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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Pritee you are so adoarble. It warms my heart. For being a two bit writer I sure receive immense adulation on these pages.☺️

Thank you.

I do a sucky job of saving my work or going back to look at it or read it. I had to think for a bit what you meant by Harit

Harit was the pro bono lawyer.
His Amma was holding him back from moving to Delhi.
chandan ka palna was a nice story 👍🏻
Suvi, Marathi mulgi remains my favourite and my heart goes out to her.

You deserve it 🤗

Thank you 🙏🏻

now on selfish note do I get one before I go off to sleep or next morning ?


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Errrantnomad


That's in response to Akash's teasing that oh you getting text from husband now. Viveka's response to that is Dad ! You just are so cheesy to tease me like that. That's the being paneer part of it as in a cheesy line or a comment 😆

ahh cheesy. Got it. It didn’t understand that slang/colloquial reference
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Posted: 4 years ago

Economic fantasy

He gently pulled her up and she fell on him on impact, they held each other for a few minutes, she was warm and soft, he was cold and firm and smelled like Raanav Parashar musky and woody

“I cant believe I have someone to come back home to now” he chuckled intending it to be in good humor, but it sounded quite emotional

“But you have no food waiting and nobody decked up to receive you” she whispered leaning on him

“Well you are new, we will need to house train you” he laughed

She laughed on his chest

“I just hope he starts getting better. He is usually fit as a fiddle Viveka, in fact he can run 5 miles on a treadmill straight…. And he isn’t exhausted” he hugged her and they rocked

“I am sure he will” she nodded, empathy came naturally to her.

“Do you want to go fix something for us to eat like a dutiful wife?”

“I guess” she smiled

He changed washed up and came back to find her asleep on the couch again

He just carried her to the bed after the stripping the duvet down, she opened her eyes half awake and when she was able to stretch comfortably horizontally and began to settle down again to sleep

They woke after 9 AM within a minute of each other

He rolled to her side and pulled his head up and leaned over

“Sleep good?”

“Hmm… time kya ho gaya?” she asked groggy, she realized she was asking the exact same way Ma would ask Papa on a Sunday

Slow awareness spread through her bones

“Sigh!!” “How can anyone be so gorg first thing in the morning” she thought, gently reaching up to smooth his hair

“I never looked at what all you have on”

“I know… too many symbols” she laughed

He realized she was too respectful to protest but personally did not believe in the “hey look at me I am married” bit

He opened her fist and looked at her mehandi

“Were you hard at work getting all of it?” he muttered thumbing her palm “This looks lovely”

“Well, I had nothing to do with it, we have a new bride on my floor, parents floor she corrected herself, she is quite the bomb in mehendi, we couldn’t find anyone available, December being wedding season, since she was married two weeks ago, she had her entire calendar open” she laughed

“It looks great”

“uske haath ka kamaal hai, haath to sabka ek jaisa hota hai” she smiled

“You are quick to remind me there is nothing special about you” he teased her feet with his toes, under the blanket

“There could have been if I was accepted to PhD at Kharagpur” she smiled

“Ha”

“Not too many that are accepted over there under 30”

“That’s it huh?”

“My hands or my feet or my eyes, or my hair are all just regular” she laughed

He knew that was not true

Those saucer like large brown eyes, the flawless skin, the sharp well defined nose, the silky curls framing her face, her lack of self awareness, was all extremely se—to him

She wore a saree like a badass, and walked with confidence

“You cant grab my toes AND except me to not feel tickled… is not fair” she whispered pulling her feet away as he tangled his legs with hers purposefully

“Will you let me do one or the other?” he whispered, silkily plotting to kiss her

“You mean tickle me?” she asked outraged

“No” he grabbed her chin and kissed her gently

She wrapped her arms around his neck

“I fantasized about you sleeping” she whispered looking into his eyes

“Oh yeah?” he whispered

“Yeah, I imagined you slept in the nude” she whispered as he pressed his track pant clad arousal on her lower body

“Disappointed?” he laughed under his breath as they aroused each other

“I mean no model worth his weight in salt, would wear clothes to bed” she mocked

“Ouch!!”

“Have you modeled in the nude?” she asked curiously

He laughed openly, throwing his head back

“No”

“Bummer” she laughed

He bend down smothering her “Here I thought fantasy economics was strictly involved role playing about taxation, supply/demand and economic treaties” he kissed her neck and ear, as they physically explored each other fully clothed

“No, we dream about naked lawyers” she said as he mounted her

His phone buzzed, he lowered himself and lay on her for a few minutes to kill his body’s reaction and dragged her with him over his chest and grabbed the phone

“Yeah” he answered gruffly

“That’s fine Mom, let Chachu go, I can check with Mamaji and tell Rakshit to do night shift tonight”

It was Smrita she postulated

“Oh yeah I am up”

Viveka heard

“Kya kar rahe ho?”

“BAD Q to a guy who was married less than 23 hours” she thought

“Umm.. just messing with Viveka” he said with a chuckle

“See you for breakfast in 30?” she urged

“Sure” he nodded, squeezing her waist as she attempted to roll off his body

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ouch Smrita can’t let them be ...

Edited by jaschick - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh oh...is Smrita going to become the kebab mein haddi?? Or as the slang term nowadays is c*&$b@$**er🤣


What a lovely way to get up despite the phone call😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Go in with your job Ranaav you don’t need to be there in exact 30 minutes for sure.

Happy to know they both are not holding back in bed.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Did Smrita call Rakshit and ask him the same thing? Its good to see the newlyweds spend a little time together.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Will Smrita not respect their marriage till Ranaav has a showdown with her ? Is Rakshit a bit detached from family responsibilities?


To me Nisha, the stories you write and the discussions that it brings , create an apna parivar jaisa fictional verses. You take care to mould each character based on the region / language / childhood experiences and family traditions. I am always amazed at your talent as the people in village school master were of the master.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you nisha for update your wonderful writer i will refresh the page everyday 100 times for your udates 🤗👏

Now smirta going to kabeb may haddie😡

Can we get veev and rannav lovely moments😃

Can we get more updates nisha i think tomorrow is holiday,if possible 🤗

Thanks❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Such sweet moments!!


I love how there is no rigidity in the way they interact with each other. I think Viveka is more vocal with her feelings than Raanav. She even goes ahead to tell him what she is thinking fantasizing about him ☺️ But he keeps his thoughts about her to himself. Maybe with time (and Viveka'a influence 😉 ), he will start opening up too. Satyen's accident has really taken a toll on him. It must be difficult for him to see his hale & hearty Dad in this condition. I hope Smrita doesn't send him on a guilt trip about "messing" with his wife when he should be worried about his father.

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