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Posted: 18 years ago


thanx guriya
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome dear verry nice 👏



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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: varallika

hey nice part buddy...u r stry simply roks....u hav a very gud concept...update soon



hey dear
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me gonna post it dear😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

beautiful part ana dear 👏 feel so bad 4 kash 😭 😭 😭 😭 i hope sujal will come soon 😉 😛 😉 cont soon 😊 gook luck 4 ur examz 😃



hey paru
thanx dear 4 ur superb comments
sujal is comming dear
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and ya my exams went good

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: apra

good one yaar 😳 i just logged on and got your message daheej is a serious matter



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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey ana a really nice story 👏



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Posted: 18 years ago


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ritu_the_gr8

hey...
just caught up... its awesomeee!!
continue soooon



hey ritu
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Posted: 18 years ago


hey dear
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Posted: 18 years ago


Anjali and Kripa left 2 collage and Nandini stay behind for Kashish…………..As anjali and kripa enter……….they saw angad coming towards them…………Kripa hold her breath and turn on other side to avoid him but angad voice from behind make her stop…

"Hi Anjali………..Hi Kripa"

"HI"………anjali said that with a weak smile "Kripa I have some work in library…see u later"………..Anjali said that and press kripa shoulder a bit to relex her and left

"Kripa"…..Angad said after a pause…………"I know u all r hurt………..and going through a hard time………but I wanna say that I was not involve at all"

"that's it"……….Kripa said with a stern look…….."that's the big problem that u was not involve…………u had to involve in it and should give ur bro some senses……….he had done so bad to dii………….and for me……….its u………responsible of that.."

"But kripa…"…….angad starting saying with a helpless look but kripa cut him in between

"No Mr.Khanna………..don't take my name………and from now……….i don't wanna see u……or any of ur family member…………from now u r a stranger 4 me"

By saying this, Kripa left…………leaving a shattered angad behind……….tears were clearly seen in his eyes……but kripa's heart didn't melted

Anjali after having the book from library, was standing on the main door of collage, looking for an auto………..Kripa was not coming as she had to make some notes along with her friends…………

Anjali was standing when suddenly a car stop in front of her…………and the windows slid down………anjali sees Kavya, looking at her with surprise…

"Hey Miss……..what was ur name………..sorry I m weak with it"……Kavya said with a foolish smile

"Anjali"…….anjali said with a weak smile……"yes, yes………Miss Anjali……….what r u doing here"

"oh, well….waiting 4 an auto…………this is my collage"

"Cool……….i had too done my graduation from here 5 years back………come…I will drop u"

"No…..its ok…………I will take an auto"

"Why……… consider my car an auto………….come and sit in"

Kavya open the door for her and she sit after some hesitation

"So howz ur family and sisters?"………..Kavya generally ask her

"All are fine"……..anjali said in a low tone

"is it really?"…….Kavya said looking at her down sad face

"yup really"…….Anjali said with a smile to lighten the mood

"Hey ur both elder sisters marriage had to take place …………are they married yet?" This question take anjali into the memories of last few days of sadness and worry

"Anjali"………kavya call her, seeing in deep thought

"ya……….no………..only Nandini dii's marriage take place"

"Why………what happened to Kashish………I think it was the name of ur other sis….right?"

"ya………actually.."….anjali was somehow was not sure either to tell him or not…….

Kavya understand her condition and ask her 4 having a coffe and anjali agreed

Now in coffee shop

"ok……maam what do u want?"

"a hot choclate"

kavya call 4 a waiter and ordered him " a hot choclate 4 miss and 4 me a cappuccino"

waiter left and kavya turn towards anjali

"now tell me…………may be I can help u"

anjali start telling her the whole story and tears start flowing in her eyes………..Kavya get to know that the sisters are really close to each other and can do anything ……..and love this love

"that's so sad"…….kavya said after listening anjali……"Now how is she……is she recovering?"

"ya………di trying to forget him and all this……….now-a-days she is searching 4 a job so that dad will not have any kind of problem related to money………and on the other side………..dad is not talking to her"…………on saying this…..anjali face turn down in sadness

"by the way…in which subject ur sis had done her masters"

"media and mass communication………….why?"

