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Part 3


Fantastic Update


Lovely song choice

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Their friendship is helping them deal with the current situation.

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Mohini is sweet and wants the best for them but she needs to let them take their time.

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Taahir

Thanks a lot friends




Destiny that brings two souls together(ManiGini) Part 5

Thank u so much my dear friend Reena for the edits.

Manik-Ragini went to the children's park with Prem.

Prem-Ragini-Prem played and enjoyed different rides.

Ho Agar Koi Ghum Toh, Bilkul Na Tum Ghabaraana

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...

Bass Rahe Yakin Yeh Tumko, Khushiyo Ko Toh Hai Aana

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...



Raat Hai Toh Sabera Bhi Hoga

Hai Safar Toh Basera Bhi Hoga

Ghum Ke Aage Muskuraake Gaaye Hum

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...

They went to the water park.Manik Ragini and Prem played in the pool for a long time.

Zindagi Mein Koi Bhi Kami Ho

Palko Pe Jo Jara Bhi Nami Ho

Aansu Na Bahaana Tum, Dukh Na Uthaana Tum


Haar Na Jaana Duniya Se



Darana Kabhi Na Tum, Rehana Kabhi Na Tum Gumsum

Hasake Bataana Duniya Se

Aayenge Phirse Din Khushiyo Ke, Badalega Yeh Mausam

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...


Manik Ragini and Prem went to the beach and enjoyed in the waves.

Koi Aandhi Jo Aaye Toh Aaye

Dil Mein Hai Jo Diya Bujh Na Paaye

Kaali Kaali Raate Ho, Chaahe Jaisi Baate Ho

Humko Hai Chalate Rehana

They sat on the sand

and made castles together.

Jo Bhi Aaye Mushkil, Dare Nahi Kabhi Dil

Apana Toh Hai Yeh Kehana

Lamhebharko Chaayi Ghata Toh, Dhoop Na??

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...

They went for a kids' movie and enjoyed.

Ho Agar Koi Ghum Toh, Bilkul Na Tum Ghabaraana

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...

Bass Rahe Yakin Yeh Tumko, Khushiyo Ko Toh Hai Aana

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum...

They went to restaurant and Prem-Anjali-Ragini enjoyed having food there.

Raat Hai Toh Sabera Bhi Hoga

Hai Safar Toh Basera Bhi Hoga

They had ice cream in an icecream parlour.

Ghum Ke Aage Muskuraake Gaaye Hum

Taa Raa Raa Raa Rum Taaraarumpum -"Ta Ra Rum Pum")

Icecream was there on Ragini's lips.Manik showed action to wipe her lips.She did not understand.

So he himself wiped her lips.Suddenly they both felt awkward and shy.



Manik was in the bathroom.But water was not coming out of the shower.

Manik:Damn it..why no water?Raginiiiiiiiiiiii

Ragini came:Yes Manik...

Manik:No water here.

Ragini:Oh..I forgot to switch on the pump.I will switch it on now.

Ragini went and switched on the pump.

Ragini:Now water will come.

Manik:Still water has not come.

Ragini:Oh ho..let me check.

Ragini got inside the bathroom and went near Manik.

Ragini noticed small drops coming from the shower.

Ragini:Just now only I switched on the pump.Within 2 seconds water won't come na.That's why it's taking time.But see...water has started flowing slowly.It will come in full flow now.

Suddenly water came out in full force.Both Manik and Ragini were drenched.

Ragini:Oh no...I forgot to move away from the shower.So I also got wet.It's all because of you Manik..your impatience brought me here.

Manik:In college you were a sherni.But after marriage I saw a calm and soft Ragini.

Ragini:Painful experiences in my life made me like that.

Manik:But now I feel that the college sherni Ragini who used to fight with me has come back.

Slowly Ragini smiled.

Ragini:You brought the real Ragini out of me.My inner self is reflecting me because you are with me.

He smiled.

Ragini tried to go.But due to the wet floor,she slipped and fell over Manik.Manik and Ragini fell down losing balance.Ragini fell over Manik.Unknowingly he smiled.

Slowly she looked at him.They shared a passionate eye lock.

They both came back to senses and got up from the floor.

Ragini went out of the bathroom.

Ragini thought:Why I felt different when Manik was close to me?

Manik thought:What kind of feeling is this?

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Part 5


Vibrant and so Fabulous Update


Beautiful song choice

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Part 5

marvelous update

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Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Taahir

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Destiny that brings two souls together(ManiGini) Part 6

Thank you very much my dearest buddy Reena for the edits.

