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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

Morning P ! So we both agree then . It is not about she going to the hospital that is a issue. It is what she said or not said before. Satyen and Ra both their behavior towards her is of a person they care for...it is about them and her behavior towards them. Smrita is a non issue

Morning😃

She should’ve, that would’ve been the right thing to do. Now the situation has become bad when there was no reason for it to be. Or she should’ve kept quiet now, and let it be between her and MIL. But she feels guilty, knew she didn’t go about it in the right way and it came out.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This episode made me have a soft corner for Smrita even if not like her so much.

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Posted: 4 years ago

For once we see something good out of Smrita. She didn't tattle about Viveka to Raanav even though she didn't like what Viveka did. Viveka could have arranged things a little better, especially since Satyan was the one who needed someone. Viveka dropped the ball on this one.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Smrita of course still has her selfish outlook on. She feels Viveka cares more for her family. Can she blame her? Smrita has not done one thing to make her feel at home. For her to cancel a ribbon cutting event was not a big deal compared to being there for Satyen. Viveka at least had a genuine reason to be away even if she muddled it up a bit.

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Posted: 4 years ago

In the now…

Dadu’s surgery took hours, he made it out fine though weak and on oxygen, he was wheeled back into the ICU (for care) around 5 PM. Viveka went in and out of the hospital making calls on the way to Bua, Fa, Harshu, Ma and Dadi

She called to check on Naina’s interview

Papa was worried sick, Anil Chachu came by around 5 PM

Papa broke down and cried

“hamey to laga who bach nahi paayenge, umar jo ho gayi hai”

“Arey nahi bhayya”

“Ek time to doctor ne kaha 50 50 lag raha hai”

“Naina kaisa gaya interview?” Viveka gushed eagerly

“I might have blown it, Dadu kaise hain?”

“Abhi abhi laaye room mein, I think he will be woken up later at night”

“Did everything go well?”

“Haan, Dadi bhi aa rahi hain now that he is out of the OT”

“Oh”

“Naina tell me na”

“they asked me a lot of engineering design questions I am not an

architect right?”

“So what you have enough years in the industry” Viveka gushed overcome with love for her baby sister

“It didn’t happen that way” Naina was polite but did not accept the praise

“I hope you get it Nainu”

Viveka rarely called her Nainu

Naina was a bit startled

“Is your husband there?” Naina asked cautiously

“Raanav? Umm.. nahi to”

“Oh”

“Kyon pooch rahi ho?”

“I was going to stop by”

“Naina I doubt he would care if you were here when he is”

“Jaanti hoon, but I am not exactly in the mood to socialize with your family”

Oh well!

It was back to icy coldness again

“Naina he only says nice things about you” Viveka lied

Raanav never mentioned her actually

“After calling me a gold digger? Kaise maan loon main?” Naina teared up

Viveka realized how hurt she must be

“And I married the man!” she told herself

“He is not here Naina”

“Aati hoon”

“Naina tum mujhse kitne saal is baat ko lekar naraaz rahogi?” Viveka asked tearing up

“Tumse naraaz nahi hoon” Naina said pointedly

“I am in love with him Naina! Can I only get your love if I leave him?” Viveka sniffled and cleared her throat pacing the lobby of Kapoor hospital in karol Bagh

“Veev I am going down to the subway to get a Metro yaar” Naina spoke gently and hung up

“dadu is fine” Viveka texted with trembling fingers

Raanav did not respond

She called him in an hour

“dadu made it fine” she said cheerfully

“Good”

“Phone nahi dekha I texted you”

“Just got out of a meeting”

“Naraaz ho?”

“Why didn’t you tell me Mom wanted you to accompany Dad to the testing?”

She felt a jolt

“Umm.. was I supposed to?”

“I think so”

“You didn’t ask me about my Dadu’s surgery either raanav”

“But you did not ask me if I could go, Mom did”

Competition hai kya hum dono ke beech?”

“Not at all” he said firmly

Silence…..

“Mom ne kuch kaha?”

“Why are you asking me that for the second time Viveka?”

