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Originally posted by: AsadZoyaILU
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Part 5
It was evening time when Raavi entered the room to find Shiva taking a nap. His sleep got disturbed when the door got open.
âKyu bhutni ki tarah mandra rahi hai tu ?â Shiva spoke in a sleepy voice facing her resting his head on his hand.
âAre vo main Dhara di ke saath raat ki preparations kar rahi thi.â Shiva nodded in acknowledgement. â Acha Shiva main puch rahi thi..â Raavi hesitantly said sitting on bed with him.
âBol itna kyun hichkicha rahi hai?â Shiva asked, seeing her hesitancy.
Raavi spoke âMain one piece pehnu raat ko? Vo Rishita bhi pehen rahi hai.â she added to give the reference.
âRishita pehen rahi hai isliye pehnna hai ya tera man haiâ Shiva asked, raising his eyebrow.
âMera man hai. Vo toh maine socha uska reference dungi toh baat ban jayeâ she gave a sheepish smile.
âVaise tu mujhse kyu puch rahi hai? Pehnni hai toh pehen le.â Shiva spoke nonchalantly.
âNahi na. Tu bata na. Main nahi chahti tujhe awkward lage.â Raavi spoke.
Shiva teased her but deep down he genuinely wanted to know âItni mayne rakhti hai meri ha tere liye?â
Raavi huffed and spoke âKya hai? Nahi pehen rahi main, itna tang kar deta hai tu mujhe.â and saying so she was about to get up from the bed but Shiva pulled her on the bed beside him. He smiled looking at her but she was irritated.
âJo pehnna hai pehen le. Bas dhyan rakhio ki ghar mein or bhi log hai koi bhi uncomfortable feel na kare or sabse zada tu uncomfortable feel na kareâ He said with a smile.
Raavi too smiled and squealed in happiness, she hugged him and spoke âThank you Shiva. Tujhe pata hai main hamesha se pehenna chahti thi par masi nahi pehenne deti thi. Thankyouâ She hugged him tightly.
Shiva wrapped his one arm around her and ruffled her hair âJo karna hai, jo pehnna hai pehen bas thoda sa mahol dekh kar. Or khush rehâ
Raavi smiled hearing his words and hugged him more tightly thanking her stars that she got married to him.
***
Raavi was getting ready in their room whereas Shiva went to the other room to get ready to avoid time wastage.
Raavi wore a beautiful black knee length dress, paired them with Black heels, black earrings and loose hair with soft curls. She did smokey eye makeup with nude lips.
She was doing her final touchup when she felt the door opened and found her husband standing there already looking at her. She too looked at him, her gaze travelled from top to bottom, he was looking smoking hot in Black shirt with blue denims.
Shiva opened the door only to find his wife looking heavenly beautiful in a black dress, he kept looking at her. He came out of his gazing session as he heard her voice.
âShiva tu kitna handsome lag raha hai. Thu thu kisi ki nazar na lag jaye.â she squealed in excitement. She never realised he could look this handsome. Shiva blushed at her antics.
âTu bhi kam sundar nahi lag rahi.â He said coming towards her, she blushed after hearing a compliment from him.
He purposely fixed his hair with the hand he wore the watch to show her and Raavi noticed it.
The happiness she had in her eyes was priceless, wearing all this was worth it as he could see the happiness reach her eyes.
âBahut achi lag rahi hai yeh ghadi tujhpe Shiva, or yeh shirt bhiâ Raavi spoke as her eyes moistened.
âAchi lag rahi hai toh rone ka kya matlab?â Shiva spoke.
âRo nahi rahi. Bas khush hu bahut zada ki tune mere diye hue tohfe pehne or tu itna acha bhi lag raha hai inme.â Raavi spoke, blinking her eyes in order to dismiss the tears.
Shiva smiled and spoke âChal chale. Wait kar rahe honge sabâ
âHa chalâ she took the heels and wore them.
âYeh tu sambhal legi?â his eyes widened seeing the length of heels.
âHa umid toh hai. Baki kahi giru toh tu sambhal lioâ she winked at him earning a blushing smile from him.
***
Raavi and Shiva walked to the area where the bonfire was set up. Everyone was already present there.
Krish spoke âLo aa gayeâŚâ he was shocked to see Shiva decked up in a formal shirt.
Dhara looked at his shocked face and then followed his eyes and her mouth too made an O. âShivaâ she covered her mouth with her hands
Everyone was shocked to see Shiva.
âShiva kitna acha lag raha hai tuâ Dhara spoke, coming to him and kissing his forehead.
âHa shiva tu kitna handsome lag raha haiâ Krish came to them.
Raavi spoke making a pout âOr main? Sab usi ko bol rahe ho mujhe nahi.â
Krish spoke pulling her cheeks âAap toh ho hi always beautiful meri pyari Raavi bhabhiâ âha tu toh Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki haiâ Dhara too spoke
Raavi smiled cheekily. Shiva too smiled seeing them.
