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lolz evee, how sweet of u! Come join us at chat!
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awww that was so sweet 😛plzzzzz continue great job👍🏼
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tat was awesome!! plz cont asap!! i don't mind if u end it but start a new one!!
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Guys i am gonna post the last part today, its goona be a long one and then i will statr my next fan fic tomm!
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😭😭😭 nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii last part of the fan fic....... this was such a lovely story..... newaz i am excited 4 da new 1 too...😛
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thanks guys but i dont think i will be able to post it for another day.
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K: Angad mujhse kuch nahie suuna... just shut up.

Kripa is walking towards the Kitchen while Angad is following her.

A: Kripa meri baat to suno..

K: Angad mujhe kuch nahie sunaa.

A: Kripa I'M sorry. Kripa stops amd turns around...

K: What do u mean by sorry, haar saal tum boolta hai, yeh bhi koi baat hai.

A: Main boolta ho tho tum tho yaad rakthi ho naa.

K: Angad... She picks up a flower vase and throws it at Angad... she ducks down and it flies over his head hitting the floor and breaking.

A; Baap re baap itna gussa...

Kripa picks up another flower vase and about to throw it when

A: Nahie Kripa yeh wala nahie, its TOO expensive

Kripa puts that one down and picks up another one hits Angad, this one hits Angad right on his head,

A: AHHHHHHHHH Kripa gets worried and runs to Angad....

K: Oh god, Angad i am sooo sorry, mujhe deekna do.

A: Oh Kripa, jaan its ok, main tumahri free property hoo naa tum jab cho mujhe maar sak thi ho, its ok.

K: Aagar tum haar saal bool saktha ho tho yeh tho kuch bhi naihie. Ab mujhde dekna do.

Anagd removes his Hand.

K: Lo, yeh tho kuch bhi nahie, thori si bleeding bhi nahie.

A: Oh! Tho ek aur vase lo aur mera saar pa maardo, or better yet mera peit main chuku maardo.

K: Oh shut up Angad.

A: Kya Kripa... ok wait a sec. main abi aaya.

Anagd comes back.

A: Yeh loo...

K: Kya.

A: Yeh.

K: Oh ho aapna haat tho aaga karo.

A: Oh ya.. Angad brings his hand to the front and opens his fist. Its a small box wrapped in "I LOVE U" Wrapping paper.

K: Oh Angad, tumha yaad tha.

A: Duh

K: Aagar yaad tha tho bata kyun nahie.

A: Haar saal tumse fight karna main maaza aata tha tho sooch is saal bhi kyu nahie.

K: Very funny, ab adhir aao.

Angad moves foward and Kripa kisses his forehead, where he got hurt.

A; Oh my jaan is sooooo sweet.

K: Vo tho main hoo, nahie tho tum jaisa paagal sa koi shaadi karta, aur shaadi kar bhi lata tho poora 7saal bina divorce liya raha saktha.

A: Ofcourse...... NOT

Kripa laughs... Happy 7th annervasary my charming hubby.

A: Happy 7th wedding annversary my beautiful wifey. HUG? Angad opens his arms and Kripa hugs him happily- I love u jaan.

K: Me too!

Ok so Anagd and Kripa got married the 4th year of college. They both finished law threeyears later and then Angad practiced while Kripa was happy at home with one son and one daughter, and now Kripa is expecting again, she's 3 months pregnent. They have been married for 7 years today, and have known each other for 11 years now. So they dated for 4 years before marring. There daughter is Named Samya (Thats what i am gonna name my daughter) and there son is named Sahil. Samya is 6 and Sahil is 4. And they are both sleeping at 7 in the morning while our love birds are fighting. And ya they are in India again.

Its 9 and Anagd and Kripa are gonna go wake up there kids. But to there surprise they are both up when they get there.

A: Wow, mera doono baacha already utha hai.

Samaya-Sahil: Good Mornning Dad, Good Mornning Mom.

K and A: Good mornning kids. The open there arms, Sahil runs to Kripa while Samaya runs to Angad.

A: Ok bachho batao aaj aapko kaha jaana hai.

S: Well mujhe aur Sahil ko aaj Nani leena aa rahi hai.

Sahil: (In a loud wisper) Samaya humna mom aur dad ko wish nahie kiya.

Samaya: Oh ya.