“Umm… tum subah… I wanted to know if she did”

“Don’t try to demonize her please”

“I am not if I was supposed to ask your permission to visit my parents let me know, I will make sure I tell you when I talk to your Mom”

“Great”

He hung up

She walked upstairs in daze to find Papa and Chachu looking at some pictures on Chachu’s ipad with Dadi

“Aa gayi hamari Biveka!” Dadi seemed happy to see for a change…

She sighed as she sat down

“Dekho hamara damaad isko kitna thaka raha hai”

Akash burst out laughing at Dadi’s risqué joke

Viveka felt a flutter in her belly, as her cheeks warmed up

He was indeed… but not right now

“Chachi kaisin hain?” She asked Anil Chachu

“Sahi hain beta, aayengi weekend mein, unhoney job kar li na abhi”

“WOWWW”

“Haan future achha hai”

“Chalo Anu ki barabari mein aa jaayegi phir”

Akash looked at his mother and just sighed

How could he be nasty to her now? Her husband was in there just out of surgery

“Ma… apni kadwi baatein Bauji ke ache honey taq to bacha kein aap” he gently thrashed her

“Dekho, sasurji ka operation aur khud London baithi hain”

“Ma aap yeh baat poore building mein bata chuki hain, yaha sabhi healthcare workers ko bataane ki zaroorat nahi, kal waise hi akhbar mein chhapega tab padh lenge”

Anil stared at his mother realizing how toxic it must be for his Bhabhi

“Ma, agar Bhabhi ka medical insurance nahi hota Bauji ko ek ghar bechna padta apni ilaaj mein”

“Mera beta? Yeh kuch nahi? BATAO! Aur yeh mera beta GM haiga bank mein” Dadi was loud

Ma state bank ka insurance Anu ki company ki tarah nahi, Anu abhi director hai”

“Main ruk jaaon yaha raat ko?” she asked for permission

“Please do, and when you get a chance can you check on my Dad as well please?” he was direct as always

She cringed, being reminded for the first time in ALL day of the gracious role she could have potentially played

“OK” she said politely

A thought occurred to her as she brought snacks up for Papa Chachu and Dadi, wondering what she would say to Satyen for dropping the ball, he is so pissed as if HE called Papa

“Did Raanav call?” handing Papa the coffee and the sandwich

“Achhe log hain beta, Raanav ka 3 phone aaya aur Satyen ji ka bhi” “I mean… expect bhi nahi kar raha tha, kitne bade log hain”

“Hmm”

He was indeed meticulous

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ranaav might not be socialist but seems better person right now when compared to Viveka. Cares for entire family and is not self centered.

Viveka you might not have accompanied Dad but you failed to check on him. Really? He is the one Parashaar who has appreciated/admired you the most.

Smrita, demanding Viveka despite all odds is BIG. That showed that she trusted Viveka with Satyen. According to me that was big. She did take one step in building a relation.

Viveka, everything starts at home. Its meaning;ess if you care for your craftsmen life but not one of your own. Standing up for that female was good but at the same time i wont blame Ranaav if he calls you insensitive to his fathers state as on date.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Unconditional apology is the only way Viveka.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka dropped the ball. She should have called Ranaav to check on dad. Better approach would have been - to have called smrita directly and satyen also. It’s about give and take. Being there for dadu is right given the situation. But she could have made a call.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Did Viveka ask Raanav about Satyen's test results? If not, it's very insensitive on her part.

If she could find time to enquire about Naina's job, I hope she asked about Satyen's health too.


I do get this is a contract marriage and her grandfather had a big surgery, still not caring for the one person who truly cares for her is just not right.


I feel like Viveka is more worried about repairing her relationship with Naina and not about building new relationships with her husband and her in-laws.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Did Viveka ask Raanav about Satyen's test results? If not, it's very insensitive on her part.

If she could find time to enquire about Naina's job, I hope she asked about Satyen's health too.


I do get this is a contract marriage and her grandfather had a big surgery, still not caring for the one person who truly cares for her is just not right.


I feel like Viveka is more worried about repairing her relationship with Naina and not about building new relationships with her husband and her in-laws.

This thing with Naina seems a bit obsessive isn’t it? She seems desperate, it’s as if she has stopped thinking. This is not the person Satyen termed gracious.

She should’ve told Raanav about Smrita’s request and why she feels it necessary to go home instead. It is after all a valid reason. It was the right, polite thing to do whatever the circumstances in which their marriage took place. More so because of Smrita’s pattern of behavior where she is concerned. And even more so because it’s about Satyen.

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