SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 22

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Posted: 4 years ago

I swear to god !!

Ragvan has no idea !! he has literally jumped on an axe ..

Inder toh h hi naamard ki aulat .. that too in trie sense !!

Suvarna pata nahi apna dimag kaha bech ke aayi h !! siya will be there while ram suvarna get marred !! Jokes of the year ka ward hota toh isiko milta !!

And why os even kaikasi encouraging such behaviour !! A mother is supposed to push her child on a right way !!Not push into darkness !!

Trust me !! Vaibhav is the only true mn in that so called palace which nothing but worse than hell !!

poor ram !! He is gonna sew raghvan .. i will be soo happy to read that part !!

U r doing a commendable job as a writer !! Thsi story makes me feel emotions !!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Very emotional & touching part 🥺🥺

I really could feel Siras pain of separation & both are yet to come out of the shock

Raghavan has taken siya to Chennai & now he has locked her in his house ... I felt like giving a tight punch 👊 to Swarna for her blabbering she really needs to be on the ground of reality

Manda & Sulochna were really shocked but good that Sulochna confronted them nicely seeing Siya condition 😔

Ram was literally numb 😑 after processing the news of siyas kidnapping even urmi & others were shocked

Finally commissioner had suggested something out of the box & they all wanted to find Siya ASAP

Song was beautifully chosen & so was the execution with the plot

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just one thing for these bad Lankeshwars- you all have to pay for your deeds.

The pain Ram and Siya is going through cannot be imagined at all. The state of mind Ram has gone into, is really very heartbreaking. You have perfectly portrait their feelings and emotions which they are going through. The way Ram shouted her name gave goosebumps to me. God, why the pain?

Sulochana have that dare to help Siya in front of Raghvan. She doesn't get scared to anything, bravo to this lady. I am so eager to kill this Suvarna. Can you kill her too with Raghvan and Indrajeet? Or else punish her with Kala Pani in Andaman and Nicobar. This girl is getting on my nerves, idiotic person.

The last song, I got tears while reading. The beautiful and perfect piece you have chosen. Don't have much words.

So finally they have to plan something against Raghvan, entry of Pawan and team now.? I am sure he is going to help Ram with this 💪🏻 continue soon

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Raghavan Lankeshwar. Tumne jo kiya hai isski saza tumhe aur tumhare sathiyon ko zaroor milegi. Issiliye nahi kyunki tumne Siya ka apharan kiya hai, balki issiliye ki tumne ek aurat ke swabhiman ko thes pahunchayi hai. Tumhare paap ka ghada bhar chuka hai.

Urmila jo royi hai mere raunghte khade ho gaye. Usski halat itni kharab ho gayi ki mere aansu hi nahi ruke. Ram jiss tarah se Siya ko pukar raha tha. Woh jaanta tha ki Siya nahi hai phir bhi usske dil mein ek umeed thi ki Siya milegi.

Ab Bharat Shatrughan Manvi Shruti aur Lakshman ko sambhalana hoga. Dono Ram Urmila ko.

Sulochana ke dil mein insanyat hai aur yahi dekhkar Suvarna jal rahi hai. Kyunki woh nahi jaanti acha hona saaf hona kisse kehte hai. Manda had not failed as a woman. She tried to explain Raghavan many times but he didn't. It is Kaikasi who failed. If she had stopped Raghavan, he wouldn't dare do anything as such.

This was really an amazingly written and portrayed update. Loved it!

Will wait for the next update.

That is the uttered truth, Raghvan and his gang has to pay really very hard for their deeds.!

And Ram 💔 true, he somewhere had that doubt that his Siya is not at home but still he tried to call her with a hope that may be she will answer him back, but she didn't..

These two ladies, Manda and Sulochana, they are suffering with Siya. As a woman they understand what pain Siya must be going through. Aisi insaniyat hum Kaikasi aur Suvarna se Zara bhi expect nahi kar sakte.

