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Posted: 4 years ago

Volition Vanvaas

"No 30th floor in Gurgaon" he said quietly

"Are u moving me out?" she asked with a chuckle

His smile disappeared

Joke?" he growled, “Not funny, its in DLF”

Naraaz kyon ho?” she paused she was able to read him better now

“I just closed a deal on a penthouse near Golf Course Rd, Camellias”

“CAMELLIAS?” she gasped the Mathurs had driven by the famous luxury development many times

“Hmm”

“Kiske liye?”

“Its for us” he said coldly

“YAHA to rehte hain na hum?”

“I know, commute takes too long” he spoke evasively

She walked in daze to the new gleaming cheery wood walk in closet and sifted through kurtas and salwars for dinner

“Why did you buy a house? Do ur parents know?”

“I asked a question first”

“Yahan mujhe CHAAR mahiney hue Raanav” “Tum chahte ho main yeh ghar chhodkar tumhare saath chal padoon?”

“Exactly”

“Kyon?”

“Because I just TOLD YOU commute “

“Tum ITNE saalon se Gurgaon ja rahe ho abhi tumhe commute se kya pareshaani hai?”

She pulled out a lovely grey salwar and paired it with a olive green kurta

She folded the dress in her arms over the hangers

“What will u tell ur parents”

“That I am looking for a shorter commute”

“But I thought u are going to be flying in and out of Norway and Singapore for the deep sea fiber optic stuff”

“U want me to move to Norway?” he laughed humorlessly

“MAIN nahi keh rahi hoon, TUM keh rahe ho”

Viveka did not feel good about this. Raanav didn’t look or act happy, buying a home was a big deal for the Mathurs, it was a big celebration

The guy walks into the bathroom and urges her to move out

Why?”

“U can go look at it with me tomorrow” he smiled a bit

“DID U BUY IT?” she was shocked

“Hmm”

“PA… DAD ko kya kahogey? Dad ko pata hai?”

“Umm.. not yet”

“You haven’t even told them u bought a house and u want us to move out? Ur Mom at least knows right?”

“I AM supposed to be the f----g lawyer Mathur” he was damn irritated

“NOBODY knows you bought a house, you want me to move out?” she was distressed her lower lip trembled, she rubbed her forehead with a “Ufff” there were no glasses to push up her bridge

“Yes yes and yes”

“KYA kahoge Dad ko?” He approached her as she backed into a sink

“We are moving out”

“Maine tumse SHAADI ki taaqi Dad acchee ho jaayen, is he fine now?” “How are we going to check on him if we are not here with him. Wont it hurt him if we abandon him?” she began to cry

He was angry to see tears for his Dad

Stupidly… yes… he was angry

“We are not abandoning him”

“Oh but we are, we agreed we will stay married until he gets better, and becomes 100% healthy, we made a promise in the ICU”

He shifted uncomfortably

“I didn’t say those exact words”

“Well we didn’t sweat UNDYING LOVE” she shouted

“I DID Viveka Mathur, you were too arrogant to acknowledge on June 4TH 2020. I F----G DID”

“I was not arrogant, I was not believing it… you behaved like a full on A—the first 3 months” she was livid

“I was attracted to you” he said quietly “Couldn’t you tell?” “Why do u think I was provoking you?”

She turned bright red

He was gorgeous she realized

“Ufff” she groaned in her head

“Insulting my economic status is a sure fire way to get me to make out with you” she said tongue in cheek

He grabbed her pointy chin, and bend down

“I doubt you would have cared if I said I imagine making love to you every night, so much so until I think about it I cant fall asleep”

“Uhh.. (gasp) “Umm.. that’s a lie”

“Do u want to go back to my single guy days and spend 7 PM to midnight?” he whispered hovering over her lips

“Oh please” she squirmed

He bend down further

“I wont let you abandon Dad”

He placed his lips on hers…

They both relaxed with a groan

“Ready for a run man?” Rakshit knocked

Viveka stepped sideways and bend down her head pursing her lips

“Oops” Rakshit could be heard swearing colorfully

“We could avoid this on a daily basis” Raanav cursed

“I have to ride to the airport after dinner, lets go dude” Rakshit urged

Raanav held Viveka’s wrist solemnly

“Does he know” Viveka mumbled passing raanav

“NOPE” raanav said firmly as he ripped his shirt out and flung it in his wife’s direction

Rakshit was back in the bedroom texting with Lekha

Viveka dodged his shirt and went into the bathroom

Leaned on the door and wondered WHY her husband was choosing vanvaas of his own volition

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka, coax him into sharing real reason. Don't blame him before you understand the reason.

He is as is feeling all alone. His Dad was upset and stopped talking and his mother is not happy with him coz he advocates your cause.

Its only you he has. Please try and understand him for a change.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Entire family is going to be UnHappy coz of Smrita.

