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Posted: 4 years ago

A proposal from a wreck

“Do you know where he is?” she texted

“Bataya na beta? Aap kaha ho aaj?” he was a little exasperated

“sorry Papa I … never mind” she did not want to get mad at him

“Moolchand ke lobby mein milo”

“Do you know the room number?”

“VIP wing hai waha”

“Really?” she was shocked

“He heads many large companies, I am just praying for the bus driver”

“Umm yeah I would worry too” she said sadly

She was sitting on the dirt floor examining a new weave pattern on a cotton rug

Her craftsperson crew was 10 strong now, Ambar and Rani were weaving matching runners by hand

The ones that were done by hand without the loom would go for a higher price

Ishwar and Ratna were exploring some kind of a inventory software to keep tabs and assign categories and get some market data so they could price these things

Ambar’s father drove a truck back home in Vapi, she shivered when she visualized him being caught for striking a rich dude

“Mujhe hospital mein kisi se milne jaana hai, do ghanta mein laut aaoongi”

“Didi bahut raat ho jaayegi” Suhani offered kindly

“Ishwar, aur Ratna gaye hain kisi programmer se milne, Farha naam hai uske paas saara idea hai hum in cheezon ko kaise store karen kaise beche kis par kya daam lagayen?”

“Naye karamchari laga rahe ho did?”

“Mere paas bas iske kiraya aur tum logon ko chai aur mahiney mein thoda bahut kuch dene ke paise hain baaqi sab apne man se muft ke kaam waale log hain” she laughed grabbing her mirrowork shawl

She arrived at the lobby around 8ish

“Itni der?” Akash grumbled

“Papa? Whats wrong with you?”

“U are being so indifferent?”

“Kya karoon, I cannot worry and work Papa. I have no connection to this family now. I care for him I wish I could have rushed here this morning but we were not being expected” she said calmly

She was mature and rational he hated yelling at her

He hugged her

“sorry it has been a terribly stressful day beta I feared the worst”

“How is he?” she asked fearfully

A man approached them

And then turned to the lobby

The lady pointed to Akash Mathur

A young Sikh man walked towards the father daughter

“sir Rajeev Syal”

“Hello”

“Hi!?” Viveka extended a hand

“Rajeev Syal Sir’s Exec Admin”

“Hi”

“Chaliye”

He took them around the block to the VIP wing and upstairs to the ICU

Rakshit anD lekha were sitting in the private lounge outside what seemed like a ICU

Lekha didn’t bother acknowledging Viveka or her Dad

Rakshit got up swiftly as Akash almost sprinted to him

“How is he beta?”

“Stable, Uncle… I mean Sir”

“Good good”

“Hosh aa gaya?”

“Of course sir” Rajeev was smiling

Akash smiled “Sorry bhool gaya tabhi to hain hum yaha”

“No worries”

“How is he, WHAT happened?”

“A bus struck him trying to avoid a pedestrian crossing the road near JLN stadium he was told

The drive side rammed into the back door and knocked Satyen out, multiple broken limbs, ribs, torn ligaments here and there, an almost busted eye, miraculously the window glass had torn his cheek bone

And a head injury

“Shuqar hai Bhagwan ka” Akash was tearful

Viveka sniffled inaudibly thinking how much it would have hurt

“Hum ruk sakte hain beta aapko ghar jaakar change etc karna ho” Akash offered kindly

“We just got here 10 minutes ago

Truth was, Raanav had picked up his Chachu from the airport and brought him here and took him home

One of the drivers had brought Viren anD Nupur Dhamija

When Smrita found out that Satyen wanted to meet Viveka FIRST when he opened his eyes she lost it

Rather than fight with him in ICU she decided she was just going to go home

With her brother and his wife so they could rest shower and eat

“Sir, chalen?” Raajeev asked

A nurse walked up to ask who were the ones going in

“My daughter was requested to visit” Akash pointed

Viveka was cringing

She had no connection to the family

Yet she was being treated like a VIP

“Oh? You can go in too Sir but only for 10 minutes, we have to sedate him for the night”