And thanks for the appreciation Karu ☺️ Hope you've found the solution with signature and profile 👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: chsripriya

Sorry dear couldn't comment till now

Amazzzzzzzzzzzzzing and soooooooo emotional updates

No words to praise you and your words

I feel like the update should never end and it should keep going

Your words feel like it is happening in front of our eyes

Vinasha kale viparita buddi the elders say Raghavan end is coming in the form of ram

Take care lot's of love and God bless you 😘

Yes it was really emotional for me as well to write it down 🥺

True, the proverb exactly fits Raghvan, his idiot son and his oversmart sister. Their end is coming soon.!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhakonde4

most emotional part 😭😭😭😭 , saumya tumne sabki feelings ke bare me bahot beautifully likha hai ❤❤❤. ram ko first footwear mila then watch , earning 😢😢😢😢 ram ko siya room me bhi nahi mili 😭😭😭😭 . Urmila ki kya halat ho gai hai 😢 muze mila ke liye bhi bura lag raha hai because wo guilty feel karegi ki wo siya ko bacha nahi pai but usne Puri koshish ki 😭 . manvi , shruti , bharat , shatrughan aa bhi gaye but ab late ho gaya hai . urmila ko kitna pain ho raha hai sab us indrejeet ke baje se but muze pata hai WO INDREJEET FUTURE ME ISSE BHI PAINFUL PROBLEMS CREAT KAREGA URMILA KE LIFE ME HAINA SAUMYA ? . Urmila ne ram ko sab bata diya sabke expressions 😨 but most painful reaction ram ka tha wo ye bear kese ker paega uski siya , his siya usse dur hai wo ye kese dekh paega and then wo siya ka name chiillana 😭😭😭.Siya ki halat 😨 dekhi bhi nahi jati . Sulochna kitni acchi hai uske help ke liye aa gai but yaha bhi ye indrejeet use rok raha hai 🤬 Mera bus challe to abhi ke abhi gala daba deti in do bap beto ka but wo kam ram aur lakshman ka hai because ye dono unki siya aur urmila ko pain denge to wo dono inhe bilkul nahi chodenge . Suvarna 😤😤😤🤮🤬🤬😡 muze is ladki ko pahle marna hai kya cahti hai ye suvarna chi . Uski care isliye ker rahi hai kyuki sulochna me heart haai wo tum jesi heartless lady nahi hai 😡 . ek kam accha kiya raghvan ne is suvarna ko chup kara ker but ye khud apni bla bla start karne laga 🤬 . HOW DARE YOU !!! indrejeet tumne siya ko touch bhi kese kiya 🤬🤬 siya ko room me band ker diya . Siya tum strong rehna bus 😞 .Ram ki halat bhi dekhi nahi jati sabse jyada shock use he laga hai 😨 . Commissioner ne raghvan ki details to dedi but ab ye planning karne wale hai 😢 . jaldi jaldi kush plan karo please because siya ke halat dekhi nahi jati 😭 . Last part , mere paas bolne ke liye koi word he nahi hai last wale part ke liye 🤐😭😭 . Because himmat he nahi hai bus itna kahungi ki bahot bura ho raha hai SiRa ke life me 😭😭 .UPDATE SOON ❤

This has to be the most emotional one 🥺 Ram and Urmila 💔 Urmila has witnessed the scene in front of her eyes and that is why she has completely shattered. Indrajeet ke dimag me abb Urmila beth gayi hai, we will see what he is thinking about her and is up to.!

And Ram and Siya, both are feeling the pain already. They are already shattered and are feeling the pain in their heart too. And here the bad Lankeshwars, sab ke sab pagal hogaye hai they have lost their mind. They don't have heart neither they are humans..

Now something has to be planned against Raghvan, wo acha khasa criminal hai, and Raghuvanshis have to plan against him in his own way. Till then how SiRa will bear the pain.??

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Same123

I swear to god !!

Ragvan has no idea !! he has literally jumped on an axe ..

Inder toh h hi naamard ki aulat .. that too in trie sense !!

Suvarna pata nahi apna dimag kaha bech ke aayi h !! siya will be there while ram suvarna get marred !! Jokes of the year ka ward hota toh isiko milta !!