Lekha’s indifference really wouldn’t matter if Smrita was good to Viveka.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sita followed Ram to Vanvas because as a dutiful wife she wanted to be with her husband. But will Vivka do the same and follow Raanav? She will try to make Raanav make up with his father. But does she realise that Raanav is not leaving his father but he wants to move because he wants to be with her without being interrupted by his family especially Rakshit? I am sure Satyen will approve but Raanav should have talked with him about moving out. Smrita will be devastated for losing her dutiful baby, I mean son, and will blame Viveka.

Thank you, Nisha.

(Eastender)


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Posted: 4 years ago

“Yahan mujhe CHAAR mahiney hue Raanav” “Tum chahte ho main yeh ghar chhodkar tumhare saath chal padoon?”

“Exactly” 😊


The guy walks into the bathroom and urges her to move out 🤣


These parts made me smile and then laugh!

But the sad part is that moving out of the family home is not as easy as buying a new house (for the Parashars, ofcourse).. she's reminding him of just that. His parents, Rakshit.. the commute excuse won't hold up for even 2 seconds!


Insulting my economic status is a sure fire way to get me to make out with you” 👏😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Rakshit is like the referee's whistle in a boxing match.. gives them a few moments to cool off before restarting, no matter what the mood of the couple!

There'll be no Rakshit at the penthouse. I'm unable to decide if that's a good or a bad thing! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Raanav wants to move out as his ego is hurt, that his mom always chooses Lekha which in turn means she chooses Rakshit over him? Or he wants to move out as he feels hurt that his mom is hurting his wife?


I feel it is more to satisfy his ego.


If it was really about Viveka, shouldn't he be talking to her first, and then ask her opinion on a place to live and the property and then buy.

Isn't it how things should be done if Raanav thought Viveka was their equal.

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Posted: 4 years ago

To kid

Smrita is acting all lovey dovey in front of the guys, but Raanav is seeing right through it now.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Caring for Truth

“It has to be my choice too, your request is very odd” she texted on her way to work

He had just returned from the run

“I am not forcing you”

“Tumne KYON khareedi ghar?”

“Whatt?”

“WHY did u buy the apartment?”

“Umm.. investment?”

“Not funny”

“What do u mean I have properties in and around Delhi”

“To pull a stunt like that”

“We are not abandoning any one we are just going to get alone time”

“Am I allowed to go to work?”

“Depends” he said

She smiled

“Nice”

“I will probably want u for myself at least a month or two” he said

“That’s pretty short actually” she bantered

“Good then?”

“Nahi… Pa (erase) Dad ko batao”

“I will”

“U are not being honest with me”

“U think wanting to spend time with you is a lie?”

“No I think NOT telling me why you bought is a lie”

“Its not”

“My parents are going to be appalled if we move out”

“don’t tell them”

She quit texting

He called her, FT her

“BED par aise hi lete ho u just returned from the run”

“Guess who is coming”

“Jaanti hoon, Kalyani”

“Nope Cleo”

“HOW?”

“Inder is bringing her”

“HOW? In stow away luggage?”

“Nope private”

“OH” "Phir u dont need me"

"U can move to the apartment with ur cleo"

"My cleo?" he grinned his lips twitching

"she is not MINE" she was irritated

"True"

"You named her CLEO?"

"Cleopatra?" he mocked

"she is not THAT beautiful"

"she is"

"Jerk"

He stared at her face

“U are changing all the sheets on my bed” she ordered

“Hmm” he sighed just staring

“It’s the most ridiculous idea to leave we are going nowhere, I know u and Dad are not on talking terms RESOLVE it, we cant go running each time”

He didn’t answer

“this is not about me”

“Main nahi ladi hoon kisi se”

“Its nota fight”

“raanav we cannot do that to Dad, I want him to get all his surgeries get better heal completely before we do anything”

“What did u have in mind”

“I don’t have anything in mind except ur idea this morning” she spoke evasively

“That’s lie”

“OK fine we agreed to marry for Dad, he is still not better, when he gets better you can get your freedom” “Khush?”

“Ahh the noble sacrificial Viveka” he mocked

“U wanted me to remind us why we married I did”

“I did not, you always bring it up because you want to feel like you don’t give a rip about this situation”

“I DO I care THAT’S why I said we should not behave like FIVE year olds” she fumed

“I am being an adult. Being a five year old would be living in the same house and peeked thru cracks in the door before leaving the room”

“I can go away on a vacation with you but I will not move out”

“wait until I make reservations and you jumping all over it shredding it to pieces”

“I don’t hate you”

“Thank u” mocked a sigh of relief “Phew”

“Shut up” she warned

“Does it not bother you my Mum doesn’t care for u?” he asked

Her expression froze

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Posted: 4 years ago

Good that he spelled it out.

Its not easy for Viveka or even Ranaav either way.

I am not sure if one should try to build a relationship when the other person is not interested.

I doubt Smrita will come around at least in near future.

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