"well as I said…………..i can help ur sis……"

"how?"

"well the magzine, I work for need an additional chief editor…………….i am chief editor there………..so if u want, ur sis can apply 4 this job and I m sure she will get it…….and I m with her……….so if she ever want any help……me there"

"that's great………..i will talk about this to dii………..what r the timings?"

"from 10 to 6 or may be 8…………as our work is to manage the collect information……..some time we even went to have some interviews……so might be late…..but don't u worry…………convice will be available 4 her"

"that's great…………I will talk to dii"….anjali said with a smile of hope……"thanx"

"no need…………as having a great additional chief editor……is good 4 me"

they both give light smiles to each other and after having coffee went towards there destination

Kashish, Nandini and gauri were talking on something when a bell rings

Nandini went to open the door……………and feel great on seeing her Mamoo on the door

"Mamoo"..Nandini screamed with joy and hug him

Kashish on hearing this too came out and become happy on seeing him

Mr. Kamal, Mrs.Oberoi's brother was a funny person, always full of life and love his niece very much…………and love gauri same as her niece as she was now too seem a part of there family…………Kashish too hug him and tears of joy come in her eyes and then gauri hug him

Mrs Oberoi came from behind and on seeing his brother a hope was clearly seen in her eyes

(Actually, after listening Nandini's and kashish talk, Mrs.Oberoi called her bro and ask him to take kashish along with him so that with there sons………Kashish will feel somehow light…………After hearing all the sequence occur with kashish……..Mr.kamal come to meet his niece and to take him away)

"Mamoo………..that's not fair,…….we live in one city and u came few and far between……..don't u love ur nieces"

"Oh.My baby"on hearing Nandini, Mr Kamal make a shame face….."If u want me right there beside u everytime……….then ur husband will get angry to me" Mr Kaml wink at Nandini and she got blushed…….."Mamoo"

"See……..today I only come to meet my sweetest niece Kashish as I m angry with u two"

"Why?"gauri and nandini said in a surprise tone

Kamal went and hold kashish from her shoulder "as she is my only niece who call me atleast once in a week………..and u two…………didn't even call me once in a month"

Kamal make an angry face……….while Nandini and Gauri felt ashamed

"Sorry mamoo"…….Gauri hold her ears……."u know na adi and dad came so I didn't get a chance to talk to u………..plz forgive me………….i will never do that again"

Kamal got a smile and forgive gauri and extand his hand ……….gauri come and give him a side hug

Nandini smiled as she thought that Kamal forgive her too and started went towards him but he stopped her

"Why u haan………hold ur ears first?"

"Mamoo……….mee…………I m married now……….it feel awkward to hold ur ears na"………nandini saying while make a puppy face

"No……….although u r married………..but 4 me………u r still my lil sweet nice…….so hold"

"ohooo"………Nandini don't want but with a helpless look………she hold her ears and said sorry and all got smiles on seeing her face

"ok ok………I forgive u now………..but u have to call me atleast once in a month atleast"

"as u said……..me will surly"……….Nandini said and hug him too again

"ok leave all this………….Kashish u go and pack ur bags…………u r commng with me………Rahul and Rohan have so found of u…………they r saying me from a couple of days to take u home…………so goo and pack ur bag"

"but mamo.."…..Kashish want to ask her mom 4 permission……

"don't worry………..didi will said nothing………...u r coming that's final" Kamal ordered her and with a smile she left to her room

In the mean time……………anjali and kripa were back too……….they got excited seeing their Mamoo and also got to know that Kashish is gonna stay with him 4 a couple of days

Both thought that it will be good if she will stay away for some days as it will help her to recover fastly……………Anjali move inside kashish room and tell him about her and kavya meeting and give her his card which he gave her while leaving from resturant………….Kashish said that I will talk to him and give a friendly tap to anjali on her cheek and left with her bag to go to her Mamoo's house where two lil, naughty boys were waiting 4 her

Rahul and Rohan………..were of 12 and 8 respectively……….both love there cousin sisters……..as they don't have there own……..Kashish, Nandini, Anjali & Kripa love them as there own brother……..while leaving…………Kripa and Anjali send some chocolates for them…………As kashish reach their……….both hug her and starting talking to her and take her inside to have chit chat with her

Juhi………Kashish mami is the sweetest mami…………she too love the 5 and take then as there own daughters…………..Kashish and Nandini were like their friends more than nieces ……….as Juhi came to see his sons……….she find kashish there, as kamal left 4 office after dropping her home and didn't tell her b4……….