Both Kids: Happy Annversary Mom and Dad.

K: Oh My baacha. And they both hug Kripa.

A: Wow Aur meri hug? So now Samaya and Sahil runs to Angad. The phone rings and Anagd runs to get it.

A: Hello.

Naina: Hi Angad, happy anniversary beta

A: Thanks Mom, aao kaisa hai, aur aap baacho ko lena aa rahi hai.

N: Main teek ho, aur main baacho ko isliya leena aa rahi hoo taki tum dono saath main time spend kar sako.

A: Oh how sweet of u... here talk to kripa.

K: Hi Mom...

N: Hi beta, happy annversary.

K: Thanks mom.

N: Main Samya aur Sahil ko ek ganta main laana aa rahi ho

K: Ok mom... see you then

N: Bye beta take care.

K: U too bye.

By now Angad has got Samaya and Sahil ready. And they run to there room to get something

Kripa comes in.

A: Kripa, by the way tumha mera gift kaisa laga.

K: Maina dekha hi nahie.

A: Tho kaab dekho gi aagla saal.

K: Not a bad idea.

A: Kripa????

K: Ok kolthi hoo.

Kripa takes the box out of her back pocket and unwraps it, there is another really pretty small wodden box she opens that looking at Angad, she reaches into the box still looking at Angad and she takes something out and holds it in front of her face. Its a chain, but when she looks at it she notices that its actually a Mangalsutra,

K: Angad?

A: Kaisa laga.

K: Kaisa laga ga. Ofcourse aacha.

A: Ok then wear it.

K: Tum penha do.

A: Sure.

Anagd puts on the mangalsutra for her.

A: Kripa u look wierd with jeans, shirt and Mangalsuta.

K: Shut up Angad.

A: Ok... I have one more gift for u.

K: Kya.

A: Angad takes out a ring from his pocket, platinum, dimond.

K: Thats beautiful

A: But not more than my wife.

K: Ya thats ture.

A: Very funny, he slips the ring into Kripa's fingure. Aur mera gift.

Kripa turns and gives him a sweet his on both his cheecks, his forehead, and a soft one on his lips.

K: There!!!!!!!!

A: Bas?????

K: Aur kya chiya.

A: I want another baby girl.

K: Angad, kya yeh mera haat main hai?

A: No...

K: Tho... tumha aur kya chiya.

A: Kuch nahie, tum mera paas ho aur mujhe kya chiya.

K: How sweet. But i have something for u

A: Tho do.

K: Baad main

A: Ok!

Its evening and Kripa and Angad are sharing a candel night dinner, they are feeding each other and sharing there food out of one plate.

A: Kripa...mera gift?????

K: Cholo mera saath.

Kripa takes Angad to her painting room. She they both stand in front of a painting, its covered in royal blue cloth. Anagd lifts it up and sees a painting of him.

A: Awww my jaan, thats beautiful.

K: Tumha yaad hai tumne mujhe bhi 11 years pelha ek painting de thi.

A: Oh tho tum hisaab barabar kar raha ho.

K: Shut up Angad, aur main kabhi bhi hisaab barabar nahie kar sakthi.

A: Kyun

K: Kykuni jitna pyaar tumne mujhe diya hai shaiyd he maina tumko diya hai.

A: Kripa.. tum bhi naa, hum ek doosra sa itna pyaar kartha hai ki koi measure nahie kar saktha.

K: I guess ur rite.

A: I always am.

K: Very funny...

About 1 hour later Kripa and Angad are sitting on the terrace. Lieing on a sheet, hugging each other, kissing every once in a while, just having fun.

7 MONTHS LATER.

Kripa has a baby Girl... they named her Mehak. And they lived happliy ever after.

And that was Ek Rishta. I will start my new fan fic tomm! I hope u guys enjoyed this fan fic! I did.



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Posted: 20 years ago
THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL ENDING. I AM SURE GONNA MISS THIS STORY. IT WAS AMAZING. THANX NEHA. LUV YA.
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Posted: 20 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww........GREAT ENDIN!!!!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!


teen teeen bahche!!!kripa to moti ho gayi hogi! 😆 that was very cute......but neha Samya me ek u laga do to mera naam ban jayega...saumya!!!!!


That was a great story! cant wait to read the mext one!!!!



lolz! Maybe in Nafrat Main Pyaar. 😆

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