âKya baat hai Shiva tum bhi shirts pehente ho?â Rishita taunted.
Krish murmured âaa gayi rang mein bhang dalneâ
Raavi who heard it chuckled.
Shiva replied âAb kya kare Rishita...Bhabhi biwi kuch laye toh dalenge hi. Jaise apne kaha tha ki mere liye toh soch samajh kar gift lana padta hoga toh ab vo itna soch samajh ke kuch lai hai toh disappoint nahi kar sakta na iseâ
Everyone was shocked by this reply except Raavi who had the widest proud smile on her lips.
Dhara and Gaumbi smiled seeing Shiva and Raaviâs tuning.
âChalo start kare party?â Krish spoke excitedly, diverting the topic.
Raavi replied âHa. main snacks tyar karti hu.â
Dhara spoke âRishita tum bhi help kardo Raavi ki.â to which Raavi replied âNahi dhara di. Main karlungi naâ
Shiva and Krish chuckled seeing Raaviâs discomfort as they knew they both didnât get along.
Rishita spoke âMain karti hu na help tumhari.â to which Raavi couldnât deny.
Dhara smiled seeing this, she didnât know what all things happened in the afternoon.
***
Raavi was putting the kebabs, Cotton Cheese, Mushrooms and Soya Chaap on the skewers when Rishita came and said âRaavi vaise maine tumhe dekha nahi hai chote kapde pehne. I mean Shiva ne allow kar dia tumheâ she asked pretending to help
Raavi replied casuaaly âHa kar dia kyu? Itna hairan kyu ho rahi ho?â
Rishita replied âNahi. matlab Shiva thoda introvert hai na? Or usne padai bhi nahi ki jo in sab chizo ko samajh sake or ek open mind rakh sake.â
This boiled Raaviâs blood and she spoke turning to her with a fake smile âPata hai Rishita I know padai important hai par us padhai ka Open-Mindness, extrovert-introvert se koi lena dena nahi hai. Manti hu Shiva ne padai nahi ki but uski knowledge or uske khayalat mere liye enough hai. Or zaruri thodi hai Rishita ki pad likh kar manners aa hi jaye, kuch logo mein nahi ati manners padne likhne ke baad bhi. Ab mere Shiva mein toh bina pade likhe hi manners hai. I hope tumhe tumhara jawab mil gaya hogaâ she ended with a smirk on her face and by the time she ended she grabbed everyoneâs attention, she turned furiously to the barbeque and put the skewers on the barbeque.
Krish spoke âWah bhabhi kya bola hai apne.â Shiva had a proud smile on his face which didnât go unnoticed by Dhara-Gaumbi.
Raavi was genuinely very angry and in that process she burnt her finger as she was not paying attention âAahâ she yelped in pain
Shiva came running to her âKya kiya yeh? Dekh kar nahi kar sakti?â âKrish baraf laâ he ordered Krish and till the time he returned Shiva dipped her fingers in water. Dhara too came to her.
Raavi kept looking at Shiva, he was definitely angry but his expressions were more of tension and worry. She smiled seeing that care coming from him.
âDant kyu faad rahi hai ab? Maar kha legi ab mujhseâ he spoke, seeing her smile.
She made a straight face hearing that.
Shiva asked softly as he applied ice âBahut dukh raha hai naâ Raavi smiled and said âNahi. thik hai.â
âKoi zarurat nahi hai kaam karne ki.â Shiva ordered her but Raavi spoke âMain kar lungi. Itna kuch nahi hua Shivaâ
Dhara too spoke âRehne de Raavi. Hum kar lenge.â
Raavi replied âDhara di aap bhi? Aapko toh pata hai na yeh sab hota rehta hai khana banate waqt.â
Dhara said with a teasing smile âMujhe toh pata hai Raavi par tere pati ko nahi pata na tabhi toh dekh kitni chinta ho rahi haiâ
Raavi blushed hearing that and Shiva too turned his face scratching his head to avoid the teasing session.
Dhara was so happy seeing both blush, she spoke âAcha Shiva ek kaam kar tu madad kar de Raavi ki. Yeh toh thik hai?â
Raavi spoke âAre main thik hu Dhara di Shiva ki madad ki zarurat nahi hai.â
Shiva spoke âSahi kaha bhabhi apne main madad karta hu or dekhta rahunga ki yeh phir se khud ko hurt na karle. Or chipkali chup kar tuâ
Raavi again tried to speak but he moved towards the barbeque ignoring her. Dhara smiled seeing him and spoke âZiddi hai vo nahi manega. Ja bana le tu abâ
Raavi smiled and went from there nodding at her.
âHey Somnath mere yeh dono bache aise hi khush rahe bas hameshaâ Dhara closed her eyes and sent her prayer to the Almighty.
Raavi thought that he just did a formality by offering her help but he actually helped her in roasting the snacks and then also helped in serving everyone.
