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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
hey davia i just read all the parts
its so emotional, please grant the kids esp Krishna's wishes quickly

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
g8 part davia. please continue soon and a bigger one this time.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
finally he reads the letter and finds out the truth
hope he meets thier children soon
waiting for next parts
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Davia,

Just read all the 4 pars in one go and cant wait for you to update soon.

Loved it. Aww.... Krishna and Kesav, so sweet and nice, she gave birht to twins. 😳 😉 😛

Krishna and Kesav are so sweet . Hoe god hears both of their prays. 😉 😛 😃 Kesav first as he wants to watch Superman movie and Krishnas A.S.A.P.

Ah...so Jai realizes that he loves Bani and misses her so much😳. Hope he meets them soon as Bnai loves him and missess him too along with his kids. 😛😃

Love
Krishna
Edited by kubare - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
my next part.i think it is a u all will enjoy it.
thnkx for all replys.

Few days later .in mumbai it was a head lines that pia and jai are getting married and their getting engaged today.(well I know many must be angry but just wait because it will be fun to read as roshini also re-enter again and tries to prove pia wrong )roshini was with jig saying what is all this jig.and jig explains that it was jai bhaiya's decision and she also says that roshini was late and that pia came in.not only that jig tells roshini that pia is preg with jai 's child.so only he is getting married to her.( u now what pia is faking .now u all will be happy.after all pia did not want to get preg so early.she made jai believed that something happen between them but nothing happen.)jai was in his room standing near the windows.massi called him 'beta sab log neeche tumhar interjar kar rahi hai.chalo ceremony keliye der ho rahi hai."massi only because of the child agreed .since she wants her munna to be happy.because she knows how jai wanted a child.she was not happy of pia but was unable to do anything.jai then slowly turned and asked massi to go down.he will come.jai slowly made his way down. Pi a was just laughing and enjoying with her friends. But jai was not happy.the ceremony gets over .jai then left for a long drive.he was thinking about the day when bani was there.in his life. And the fews days where he and bani was happy. Then about the day when he realize love for bani and it was too late. He realizes where he was. He was near that house where he and bani became one.he then goes there.after that night he never thought of coming back to that house but today suddenly he came there. He then entered the house.he was imaging the scenes that was happent in the past he and bani.then he went to the room .he was thinking of that night .a small smile came after so long.he thought of staying there for thar night without any disturbance.he then went to the cubbord for taking a night dress to change.he saw his family photo took when he was very little andtook out the frame suddenly something fell .he took it up and opened the letter.he saw it was a familiar handwriting..he saw the dat(yes date also bani wrote.) and he started to read:

Dear mr.jai walia ,

Mein nahi jaanthi ki aap ye letter padenge ya nahi,phir bhi mein likna chata hoon..mein ye bhi nahi jaanti ki aap ye letter padne ke baad bahut ajeeb lagega.phir bhi meine lik rahi hoon.kal raat jo hua aapkeliye ek galti tha lekin meriliye nahin.kyunki mein kal raat apni pati ke saat thi puri taraf sai.it was my love to you.i don't know when I started to love you.but I know now that how much I love you.i can't think anyone else in my life as my love or husband. Ur my only love and husband.i can't forget u .i can't forget this room and house and the night we spent together.when I saw ur photo's there over the table ,I couldn't resist myself from taking it with me. As it will be my only memory after I leave u.i am also taking ur black shirt which u wore yesterday which will always make me feel that u r with me when I feel alone.sorry for taking it without ur permission. And thanks for ur lovely dress. It will be my singled dress given by my husband.i will not return it to u.as I love it a lot.and I will keep it safetly.i will always wish u that u should live happy .i wish also wish u that u should get ur love =roshini and get married to her and live happily.i will not interfere in ur life because I love u more than anything.i am writing this letter with a hope that one day u will read it.don't know why.but felt like writing to u all this .i want to write more but.i couldnot .if I have caused trouble in ur life I am sorry for it.i am sorry for not being ur love. I will always love and miss u a lot………………………………………….i am sorry if I have hurted u.

With love
Bani.

Preview: jai return's home with a happy face and tell everything to adi.

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Davia,

Loved the part so much and cant wait for you to update soon. 😃

Aww...hate Pia 😡 😡 so much and cant wait for her to fall on her face flat and that too soon and Roshni will do the deed I think. 😉 😡

Thank god Jia found the letter at last. Hope he finds Bani soon. 😛

Please update soon. 😃

Love
Krishna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Poor Krishna!!! Please do not get Pia n J married!!! Jai find ur wife n children!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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finally jai read the letter what took him so long 😡 😡 😡
jai go find your love Bani and your children
uff this pia 😡 😡 😡 is getting on my last nerves
i hope roshni kicks pia out of the house soon
please write soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
my next part.thnkx for all ur replies.
Part 6
After reading the letter jai eyes were filled with tears of both joy and sorrow.he felt that he was the greatest fool thinking that bani din't love him but she loved him.he just jumped with joy. And went near his mom photo and said ' mamma I was the one who did not recoqnise bani's feeling.massi was right bani was in love with me.mamma pls help me to find bani. I want her back in my life.i will search her and bring back her in my life. And felt over the bed like a teenage boy . and started to roll over.and was thinking of that night and just smiling.jiya song was played. he slowly felt sleep.
In his dreams he sees a bani wearing the pink chudidar which he gave and he was in jeans and polo neck shirt.he bends over his knees and proposes to bani "I love u bani will u all be with me as my life ? will u be my soulmate?will u be my love?:bani replied him "haan" and then both hugged. .jai was smiling in his sleep.
He then gets up by a phone callin the morning..it was adi questioning him where he was? He replied he will come and explain to him. He reached home with a smiling face.and went strait to his study.adi was coming to his study he saw jai with a smile and seeing a photo(ofcourse his and bani's that photoremember massi made them to get photo click together.)and was laughing like as if he has got his chilhoodback and his teenage too,asif his broken up girlfriend was back to him.adi from behind tapped his shoulder and asked what is the matter.? He replied "adi u know what why I am happy.guess what it would be?" adi : u r getting married to ur love that why and ur going to be father. Jai frowned and said not that . and about to go adi placed and asked what 's the matter.he then again with a smile said "bani did not hate me ,she loved me .yes she is my love ,my love bani."adi:"ye sab kya hai jai what happen what r u saying that bani loves u ??? what's wrong?" he then replied " remembered anu's engagement night,me and bani left ?" adi : "haan tho?"jai; "us raat hum dono ek sath ,ek saath hamere purane ghar mein the aur hum do se ek hogaye." Adi : " oh… what ?what did u say? U mean u both became one .?" jai smiling "haan .meri jindagi ka saab se baada din.aur who raat mere zindagi bangaya." "tum jaante ho adi mein hamessa baagne ki koshish ki is saach se ki bani doesn't love me and I did want to admit that bani left meso I went away from here.but soon I realize what she was to me.she is my life. And yesterday night when I went there I got the letter which bani left there for me thinking I will not read.but fate made me to read it. I am soo happy." Adi : "I know ,I can understand it.kash tum ye bath pehle samaj paathi..ye din dekna na padtha." "aab tumhari zindagi badal chuki hai jai u have commited to some body else..and u … I hope u understand the haqeeqat and evey way to bani is closed now jai because of u.and u better try to forget it.since it was ur mistake not other ." and adi left.


davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Roshni where are you 😡 😡 😡 come and expose Pia truth so Jai can go and find Bani and his kids and be together
Please don't let Jai marry Pia 😡
Please write soon

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