Manik and Ragini were in the car.Manik was driving carelessly while talking.

Ragini:Manik...your driving has not changed at all.In college also you were a careless driver.Jerky driving.

Manik:Take it easy Ragini.

Ragini:No,it's not a joke to take it easily.

Manik:You are a mirchi.

He started driving faster carelessly just to scare her.

Ragini was scared:Stop it Manik...

Manik continued driving fast by laughing.Suddenly they saw a truck coming.Manik got panicked...so as Ragini.

Suddenly Ragini held the steering and drove the car to a corner.The truck went it's way.Both Manik and Ragini were relieved.

Manik:Today you are the saviour Ragini.

Ragini:I don't need your compliment Manik.I told you many times not to find fun in careless driving.It's dangerous.Because of your carelessness there could have been a terrible accident today.Is it fun for you?

Manik:I am sorry Ragini.

Ragini became emotional:Manik...I lost my parents in an accident caused by someone's careless driving.So I know the consequences of careless driving.I am scared Manik.I lost my parents.I became all alone.Now I don't want to lose you also.After losing my family,after a long time I have started smiling ...and feel happiness.I don't want to lose this happiness again.

Manik caressed her face:I understand your feelings Ragini.It's my fault.I promise you Ragini...that I will never repeat it.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Ragini:Manik...I have to go out.I have to buy some books.

Manik:Get ready.I will take you to the book store.

Ragini:It's ok.I will go alone.

Manik:When I am there why should you go alone?I will be with you Ragini.

They smiled sweetly at each other.

Ragini down from the car.

Ragini:I will buy the books and come in a few minutes.You wait in the car.

Manik:Ok.

Ragini started walking towards the book store.

Suddenly it started raining.

Ragini:Oh no...the umbrella is in the car.

Suddenly she saw a hand holding umbrella above her.She looked at that person.She was surprised to see that it was Manik.Her face blossomed.

Ragini:Manik..you?You were in the car..

Manik:Yes.But how can I let you drench in the rain when I have the umbrella?

She smiled.

They shared a sweet eye lock.



Suddenly the umbrella started blowing in the heavy wind.They both held the umbrella tight to prevent it from flying away.Their fingers rubbed each others.They felt a strange feeling.

They both felt awkward to face each other.

They bought books and got inside the car.While driving the car they both viewed the rain and went to an imaginary world.

Manik-Ragini imagined themselves dancing romantically in the rain.


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Aankhon Mein Humko Utarne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum…
Tum… Hum Tum…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Choolo Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho



Hum Hain Re Chupe Teri Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara

Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum… Hum Tum ... -5(Hum Tum).

Manik Ragini got out of their dream rain scene.

Both were blushing.

Manik thought:What a strange dream did I see!What will Ragini think about me if she comes to know this?How could I be so shameless?

Ragini thought:How could I dream like this about Manik?



Ragini saw Prem sleeping.

Ragini:Prem...Prem..wake up.It's morning beta.

Prem woke up rubbing his eyes.But Prem did not wake up.

Ragini:Why Prem is not waking up?Usually he is the first one to wake up.

Ragini touched him:Prem...wake up.

Ragini realized that her skin is very hot.

Ragini:Oh My God..he is having fever.

Ragini called the doctor home and did her check up.The doctor prescribed medicines.

As Prem cannot have heavy food Ragini prepared special cereal for Prem.

She went near Prem.

Ragini:Prem beta...have this.

Prem:No mumma.I am not hungry.

Ragini:While having temperature you won't feel like eating anything.But if you skip food you will be very weak.

She fed her cereal.Then she took the medicine.

Prem:No mumma..I don't want it.It's bitter.

Ragini:But without medicine how can you be well?But mumma has a solution.

Ragini added a little bit of honey in the medicine.

Ragini:Now you won't find it that bitter.

Ragini made him have the medicine.

Then she put Prem into sleep.After that Ragini made the cloth piece wet and put it over her forehead.

The whole day Ragini sat near Prem.

Manik and Mohini watched it from the door way.

Mohini:Ragini is taking care of Prem so well.Who will believe that Prem is not born in Ragini's womb?

Manik:You are right Mumma.Komolika did not care about Prem though she is his real mother.But Ragini loves him like her own son though he is not her real son.Thank you Mom for getting me married to Ragini.Because of that only Prem got a loving mother.

Mohini patted Manik's shoulder and smiled.



The next day Prem became alright.