Kashish day end with beautiful memories like talking with juhi and Rohan and Rohit, seeing Rohan and Rohit eating chclate in a funny way………helping them in the home work……….helping Juhi in making food……….and eating in a friendly envoirment along with some sweet jokes of his Mamoo

Next day………..it was an off day…………Kamal and Juhi went to meet a relative……and Rahul and Rohan………after ending there homework……..asked Kashish to play with them………Kashish agreed

The three start playing cricket…………all was going fine when kashish hit the ball and it land across the wall in the other house………….1st time Rahul put a chair under him and cross the wall and take the ball…………but when 2nd time it happened……..Rakul said

"di……it was coz of u…………now u go and take the ball"

"Rohan u go na"

"no dii……..i m small now…………….last time when I go……….mama beat me….."

with a helpless look…………kashish stand on the chair…….and sit up the wall……….and jump on the other side………….she was searching 4 the ball when she heard a dog barking voice………….kashish got stunned………..she turn back and see a greish white bull dog standing behind her and was constantly barking………..Kashish to save her life run from their and dog too run behind her ………….kashish cut several rounds of the house but dog was not leaving her and was constantly barking……..when suddenly her feet slip from mud and she fell down on the ground………..her heart beat skip when she listen dog voice quite near, she closed her eyes in fear….but suddenly the voice stop………….kashish open her eyes after 2 min and saw a man starring at her with a smile on his face………..he gave a hand to kashish and kashish stand up

Kashish observe that he was a strong man, having great features……….shiny eyes, sweet smile, black neatly make hairs………..wearing a causal black t-shirt with denim black jeans which make his look more dashing

Kashish was observing him when he said

"its bad to come to someone's home like this"………..kashish got confused on his comments

"actually we were playing cricket and over ball fell here……………me come only to get that as Rahul and Rohan refused to come here………and then ur dog started barking"

"Normally a faithful dog do the same thing"……the smile was still there……….kashish got irritated………

"See Mr……….i m not a thief………I just came here to take my ball……"

When so much time was gone and kashish was not back yet……….Rahul and Arohan stand up on the chair to look at her and find her taling to the guy

"Hey bhaiya"

"hey kiddo"……….the guy look at Rahul……….and wave at him

"kashish di………..kitni deer lagaoo gii………..abh aa bhi jaoo…………Mama Papa bhi anay walay hain………..unh ko patah chala tau bohut dant paray gii" Rahul said to kashish

"Main tau aa hi rahi thi……………..bus aik yeh hain k "……..kashish didn't complete her line and went to the wall to cross it but she was not able to jump

the guy came from behind and hold her by her feet and extend her up so that she can easily cross over…………..Kashish got stunned when he did that but said nothing

"Thanx sujal bhaiya"………..Rohan said and get down so that kashish could easily cross the wall

Sujal was about to left inside the house but he saw the dupatta of kashish fell on the ground which may be due to the running of Nido(the dog) after kashish….

Sujal turn to give her back but then stop hiself and take that inside with him

While on the other side…………kahish was taking class of Rahul and Rohan that why didn't they tell her that there is a dog

"Why u both didn't tell me that there is a dog?"………Kashish said while pulling there ears

"Firstly leave us so then only we will tell u?"……..Rahul said………kashish leave there ears

"OK…………..now tell me?"

"coz dii………..if we had tell u than u will surly denay to go there……..and we too have fear of dogs"……….Rohan said that and after making a face, both run from there and kashish too run after them

thats the end of the part
hope u guys like it

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Edited by cool_SK - 18 years ago

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