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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
no the leap is for just 3yrs 9 months.... .

promo :jai reads bani 's letter .truth comes out.
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
woo part 2 was great
i hope jai wil come to know abt the truth
wow the leap
well waiting for next parts
continue soon
unite them soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
next part.thanks for all replyss.

3.In mussorie ,morning 7:00 ,a lady wearing jeans and a long top just above the knee enters with glass full of milk.and place it near by and starts to sing "happy birthday to you and you.." we see a little boy getting up and saying 'thank you mamma and from me and my sister."yes the person is none other than bani. The boy is kesav and te little girl next to him his twin sis Krishna.she has speaking trouble. When bani considered doctor he told that they need to operate as something was fault in her troat .after operation she can speak.the doctor also told that she should be operated before 5 yrs otherwise she will not able to speak at all.so bani was saving money for her daughter's operation as the amount was quite huge.which cannot be afford by bani at present.

Bani was feeling happy that her son was always protective towards his sis. And supported her a lot.she always missed jai on her side.when ever she sees her kid she get reminded of jai. Exspecially when she sees keshav's behaviour and most of his habbits .
Bani then calls Krishna beta tum bhi abb udd jav..dekho bhaiya(although few min diff she has always said Krishna that keshav was her bhai)udd gaya hai aur brush karnekeliye bhi chala gaya . abb tum bhi udd jav…. Krishna was just smiling in her sleep and showed her hands ,showing her 5 fingers.means 5 min more. Bani just laughed and said beta no more 5 min .today is ur birthday and we need to go to mandir.now get up .she slowly picked up her and took her to the bathroom. After making the both kids brush up the teeth she made them to drink milk.she made Krishna to drink.she was naught but sweet yet obedient to her mother.but keshav is naughty , adamant if does not want means no.when bani forwarded milk glass towards him.he said "mamma not again, muje kuch aur chayehiye ,not the same milk,it is boring.today is my birthday why don't u give me some thing else. I am not a kid anymore ,I have completed 3 yrs.and very soon I will go to school." Bani just laughed and said "beta tum kitni bhi bada ho jav ,mein tumhein hamessa milk toongi that too subha subha.don't forget I am ur mom. Even my mom used to give me.u know what. Those kid who drink milk are very stronger.see Krishna how she is drinking without saying no.that why she is stonger."somehow she then managed to make him drink.and felt "kash mr.walia yahan hote" she has always missed.she may not expressed it in words but her hearts know it how much she misses him and how much she had cried for him.

Then later they all get ready and leave to mandir.krishna was in bani's arm and she was holding keshav on other hand.. on reaching mandir.(it was near by .they walk and go)it was krishna's mandir.she then let Krishna down and brought a pooja plate( thaali if I am not wrong.) and when to the mandir. Three of them folded their hands ,closing their eyes starte to pray.
Bani "baghwan , aaj mere bacchaon ka janam din hain. Who dono aaj 3 saal hogaye hain.pata nahi it ni din meine kaise bithaya unke bina.mein aaj bhi unshe itna hi pyaar karti hoon ye jaante hue bhi ,wo mujse pyaar nahi karte. .i had always wanted his happiness.i wish that he would have been settle with his family.i can't see him in pain. I will always wish that he should get his love inhis life."she even thought he must have got married to roshini and got settle up.
Krishna .although she can't speak.she spoke to god in her heart :"baghwan muje papa chayehai. Sab ke paas hai.mere paas nahi. Aisa kyun. Mumy hamesaa us tasveer ko dek kar roti hai .jab meine us tasveer ko deka lag hai hai wahi hamari papa hai. Pls unhe mere paas bejdo. Agar mujse koi galti hu hi hai,I am sorry .par pls papa ko mere paas bej do.i miss him a lot. Papa na hone ki vajese saab log mere bhai ko chedte hai.balehi hi who kehta nahi par mein janta hoon.use kitna duk hu hai.pls superman ki taraf use bhi hamare raksha karne keliye bej do."
Keshav "bhagwan pls kisi tarah mamma ko superman movie le jaane keliye mana lo. I want to sse it plsss."very smart.." I will give u chocolate.if u make mom take me to that movie."

preview: what happen in these years...

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
very nice part
pls update soon
Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
davia this is a very touchy story 👏 👏 👏
keshav and krishna are so cute
krishna is so sweet 😭 😭 😭
please send jai soon to them, i hope he is not married to Bani
i hope he meets her in mussorie and they are together as a happy family 😛
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Hey
Beautiful updates.
Loved it.
Adorable kids.
K and K naughty and nice hmmmmmmmmmm....
plz grant Krishna's wish soon and oh ya Jr. JW's too.
plz cont. soon.
Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ridhijai


plz grant Krishna's wish soon and oh ya Jr. JW's too.
plz cont. soon.


i agree with ridhijai please grant the kids wishes soon so they are able to meet their kids before the 25yrs leap😭😭😭
i want jw to find them
poor bani, i hope she contacts jw someday😭
davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
tthanks for ur support and reply.my next part.it is short not big.

In this almost 4 yrs everything has changed. Bani was working in a restaurant as a chef..
She was busy with her children.rano was now working in delhi after finishing her studies. She used to come on holidays.she was earning and studying .she even send her saved moneys to bani for krishna's operation. They lost contact with pia.
In Mumbai after bani left pia and puskar had break up ltttle latter after bani left.jai was torally depressed.he did not show it out. A few days later after the wedding took place he also left to Australia for a new project .roshini was living in wm.she and jig took over the house.when jai returned after his trip.(from aus to London to America as he din't want to return.)a yr before, one day pia met with an accident.and she founded a friend called Natasha and with her help she start to do modeling.one day pia and mr. walia met for an work and slowly pia started to get close to mr. walia and thought that he will keep her happy and somehow she should get married to him. She was trying him to make fall on her charms.but jai who was always missed bani din't turn to pia side and look at her. When jai left from India he started to miss bani a lot and some days later he realized what bani was for him.he also thought bani din't love him so always prayed that she should be happy where ever she was.but always was jealous of thinking bani with someone.because he knows who ever be bani's husband.he will be the luckiest one.massi left to chandigarh.still did not know the truth.but latter jai confessed to her everything after returning from the trip.he also said that he loves her a lot.but she does notlove him.but massi always felt that bani was in love with jai that why she left him.later many things to say but I will say while the story is processing.

Preview: jai and the letter

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
awwwwwww I hope Jai reads the letter soon😭 and finds out that bani loves him dearly😭
all the witches at one spot 😡 😡 😡
bechara jai, send him to California so i can meet him 😳 😆
Jai bani loves you dearly
please write soon 😛
davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
i will post the next part today evening.
promo : truth comes out.
davia

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