Mohini:Prem recovered fast only because of you Ragini.

Manik:Yes,Maa is right.

Ragini smiled.

Mohini left.

Manik:Thank you Ragini for looking after Prem so well.

Ragini:Why are you thanking me Manik?Will anyone thank a mother for taking care of her own daughter?Prem is my son.I don't need thanks for looking after my son.

Manik smiled:Sorry Ragini..I won't repeat it.

Ragini:Ok..



Ragini went to a mall.There she bumped into someone.

She was shocked to see that person.

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Part 6

brilliant update

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

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Destiny that brings two souls together(ManiGini) Part 3

Thank you very much my dearest buddy Rehana Siraj for the edit.

Ragini made sweets.

Ragini:Prem beta...here are your favourite chocolate cookies.

Prem:Wow!

Ragini fed her cookies and Prem enjoyed it.

Prem:It's yummy mumma.

Ragini,Manik and Mohini were stunned.

Ragini:What did you call me?

Prem:Mumma!

Ragini became emotional.

Ragini:You called me 'mumma'?

Prem:I don't know why..I feel like calling you 'mumma'.Can I call you 'mumma'?

Ragini became so emotional that she did not know what to say.

Mohini:Ragini...Prem has not experienced his mother's love.He experienced motherly affection through you.That's why he sees you as a motherly figure.If you don't mind,can Prem call you 'mumma'?

Ragini:Sure...yes Prem beta...call me 'mumma'.

Prem smiled:You are so sweet Mumma.

Ragini smiled:You are sweet too.

Ragini hugged him.

After a month...

Mohini called Ragini and Manik.

Mohini:I called you to tell an important matter.

Manik:What's the matter mom?

Mohini:Prem loves Ragini a lot.He considers her as his own mother.You both are friends too.So why don't you both get married?

Ragini and Manik were shocked.

Manik:Mom!What are you saying?

Mohini:Did I say anything wrong?Prem needs a mother.

Ragini:Without marrying Manik also I can be Prem's mother.Right?

Mohini:Yes.But Manik needs a nice partner.You understand him more than anyone else.You also need a life partner.Manik understands you and cares for you the most.So I feel that you both are perfect for each other.

Manik and Ragini were stunned.

Manik:But we both have not seen each other that way.

Mohini:I know.But I am not forcing you both to get married to each other.But don't take a hasty decision.Think well and take a decision.

Manik-Ragini were silent.

Manik and Ragini were finding it difficult to face each other because of the proposal.



Every moment they were thinking of the proposal and were confused.



After 2 weeks....

Manik and Ragini decided to talk to each other.

Manik decided to go to meet Ragini and Ragini stepped out of the room to meet Manik.

They both bumped into each other.

Manik-Ragini together:Sorry.

They looked at each other and said:It's ok.

Manik thought:How will I talk to Ragini about marriage?

Ragini thought:How will I talk to Manik about marriage?

Manik:Ra...Ragini....I know that it's not easy to be my wife.You may not be able to love me.I am not forcing you for that.But can you be Prem's mother officially by marrying me?

Ragini was stunned.

Ragini thought:Manik is proposing me.

Ragini:Yes Manik.I am willing to marry you.

Manik was surprised.

Ragini:When I thought,only if I marry you Prem will be my son in every way.I want Prem to be my son.I have become very possessive about Prem.

Manik:Prem will be only your son.

Ragini smiled.

Manik:I don't know whether I could love Komolika.But maybe because she was my wife and the mother of my child,I used to like her.I had accepted her as my wife.I don't know whether I will be able to give a wife's position to you.But I will try my level best to be a good husband.I could'nt be a good husband to Komolika.Atleast to you I want to be a good husband.

Ragini:Even I don't know whether I will be a good wife.But I promise to be the best mother.I will try to be a good wife also.

They both smiled.

Manik and Ragini walked towards Mohini.

Manik:Mom,we have taken a decision.

Mohini was tensed.

Ragini:We are ready to get married to each other.

Mohini became so happy that they hugged them.

Mohini:God bless you both.I knew that you both will not ignore my suggestion.

Manik-Ragini smiled.

I loved the scenes of Prem & Ragini. Prem is so innocent that he called Ragini Mumma. Ragini allowed him when Mohini told Ragini about Prem's condition. Manik & Ragini agreed to marry each other for Prem. Hope they love each other later.

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 years ago
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Part 4 Loved the understanding between Manik & Ragini. Their bonding with Prem is cute. The couple decision of taking Prem for a picnic is sensible.

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