room Mae bi bandh kar Diya 💔💔💔...I was like.... crying 😭😭😭😭...jab vo ram ram bula Rahi thi😭😭😭😭😭😭😭....and the 3 Rd part.... commissioner nae acha idea Diya...ki illegally hi us raghavan ko confront kar sakthae hai.... but ram seemed so lifeless💔💔😭😭💔💔💔💔...siya kae Bina ram kuch nahi ....kuch bi nahi💔💔💔💔...and last part😭😭😭💔💔💔💔...yaar sira are soooo much suffering 💔💔💔...ram 💔....he is lifeless 💔 and emotionally drained 😭😭💔💔💔...but last mae raghavan ki downfaal ka aaramb ho gaya ram sae..... raghavan!!!!....I am waiting for the next update somu... jaldi update karna somu..love you...so much my oxygen giver... Jai siya ram ♥️

This part is my favourite too, favourite in the sense emotionally weak wala favourite. I don't know if I could have managed to portrait the exact feelings of Ram or not, but definitely it has taken my sanity while writing it down. Uff that was way too difficult.

Lankeshwars, specially Raghvan, I don't wish to talk anything about him. He is cruel.! And Suvarna, she thinks that these things could make Siya weak or feel scared, but she is unknown about what Siya is..

Let's see what happens next, the long day is not coming towards its end soon 🥺💔 will update today.!

Yup feeling much better now, though still having fever but not that high, taking rest completely and getting bore of just lying down 😑😑😑😩😩...

Well no doubt that you have taken the story way too seriously and you must really very stressed.. because your hardwork can be felt by your story.. that's why I say that you are just amazing, bearing so much for us readers 💖💖💖💖💖.. love you...