Dhara said âSnacks toh bahut ache bane hai.â
Shiva spoke proudly âMaine jo banaye hai bhabhiâ Raavi came and corrected him âHumne banaye haiâ
Krish teased them âacha toh aap dono ek hi team mein ho ab?â
Raavi and Shiva without thinking said âHaâ, soon they realised what they said and blushed and everyone else smiled.
Krish spoke âBahut hua sharmana. chalo dance karte hai.â
âMAin nahi kar raha danceâ Shiva said.
Krish replied teasingly âPerfect tu baith main or Raavi bhabhi dance karengeâ
Shivaâs eyes widened and they widened more when Raavi agreed happily. Dhara and Gaumbi laughed at his expressions.
Music started and everyone started dancing, Dhara-Gaumbi, Dev-Rishita and Krish-Raavi.
Shiva was standing at a corner and shooting daggers at Krish for stealing his wife. He refused to dance, maintaining his character but Krish took the opportunity. He huffed in annoyance.
Krishâ POV
I could feel the daggers Shiva was shooting with his eyes but ignored. He twirled Raavi and she lost her balance and was about to fall. Krish forwarded his hands to save her but soon someone else saved her.
Shivaâs POV
He had enough of this he walked to them and saw Krish twirling Raavi, Raavi lost her balance and in two big steps he reached to them and held her in time.
Raaviâs POV
Though I was enjoying dancing with Krish but wanted to dance with Shiva. Krish twirled me and because of the heels I was wearing I lost my balance and was about to fall on the solid floor but the floor never hit me rather something very strong yet soft held me by my waist. I knew who it was, I opened my eyes which I had closed out of fear and saw his eyes gazing at me with worry.
Nooneâs POV
âThik hai tu?â Shiva asked as he steadied her on the floor.
âBhabhi thik ho aap?â KRish came and asked with a worried face.
Raavi spoke âHa thik hu main tum sab tension mat lo.â
KRish sighed in relief and left the couple to themselves. And everyone else too resumed what they were doing.
Shiva again asked âThik hai tu?â to which she replied âha baba thik hu mainâ
âBola tha na gir jayegi. Sambhal ke nahi nach sakti thi?â he scolded her.
âMaine bhi toh kaha tha sambhal lio jaha giru tohâ she spoke, showing him fake anger.
âSambhal toh lia.â â Vaise tu Dev se pyar toh karti thi par vo sambhal na pata tujheâ he joked and the second later he cursed himself for saying that.
She got really angry, she said âZaruri nahi tha uska naam lena Shivaâ She was about to leave but he held her hand and pulled her in and held her securely by her waist and swayed to the music.
âItna gussa kyu ho gayi? Main mazak kar raha thaâ Shiva tried to pacify her.
âShiva mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aya tera yeh mazakâ she said, still in anger.
âVaise itna gussa kyu Raavi?â He asked keenly.
She spoke looking at the floor âNahi pata mujhe. Bas uske sath nam judna ab nahi acha laga mujhe. Or tu chod mujhe, nahi karna mujhe tere sath dance.â She tried to free herself.
âEk bar choda toh phir nahi pakdunga dobaraâ he repeated her lines only. He felt her not moving at all but still anger was visible on her face.
âAcha thik hai aage se kabhi nahi jodunga usse tera naam sorryâ he said, lifting her chin.
She still didnât look at him. âItna kya bhav kha rahi hai. Ja mujhe bhi nahi karna tere sath danceâ and he loosened his grip around her and was about to leave her but the same moment she held him by his shoulders and gave him her widest smile. Shiva too smiled at her and held her firmly again.
âVaisa sach kaha tere alava koi na sambhal pata mujheâ she said and his face adorned with a smile.
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So, how was it guys?
I hope you guys liked it.
Will see you soon till then take careâ¤ď¸
Shiva and Raavi are so adorable omg â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸
Raavi asking Shiva if he was comfortable with her wearing a dress was just
Krish and Raavi are so sweet I love it!!
Loved the update, eagerly waiting for more đ¤
Loved the update â¤
Beautiful
Both are protective towards each other , so much caring,
True đ shivi hi ek doosre ko sambhal skte h aur kisi ke bas ki bat nhi hđđ
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Loved the update ...Step by step hi aage badh rahe hai ..aur Raavi ka answer jo Rishita ko diya "taaliyan bajti rehni chahiye"
Nice update! Loved how Raavi gave it back to rishita
Great to see shivi moving closer to each other and their care for each otherâ¤ď¸
My favorite was Raavi asking Shiva if she could wear a dress.. that showed their bond beautifully đ
Loved the update! And especially loving their natural progression. Loved how cutely she asked for his permission on dress and his response! Clearly shows her opinion matters to him and same with him. Loved how both gave it back to Rishita's taunts. Shiva about listening to wife on his presentation and Raavi about Shiva's education. And they managed to dance as well! I loved this version of bonfire way more than the show.
Beautiful updateđ
Loved Shivi's moments and the natural progression of their relationshipđ
Loved how Shivi handled Rishitađ
Waiting for next
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