“I will take you to get cleaned and disinfected first” nurse said

Father daughter nodded and followed her

Satyen was still laying down but his eyes was open

It sparkled like gems when he spotted Viveka

“Shaadi kar lo beta Raanav se” he said hoarsely☺️❤️

Akash’s jaw dropped

No greetings no pleasantries were even exchanged yet

Akash couldn’t even ask him how he was doing

Viveka blushed gloriously taken off guard completely as she connected this injured man’s direct upfront approach with his intensely sexy and handsome son, who had walked up to her on June 4th and told her "i would like to marry you"

“Silence is affirmation then?” Satyen laughed weakly cracking himself up and winced in pain until tears appeared in the corner of his eyes

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh wow Nisha, I was wondering whether the family found out that he wanted to see Viveka. I am sure Smrita had to bite her tongue bloody


Satyen isn’t wasting time. But it looks like Viveka is definitely having second thoughts about Raanav’s acceptance of her family and is pretty firmly keeping her distance.

Edited by kalavathi5 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Fact is any parent always worries about their kids, particularly how they would do when they are no longer there. Satyen was very close to death. He wants Raanav to have a partner who would complement him. And he knows the girls Smrita would propose would never be right for Raanav. So his first thought as soon as he opened his eyes was to see that Raanav would be happy.

Wasn't Anubha also worried when she had fainted and asked Akash not to be tough on Naina.


Does Raanav know that Satyen asked to see Viveka and that she is visiting at 8?

I can so imagine Smrita blowing her head off hearing her husband's first order after opening his eyes.


So Lekha is junior Smrita in every way. I hope Rakshit is happy to marry her. I feel sorry for him actually.

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Posted: 4 years ago

The father-in-law proposed. The protagonist is missing in action. Eagerly waiting for these two to meet.


Love vs Ego / Highbred vs middle class / Elitist vs Righteous / Beauty vs Brains

Edited by jaschick - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I can so imagine smirt reaction😡

I wan see Ravvan reaction also now his dad wants see viveka frist when he open his eyes and whole family reaction also

Nisha can we one more get update pls😃

We never get enough of your updates your story we keepan asking more 🤗

Thanks

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

On a side note, does Naina know Inder's reality. She thinks she is getting a rich dude. Does she know he has little earnings of his own and his family is looking for a rich girl to support him? Both of them are reckless.


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oh satyen, i feel for you that you want a good DIL for your family. but i guess its time to understand its their life and they need to take some steps forward. if raanav has changed let him show that, veev needs to let go her insecurities and look at them like family. apart from satyen nobody made a place in her heart. i hope this time veev opens her mouth and lets him know, not stay silent and drown in her fears, just forgetting thanks to the seduction.


marriage in India is joining of two families. here apart from 1 person nobody gives a shit about this union.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Feel so bad for Satyan. So many broken bones. Does Ranaav know that he asked Viveka to see first. I wonder what was his reaction. Smrita is not going to like Viveka even more now. Akash is such a good kind hearted man. I hope Viveka does not say yes for marriage. Ranaav and Viveka need to work things out for themselves and Not by manipulation. Satyan must be thinking about his sone while he got into the accident. Therefore requesting to meet Viveka. No matter what parents always thinking about the kids.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Feel so bad for Satyan. So many broken bones. Does Ranaav know that he asked Viveka to see first. I wonder what was his reaction. Smrita is not going to like Viveka even more now. Akash is such a good kind hearted man. I hope Viveka does not say yes for marriage. Ranaav and Viveka need to work things out for themselves and Not by manipulation. Satyan must be thinking about his sone while he got into the accident. Therefore requesting to meet Viveka. No matter what parents always thinking about the kids.

Haha

There is no maza if they sort things out. They will get married because of the coercion 😃

Spices the story up☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

🤣Marriage by Coercion OMG!!


Nisha wasn’t expecting such a twist👍🏼


Waiting to read the next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha can we get one more update pls

Nish are you going to make them getting a register marriage in the hospital only😃

To spicy up the story😉

Edited by Kiranbs300 - 4 years ago

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