And why os even kaikasi encouraging such behaviour !! A mother is supposed to push her child on a right way !!Not push into darkness !!

Trust me !! Vaibhav is the only true mn in that so called palace which nothing but worse than hell !!

poor ram !! He is gonna sew raghvan .. i will be soo happy to read that part !!

U r doing a commendable job as a writer !! Thsi story makes me feel emotions !!

Raghvan and Indrajeet, both are not humans, they are such a crap created in this world, and yes addition of Suvarna too into this.! She is the dumbest if she has not yet understood the power of Raghuvanshis. I will say Kaikasi should make her kids understand, but she is sitting silently busy in her praying exercise, which is not at all worth it.! A girl is getting troubled in front of her eyes and she is praying God.? Idiotic family..

And Ram.... He is going to make Raghvan remember each and every criminal deeds of his. Punishment has to be given through death.!

Thanks for the comment 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Saumya dear

Very emotional & touching part 🥺🥺

I really could feel Siras pain of separation & both are yet to come out of the shock

Raghavan has taken siya to Chennai & now he has locked her in his house ... I felt like giving a tight punch 👊 to Swarna for her blabbering she really needs to be on the ground of reality

Manda & Sulochna were really shocked but good that Sulochna confronted them nicely seeing Siya condition 😔

Ram was literally numb 😑 after processing the news of siyas kidnapping even urmi & others were shocked

Finally commissioner had suggested something out of the box & they all wanted to find Siya ASAP

Song was beautifully chosen & so was the execution with the plot

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

True, both Ram and Siya are yet to come out of their shocked state. Right now they are just feeling each other's pain, they are not understanding anything about the surrounding..

And Suvarna, uff, she is a pakki yedi. Is she sure about her said words.? Sulochana has everyone's heart, she js a brave woman in that villa 💪🏻

The police department has said they have to plan something against Raghvan. And here comes the help from Pawan Kumar, yes.!!

Thansk for liking the song Goldie, this song is really underrated, should be more popular ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sammy04

Just one thing for these bad Lankeshwars- you all have to pay for your deeds.

The pain Ram and Siya is going through cannot be imagined at all. The state of mind Ram has gone into, is really very heartbreaking. You have perfectly portrait their feelings and emotions which they are going through. The way Ram shouted her name gave goosebumps to me. God, why the pain?

Sulochana have that dare to help Siya in front of Raghvan. She doesn't get scared to anything, bravo to this lady. I am so eager to kill this Suvarna. Can you kill her too with Raghvan and Indrajeet? Or else punish her with Kala Pani in Andaman and Nicobar. This girl is getting on my nerves, idiotic person.

The last song, I got tears while reading. The beautiful and perfect piece you have chosen. Don't have much words.

So finally they have to plan something against Raghvan, entry of Pawan and team now.? I am sure he is going to help Ram with this 💪🏻 continue soon

Love,

Sammy

They have to pay, it's patthar pe likha hua, bad Lankeshwars have to pay.!

SiRa's pain in unimaginable, they are going through all this just to get more strength in their love.

Suvarna, nice idea actually, Kala Pani is perfect for her. She is the most idiotic and dumbest fellow in this planet.!

Song, yes one of my favourites I can say. The lyrics are so beautiful ❤️

Haan ji, re-entry of pawan kumar, he is going to lead and will help Ram to meet his Siya again.!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Saumya96

That is the uttered truth, Raghvan and his gang has to pay really very hard for their deeds.!

And Ram 💔 true, he somewhere had that doubt that his Siya is not at home but still he tried to call her with a hope that may be she will answer him back, but she didn't..

These two ladies, Manda and Sulochana, they are suffering with Siya. As a woman they understand what pain Siya must be going through. Aisi insaniyat hum Kaikasi aur Suvarna se Zara bhi expect nahi kar sakte.

And thanks for the appreciation Karu ☺️ Hope you've found the solution with signature and profile 👍🏻

Yes done with the changes. You can see my index 🙈🙈

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